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(Mayank morena se dusshare per hi wapas aa gya tha.. Shadi k baad nupur, gunjan aur sara gang bhi morena se wapas aa jata hai. Nupur mayank ka letter nhi pad pati. Gunjan ko abhi bhi yahi lagta hai mayank aur nupur sath me hai. As nupur usse kuch nhi batati aur na hi kisi ko batane deti hai. Again college re-open ho jaate hai. Mayank padhne k sath sath college k baad tutions lena bhi start karta hai. Mayank ka choda hua letter Benji k pass hai jo wo ek baar fir se nupur ko dene ki koshish karta hai )

 

B : Yeh lo (letter dete huye)

N : yeh kya hai

B : khud dekh lo

N (with anger) : jab tak mujhe nhi bataoge. Nhi lungi

B : mayank ka letter hai

N : mujhe usska kuch nhi chahiye. Letter bhi nhi. Na hi mujhe uske bare me baat karni hai. Aur naa hi mujhe uske bare me kuch sun na hai. Agar tum logo ko mujh se uske bare me baat karni hai to pls mujh se koi baat mar karo. Mujhe akela chod do. Main akeli reh lungi per Mayank ya uss se relative koi nhi naa hi karna chahti naa hi sun na chahti

D : per nupur……..

N : dekho dia. Agar tumhe mujh se baat karni hai to pls mayank ya uss se relative baat mar karo. Main tum logo ka dil nhi dukhana chahti. Per mujhe sach me dukh hua hai aur uski baat karke mera dukh aur mat badhao.

U : Nupur jaisa tum kahogi waisa hi hoga. Hum me se koi tumhare samne mayank ki baat nhi karega. Na hi uska naam lega. Per class me to mayank hoga hi.

N : uske class me hone ya naa hone se koi fark nhi padta. Wo sab main dekh lungi. Bas tum log mera sath do

B : hum tumhare sath hai. Isliye yeh letter

N : mujhe iss letter ko nhi padhna hai. Aur pls benji……….

(aur nupur wahaan se chali jaati hai. Uday nupur k piche piche class me jaata hai. Aur wo benji se wo letter le leta hai. Class me mayank nupur k wait kar rha hai. Wo usse dekh kar khus hota hai. Per nupur mayank k sath na baith kar dusre table per baith ti hai. Uday mayank ko uske kareeb jakar yeh batata hai k nupur ne wo letter abhi tak nhi padha hai. Aur mayank uday ko ishara karta hai k wo nupur k sath baithe. Uday nupur k sath baith jaata hai. Tabhi princi aakar class lene lagta hai)

 

P : to class tum sab yeh soch rhe honge k main yahaan kar kya. Aur jab tak main tumhe btaunga nhi to pta kaise chalega. To mere aane ki wajah yeh hai k iss baar inter college antkarsari competition hone wala hai. Aur main chah kar bhi wahaan gunjan aur samrat ko nhi bhej sakta. Kyunki iss baar competition me sirf senior class k student hi participate kar sakte hai. To ab tum log batao kaun participate kar rha hai

U : sir, iss class me ek hi intelligent student hai wo hai mayank. Aap usse kyun nhi bolte.

P : uday. Tumne bilkul sahi kaha. Yeh singing competition hai aur hume 2 log bhejne hai ek male aur ek female. Agar hum mayank ko bhejte hai to uske sath nupur ko bhejenge

N : sir mujhe gaana gana nhi aata. Aur ab main mayank k sath kabhi participate nhi karungi.

P : tumhe gaana sirf gaana hai wahaan tumhari awaz k liye nhi correct song k liye point milenge. Aur tum mayank k sath kyun nhi participate karogi. Arre tum log to perfect jodi ho. Jab bhi sath me hote ho number one hi aate ho.

N : wo sir, mayank ko music ki knowledge nhi hai na. isliye. Usne books k siva kabhi kisi cheez per dhayan nhi dia na isliye.

