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Posted: 27 August 2009 at 5:15am | IP Logged
continue soon some points r not clear in this fic.
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Posted: 27 August 2009 at 2:51pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by *~*riddhima*~*

i just loved it is nupur a princess
 
Of corse she is.
But there is a stoey behind why she is living like a peasant girl.
Thank u so much,
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Posted: 27 August 2009 at 2:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Mahak Sinha

continue soon some points r not clear in this fic.
 
Really?Confused
I thought that it waz kind of clear.
Mahak what didn't u understand?Confused
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Posted: 29 August 2009 at 2:16pm | IP Logged
Nupur got home. She was eating lunch, and told her nanny that they didn't catch any fishes. Then all of the sudden the door's flew open, they both looked, her nanny stood up to protect her, But there waz no one there,
Nanny: I will fix that door tommorrow,
Nupur:Ok.
It was 6:00, and Suklaji came. He was her teacher, he thought her things about her kingdom, he told her that she was the true princess, He give her lessons, and told her about the king and queen. She always enjoyed his lessons, and wished that she could go and rule her kingdom right now. Shuklaji was a knight, and then he ran away with her, because when she was borned her parents got killed by their enemies, and her mother gave her to Shuklaji, the trust worty knight, and he hided her, and make everyone think that she was only a peasant girl, and he tolg her that her nanny this old lady will take care of her. Well after the lessons, she went to her room to go to sleep. She kept thinking about Mayank. Well he ever forgive her? It was a moonless night. Nupur is thinking,
"Even if someone is watching nanny's cottage, waiting for the right moment to attack, they wouldn't get to me, yeah I know that they are trying to get me. Thats why they cut open the door, so they could come in the night, and get me, I should go"
She got up, and changed her pajamas, and went outside. Her nanny was slepping, so she carefully ran away to Mayank's cottage. She saw a watch guard with a flashlight. She slowly passed him, and knock on Mayank's door. Mayank opened the door, looking sleppy. He rubbed his eyes.
Mayank: Nupur?
Nupur:Haan
Mayank: Tum yahan?
Nupur:Mayank chalo mere saath mein tumko kuch bata na chahati hoon.
Mayank:Iss waqt?
Nupur:Haan
Mayank: Nahi, kal subah baat kare ge.
Nupur: Plez plez Mayank, mere liye yeh bohat important hai.
Mayank:Ok
So they snicked down to the cows barn, not letting the guard see them. That barn was cover with hay, so much hay, the cows were in the other side. Nupur sat down on a big pile of hay,
Mayank:Kya hai, Nupur?
Nupur: Remember meine aaj subah, tumko yeh kaha tha ke...............
Mayank: Nupur please,
Nupur:Sorry Mayank, mera yeh matlab nahi tha. Mein darr gayi thi.
Mayank:Really? Kisse?
Nupur:Mayank mein tumko ek secret batana chahati hoon.
Mayank folded his arms.
Nupur: Mein iss liye darri thi kyun ke mein samji ke woh loogo ne mujhe dhoodh liya, woh mujhe marr dale ge, mere parents ki tarah.
Mayank: What?
Nupur:Mayank mein true princess hoon.
She tells him everything.
Nupur:Abb yeh tumpe depend kar ta hai, ke tum mujhpe believe karro yaan nahi,
Mayank was in shocked,
 
 
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Posted: 17 October 2009 at 3:13pm | IP Logged
No one likes it?
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Posted: 17 October 2009 at 6:28pm | IP Logged
Who said dat no1 likes it? Pls juz continue dear. Pls pls pls...i beg u.

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Posted: 18 October 2009 at 12:33am | IP Logged
its gr8 yaar
all like ur ff
plz continue soon

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Posted: 18 October 2009 at 1:32pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by achoose

Who said dat no1 likes it? Pls juz continue dear. Pls pls pls...i beg u.
 
Originally posted by sanjana yadav

its gr8 yaar
all like ur ff
plz continue soon
 
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