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Mayur FF - Mit Jaani Hai Duriya

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Hey All this is one time attempt. Pls do the comments. I want to know k yeh story kis layak hai.
 
 
 
 
(Nupur mayank ka wait coffee shop per  kar rhi hai k mayank uss se milne aayega. Wo janti hai k wo time se pehle hai)

 

N to herself :- kya zarurat thi itni jaldi aane ki. Tujhe to yeh bhi nhi pta k mayank aayega bhi ya nhi. Usse yaad bhi hai ya nhi k ek saal pehle humne promise kiya tha k sath rahe na rahe k aaj k din hum zarur milenge aur iss coffee shop per. Usse to yaad bhi nhi hoga. Aur tu aake uska intzaar kar rhi hai. Wo bhi time se pehle.

 

Flashback :

 

(1 yr ago nupur aur mayank iss coffee shop per mayank ka b'day ka celebrate karne aate hai bcoz mayank ko parties pasand nhi hai isliye sirf nupur aur mayank sath me aate hai )

 

N :- kya mayank. Koi aise b'day celebrate karta hai kya.

M :- fir kaise karte hai. Mujhe yeh parties shor sharaba bilkul pasand nhi hai. Aur main tumhare sath aaya hu na.

N :- mayank perr………(interrupted by mayank)

M :- per kya nupur. Mujhe tumhare sath apna b'day celebrate karna zyada psnd hai. Kisi shor sharabe se behtar hai k main tumhare sath apna b'day tumhare sath manau.

(Nupur thoda sa sharmati hai aur thoda sa muskurati hai)

N :- thik hai mayank tumhe jaisa achcha lage. After all tumhara b'day hai.

M :- Achcha. Agar mera b'day nhi hota to tum meri baat nhi manti.

N :- mayank aisa nhi hai. Maine kabhi tumhari kisi baat ko mana kiya hai kya

M :- Haan yeh bhi hai. Tum sari zindagi meri aise hi baat manti rehna. Dekhna kabhi hamara fir kabhi jhagda nhi hoga.

(nupur mayank ko surprisingly dekhti hai tabhi mayank ko realize hota hai k ussne kya kaha hai )

M :- mera matlab hai k agar tum aise hi meri baat manti rahogi to hum dono ka career set hai aur ek baar dono ka career set ho gya to hume sath hi kaam karna padega.

N :- matlab

M :- kya nupur tum bhi na. Mera tum se yeh promise hai jab bhi mujhe as a music director kaam milega to mere music direction ka pehla gaaana tum hi gaogi. Chahe kuch bhi ho jaye.

N :- arre wah mayank. B'day tumhara hai aur tum gift mujhe de rhe ho.

M :- yeh gift nhi hai. Tum deserve karti ho. Tum sach me bahut achcha gaati ho. Aur yeh main isliye nhi keh rha k tum meri dost ho. Lekin main jaanta hu k tum sach me bahut achcha gati ho.

N :- mayank tumhe hi lagta hai. Main bhi tumhe promise karti hu k sabse pehle main tumhare ki direct kiye huye song ko gaungi warna kabhi bhi professionally nhi gaungi.

M :- yeh kya mera b'day gift tha.

N :- haan. Aisa hi kuch soch sakte ho. Waise main tumhare liye sach me koi gift nhi laayi. Acutal me mujhe tumne bataya hi nhi k aaj tumhara b'day hai, aur jab se mujhe pta chala hai k tumhara b'day hai tab se hum dono sath me hai.

M :- yeh kya kam hai k hum sath me hai. Mujhe aur koi gift nhi chahiye.

N :- nhi mayank aisa nhi chalega.

(Nupur apne bag me se Bhagwan Ganesh Laxmi ki murti nikalti hai. Aur Laxmi jee ki murti wo mayank ko deti hai. )

N :- mayank yeh to tumhara b'day gift. Yeh meri maa ne mujhe diya hai. Unka kehna hai k main hamesha inhe apne sath rakhu yeh jab tak mere sath hai tab tak mujh kabhi koi takleef nhi hogi.

M :- nhi yeh main nhi le sakta.

N :- kyun.

M :- Nupur yeh tumhari maa ki nishani hai aur tum yeh aise hi kisi ko bhi de dogi kya.

N :- Mayank tum mujh se alag thode hi ho. Aur yeh main kisi ko bhi nhi mayank ko de rhi hu aur janti hu k wo isse sambhal kar rakhega. Aur puri nhi de rhi hu yeh ganesh jee ki murti mere pass rahegi na.

