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Phir Youn Love Hua [RM] - Upd Oct 2nd [Part2 Pg6] (Page 5)

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Posted: 15 September 2009 at 7:54am | IP Logged
Wow yaar you are too good... Loved it!

Phir you love hua... wow title bhi chuke rakha haiLOLLOLLOL

Luved there bond and freindship... shooo shweeetEmbarrassedEmbarrassed cont sooon! jaldi jaldiWink


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Posted: 16 September 2009 at 6:21am | IP Logged
Lovely.....yaar awesum update.....The song was very nice....So carry on & update sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon.....
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Posted: 18 September 2009 at 3:49pm | IP Logged
aww Shilpu...I havent talked to u in a while....btw such a sweet starting...I luved it sooo sooo much...Oh and the romantic scene in the end was beautiful..I can totally imagine Rahul moving her hair behind her ear....aww tht was schoo sweet...And the masti between them was soo cool...PLease please do continue soon...!!!!

Luv Vikshu...

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Posted: 19 September 2009 at 4:44am | IP Logged
Shilpaaaaaaaaa... It was a brilliant piece of work.. I loved the depth of their friendship, but everyone knows, larka ladki kabhi dost nahe hosktay LOL.. I can't wait for the next part yaar.. Update jaldi se!!

Thanks for the PM, and I am extremely sorry for the late comment!! :(
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Posted: 26 September 2009 at 3:41am | IP Logged
Aww lovely start shilpa ...the part was super cute
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Posted: 01 October 2009 at 11:39pm | IP Logged
Thank You for all the awesome comments!!
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Posted: 01 October 2009 at 11:42pm | IP Logged

Part 2

Muskaan wakes up early in the morning, as soon as she is up, she first picks up her cell phone and guess who she dials up!

Rahul is sleeping peacefully.. covering himself completely with his blanket.. when his phone starts ringing.. grumbling abt it.. Rahul clumsily reaches out for his cellphone and puts it to his hear.. with the blanket in between..

R: hmm bol

M: oye tu abhi tak so raha hai?

R: nahi.. mai kyu sounga..

M: Kyu nahi soya Rahul.. tumhe bhukaar ho gayi kya.. mujhe pata tha.. (continues blaberring)

R: Musk..

M: tumne davai li.. (ranting continues)


M: Kya..??

R: ofcourse mai so raha tha yaar.. ye poochne ke liye phone kiya?

M: jogging.. bhool gaya kya..

R: aaj nahi yaar.. sone de (disconnects the phone)

M: uff o.. yeh ladka bhi na..

Muskaan tries calling again.. but Rahul has silenced his cell and Is sleeping again..

M: gadha phone off karke so gaya hoga

Muskaan freshens up, and she puts on her track suit, ties up her hair into a ponytail and heads over to Rahul's dorm room

Rahul has a habit of leaving a spare key to his house in a plat next to his door, just in case he misplaces his key anywhere.  So Muskaan lets herself into Rahul's dorm and walks into his room..

Muskaan Rahul has a habit of leaving a spare key to his house in a plat next to his door, just in case he misplaces his key anywhere.  So Muskaan lets herself into Rahul's dorm and walks into his room..

Muskaan opens all the blinds in Rahul's room letting in all the sunlight..

M: Rahul uth!

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Muskaan pulls the blanket off of Rahul..

R: (pulling blanket back on) oye kya kar rahi hai.. maine shirt nahi pehna..

M: haan haan.. mai toh teri hot si body dekhne ke liye aise kiya na.. (chunking a pillow at him).. ab uth! Jpogging jaa na hai!

R: tujhse jeetna meri bas ki baat nahi hai.. chal..

Rahul gets out of bed lazily.. putting on his track suit..

While Rahul is getting ready.. Muski makes his bed and grabs a bottle of water out of the fridge for both of them..


M: oye Rahul.. piche kyu padh gaya tu.. jaldi aana!

R: Muskaan.. normally tu piche reh jaati hai.. toh aaj iss baat ka faida mat utha..

M: O haan.. auntyji ka phone aaya tha.. bol rahi thi ke chutiyon mai Punjab aajaye..

R: Nahi yaar summer mai mujhe koi internship karna hai, tu bhi karna..

M: haan chal wo mast rahega.. aur experience bhi milega..

As they come to the end of their morning jog, they head towards Muskaan's dorm..

As soon as they enter both of them fall on the couch.. tired to the bone..

R: Muskaaan.. mujhe paani chahiye!

M: Mujhe bhi!!

RM (together): Tu leke aa!

RM: Mai' mai kyu.. tu!

Muskaan's phone starts ringing..

Rahul picks it up as he is closer to it..

R: Hello.. oh Hi tum.. *whispers to Muskaan* Bhavesh hai..

Muskaan immediately sits up.. and motions a strong no.. shaking her hands head and anything else to get her message across..

R: *chuckling to himself* oh haan Bhavesh.. she is umm..  Brushing her teeth right now.. baad mai phone karlegi..

Muskaan breathing a sigh of relief..

R: Muskaan tu har baar usse avoid kyu karti hai? *laughing*

M: arey yaar.. wo toh mera piche pad gaya.. har waqt phone karke ek hi sawaal karta hai.. "you want to study in the libraby?" *craking up herself*

R: haha.. ok chal mai jaata hoon.. chem.  class mai milte hai..

Muskaan goes into her room.. turns on music in a loud volume and goes to take a shower..

*Song Playing* - Jaane Kyu Dil Jaanta Hai.. Tu Hai toh I'll be alright!

As Rahul gets home he throws off his shirt into some random corner.. as it was very sweaty..

He grabs a towel and puts it around his neck and heads into the kitchen..  grabbing some orange juice from the fridge and heads towards his room..


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Edited by ibdt2004 - 01 October 2009 at 11:43pm

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