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Posted: 23 August 2009 at 12:30am | IP Logged
hi! i just read ur ff
it is veryyyyyyyyyyyy interesting
nupur & gunjun pari.... awesome
veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy diffrent
update next part sooooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz can u pm me plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
 
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Posted: 23 August 2009 at 12:54am | IP Logged
wow yaar nupur and gunjan pari awsome countinue soon pls eager to read sajan part add me to your pm list
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Posted: 23 August 2009 at 1:03am | IP Logged
its a very nice idea lina ... all the best with ur FF!!
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Posted: 23 August 2009 at 5:58am | IP Logged
Great yaar. But pls pls do continue soon.
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Posted: 23 August 2009 at 11:48am | IP Logged
OMG awesome ff.......very different......please update soon...........pm meEmbarrassed
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Posted: 23 August 2009 at 1:12pm | IP Logged
Thank u soo much.
I thought no one will like it.Smile
 
Ok sop this is the next part. Sarting with Mayur. Then Sajan.
Ok so if u are a Mayur fan u can read hot pink and black
and if u are a Sajan fan u can read blue and black
and if both then u can can ejoyly read the whole thing. Smile
 
                  Part 3
Everything gets quite.
M: Sorry tumhe job nahi miley gi.
N: Par meine itni dere se bahar intezar kiya.
MM: Dekho beta, tumhe job mil gayi.
M: Par ma.
MM: Par var kuch nahi Nupur ko job mil gayi toh mil gayi., akir mein teri maa hoon, aur meine haan ki, aur wase bhi Nupur ko job ki zurwat hai, mujhe laagta hai.
M: Ma................
N:*Interupts Mayu* *Dramactic* nahi aunty ji agar MAYANK SHARMA mujhe job dena nahi chahate hai, toh mein yeh job nahi loon gi.
MM:Toh teri job pakki.
M:Maa.......
Nupur goes to Mayu's mom. She holds her hands.
N:*In a cute voice* Thank you aunty, by god, kya cool ma hai app. Ma toh........
She lifts her hand high.
N:Aur beta.........
She lifts in low. She looks at Mayank, and stops smiling. Mayu's mom looks at Nupur.
MM thinking: Kitni achi larkein hai, Mayu ke liye.
MM: Beta, bete pa matt jao, woh toh asa hi hai. Suddu.
They both laughs.
MM: Acha Mayu, teri birthday ko aaj party raki hai, ghar jaldi anna.
She toches his hair.
M: Maa balon ko matt chuho.
She is about to go, but looks at Nupur.
MM:Beta, tumbhi invited ho.
N:Nahi aunty, sorry par aaj meri aur meri behan ki birthday hai, toh aaj hum dono kahi bahar jae ge.
MM:Tumhari birthday bhi.
N:Haan, sorry mein nahi aa suckti.
MM:Nahi Nupur asa nahin chale ga. Tumhe toh aana pare ga.
N:Par.
M:*Interepts* Ma kyun force kar rahi ho ussko?
Nupur looks at Mayu.
N:Sure aunty mein aaungi, kya meri behan aa suckti hai?
MM:Of corse. Please ussko bhi invite karna.
N:OK
Mayu's mom hugs Nupur, then goes. Nupur sits down in a chair.
N:Toh boss mujhe yahan mein editor hoon.
M:*Smiles*Nahi. Phele apna file do mujhe.
N:Par app ne dekha ke woh chor mera bag chori karke le gaya, aur uss mein hi meri file thi,
M:*his killer smile* Meine kuch nahi dekha.
N:App jhoot bolrahe hai.
M:Nahi.
N:Theeke toh mein appki mummy ke paas ja rahi hoon.
M:Tum mujhe dhamki de rahi ho?
N:Jo samjh na hai samjihe.
Mayu smiles, Nupur smiles, Mayank smiles, Nupur smiles, So much smiles and us fans go crazzy,
Then she goes out the door, and brings back. Yeah, u guesses it. Mayu's mom. Mayu looks at her and turns back.
M;Oh no yeh Nupur ne toh Ma ko le aayi.
MM:Mayank!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Mayu turns around,
M:Ji ma
MM:Mayank tune meri baat nahi suni.
M:Ma par isske paas appni education ki file nahi hai.
Shilpa aunty looks at Nupur
N:Woh aunty chor ne chori ki mere bag ke saath, appke Mayu ne meri help ki thi.
Shilpa aunty looks at Mayu.
M:Mujhe matt dekho maa. Haan meine isski help ki thi, aur issne thank you bhi nahi bolla.
Shilpa aunty looks at Nupur.
NN:Yeh jhoot bol raha hai. Meine kaha tha. Bhool gaya hogein.
Shilpa aunty looks at Mayu.
M;Mein kuch nahi bhoola..
Mayank stands up and Nupur goes in front of him.
N;Tum ne bhoola.
M:Nahi, jhooti.