M :- main fir bhi nahi le sakta.

N :- pls mayank aise mat bolo. Dekho yeh ganesh ji ki murti mere pass rahegi aur laxmi jee ki tumhare pass. Agar life me aisa hua k hum kabhi alag bhi huye to tum yeh murti dekh kar mujhe yaad kar sakte ho. Aur main ganesh jee ki murti dekh kar. Aur haan yeh murtiyaan hume yaad dilate rahengi k hume milna bhi hai. Aur jab bhi hum kabhi bahut whqt k baad bichad kar milenge to yeh bhagwan ki murti ka joda sath me rakh denge to yeh complete ho jayega. Aur iss tarah hamara rishta bhi complete ho jayega.

M :- hmm to tumhe darr hai k hum log bichad jayenge.

N :- Nhi. Per whqt ka koi bharosa nhi hai. Kya kab ho jaaye. Pls mayank rakh lo na isse. Mujhe achcha lagega. Mere liye tum itna sa bhi nhi kar sakte.

M :- thik hai main isse rakh leta hu. Ab to tum khus ho na

N with big smile :- haan, bahut khus hu.

 

FLASHBACK END

(Nupur achanak yaado se bahar aati hai aur time dekhti hai to pta chalta hai k usse coffe shop per ek ghanta ho chukka hai.)

N to herself :- ab tak to mayank ko aa jaana chahiye tha. Syad wo ab nhi aayega. Kaise aayega. Kab se to hum contact me bhi nhi hai. Pta nhi usse yaad bhi hai ya nhi.

(nupur jaise hi palat kar dekthi hai usse mayank khada hua nazar aata hai wo bhi syad kafi derr se nupur ko hi dekh rha tha. Nupur mayank ko dekh inti khus hoti hai k uske gale lag jaati hai. Achanak usse realize hota hai per fir bhi wo itni khus hoti hai k mayank ko yaad hai aur wo uss se milne bhi aaya hai. Aur mayank ko bhi same feeling hoti hai. )

N :- mayank kahaan the tum. Pta hai maine tumhe kitna miss kiya. Tum kuch bolte kyun nhi.

M :- Nupur yeh public place hai. Agar tum mujhe chodo to main tumhe kuch batau.

(Nupur aur mayank thoda sa embrassed feel karte hai aur coffee shop me baithe hai.

N :- oh haan. Sorry. Main tumhe dekh kar itni khus hu k main bta nhi sakti.

M :- main bhi tumhe dekh kar bahut khus hu. Mujhe lga nhi tha tum aaogi. Waise tum kya soch rhi thi

N :- mujhe bhi yahi laga tha k tum nhi aaoge. Mujhe yeh bhi laga syad tum mujhe bhul gye honge. Pta nhi main tumhe yaad hu bhi ya nhi bas yahi sab soch rhi thi k tum aa gye. Achcha laga k tumhe main yaad thi.

M :- Aapki yaad hume kaise aayegi.

        Aap yeh kyun samjh na paate hai

       Yaad to unki aati hai

        Hum jinhe aksar bhul jaate hai.

N (surprisingly) :- mayank tum aur sher-o-shayri. Mujhe to believe hi nhi ho rha

M :- mujhe bhi nhi. Per syad tumhari duri k ehsaas ne yeh bhi karwa lia mujh se.

N :- mayank per tum mujh se kabhi dur the hi nhi. In last kuch months me hum ek dusre k pass zarur nhi the per hamesha sath the.Atleast mujhe to aisa hi lagta hai. Dekha mayank tumne fir se bhulwa diya. Fir se mujhe baato me laga liya.

M :- maine baato me laga diya tumhe. Aur kya bhul gyi tum. Mujhe bhi to pta chale

N :- tumhe b'day wish karna. Aur kya.

M to himself:- yeh to main bhi bhul gya tha mujhe to bas yeh yaad tha k aaj nupur se pure 10 months aur 15 din baad milne wala hu.

N :- many many happy returns of the day.

M :- thanx. Per nupur hamesha ki tarah iss bar bhi koi party nhi rakhi hai maine.

N to herself :- mujhe kaun sa tumse party chahiye mayank. Main bhi to tumse aise hi akele me mil kar whqt bitana chahti thi.

