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PROLOGUE:

 

"Look here, it's dangerous."

"So what? Let it be. I don't care."

"But I do. How do you think I would feel seeing your dead body in front of me?"

"As an army officer I have every right to lay down my life for my country. And besides why are you worrying so much when last night you told me that you actually don't care whatever happens to me?"

"Naina, please don't say such things. I had been extremely angry. But that was not what I meant. The words just slipped out."

"On the contrary, I think you meant them. Besides, it isn't important" Naina turned her back towards him.

He held her by her arms and made her turn towards him forcibly.

"No." he said softly. "Look me in the eyes and me that and I may believe you." He challenged.

Naina didn't look up at him. He didn't force her either. After some time Naina broke down in his arms and hugged him tightly.

"I cannot live without you Rajveer." She sobbed in his arms. "I really can't. I have lost all those people whom I loved. You are the only one left. I don't want to lose you. I'll come with you Raj. I'll come with you. Please."

"Hush. Stop crying darling. Why are you so hell bent………"

Naina cut in fiercely, "Look. I have got my orders as well. If you try to cancel them and stop me here then I promise you Raj, you won't find me alive when you come back."

"Naina…….." screamed Rajveer. "Don't. How many times have I told you not to say such things." Then he cooled down a bit. "Hmmh! I see you are not to be put off. Very well then, you are coming with me to J&K. We have lived together till date. I just hope that when we come face to face with death, we will be together in that as well."

And he hugged her tightly.

 

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PART -1

KMA:

It is the last day of the cadets Naina, Pooja, Ali, Aalekh, Huda and Yudi in the KMA. They were different people with different dreams, different aspirations but one goal. To be a perfect soldier and KMA was the best place for that.

 

A TRIP DOWN THE MEMORY LANE:

(BY RAJVEER SINGH SHEKHAWAT)

 

Naina Singh had come to this academy with only one dream – to know the truth about her brother's death and to prove him innocent. She, along with her mentor, Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat had embarked upon a journey – a journey into the past in the quest of TRUTH.

Rajveer had not supplied her immediately with all the information that she wanted. Instead he had tried her, put her to test but when he saw that she was not to be deterred on any account come what may, he helped her only too gladly to fulfill her dream, even at the cost of his own life.

He still remembered how Naina had scolded him once he was out of the hospital. In that moment all the unsaid emotions between them flowed out unrestrained and Rajveer had promised to himself that he would never leave Naina alone.

 

Rajveer still remembered the spark which he had noticed in her eyes during their first meeting. A spark, which told him that this girl would go far.

There was also a pain in her eyes – the pain of losing a dear one, someone very close to the heart. Her pain pierced his heart to the core causing the old wounds to bleed – bleed profusely. Not that the wounds had healed any time. Rajveer could never forget the one he had lost. But just by looking at Naina he felt a stabbing pain in his heart. Deep waves of empathy washed over him and as the girl wished her good morning; he couldn't refrain from flashing a smile at her.

SMILE – It had become a very rare occurrence in Captain Rajveer's life of late. But something happened that day.

 

Her big, black eyes with a slight upward slant and the beautiful eyebrows were the first thing which caught his attention. Her frank and straightforward nature and the faith in her eyes reminded him of someone. But he wondered if she was always like this? Did she trust each and every person who came her way? He will have to groom her to keep her emotions under check; Rajveer had thought and immediately found himself proved wrong.

 

Huda and Yudi came there with the intention of joining them. Almost as if in a flash, Naina underwent a change. As Rajveer watched, he felt some sort of shutters being drawn across her eyes and she looked at the other two with a distant look. They were strangers and they felt it too. She had closed herself to the outside world, but her piercing look penetrated deep into the hearts of all those at whom she looked. Huda and Yudi mumbling a good morning to Rajveer and almost ran away from there. Naina was then back to her normal self and she remained in this normal state only in the company of her Raj sir and Dr. Shalini.

The fact that Naina trusted him the most gave Rajveer supreme joy and he didn't mind sharing the honours with Dr. Shalini. She was a friend after all.

 

In the evening when Rajveer was roaming in the grounds, he overheard two people talking.

1st Person: I'm warning you; don't mess around with that girl.

2nd Person: Are you crazy Yudi? Mess around with Cadet Naina – Naina Singh Ahlluwalia. Have you taken me to be a Ravan – the demon king with ten heads or what. Look, I have got only one head over my neck and I'm very much fond of it and want it to stay there.

 

Rajveer was amused. But he also was enlightened. Now he knew why he felt such a deep empathy with Naina. The bond which they shared was too strong to be broken. He would have felt the pull even across the globe. And the name of that bond was NAVEEN. NAVEEN SINGH AHLUWALIA – Rajveer's best friend. KMA topper. A great soldier and a great friend. A martyr who had been branded a traitor.

 NAVEEN SINGH AHLUWALIA: Naina's elder brother.

 

Rajveer sat in his chair and rocked to and fro. Along with the chair, his mind was also rocking from past to present and then present to past until everything got jumbled up for him.

