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hi
just read ur ff. it is very very good.
the character sketches well described of the people but didn't get why armaan hates his bro and bhabhi.
the parts were hilarious. muskaan too lively and bubbly yaar.the scene where armaan says go simran go hehe culdn't stop laughing. he got too much into the movie.
continue soon.will be waiting for the next parts.
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Lol Dont you worry Armaan will find his Ridhimma very very soon
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lol I know eh...how can anyone not like DDLJ! Thanks so much for the comment!
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A: Oh thank god…..that was so long!
M: I know man I am so tired……………..can't wait to see Abhi bhayia
A: wait a little longer
M: huh?
A: he wont come to pick us up
M: come on Armaan you're coming to India after like 6 years he will come for sure
A: he wont…..
M: he will Armaan
A: this isn't your stupid bollywood movie where it's all fairy tales this is real! He will NOT come!
M: exxxcccuuuusseee me?? Stupid? You're the one who stood up in the bloody theatre "Jao Simran Jao"
A: get over it………okay that was weird even I don't get it! Girls running after a train STUPID!
M: Armaan please you know loved it………..She raced ahead of him in anger
A: ughhhhhh…………Muskaan………..Muskaan………
M: she stopped and turned……………….okay which one is Abhi
A: no Abhi……….It's that man there holding up the "armaan Malik" sign…………..come
M: what Abhi didn't come?!??!
A: nope……………….Armaan approached the man with the sign and said………..hello
Man: ji?
A: Armaan Malik………nice to meet you sir
Man: Oh Oh sorry woh…………..Tiwari Mr. Tiwari…………..actually Malik sir aaj thoda busy the woh chote sir ka birthday hai na
M: koi baat nahin…………Muskaan…………..she shook hands with Mr. Tiwari
M.T: chalein
A: yes please
Mr.Tiwari: Sir yahaan se Chandigargh tak hum train lenge aur phir station se ghar ke liye wahaan gadi ka intezaam hai
A: whatever……….let get going
Mr.Tiwari: Actually sir woh Nikita Mam ne apni behen ko bheja tha aapko recive karne ke liye….lekin……………..Mr.Tiwari looks around……………………..pata nahin woh kahaan gayi
M: koi baat nahin hum wait karlete hain
A: what?!?! Muskaan wait…….wait………are you crazy I am so tired…….and it is the stupidity of this girl where the hell is she?? Who just goes off at the airport…………….does she not know we're coming….God!!!
M: Armaan relax okay she came to pick us up okay so just be respectful just wait! Just wait!
A: ughhhh I don't know why I let you boss me around……………..he sits down
M: because your soo sweet Ammy!
A: he instantly gets up………..NEVER! EVER!
M: sorry sorry
They wait like twenty minutes
A: that's it!!! Mr.Tiwari let's go!
M.T: si……..
A: lets go………..Muskaan come…………..Muskaan tried to resist but Armaan was insistent
They all left for the train station leaving behind Nikita's sister……..
In the car:
M: seriously you wouldn't put out your hand and pull her in
A: no I woud not. If a girl was running after the train I would just say Ha Sucker!
M.T: Station Aa gaya….chalien sir……………
They leave the car and board the train, the whistle goes and…….
Girl Screaming: Tiwari…………Sir……….Mr.Tiwari…………….
A: Yo Tiwari………A girl is calling out your name………………..Mr.Tiwari looks confused…………..I know Im shocked!
Girl Screaming: Stop…………Stop……….Stop……….Tiwari Sir……………
M: seriously koi aapka naam bula raha hai
Armaan Muskaan and Mr.Tiwari serach around a little but no-one then it strikes Armaan……………….
A to himself: No way……………..no no no no…………………this is just weird……….no no……..can it be….maybe……………Then Armaan looks outside the train door he puts his head out and………Holy !!!! Damn this is sooooooooooooooo weird
There was a girl in a red suit running after the train with her hand stretched out…………
A to himself: oh man………………….he was so dumbfounded by this and then without realizing it he was leaning out of the train and stretching his hand out to help the girl………………………..
A: come on come on……………..faster…………………his hand still stretched then finally she caught hold of his hand……….and he pulled her in………………………
A to himslef: what the hell did I just do?!?!?!?
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