N :- koi baat nhi. Main to hamara milna tha. Aur tum aise bina kahe kahaan gyab ho gye the mayank. Tumhe kitna dhudha maine. Per tumhara koi pta nhi chala. Kitni koshish ki. Per tumhara koi pta nhi chala. Aur tum gye bhi to uss din. Jo din tumhari zindagi ka sabse ka sabse important din ho sakta tha. Uss din. Aisa kyun kyun gye.

M :- sab batata hu. Per pehle mere kuch sawalo k jawab do.

N :- per mayank swal pehle maine kiye hai to jawab bhi mujhe hi milna chahiye.

M :- per aaj mera b'day hai to pehle mere swalo k jawab do.

N :- thik hai pucho kya puchna hai.

M :- kya jo Anushka Singh k naam se singer aa rhi hai wo tumhari awaz hai.

N (surprisingly) :- tumhe kaise pta.

M (with anger) :- nupur meri baat ka sidha sidha jawab do.

N :- haan.

M ::- per wo to film director Karan singh ki beti hai.

N :- dekho mayank. Tum naraz mat hona. Pls.

M :- Tum mujhe jab tak puri baat nhi batati mujhe aur kuch nhi sun na.

N :- wo mayank actual me tumhe to yaad hoga hi k jis din Karan Sharma ne tumhe apni film me music director liya tha. Tumne bhi to apna promise rakhne k liye pehla gaana mujh se record karwane ki zidd rakhi thi. Aur jis din recording thi tum aise hi kisi ko bina bataye chale gye to karna Singh se ussi whqt dusra music director arrange kiya. Tumhe to pta hai na mayank wo apni movies k liye kitna pagal hai. Aur haan tum aise bina bataye kahaan chale gye the

M (with anger) :- nupur baat ko badlo mat. Mujhe sab sach jan na tha.

N to herself :- aaj to mayank ko sab sach pta chal hi jayega. Aur sath me bahut kuch.

N :- wo mayank. Karan Singh ne kaha k usne jo tumhe as a music director signing amount diya tha wo court k through wo tumse wapas lega aur sath me tum per case bhi karega. Tab maine usse request ki to usne mere aage yeh condition rakhi k agar gaana main gau aur naam uski beti ka ho to wo na gu tum se signing amount wapas lega. Aur na hi tum per koi case karega.

M :- to tumne kya kaha.

N :- mayank main kya kehti. Mujhe uski baat sahi lagi isliye maine haan kar di. I am sorry mayank maine apna promise tod diya. Maine apna pehle professionally song tumhare sath nhi gya.

M :- kya zarurat thi yeh sab mere liye karne ki. Karne deti usse mujh per case. Apna career aise spoil karne ki kya zarurat thi.

N (with anger):- mayank mere liye tum zyada important ho mere career se bhi zyada. Aur tum kahaan chale gye the. Pta hai kaise whqt gujara hai maine tumhare bina. Tum to soch bhi nhi sakte. Har whqt tumhe yaad kiya maine. Aur har uss jagah per tumhara intzaar kiya jahaan tum ho sakte the. Per tum kahi nhi the. Kahi bhi nhi

( yeh sab kehte kehte nupur ki aankhon me ek aashu aa jata hai jo wo mayank se chipane ki koshish karti hai per kamyab nhi ho pati)

M :- nupur…….. dekho meri taraf aur aise roya mat karo. Main kabhi bhi tumhe rota hua nhi dekh sakta. I know k tumhari aankhon me aasu yeh meri wajah se hai per kya karu uss whqt halaat hi kuch aise huye……..

M :- jis din hamari recording thi uss din subah maa k sar me achanak se kafi zor k dard hua. Maa ko hospital leke jaana pada. Jaahan within 1 hr bataya gya main ko brain tumor hai aur jald hi agar unka opration nhi karwaya gaya to won hi bachengi. Aur Mumbai me to opration karne se bhi inkar kar diya. Maa ko ussi din Delhi refer kar diya gaya. Main tumhe uss din batata k recording nhi ho payegi. Per mera cell chori ho gya. Aur fir maa ko flight se delhi le jaaya gya. Jahaan Karan Sharma ka diya hua sara paisa karch ho gya.

N :- tumhe karan sharma k paiso ki padi hai. Maa kaisi hai…???

M :- maa ekdum fit & fine hai. Unka operation successful raha. Aur jab 2 mahine baad me main delhi se Mumbai aaya to tum dhudhe se bhi naa mili.

N :- haan. Wo maine ghar change kar liya tha. aur cell rakhna bhi chod diya tha.

M :- tumhe ghar kyun change kiya. Aur cell k bina to tum 1 min nhi reh sakti to cell rakhna band kyun kar dia.

