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Posted: 30 October 2009 at 1:53pm | IP Logged
Part 8
Nupur gets ready. She goes to the party. Everyone looks at her. Mayank is talking to Priya. He sees her. She looks so cute. But she still is wearing chooridar pajama and kamis/frock. Her hair is open, and she looks like an total angel, in white. Seeing her Mayu smiles.Day DreamingEmbarrassed
M:Excuse me.
P:Yea sure.
He gets up and goes near her.Big smile
M:Tumne yeh kapre kyun pehene hai?
N:What are you talking about? Mein toh humesha hi asse kapre pehenti hoon.
N:Par kya?
M:Meine socha ke tum modern typr ke kapre peheno gi, because woh jab meine Priya ke bare mein bolla, ke-ke-, I like her because woh asse kapre-
N:Mayank, tumne socha ke tumhe impress karne ke liye, mein waise kapre pehen o gi?
M:Kya Nupur sahi keh rahi hai?Day DreamingEmbarrassed
Chiron ji: Nupur!!!!!Angry
They look back. She smiles. Mayank gets madLOL
N:Chiru ji.
Chiron ji: App woh kya kehte hai? Haan bohut beautiful laag rahi hai.LOL
N:Thank you thank you.LOL
Mayank holds Nupur's arm, and takes her to the corner
M:Tum usse pyar se Chiru ji kyun bol ti ho?
N:Kyun? Tumhe koi problem hai kya?Broken Heart
N:Mayank tumhe tumari mummy pyar se Mayu bullati hai na.LOL
M:Haan, par kya tum appne Chiruuuuuu ji ki mummy ho?ROFL
N:Mayank, now go, go with ur hot PriyaOuch
M:Ok par tum usske paas matt jana.
N: Mayank, I can be with whoever I want to. Angry Now leave me alone.
Mayank sits down with Priya again. And Nupur sits with Chiron ji.
Chiron ji: Happy b-day ji.
N:Thank you.
She looks at Mayank. He is talking with Priya.Ouch
N:Appko dance karna hai?Angry
Chiron ji: Ok.Angry
They get up and dance. He is horrible at dancingLOL. Nupur looks at Mayank, who is dancing with Priya.Ouch
They were great, they danced wonderfully. Seeing this Nupur went away to the wine bar.
N:Bhaiyya pani plez.
She looks back at Mayank and Priya. She doesn't know her feelings. She turns back, and drink the glass on the table. The guy looks at her.
Guy: Woh actually pani nahi hai mam.
Nupur is finished with it. She puts it hard on the table.
N:Aur plez.
Guy:Par yeh-yeh sharab haiShocked
N:I don't careLOL
Guy: I don't think you would want it.LOL
Guy: *Afraid*As you wishROFL(Har koi humari Nupur se darta hai bhiayyaROFL)
They finished cleaning.
G:Thank you.Smile
S:Your welcome.Smile
Gunjan smiles.
S:Lets open the gifts, my favorite thing to do.LOL
They sit and open the gifts.
S:Look this is from Benji.
G:Wow, my fav. book.
S:*Smiles* Gunjan this is from-
S thinking: Lets trick chashmishLOL
S:This is from, a guy name Rohit.
G:Really, I love him.
She opens it, it waz a cute bear holding a box of chocolates,Day Dreaming
S:Gunji, yeh Rohit kaun hai?
G:Mera boyfriend.Ouch
His face looks like Cry
Gunjan starts ROFL
G:Dekh-dekh-dekho tumhara face. hahahahahah, arrey mazaq kar rahi ti. Samrat tum abhi bhi mujhe nahi jhante? hahahahhah, mein kissi Rohit ko nahi jhanti.
S:*Confused* What? ahhahaha so funny chashmish
G:*Stops laughing* Thank you
G:For this girf.
S:*Smile* your welcome.Day Dreaming
Nupur is done with her second glass. She goes to the dance floor. She taps on Priya's shoulder. Priya looks back.
N:Tum-tum ocean go toLOL
M:Iss ka keh ne ka matlab hai, you go to ocean? What? Nupur tum kya keh rahi ho?LOL
N:Mayu Mayu Day Dreamingiss ladki ko bollo, ke yahan se jae.
N:Mein jaa rahi hoon.
M:Tumne sharab piyi hai kya?
The lights are off.
Woot woot, just finished it. Arza hogaya, I havent update it, No school for 3 dayz. So me taking the advantageLOL. Well anywayz hope you liked it. Do comment, will be waiting for your comments.
Love LinaWink

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Premeer_01 Newbie

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Posted: 30 October 2009 at 2:05pm | IP Logged
it was really good.
plzzz cont soon

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sreevijayan IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 8262

Posted: 30 October 2009 at 3:27pm | IP Logged
Nupur drank? OH GOD... Ab mazaa aagaya..continue soon.

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Shafoo IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 14934

Posted: 30 October 2009 at 7:56pm | IP Logged
wowowow i love your 6 to 8 parts

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mayur_fan Senior Member

Joined: 01 October 2009
Posts: 404

Posted: 31 October 2009 at 1:44am | IP Logged
i lovvvvved it lina,Big smileBig smileBig smile it was wonderful,Big smileBig smile
i am loooonging 2 c wat powers nupur gets, i think gunjan will get d power of flying, i am racking my brains thinking about wat nups will get, plzzzzzzzzz upd8 soooooon.LOLLOLLOL
luv u loads,Big smileBig smile

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Sajan_Ekta Senior Member

Joined: 11 October 2009
Posts: 559

Posted: 31 October 2009 at 3:05am | IP Logged
Awesome Update! But it was too short! I loved the Sajan Convo about Rohit! ROFL

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XAiShBaBy08X Goldie

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Posts: 1289

Posted: 31 October 2009 at 9:20am | IP Logged
aww you always end when something is going to happen! I can't wait to see more. Update soon!

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tanya.dsouza Senior Member

Joined: 29 September 2009
Posts: 476

Posted: 31 October 2009 at 10:17am | IP Logged
OMG i really luvd it!!!

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