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-Bollywood ka Maara Armaan Bechara-Updated Pg 130 (Page 3)

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Posted: 12 August 2009 at 11:39am | IP Logged
include me in ur pm list,continue soon plz.
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Posted: 12 August 2009 at 12:04pm | IP Logged

:) The intro sounds not just cool but also funny. I mean atleast now, this seems to be a light-hearted comedy. Please do continue soon.

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Posted: 12 August 2009 at 12:10pm | IP Logged
great start & character sketch
continue soon & plz pm me when you do


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Posted: 12 August 2009 at 1:18pm | IP Logged
hey there;
wow great character sketch....very interesting...
pls PM me when you update....
awesome.....looking forward to this FF
continue soon
 
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Posted: 12 August 2009 at 7:29pm | IP Logged
great character sketch!
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Posted: 12 August 2009 at 9:02pm | IP Logged
nice character sketch!!
do continue soon!!
can u please pm me when u continue?
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Posted: 13 August 2009 at 9:48am | IP Logged

Thank You all for your lovely comments! I'm glad you liked it! Okay so yes for those who guessed  it............this is a pure masti FF I mean only light hearted comedy! So trust it'll be funWink

Here is the next part:

Scene2:

M: it's a letter from home………….

A: What?

M: a letter…….you know what people write and send …….those things………….

A: shut up!  He grabbed the letter from her hand and carefully examined it……….

M: just open it Ammy……..

He grabbed her hand looked her straight in the eye and said in low voice

A: don't EVER call me that! Ever

She wasn't taken aback or anything she was used to this kind of reaction

M: Sorry I won't. Promise, now can you please just open it sir.

Armaan looked at her and he knew that she wasn't scared or intimidated by his tough guy image but still he liked it when she faked it. Armaan opened the letter and read

A: Armaan, Abhi here, well what do I say I mean it's been six years since you have been in London and  we have met and well……

M: this is your brother right?

A: you know him and you know me so it's a big deal that he even wrote a letter…..he continued to read…..Armaan ab main yeh sab nahin kar sakta its not possible for me to carry on this forced relation. You have finished your MBA and so ab time aa gaya hai for you to come back home……

M: WHAT? Go back?

Armaan puts a hand on Muskaan's mouth to shut her up and continues……….

A: ……Armaan agar tumhe yaad toh six years ago in Pa's will it was written that after your studies are completed you have to come back home and join the office and only then will you get your share of the wealth and all,  So if you could come and we can finish the technicalities, it should take about two-three months……well that's all I had to say in this letter, and please Nikki wants that you come before the 18th of this month it's Abhimaan's birthday. Okay then bye Abhimanyu Malik

Muskaan looked at Armaan and he looked back

A: What now?

M: We have to go back…..

A: what?

M: yes! There is no other way……….I mean if its in the will…………..

A: But……..Muskaan how can I……………I hate him………..I hate her………….I hate it all!

M: oye listen……………I'm coming too so it wont be that bad its only like three months and dude you're gonna get a LOT of money………she winks at him

A: shut up………okay then if you come then………….

M: one condition……………….

A: condition?

M: you go to watch a movie with me……………….

A: that's it………a movie

M: yes they are showing my favorite at a local theatre…………..it's old but they are showing it again

A: which movie

Muskaan smiles

M: D…………..D…………………..L…………………..

A: NO!

M: yes!

A: NO WAY!

M: dheek hai jao akele India!

A: Muskaan!!!!! Don't do this blackmailing…………..and please don't talk in hindi………

M: main sirf sirf hindi mein baat karoongi…………..

A: muskaan!!!!!!!!!!!

M: chalooooooooooo…………….she looks at him and he succumbs to this pressure

A: FINE! But don't talk about the movie after or before the movie let's go!

M: shukariya………………she laughs!

A: let's go……………..D-D-L-…..what is it again?

M: J……….J………..Dilwale Dulhania Le Jayenge!!!!!

A: Oh god!

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Posted: 13 August 2009 at 9:50am | IP Logged
great part
cant wait till muskaan and armaan go bach home the last scene between the 2 was really cute.

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