N :- wo Karan Sharma ne jab kaha k wo tum se court case kar dega to meri bas yahi koshish thi k kisi tarah yeh court case ruk jaye isliye apna flat bech dia  maine aur gunjan k flat me shift ho gyi. Taki kuch kami to puri ho sake. Aur baki apni awaz ko uski beti ka naam de dia.

M :- nupur yeh hi to tumhe galat kiya. Kyun kiya tumne aisa.

N :- mayank kya tum mere sath kuch galat hote huye dekh sakte ho. Nhi na. Main nhi chahti thi k tumhare sath aisa kuch ho. Aur awaz hi to di hai. Kya hua.

M :- kya hua nupur. Kitne aaram se keh rhi ho kya hua. Ab jab bhi tum apne naam se professionally gaaogi to sab kahenge tum uski copy kar rhi ho.

N :- tumhe kisne keh diya k main apne naam se professionally gaaoungi. Nhi gaaungi ab kabhi. Aur tumhare siva kisi ne bhi meri awaz nhi pehchani hai. Aur logo neb hi meri awaz suni hai. Pta nhi k tumne kaise pehchan li

M :- tum gaaogi aur zarur gaaogi. Tumne mere liye apna promise toda hai aur yeh mera farz nhi haq hai k tum apne naam se mere director kiye huye music me gaaogi aur yeh jald hi hoga. Infact within week

N :- matlab mayank tumhe kisi movie me as a music director sign kar liya hai.

M :- haan. Recording to pehle hi ho jaati per kahi na kahi mera dil keh rha tha k tum aaj zarur aaogi to main tumse milunga. Aur sari baatein clear kar lunga. Tabhi main sochu karan sharma ne baad me mujh se milne se inkar kyun kar diya. Wo apna paisa aise kaise chod sakta hai. I know nupur yeh bahut chota word hai per fir bhi thanx. Jo kuch bhi tumne mere liye kiya

N :- thanx kehne ki zarurat nhi hai mayank. Per main ab professionally apne naam se nhi gaana chahti. Mujhe pta nhi kyun lagta hai k hum log k hum apne career objective hone ki wajah se alag huye warna hum hamesha sath me rehte.

M :- syad tum sahi keh rhi ho per nupur tum gaaogi. Warna main kabhi koi music direct hi nhi karunga. Yeh mera iss b'day ka promise hai tumse .

N :- mayank tum hamesha hi aisa karte ho. Tum apna career kyun kharab kar rhe ho. Tumhe to music me hi sabse zyada interest tha. even hai fir yeh sab kyun

M :- tum mere liye apni awaz de sakti ho kisi ko bhi. Aur mujhe khud k liye itna bhi nhi karne dogi kya. Itna bura nhi hu main.

N :- janti hu tum bure nhi ho. Even tum bahut achche ho. Sabse achche.

M :- Agar main sabse achcha hu to meri baat kyun nhi maan leti. Aur tumne kab pta chala k main sabse achcha hu.

N :- jab tum nhi the mere sath tab. Hamesha tumhe dhudha maine.

M :- wo whqt pta nhi kyun aaya hamari life me. Waise agar wo whqt naa aata to syad main kuch samjh naa pta.

N to herself :- main bhi nhi samjh paati k tumhari itni aadat kyun ho gyi hai

N :- kya nhi samjh paate.

M :- yahi k tum bin mujhe jeene ki adat nhi hai. Aur itna whqt isliye tumhare bina jee gya k syad kahi yeh yakin tha k aaj hum zarur milenge.

N :- mujhe bhi yahi lagta hai mayank.

M :- mujhe kuch aur bhi kehna hai tumse. Per pehle vaada karo k chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye tum mere direct kiye huye song ko gaaogi.

N :- mayank maine kabhi tumhe mana kiya hai kya. Gaane k liye to bilkul nhi

M :- pakka promise

N :- haan pakka promise.

M :- Mujhe itne whqt me jis whqt hum sath nhi the aisa lga k

N :- kya laga mayank tumhe

M :- yahi k main tumhe pasnd karta hu balki psnd se bhi zyada keh lo pyar karta hu. Main nhi janta k tum iss bare me kya sochti ho. Agar tumhara jawab na ho to bas keh dena iss bare me hum kabhi baat nhi karenge

N with smile :- sadu mayank itni si baat kehne me itni derr laga di. Main to kab se issi baat ka intzaar kar rhi hu. Aur iss bare me hum kabhi nhi balki har roz baat karenge. Balki sari zindagi baat karenge. Aur maine kaha than a k bagwan hume zarur milayenge. Dekha hum sath me hai.

