Okay even though I'm alittle miffed that you STILL haven't updated either of 'Can't Take My Eyes Off Of You' or 'Man Of My Dreams' π (but I guess that's up to you and of course how your thoughts flow!)
I guess all I can say is please please please please!!! Update one of them SOON!!!!πππ
Anyway back to this one shot FF!! Only 1 word comes to mind AMAZING!!!πππ Really amazing!!βοΈβοΈβοΈ
I LOVE this Prachi she's sooo cute and sweet and alittle naive!π (when it comes to Milind I mean!π) I ESPEACIALLY LOVE this Milind!!π Really he's so cute and KNOWS what he wants! Definately is a bit naughty! (I love that lol!ππ³)
I love how you put such a cute and romantic spin on a common thing of when a girl finally decides she wants to get married (and too an arranged marriage!)π
My cousins going through the same thing right now and she's a nervous wreck!ππ ( I know I shouldn't laugh at her but it can be soo funny at times! lol!π)
Their sort of official first meeting was really sweet! I mean the way he kept helping her out in his sutle ways!π With the bra thing and that Ranvir bit!ππ That was funny lol!
"I am not a lesbian." Prachi says quickly.
ππ lol! That cracked me up!! ππ And the way he was checking out Ayesha just to piss her off!!! π²ππ
I loved how you made Prachi so expressive in this!π The way she gaped at him when she first met him lol!ππ (That definately would have been my state to!!ππ) And the way she FUMED when he called her sweetheart or was checking Ayesha out lol!π She definately became possessive quickly!π
I loved Prachis thoughts
She was not going to marry him she will never marry a man who goes calling unknown girls sweetheart.
lol!π And how Milind could read those thoughts!π That made me smile!
Then the whole ice cream and kheer thing! ( okay first of all SHOCKED!!!π²π² HOW can anyone NOT like ICE CREAM!! π²π²) But still cute part!! π
I loved how he remebered everything he told her and them dancing together! π The whole masquerade dancing mystery guy thing really cool! lol! π
I liked the whole Prachi-Alaap relationship in this even if their wasn't muchπ (I wish they had done atleast abit of that in the showπ oh well) and the Milind-Alaap friendship! And Sukriti after Alaap! lol! ππ
"Looks like we Mishra-s are behind you Shah-s." Milind says chuckling.
(loved this line!)
I thought it was really cute the way he had to make it seem it was his Baba's idea for the marriage lol!π²π Very sneaky!π And than she ate his ice cream! Soo cute!π
REALLY liked this one shot! ππAmazing βοΈβοΈ (like I said before lol!π)
Anyway GREAT one shot but . . . . . (just a suggestion or a request in away) could you maybe do atleast an Epilogue to it or something! I don't know something like the day of the wedding or a day in the life of their marriage maybe I dont know up to you! π³ Basically depends on where your flow of thoughts lead you or thinks this is the perfect ending! (I don't mind anyway sounds amazing as it is aswell lol!π)
Anyway to stop my ramblings GREAT oneshot!πβοΈ and . . (SORRY just got to say it!)
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update the others soon!!!ππ