He had become habituated to the heartache which was his constant companion after Naveen's death. Now that he knew who Naina was he understood the language of spark in her eyes. She was here to prove her brother innocent and her faith sparkled in her eyes. It set Rajeev's heart and soul on fire. And he promised to himself that he would help her at any cost. Though he had promised Naveen…………

 

Rajveer knew a lot about Naina because Naveen could never stop chattering about his younger sister. A black belt holder in karate and a sharp shooter; she had won many prizes at the national level and had got the chance to prove herself at the international forum when she was selected to represent India in an international sports meet. She had attended the meet and had been successful.

Naveen had been literally jumping up and down in the room which he shared with Raj when he heard the news. He wanted to buy a gift for her and asked Rajveer to accompany him to the mall and Raj had agreed.

But even before Naina could come back, tragedy struck. Naveen died and was branded a traitor. The gift which a brother had so lovingly bought for his sister remained in Rajveer's possession.

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Hello All!
 
Lo, aap sab ki khawishon ke mutabik maine ud kar diya. Ab toh kush ho jao.
 
And yes, an important note:
 
Iss fic ko start karne me mujhe bahut taklif hui hai. Mai shayad isse discontinue kar deti but for four of my friends who supported me through this. They are:
Aneesha, Priya, Shaina and Dhara.
Thnks a lot friends.
 
The next part will be dedicated to you.
Tab tak enjoy this part.
 
Love
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Posted: 25 August 2009 at 1:49pm | IP Logged

Very interesting prologue!!!!!!

The opening lines of the story are awesome!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap

Raj is to stop Naina from going but Naina is adament!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Thumbs Up Thumbs Up Thumbs Up Thumbs Up 

Raj had said he doesn't care what happens to Naina in anger!!!!!Ouch Ouch Ouch Ouch OuchThats very bad!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry

Naina is now crying in his arms and saying she cannot live without him!!!!!Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry

Naina now threatened Raj that if he tried to stop her there then he won't find her alive when came back!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile Smile

Good for her!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Smile Smile Smile SmileWarna yeh Raj toh manta hi nahi hai aur jab dekho Naina ko khud se dur karta rehta hai!!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry

Finally Raj agreed to take her with him to J&K!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap

Raj ne kaha that they have lived together till date and he hoped when they come face to face with death they will be together in that as well!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing

Raj aur Naina toh jeeyenge saath aur marenge bhi saath!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap


 



Edited by Shaina_b - 08 September 2009 at 9:10am

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Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

It was the last day of the cadets in KMA and they are passing out!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap

The trip down memory lane was truly nostalgic!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile

Raj and Naina had embarked upon a journey in the quest of truth!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Thumbs Up Thumbs Up Thumbs Up Thumbs Up

Raj and Naina's relationship was beautifully described!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap

Their relationship has grown and strengthened over time!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

They seek each other's support to live their lives and to survive!!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Smile Smile Smile Smile

Raj had seen faith in Naina's eyes and had wondered whether she trusted everyone!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile Smile

Magar Naina toh sirf Raj pe trust karti hai!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

The fact that Naina trusted him the most gave Rajveer supreme joy!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed EmbarrassedKya baat hai!!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Smile Smile Smile Smile

Huda bhi Naina se darta hai and does not want to mess with her!!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

Raj was amused and enlightened to hear Yudi and Huda's convo!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile LOL LOL LOL LOL

Raj aur Naina ke beech jo kadi thi uska naam tha Navin!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

Raj is thinking about the past while sitting in his rocking chair!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

Now that he knew who Naina was he promised to himself that he would help her at any cost!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Thumbs Up Thumbs Up Thumbs Up Thumbs Up

Raj had heard a lot about Naina from Navin!!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile Smile

Naina is a black belt holder in karate and sharp shooter!!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile SmileWow!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap

Raj had accompanied Navin to buy a gift for Naina!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile SmileBut before Navin could give it he had died!!!!!Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry

So Raj had that gift now!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile SmileChahe Navin ka ho magar dega toh Raj hi na!!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Smile Smile Smile Smile


 



Edited by Shaina_b - 08 September 2009 at 1:48pm

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Awesome dear...Clap Clap Clap
 
tum ne jis tarah se Raj aur Naina k relation ko portrayed kiya hai...dat was awesome...
 
huda aur us ki huda-giri ka toh jawab hi nahin hai...
 
chota sa part tha ...isiliye chota sa comment kar rahi hun...!!!
 
aur haan...main abhi zinda hun...isiliye mere zinda rahte next part k dedication list me se mera naam cut kar do...LOL
 
cont soon.

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Posted: 26 August 2009 at 11:23am | IP Logged

The trip down memory lane was most nostalgic...

You have described both naina and raj's feelings beautifully...and it seems that their relationship has grown and strengthen over time...they both seek each others support to live their lives....to survive...

i am glad that you have decided to continue with this FF...

please update soon

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