M with lots of smiles :- Sach me tumhe main psnd hu.

N :- haan………….

M :- shadi karogi mujhe abhi.

N :- abhi. Itni jaldi.

M :- yeh jaldi nhi derr hai nupur. Itna intzaar kiya ab aur nhi kar sakta. Bilkul nhi

N :- maa kya kahengi. Aur ghar me kya bologe

M :- dekho nupur maa kuch nhi kahegi wo to  khus hi hongi. Aur main tumse dobra dur nhi hona chahta. Hum abhi mandir me shadi karenge. Baad me maa ki khushi k liye saare riti riwazo se kar lenge. Per hum abhi shadi karenge. Karogi mujh se shadi.

( Nupur haan me sar hila deti hai.. Dono mandir me jaake shadi kar lete hai. Uske baad ghar me batate hai. Dono k parents unki shadi pure riti riwazo k sath karwa dete hai. Afer 1 week mayank ek movie ka music director karta hai jisme nupur apne original identity k sath gaati hai aur music super hit hota hai aur mayank ko best music director ka aur nupur ko best female singer ka filmfare award bhi milta hai. Dono Karan Sharma k episode ko positive way me lete hai k uski wajah se dono ek dusre ko, ek dusre k pyar ko samjh paaye aur apni duriya mita paye)

 

After One year on dipawali in morning

N :- mayank mujhe who laxmi ganesh jee  ki murti nhi mil rhi hai. Mandir me hi to thi.

M :- bhagwan sirf tumhare hi nhi hai hai kahi gumne gye honge. Aa jayenge

N :- kyaa aa jayenge. Btao na kaha hai murti.

M :- wo main jweller ko di hai taki wo aur chamak jaaye. Waise bhi tumhare bhagwan ki wajah se hum dono aaj sath hai. To unka khayal rkhna hamara farz hai

N :- hai to sahi baat. Per mayank sham tak mil jayegi naa

M :- yeh tumhari maa ki nishani hai nupur. Wo mere bag me hai. Mere actual me main nhi chahta tha k main yeh murtiyaan ek min bhi kahi chodu to wo bas jweller ki shop per baith kar apne samne hi sahi karwayi thi

N :- itne busy schedule me se tumhe whqt mil gya

M :- nupur tumhare liye meri sari zindagi hai. Yeh to thodi hi derr ki baat thi

N :- thodi derr. Pure 3 hr lagte hai

M :- haan pta hai.

N :- mayank ab tum taiyar ho jao. Dipawali pujan bhi karna hai. Main mandir thik karti hu aur murtiyo ko unki sahi jagah per rakhti hu

M :- haan thik hai tum pahucho main aata hu.

(mayank taiyar ho kar ghar k mandir me aata hai jahaan baki sabhi hote hai aur mayank aur nupur mil kar dono dipawali pujan k baad aarti karte hai )

 

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I know story kuch zyada lambi hai
 
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absolutely annu..tumne sahi socha..kyunki mujhe bohot pasand aaya!! gr8 dialogues... 😊
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hi.... nice story....... good one....  i liked it... dialogues was also very nice...
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Great story!!!
Thanks for the PM...
Posted: 14 years ago
Di . . . you are too good. 😛😊😊


I loved it to the CORE!! Man, the story was awesome and the dlgs were fab! Keep it up. Love ya loads, keep writing! 👍🏼
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Bilkul lambi nahi hai ye story n i loved it so much. Short sweet n simple. I think i should call it perfect.
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I know story kuch zyada lambi hai
 
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absolutely anu....wonderful story yaar..just tooo emotional n cute...i loved it..u wrote the dialouges very nicely..n the emotional bond between the two u shown was just tooooo gooood n very realistic......i felt the story  just too natural ...soo perfect...just loved it ...thanx for the pm..
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Hi Annu
nice start.
loved ur concept.
it sounds good.
keep it up
whats about ur another FF "Aya mausom dosti ka".
i m also waiting 4 this
Plz PM Me whn u update
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superbbbbbbbb.........fantastic,......awesomeeeeeee.........mindblowin................⭐️..........
vry diff story.........i lovd it to d coreeeeeee............plzzzzzz plzzzzzzz continue writin amazinnnnn amazin oneshots n ffs lik this dear............n thnxxxxxxxx a ton for d pm...😃😃