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Kavya....

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Posted: 03 September 2009 at 8:37am | IP Logged
hello everyone
well this is another fanfic of ours

(me and my friend)

first one: pyar mein kabhi kabhi

she wanted me to post this as she was busy with some work

hope you people like it
 
                                                                               ISHQ HUA


When two people fall in love they try to support each other and most importantly stand together to fight any odds they face. i'm very bad at describing things well you'll get to know as the story proceeds
chapter1- pg1

chapter2- pg3

chapter3- pg6

chapter4-pg11

chapter5-pg16

chapter6-pg18
 
chapter7-pg20
 
chapter8- pg22
 
chapter9- pg25
 
chapter10- pg28
 
chapter11- pg32

chapter12- pg36

chapter13-pg38

chapter14-pg41

chapter15- pg44

chapter16- pg47

chapter17- pg52
 
chapter18-pg55
 
chapter19-pg61

Precap - pg62



                                                                          CHAPTER-1

Juneja house:


Prem is packing his suitcase and seeing the pictures of his family. He is talking to the photo of maa bauji '

Prem :kya mein itna bura hoon maaa

Then bauji comes and asks prem not to go

Prem: nahi bauji mujhe janaa hi hoga

He packs his family photo also with him. He then goes to the cupboard and takes some keys out n sees it with heavy heart. He goes down. Every one was there in the hall.
Bauji,maa,kuldi,harman,maya..

He goes to maa takes her ashirwaad.

Gayatri (crying): tu kyun kar rahaan hai aisa. mat jao hame chodke

Prem hugs her n cries Harman gives a serious look at gayatri.

Prem then goes to kul di and hugs her. Kul di is about to tell something when prem stops her. He then goes to Harman.

Prem(tears in is eyes): harman maine kabhi tume apna sautela bhai nahi samjha.hamesha tume apna samaj kar pyaar kiya.shayad mere pyar mein hi kuch kami reh gayi ki tumne'..Harman mein jaa raha hoon hamesha ke liye yeh ghar chodkar .maa aur bauji ka khayal rakhna.

Harman just looks away.

Prem takes his suitcase and moves towards the door with tears in his eyes thinking about what harman had told him before. With a heavy heart he walks out of the house.He then calls a taxi and tells some address.Then the taxi driver stop at a big apartment. Prem gets down and goes inside.


http://www.dhingana.com/play/kal-ho-naa-ho-heartbeat-instrumental/

Listen this

He opens his flat door. He then remembers the incidents when he first came to this apartment which brings a wide smile on his face. He goes inside. He smiles seeing the well decorated rooms. He enters the bed room and the sight in front of him shocks him totally. He sees the walls were covered with sheets. He goes to one side and takes the sheet off. It brings a wide smile on his face. The wall was decorated with pictures from his childhood. The priceless moments he shared with his family as child, the bonding with his brothers and sister, his best friend from childhood and his college days, his graduation photos. Seeing all these and recollecting them fills his eyes with tears. He reaches the other side knowing what he would get to see but wasn't left with any courage to see them so he goes to the window.

He sees the chand "kaash tum yahaan.." as prem really needs someone to share his pain. Prem sees the full moon thinking.

"main jantha hoon ki jab tumhe yeh sab patha chelega tab tumhe bohut boora lagega. lekin tumhe tho patha chal hi jayega" tears in his eyes.

Morning:

Someone was knocking on the door. Prem gets up

He didn't have complete sleep last night. He went on thinking about the past incidents from his childhood days to the day he never expected that it would occur


Again knock on the door

Prem walks out of his room to open the door thinking who it was.

He opened the door and gets shocked seeing the person outside.



Edited by Kavya.... - 08 March 2011 at 7:13am

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Posted: 03 September 2009 at 8:54am | IP Logged
me first

*edit*

first of all congratz to the new fanficParty
and second of all why the heck is prem leaving ???
it reminds me when SRK left in kabhie khushi kabhi gum but that was a different case and this is a different case so I guess Cry Cry
and I am the first to comment Party Party Party
and he goes to this place where all his child hood memories are and now he see's someone at the door and is shocked
now you must must must
continue!!
~aashifa~

Edited by curledup - 03 September 2009 at 9:04am

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Posted: 03 September 2009 at 9:06am | IP Logged
keep it going
Good start.Smile

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Posted: 03 September 2009 at 9:47am | IP Logged
hey wow
whos that person cant wait
add me in ur pm list
i'm praying for u n for ur exams
all the best
tcv bye

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Posted: 03 September 2009 at 9:53am | IP Logged
hello girls
i'm here  for you
thanks for starting another'
it was good
but you too just keep never stop terrorising by keepin  d suspense
well who's it?
lemme guess preet was never mentioned so is he? or heer?
jaldi jaldi update karo

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Posted: 03 September 2009 at 10:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by curledup

me first

*edit*

first of all congratz to the new fanficParty
and second of all why the heck is prem leaving ???
it reminds me when SRK left in kabhie khushi kabhi gum but that was a different case and this is a different case so I guess Cry Cry
and I am the first to comment Party Party Party
and he goes to this place where all his child hood memories are and now he see's someone at the door and is shocked
now you must must must
continue!!
~aashifa~
 
thank you Smile
well i already tol you my firend is really touched after i told her about your comments
next update would be soon and it would be for you
 

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Posted: 03 September 2009 at 10:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nuptalie

keep it going
Good start.Smile
 
thank you so much Smile

Kavya....

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Posted: 03 September 2009 at 10:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shirlys

hey wow
whos that person cant wait
add me in ur pm list
i'm praying for u n for ur exams
all the best
tcv bye
 
hii
well you've to wait till the next update
thank you so much for praying yaar
 
 

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