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M:No Nupur mein tumpe believe nahi karta, becuz the real princess is Gunjan.
N:No, yeh nahi ho suckta. Mein-
M:Nupur plez, mein jaa raha hoon.
N:Mayank tum mujhe believe nahi karte?
Mayank looks at her. A tear is falling down her face.
M:Plez Nupur. Roh toh matt
N:Nahi Mayank mera duniya ka best friend mujhpe believe nahi karta.
She runs back home. Mayank runs after her. She goes to her nanny. She is awake.
Nanny:Kya hua Nupur, aur tum kahan gayi thi?
N:Yeh Gunjan kaun hai? Aur app sab ne mujhe usske barre mein kyun nahi bata ya?
Nanny:Nupur, Gunjan sirf ek set up hai. Kissene usski shakal nahi dekh-
N:App sab ne-
She goes crying to her room. Mayank snick in there.
M:Nupur, plez mein tumpe believe karta hoon.
N:Nahi Mayank, mujhe akela chorr do.
M:Nupur plez I am sorry.
Nupur looks back. It is hard for any girl to not accept Mayu's sorry, his cute face. Nupur wipes her tears.
N:Mayank plez mujhe uss mehal mein le jao. Mein yahan reh na nahi chahti.
M:Par tum-
N:Mayank tum abhi bhi mujhpe believe nahi karte?
M:Ok Nupur. Kab?
N:Abhi
M:Par abhi itni raat ho gayi.
N:Mayank mein kuch nahi jhanti.
N:Theeke.
Nupur smiles.Smile
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Nupur and Mayank goes in a auto. 
M:Pata nahi maa kya kahe ge, letter toh likha hai meine.
N:Dun worry Mayu.
Mayank looked at her. He loves the way she calls him Mayu.Embarrassed
In the way, the auto gets out of petrol.
N:Bhaiyya, yahan koi cheeze miley gi? Jahan hum jaa suckte hai?
Auto wala: Sirf ek bike miley gi
M:Kahan?
Auto wale:Wahan ek store hai.
They go to the little Dhabba.
 
 
Ok guyz these waz the update. Hope you liked it. Do comment.Wink
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Great update LIna.
Loved it.
Mayur r really very cute.
keep it up

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Such a shot1 but equally sweet...

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Originally posted by rkmnkp

 
 
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The bright moring sunlight, reaching over the mirrors. Each mirror reflecting a light back. The reflected light reaches to this girl sleeping in her sleeping mat. This beautiful girl, with her pillow covered her face, and try going back to sleep. "Jaldi utt beta , yahan Mayank wait kar raha hai fishing jane ke liye tere saath". She heard a voice say, That voice was none other than her nanny's. She gets up, throwing her blanket to the floor, and went to take a shower. After changing, she is once again in her room drying her hair. She looks around, this room was preety small, she looks at each picture of her and her nanny's. She looks at Mayank's picture. She blushed, then something catches her eyes. She throws her towel she was drying her with with, and got closer to it. She sits down, staring at it. "Jab teekh time aye ga, toh tab mein wahan hogi, mein wahan rule karoon gi apne loogo ko" She says to herself. "Nupur?" calls her nanny again for her, "Ayi' she gets up to go. When she was at her room's door, she turns around, smiling, thinking that at any day her dream will come true. She is out the door. And what we find sitting at that table is................that thing. It was beautiful, it was a diorama of a palace. A palace where u will find millions and millions of mirrors. A palace that was so beautiful, a palace that everyone dreams to rule. A palace that Nupur could go anyday to rule, after all it belonged to her.
 
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Did you like it?
I promise I will continue soon,
if you like it.Smile
 
 
Part 2: Same page
Part 3: Page 2
Part 4: Page 3
hi dear its really nice

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