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Posted: 22 December 2009 at 8:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rkmnkp

Nupur got home. She was eating lunch, and told her nanny that they didn't catch any fishes. Then all of the sudden the door's flew open, they both looked, her nanny stood up to protect her, But there waz no one there,
Nanny: I will fix that door tommorrow,
It was 6:00, and Suklaji came. He was her teacher, he thought her things about her kingdom, he told her that she was the true princess, He give her lessons, and told her about the king and queen. She always enjoyed his lessons, and wished that she could go and rule her kingdom right now. Shuklaji was a knight, and then he ran away with her, because when she was borned her parents got killed by their enemies, and her mother gave her to Shuklaji, the trust worty knight, and he hided her, and make everyone think that she was only a peasant girl, and he tolg her that her nanny this old lady will take care of her. Well after the lessons, she went to her room to go to sleep. She kept thinking about Mayank. Well he ever forgive her? It was a moonless night. Nupur is thinking,
"Even if someone is watching nanny's cottage, waiting for the right moment to attack, they wouldn't get to me, yeah I know that they are trying to get me. Thats why they cut open the door, so they could come in the night, and get me, I should go"
She got up, and changed her pajamas, and went outside. Her nanny was slepping, so she carefully ran away to Mayank's cottage. She saw a watch guard with a flashlight. She slowly passed him, and knock on Mayank's door. Mayank opened the door, looking sleppy. He rubbed his eyes.
Mayank: Nupur?
Mayank: Tum yahan?
Nupur:Mayank chalo mere saath mein tumko kuch bata na chahati hoon.
Mayank:Iss waqt?
Mayank: Nahi, kal subah baat kare ge.
Nupur: Plez plez Mayank, mere liye yeh bohat important hai.
So they snicked down to the cows barn, not letting the guard see them. That barn was cover with hay, so much hay, the cows were in the other side. Nupur sat down on a big pile of hay,
Mayank:Kya hai, Nupur?
Nupur: Remember meine aaj subah, tumko yeh kaha tha ke...............
Mayank: Nupur please,
Nupur:Sorry Mayank, mera yeh matlab nahi tha. Mein darr gayi thi.
Mayank:Really? Kisse?
Nupur:Mayank mein tumko ek secret batana chahati hoon.
Mayank folded his arms.
Nupur: Mein iss liye darri thi kyun ke mein samji ke woh loogo ne mujhe dhoodh liya, woh mujhe marr dale ge, mere parents ki tarah.
Mayank: What?
Nupur:Mayank mein true princess hoon.
She tells him everything.
Nupur:Abb yeh tumpe depend kar ta hai, ke tum mujhpe believe karro yaan nahi,
Mayank was in shocked,
Tell me if u liked it
Lovely part,Very well written.

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Posted: 22 December 2009 at 8:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rkmnkp

Part 4
M:No Nupur mein tumpe believe nahi karta, becuz the real princess is Gunjan.
N:No, yeh nahi ho suckta. Mein-
M:Nupur plez, mein jaa raha hoon.
N:Mayank tum mujhe believe nahi karte?
Mayank looks at her. A tear is falling down her face.
M:Plez Nupur. Roh toh matt
N:Nahi Mayank mera duniya ka best friend mujhpe believe nahi karta.
She runs back home. Mayank runs after her. She goes to her nanny. She is awake.
Nanny:Kya hua Nupur, aur tum kahan gayi thi?
N:Yeh Gunjan kaun hai? Aur app sab ne mujhe usske barre mein kyun nahi bata ya?
Nanny:Nupur, Gunjan sirf ek set up hai. Kissene usski shakal nahi dekh-
N:App sab ne-
She goes crying to her room. Mayank snick in there.
M:Nupur, plez mein tumpe believe karta hoon.
N:Nahi Mayank, mujhe akela chorr do.
M:Nupur plez I am sorry.
Nupur looks back. It is hard for any girl to not accept Mayu's sorry, his cute face. Nupur wipes her tears.
N:Mayank plez mujhe uss mehal mein le jao. Mein yahan reh na nahi chahti.
M:Par tum-
N:Mayank tum abhi bhi mujhpe believe nahi karte?
M:Ok Nupur. Kab?
M:Par abhi itni raat ho gayi.
N:Mayank mein kuch nahi jhanti.
Nupur smiles.Smile
Nupur and Mayank goes in a auto. 
M:Pata nahi maa kya kahe ge, letter toh likha hai meine.
N:Dun worry Mayu.
Mayank looked at her. He loves the way she calls him Mayu.Embarrassed
In the way, the auto gets out of petrol.
N:Bhaiyya, yahan koi cheeze miley gi? Jahan hum jaa suckte hai?
Auto wala: Sirf ek bike miley gi
Auto wale:Wahan ek store hai.
They go to the little Dhabba.
Ok guyz these waz the update. Hope you liked it. Do comment.Wink
superb part.very nice dear.
commented on all the parts.Pls pm me after update the next part.

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