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-Bollywood ka Maara Armaan Bechara-Updated Pg 130 (Page 7)

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Posted: 17 August 2009 at 12:43pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by lovebapu18

nice part!!
thanks for the pm!!
do continue soon!!
Thanks and no problem yaarSmile

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Posted: 17 August 2009 at 12:45pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ramani

hi

just read ur ff. it is very very good.

the character sketches well described of the people but didn't get why armaan hates his bro and bhabhi.

the parts were hilarious. muskaan too lively and bubbly yaar.the scene where armaan says go simran go hehe culdn't stop laughing. he got too much into the movie.

continue soon.will be waiting for the next parts. 

First of all thanx for the comment! Umm Armaan hates his bro and bhabhi for many reasons (just read onWink) lol
 
Im glad you had a good laugh!
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Posted: 17 August 2009 at 12:45pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mohini_agarwal

interesting concept! i love the bond between Armaan and Muskaan :}
continue soon and add me to your pm list as well.
 
thanks,
mohini :]
Thanks! And dont worry I will add you!
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Posted: 17 August 2009 at 12:49pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by peacewithin

Hey loved this update to the core
so funny and cute..
It seems to me that even though Armaan says he hated bollywood movies..he still enjoys them
and Awww....Dilwale Dulhania Le hi Gaye'''''
So cute!!! Loved it! I love Armaan in your story
and i cant wait till he gets his Riddhima
And Muskaan is just so funny
Aww..crying at the end of DDLJ! Aww..to cute...
And praying before the plane takes off(Lol they do always do that in movies) Hehehe
loved the update
Continue soon
And thanks for the PM
Love your story to bits
Luv Anu
 
Wow that was such a sweeet comment! Thanks soooo muchSmile Lol Dont you worry Armaan will find his Ridhimma very very soonWink
 
And oh yes not only does he secretly like Bollywood films they play a REALLy important role in his life! Trust Me! Wink
 
And thanks soo much for loving the story!
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Posted: 17 August 2009 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Robin_M

haha of course he has to like the classic hit ddlj! how can anyone not!?! lol his reaction was funny!
LOLLOLlol I know eh...how can anyone not like DDLJ! Thanks so much for the comment!
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Posted: 18 August 2009 at 12:09pm | IP Logged
Hello All, Here is the next and guys please comment please. All those silent readers please please comment and those who do already Thanks guys!
 

A: Oh thank god…..that was so long!

M: I know man I am so tired……………..can't wait to see Abhi bhayia

A: wait a little longer

M: huh?

A: he wont come to pick us up

M: come on Armaan you're coming to India after like 6 years he will come for sure

A: he wont…..

M: he will Armaan

A: this isn't your stupid bollywood movie where it's all fairy tales this is real! He will NOT come!

M: exxxcccuuuusseee  me?? Stupid? You're the one who stood up in the bloody theatre "Jao Simran Jao"

A: get over it………okay that was weird even I don't get it! Girls running after a train STUPID!

M: Armaan please you know loved it………..She raced ahead of him in anger

A: ughhhhhh…………Muskaan………..Muskaan………

M: she stopped and turned……………….okay which one is Abhi

A: no Abhi……….It's that man there holding up the "armaan Malik" sign…………..come

M: what Abhi didn't come?!??!

A: nope……………….Armaan approached the man with the sign and said………..hello

Man: ji?

A: Armaan Malik………nice to meet you sir

Man: Oh Oh sorry woh…………..Tiwari Mr. Tiwari…………..actually Malik sir aaj thoda busy the woh chote sir ka birthday hai na

M: koi baat nahin…………Muskaan…………..she shook hands with Mr. Tiwari

M.T: chalein

A: yes please

Mr.Tiwari: Sir yahaan se Chandigargh tak hum train lenge aur phir station se ghar ke liye wahaan gadi ka intezaam hai

A: whatever……….let get going

Mr.Tiwari: Actually sir woh Nikita Mam ne apni behen ko bheja tha aapko recive karne ke liye….lekin……………..Mr.Tiwari looks around……………………..pata nahin woh kahaan gayi

M: koi baat nahin hum wait karlete hain

A: what?!?! Muskaan wait…….wait………are you crazy I am so tired…….and it is the stupidity of this girl where the hell is she?? Who just goes off at the airport…………….does she not know we're coming….God!!!

M: Armaan relax okay she came to pick us up okay so just be respectful just wait! Just wait!

A: ughhhh I don't know why I let you boss me around……………..he sits down

M: because your soo sweet Ammy!

A: he instantly gets up………..NEVER! EVER!

M: sorry sorry

They wait like twenty minutes

A: that's it!!! Mr.Tiwari let's go!

M.T: si……..

A: lets go………..Muskaan come…………..Muskaan tried to resist but Armaan was insistent

They all left for the train station leaving behind Nikita's sister……..

In the car:

M: seriously you wouldn't put out your hand and pull her in

A: no  I woud not. If a girl was running after the train I would just say Ha Sucker!

M.T: Station Aa gaya….chalien sir……………

They leave the car and board the train, the whistle goes and…….

Girl Screaming: Tiwari…………Sir……….Mr.Tiwari…………….

A:  Yo Tiwari………A girl is calling out your name………………..Mr.Tiwari looks confused…………..I know Im shocked!

Girl Screaming: Stop…………Stop……….Stop……….Tiwari Sir……………

M: seriously koi aapka naam bula raha hai

Armaan Muskaan and Mr.Tiwari serach around a little but no-one then it strikes Armaan……………….

A to himself: No way……………..no no no no…………………this is just weird……….no no……..can it be….maybe……………Then Armaan looks outside the train door he puts his head out and………Holy !!!! Damn this is sooooooooooooooo weird

There was a girl in a red suit running after the train with her hand stretched out…………

A to himself: oh man………………….he was so dumbfounded by this and then without realizing it he was leaning out of the train and stretching his hand out to help the girl………………………..

A: come on come on……………..faster…………………his hand still stretched then finally she caught hold of his hand……….and he pulled her in………………………

A to himslef: what the hell did I just do?!?!?!?

 

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Posted: 18 August 2009 at 12:21pm | IP Logged
amazing part
armaan is soo funny he actually inacted the DDLG scene cant wait till AR come face to face.
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Posted: 18 August 2009 at 12:23pm | IP Logged
so armaan finally met riddhima.......wow......cool.

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