N:*Ah* Mein jhooti? Tum jhoote. Bilkul monkey jaise dikte ho.
M:At least monkey jhoot nahi bolte.
N:Haan bolte hai.M:Tumhe kaise pata? Tum kya monkey ke saath jungle mein bari hui ho kya?
N: Nahi. Par tumhe kaise pata ke woh jhoot nahi bolte? Tum wahan bare hue ho kya?
M:*Smiles* Haan, tumhe koi problem hai?
N:*Tries to claim herself* Dekho.*Pointing a finger at him*
M:Dekhna hai mujhe tumhe yahan se jate hue. *Pointing his finger at her back*
Too much finger pointing scene,
So let me skip them LOL
OK then
At the same time they say
M:Ma!
N;Aunty!
She is there finding her face because she can't stop laughing..
MM:Kahan na meine Mayu. Nupur ko yeh nakari milgayi hai.
N:Editor ki.
MM:Haan editor ki, OK?
M:Nahi.
MM:Tumhari kaun fikar karta hai, chahe tum haan karo yaan na, Nupur ur job is final,
M;Tumne meri ma ko jadu tona kar ke appne vash mein kardiya hai, tabhi woh apne bete ki baat nahi sun rahi.
N:Mein tumhari mummy ko jadu tona kar ke wash nahi kiya hai, Mayu.
M;Mayank Sharma!
N;Ok Mayu, Mayank Sharma.
MM:Tumhe job mil gayi.
M:Maa*Patting his feets in the floor and crying out loud. like a baby,*
Nupur patts on MM shoulder.
N:It's ok aunty mein appke baby Mayu ka khiyal kar loon gi,
Shilpa aunty and Nupur starts laughing. Mayu folds his arms.
MM:oh mein tum dono beheno ka intezar karoon gi,
She hugs Nupur. They say bye. Then Nupur sits in the chair again.
M:Tum.*Trying to controll anger*
He get over it, then calls Minni. She comes and he tells her to show Nupur what to do. They go.
College is finished. Everyone ready to go home. Gunjan going too. She is going down the stair. Samrat after her. She walks faster, when she notice that guy (Sammy) after her. Suddenly, her sandal fells off. She still continue walking. Then stops looking backward to see if that guy is still following. He is no there, So she goes back to get her sandal. Nothing there. Then a hand in her right shoulder. She looked backed.That guy there. And he is holding something behind his other hand. He shows it. It is her sandal.
S:Kyun bilkul ek fairytale ki tarah hai na?
Gunjan tries to look somewhere else.
S:*Smiling* Appko pina doon?
Gunjan looks at him
G:Dekho, yeh koi fairytale nahi hai, and mujhe cinderella pasand nahi hai. In fact koi si fairytale nahi..
Samrat bends down, puts on her sandal.
S:Cinderella nahi. kya yeh sandal app ko glass slipper laagti hai?
G:Dekho.....
Samrat gets up.
S:Yeh appki fairytale hai, appka naam kya hai?
G:Pagaljan.*Smiling*
Samrat stars at her, Clears his throat.
S:Toh yeh pagaljanella hai, samhji?
He winks at her.
G:Congrats.
S:Kiss liye?
G:Appne sadal pinahi toh app Pagaljanella ke prince hai. Well mera naam hai Gunjan toh mein appki Pagaljanella nahi hoon.
She winks back
S:Smart.
G:Woh toh har koi hota hai.
S;Toh miss Gunjan, kya app ne mujh stupid ko maff kar diya?
G:*Smiles* Yes! And meri birthday hai today mujhe wish nahi kare ge?
S:Happy birthday.Tum kitne saal ki ho chuki hui ho?
Gunjan looks down at her sandal.
S:Sorry, age se toh lakeinyein chuphati hai na?
G:Nahi, mein abb 21 saal ki ho jaun gi.
S:OK then bye and friends?
G:Bye and Friends.
They shake hands. Both going the other way with the starting of new friendship.
 
 
Next part will update it soon.
on that u will see the magical powers Nupur and Gunjan gets, and they become something. Or have something. Hope u like it. And next part u will get to see a lot of Sajan, and Mayur too.Smile
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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Posted: 23 August 2009 at 1:25pm | IP Logged
Hey... I just read Part one... was a lovely read.... I liked the character introductions and the storyline seems fun. Will soon catch up with the rest of the updates.. Smile keep writing!!
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Posted: 23 August 2009 at 1:52pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sameera_12

Hey,

Congratularions for youe new ff
It was very niceClap......
plzz continue it soon and do pm me when you update next....
Love,
SameeraSmile
 
Thank you so much Sameera diSmile
I have this story in my head, on Mayur.
and when I have more time then I will write it.
Hope u will like it.
 

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