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iwantitall IF-Sizzlerz

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yaaarrr ekk bataaoo!!!
kaunsaa chahyyee???

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Hey dear! Congrats For ur gallery!
iwantitall IF-Sizzlerz

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heyy thnksss fatss....


iwantitall IF-Sizzlerz

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A shiny shade of red color could be seen trailing off over the ground as she took her first steps into the house, the house where she would spend the rest of her life in, the house where she would have to abide by and act sensible in, the house of the one guy she loved more than herself, mayank Sharma.

Nupur Sharma followed by 3 of her old friends and four of mayanks cousins went into her new bed room as they all joked around her, leaving her nervousness unnoticed.

When suddenly one of them put her arm on nupurs shoulder  mocking her nervousness- arre dhekho to bhabhi kaise sharmaye jaa rahi hai!

nupur- chup kar!

Shinella- arre sara ne aisa kya keh diya hai! Mera matlab hai socho bhabhi abhi se hi itna zyada blush kar rahi hai to bhaiyya aayenge to inki to halat hi kharab ho jaayegi!

She said as they all broke out into fits of giggles.

Nupur- tum sab na.... ufff jaao yahaan se!

She said as she frowned, shinellas words reverberating in her ears, what would happen to her when mayank comes?

Ankita- chale jaayenge! Chale jaayenge! Itni bhi jaldi kya hai?

She mocked as they all high fived each other trying their best not to giggle, when suddenly a loud sneeze from outside made them turn.

It was samrat.

Samrat- uhhh yaar guys tum logon ko ummm... aunty,,, kitchen mein bhula rahi hai!

He said as his face suddenly broke out into a huge grin!

Sonia- haan haan pata hai! Pata hai!

She said as the others followed her out!

Nupur slowly watched the seven walk out of the room giggling at someone standing behind samrat. And suddenly nupur broke into sweats, as she saw samrat wink up at her. Even though mayank and she had been together for  4 years, yet even now just one glance of him got her heart beating faster, looking into his eyes for more than 10 seconds altogether made her go frenzy. And tonight he would be so close to her! Just the thought of it made nupur go red!

Nupur slowly walked up to the bed and sat down pulling her dupatta over her head feeling the heat rising through her.

She tried her best to control the uneasiness in her stomach as she heard mutters and giggles. And twice she caught a few words like-"arre ja dude wo wait kar rahi hogi!" or "jaa mere sher" which only increased the uneasy feeling in her tummy.

It took  her all her mind power to stop herself from looking up as she heard mayank being pushed in by samrat and when mayank slowly locked the knob of the door.

She sat there anxious as she felt that uneasy feeling increase in her stomach with each and every step he took towards her.

Suddenly her heart fell as she felt mayank sit beside her on the bed. She closed her eyes tightly as she felt her heartbeat increasing with every passing second.

When suddenly she felt cool air gush in on her face from somewhere in the room. She quickly opened her eyes in suprise as she found her dupatta in mayanks eyes and a cute smile playing over his lips as he played with her dupatta in his hand.

She quickly looked down at the mehendi in her hands trying to avoid looking into his eyes, as she felt his manly hands rub against her soft petal like hands. He slowly brushed his hand against her hand as he felt her shiver slightly.

He slowly cupped her face in his hands slowly bringing her face to his level, as she finally looked into his eyes.

Suddenly a cold wind started gushing through the open window as her hair started flowing all through her face, and she unable to control it got up quickly and ran towards the window followed by mayank.

Nupur banged it shut and quickly turned to face mayank, and in her nervousness she slipped and fell clutching at mayanks kurta top to stop herself but no avail, she landed softly on the bed .

She quickly opened her eyes as she felt a familiar warm breath on her lips, only to find mayank lying over her, looking dazingly at the innocently beautiful girl who was now his wife.

Mayank unable to control himself any longer slowly brushed his lips against hers, as he felt the heat reaching down to him. Nupur tried to pull away feeling a little too shy but  mayank held her tight in his grip.

Mayank slowly inched closer to her and kissed her passionately on her lips, as he felt her finally giving in. He kissed her hard and more passionaltely every passing second only to be stopped by a wierd hooting he heard. He and nupur slowly looked up only to find samrat,benjy,sara,ankita,shinella,Sonia,debo,anna and preethi clapping and hooting loudly.

As soon as they saw them they quickly pulled away and stood up awkwardly as mayank cursed samrat and closed the curtains.

Nupur- ummmm... main wo... actually-

But before she could complete what she was saying mayank pulled her towards him and gripper her tight by the waist as she struggled against his grip only to shyly give in.

Mayank slowly inched closer to her and started trailing kisses down her neck as he felt her shiver. When suddenly nupur pulled away completely red in her face.she quickly walked towards towards the dresser and started taking off her jhumke and bangles when mayank slowly slid his hands across her bare waist sending her chills down her neck.

He quickly took off the heavy neck set she was wearing and picked her up in his arms and led her to the bed where he lay her softly over the pillow.

Nupur felt the butterflies swooning around her tummy as she felt mayanks eyes on her, as he slowly inched closer to her kissing her neck and her cheek.


Hope you liked it

Hugs and kisses to every1

Spllyyy the cg gang

N ankitaa!!

Butt this one goes out directly to piyu n nidhi who requested for this one

Press d like tab n cmmnt


Edited by cool.sindhya - 30 August 2009 at 1:45pm

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Posted: 30 August 2009 at 1:49pm | IP Logged
hawwww.....sindy...gandi bachi..LOL

but ur writing n selection of words is SUPERB as always..Clap

i can never forget ur FFZ.......coz ur my favv FF writer...Wink

so u rock girl.....this one was FAB too...

thanx for the PM sweety..

i luvved shinzy, sonia n ankita in between too..LOL

great job..Thumbs Up


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Posted: 30 August 2009 at 2:15pm | IP Logged
very romantic os
loved mayur n the rest of the gang

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