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Part 10
Hey guyzzz, finally updated this part. And yeah, I am going to change Mayur's story a little. So when Nupzs drop from the boat thatzz out. lol
 
 
 
Samrat- I think I should go now.

Gunjan- Ok then, bye Samrat.

Samrat- Itni jaldi bye keh rahi ho chashmish?

Gunjan- Par tumne hi toh kaha ke mein chalta hoon.

Samrat- Par tumhe mujhe rokna chahiya tha chashmish.

Gunjan- Ohhhhh. Toh Samy plez matt jao

Samrat- Jaane toh mujh ko hai.

Gunjan- Agar jaana hai toh jao, aur agar nahi jaana toh nahi jao.

Samrat- Mujhe nahi jaana......

He goes closer to her. She walks back, and close to the wall. He looks at her face.

Samrat- Tumhare saath yahin reh na hai......

He goes closer.

Samrat- Aur kuch keh na hai.

He goes closer, she nervous.

He whispers in her ears.

Samrat- MUJHE THANK YOU BOLLO!

He goes back, and starts laughing. And she gets confused.

Gunjan- Kyun?

Samrat- Kyun ke meien tumhari help ki.

Gunjan- Ok baba, thank you sooooo much.

Samrat- No problem, abb goodnight.

Gunjan- Goodnight.

They walk to the door. He smiles and goes,

She waits for him to look back.

He is almost out of sight, but he looks back at her,

They smile, and wave bye to each other.

He goes, and Gunjan goes inside, and goes to sleep.

The next morning is Sunday meaning no collage.

Gunjan's cell phone rings, and she picks it up.
Gunjan- Hello?
Samrat- Hey chashmish howzz ya?
Gunjan- Samrat kya hai? Itni subah? Aaj collage nahi hai
Samrat- I know, par aaj tum mere saath chal rahi ho.
Gunjan- Kahan?
Samrat- I don't know, anywhere.
Gunjan- *Smiles* ok baba, kab ready hoon?
Samrat- Abhi.
Gunjan- Abhi?
 
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Nupur- Mera locket kahan gaya?

Mayank- Yeah locket dhodh rahi ho?

She turns back to find Mayank holding her locket. And she get angry, and goes up to him.

Nupur- Tum mere locket ke saath kya kar rahe ho?????? Mujhe do!

He puts the locket in his pocket,

Mayank- Wait a sec, wait a sec, phele tum mere liye kuch karo.

Nupur- No wayzzz.

Mayank- Fine then locket bhi nahi miley ga.

Nupur- Toh nahi do.

Mayank- Theeke,

He starts walking away.

Nupur- Rukko.

He stops.

Nupur- Kya kaam karna hai?

He smiles, his naughty smile. And turn around.

Mayank- Zyada kuch nahi, bad aaj Sunday hai.

Nupur- Toh?

Mayank- Toh aaj mere saath poora din betana pare ga tumhe.

Nupur- Tum pagal hogaye ho. Tum jao na  appni Priya ke saath,

Mayank- Haan hum usske saath hi jaa rahe hai.

Nupur- Toh mujhe kyun bulla rahe ho?

Mayank- Kyun ke Priya chahati hai, ke tum aao.

Nupur- Really? Toh yeh tum nahi chahate?

Mayank- Of corse not.

Nupur- Fine, but give me my locket.

Mayank- here here, waise bhi mein iss locket ka kya karoon ga? Mein bhala "Nupur" ke naam ka locket kyun phehenoon ga.

Nupur- Fine then give me.

Mayank- Catch.

He throws her, her locket.

And she turns to leave.

Mayank- Remember aaj shaam ready reh na.

She doesn't care to bother, and walks away.

 

Hey guyzzz, updated it. Do comment on it.

thanks, and I know this part is not that long, but deffi the next will be longer.

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Edited by rkmnkp - 05 January 2010 at 4:16pm

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wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww lovelyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy update
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Hi Linu.
thanx God at last u update it.
it was awesome part.
loved it but mayur part was too short.
And ur summary was fantastic
After reading it my memory got refreshed.
now try to continue it.
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Awesome Part! Pls let me know If you update!!

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thanx yaar,...loved mayur......

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