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DOORIYAAN-An AR ff (part 10 page 29)

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Posted: 11 August 2009 at 7:10am | IP Logged

Hey guys....

I am again willing to write a ff....i know i was very bad to leave my ff in between only but now i want to start a new ff...i am posting the prome of my ff....hope you guys like it....Tongue

PROMO :

Anjali : Armaan just leave....right now...

Armaan : But angie.....

Anjali : I said leave right now.....aur mujhe kuch nahi sunnana.....

Armaan was speechless....

Angali : Armaan tum ja rahe ho or i should call the police.....

Armaan got tears in his eyes.....he gave a small fake smile.....

Armaan : Fine.....i am going.....(in watery tone)

Armaan left the place right away without thinking any more.....he went away with his eyes full of moist...."Today i am going RIDDHIMA.....but i promise jitna dukh tumne mujhe diya hai usse kayi zyada dard main tumhe pahuchaunga.....n that's my promise.....Armaan Mallik's promise"......with this thought he decided that he will never look back into his past n will always move on whatever the problem is......

THAT'S IT !!!!!!!!Wink

Guys i know it's a very short promo but i am depending upon you all.....if you all liked my story line then just comment or rather press the LIKE button......

And pls pls pls pls.....don't forget to comment haan.....cause only your comments will decide whether i should continue or not......Confused

INDEX :

Part 1 - page 1

Part 2 - page 3

Part 3 - page 6

Part 4 - page 8

Part 5 - page 9

Part 6 - page 11

Part 7 -page 14

Part 8 - page 17

Promo - page 20

Part 9 - page 22

Part 10 - page 29



Edited by ria020594 - 29 September 2009 at 12:50pm

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Posted: 11 August 2009 at 7:13am | IP Logged
hey dear............
 
awesome promo............
 
intresting ........... all i can say now is cont............. now asap
 
& ya do pm me wen u will cont
 
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Posted: 11 August 2009 at 7:20am | IP Logged
hey ria.
just read your intro ...wow its sounds damm interesting .....and i would love to read an ff from you
please update the parts soon
will be waiting for that and please doo pm me with the update if you can
simi
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Posted: 11 August 2009 at 10:09am | IP Logged
Wow....20 views and only 2 comments....i think i should give up this idea....
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heyyyyyyyyyyyy
 
nice intro........
continue soon
do pm me
 
with luv!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 August 2009 at 10:22am | IP Logged
awesome intro cont soon and pm me wen u cont! :)
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Posted: 11 August 2009 at 11:52pm | IP Logged
Hey guys thanks a lot for making me continue my ff.....only some have commented but still........thanks so much n i promise this time i won't dissapoint you...

PART-1

Anjali : Armaan just leave....right now...

Armaan : But angie.....

Anjali : I said leave right now.....aur mujhe kuch nahi sunnana.....

Armaan was speechless....

Angali : Armaan tum ja rahe ho or i should call the police.....

Armaan got tears in his eyes.....he gave a small fake smile.....

Armaan : Fine.....i am going.....(in watery tone)

Armaan left the place right away without thinking any more.....he went away with his eyes full of moist...."Today i am going RIDDHIMA.....but i promise jitna dukh tumne mujhe diya hai usse kayi zyada dard main tumhe pahuchaunga.....n that's my promise.....Armaan Mallik's promise"......with this thought he decided that he will never look back into his past n will always move on whatever the problem is......



After few hours....

Anjali went to shashank....

Anji : Come on dad....ab armaan yahan se ja chuka hai....so don't worry hmmm......

Sha : Anjali woh sab toh thik but riddhima ko yeh sab pata nahi chalna chahiya okay.....

Anji : Oh dad....kya main aapko pagal lagati hoon....ke khud ke hi pairo par kuhadi maru.....dad you don't worry ridzie to kya aapko mom aur mere siva yeh baat kisiko pata nahi chalegi....

And then shashank hugged anjali.....just then a nurse came....yes this whole situation took place in the hospital....

N : Umm...Mr Shashank Gupta ?

Sha : Yes....

N ; Patient ko ab hosh aa gaya hai....aap ab unse mil sakte hai...

Sha : Okay...

Then shashank n anji looked at each other n then went into a room....

Then we see a patient lying on the bed....yes guys you al guessed it right....it's our riddhima.....when she heard the door open she moved her face to see who was that....

Anji immediatey came n hugged her sister.....

Anji : Ridz ab tu kaisi hai ?

Sha : (moving his hand over riddhima's forehead)Felling good na ?

Ridz : Haan papa....

She moved her head all over the room again and again....

Anji : Kya hua ?

Ridz : Di where's my BABY ?

Just then shashank left the room.....

Ridz : Di papa kyun chale gaye ?

Anji : Woh....unhe kuch kaam tha isiliye...

Ridz : Di bolo na mera baby kaha hai ?

After asking anji so many times riddhima was not getting the answer...

Ridz : (tears in her eyes) Di please batao na baby kaha hai....

Anji : Ridzie.....ummm....ridz.....woh.....baby....

Ridz : Haan di bolo....(watery voice)

Anji : (in 1 breath) Ridz tera baby ab iss duniya mein nahi raha.....

With this sentence riddhima was all shocked.....she could not speak any more....tears started falling from her eyes.....she could not believe what her sister just said right now....every word of anji made her cry more n more....she hugged anji tightly....n cried very bitterly....

Anji somehow made her calm down n then again made her ay on her bed....but still she was sobbing....anji made her drink some water n then asked to leave now....

Anji : Ridz ab mujhe chalna chahiye....okay....you take care....

As she was going....again she heard riddhima saying something...

Ridz : (looking down) Di armaan kaha hai ?

Anji : (turned around) Ridz i think ab tujhe aaram karna chahiye....doctors nebhi toh yahin kaha hai na....

Ridz : Please di bas ek aur sawaal phir i promise main aapse koi aur questions nahi karungi...bas mujhe ye bata dijiye ki armaan kaha hai....

Anji : (stubborn) Ridz he is gone....

Ridz : Gone....where ?

Anji : Woh tujhe hamesha hamesha ke liye chod ke chala gaya hai.....

TO BE CONTINUED.....

Hey guys do comment haan.....cause they are very precious to me.....

Love you all....



Edited by ria020594 - 12 August 2009 at 4:44am

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Posted: 11 August 2009 at 11:56pm | IP Logged
hey nice story...so that was the first part right? seems like theres quite a bit of background yet to be revealed! continue soon!

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