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Posted: 06 November 2005 at 12:08am | IP Logged

....................part --1

ting tong.......the bell rangs...

mom:mita...plz open the door.........

mita hv gone to open the door......a man showing back is standing ..

mita: who r u....whom u want....r u the choclate guy......

stranger:turning back..whmmm

stranger is a tall young guy.....smart age...26.....aan army officer....

str:i hv come to say hello to miss....mita....

mita....giving a bog smile.....jump on the stranger...lap....granned his nake.....

mita:bhaia...why u come late......

bahia:why.....

mita:mmy future bhabi....left 3minutes ago......

bhaia:whm....bhabi...?ooo..she is beautifull.....

mita:whm.....but not beautifull than me....

bahai:where she leave....

mita.....lookin infront here she is...a old....lady is coming up....she is on the stairs....

bhiaa:looking at mita show a punch.....

when the old lady passes.....manav.....give namaste.....then...sudddenly his eye stair at smone....tht he just got amazed.....

hi....i m shina......mitas singing teacher...i leave in ur upstair....namaste...can i have a talk with mitas mother....plz....at tht time mita was standing back of her bhaia...so.....shina hvnt seen her..so she asked the stranger.....

shina:ooo....well...i will come later....

manav is still freeze........

then......mita sying...

mita:teacher......mom is busy....talk later....ha....

shina:ok...dare.....she...goes up......

shina totally looks like manavs....cousin...with whom manav......married..but thy got separated.....cause..she left...she got married with some one else again...manav got hurted but he dont want unwanting love....from his wife so he devoursed her.....and join army...and.....

then....mitas mom calling....mita...where r  u who is at the door.....

mom:manav....tu....when u hv come....mita...why hvnt u call me.......

mita: bhiaa met shina teacher...

mom:ooo...her face got pale......manav plz come inside i will say everything later.......

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my mom is calling for now bye......2 nd part is coming soon...how it is....

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