P : Tum kaise keh sakti ho k mayank ko music ki knowledge nhi hai. Mayank to kuch keh nhi rha

N : sir, kehte hai k sangeet pyar ka pratik hota hai. Aur jise pyar na hi karna aata hai aur na hi nibhana usse music k bare me kaise pta hoga.

M : sir aisa kuch nhi hai. Mujhe music ki bhi knowledge hai aur main apne rishto ko nibhana janta hu.

P : ok ok. Thik hai. Nupur, mayank aur puri class jo bhi college khatam hone k baad rukhna chahe wo sabhi music room me aa jaana dekhte hai mayank ko pyar ki mera matlab hai music ki kitni knowledge hai. Aur nupur tumhe aana hi aana hai. Agar mayank ne sabit kar dia k usse music ki knowledge hai to tum uske sath jaane wali ho. Aur mujhe aage kuch nhi sun na.

(princi class se chala jaata hai. Nupur pareshan ho jaati hai. Udhar uday sari gang ko bta deta hai k princi aur mayank nupur k bich me kya convo huyi. Sab decide karte hai k college k baad wo bhi rukenge. Gang Gunjan aur samrat ko zabardasti bahar bhej dete hai. Then music room me)

P : to mayank tum ready ho

M : G sir.

N : per sir main ready nhi hu. Mujhe mayank k sath participate nhi karna hai

P : nupur dekho mere samne ko behas mat karo. Mayank ko ek mauka to do. Tum jo chahe wo song bolo mayank ko gaane ko. Agar wo nhi gaa paya to aage tumhari marzi

N : thik hai sir. Isse boliye koi bhi nayi movie ka song pura gaa k sunaye

P : pura song?? Per antaksari me to pure song ki zarurat nhi hoti na.

M : thik hai sir mujhe manjur hai.

(Mayank song start karta hai)

 

Kaise Bataye Kyun Tujhko Chahe, Yaara Bata Na Paaye
Baatein Dilon Ki rahi jo baki Aankhon  Tujhe Samjhayen
Tu Jaane Na Tu Jaane Na Tu Jaane Na, Tu Jaane Na

Mil Ke Bhi, Hum Na Mile, Tumse Na Jane Kyun
Milon Ki Hai Fasle, Tumse Hai Jaane Kyun
Anjane Hain Silsile, Tum Se Na Jaane Kyun
Sapne Hai Palkon Tale, Tum Se Na Jaane Kyun

 

(mayank gaana gaana start karta hai. Wo Nupur ko continuously dekh rha hai. Nupur Mayank ki taraf bilkul nhi dekh rhi hai. Usse lagta hai k agar usne mayank ko dekha to wo fir se usse maaf kar degi. Aur iss baar wo koi aisi galti nhi karna chahti. Wo uday k sath rehti hai aur mayank ko dikhati hai usse koi fark nhi pad rha hai)

Kaise Bataye Kyun Tujhko Chahe, Yaara Bata Na Paaye
Baatein Dilon Ki rahi jo baki Aankhon  Tujhe Samjhayen
Tu Jaane Na Tu Jaane Na Tu Jaane Na, Tu Jaane Na


Nigahon Mein Dekho Meri Jo hai Bas Gaya, Woh Hai Milta Tumse Hoo Bahu
Jane Teri Aankhen Thi, Ya Baatein Thi Wajah, Huye Tum Jo Dil Ki Arzooo
Tum Paas Ho Ke Bhi, Tum Aas Ho Ke Bhi, Ehsaaas Ho Ke Bhi Apne Nahi
Aise Hai humko Gile, Tum Se Na Jane Kyun
Milon Ki Hai Fasle. Tumse Hai Jaane Kyun,
Tu Jaane Na, Tu Jaane Na, ,
Tu Jaane Na, Tu Jaane Na

 

(Nupur mayank ka song sunte sunte purane time ko yaad karne lagti hai. K kaise wo log ahemdabad gye, kaise dono me jhagda hua aur fir kaise play tak aate aate dono me pyar ho gya. Nupur yeh sab soch k muskura hi rhi hoti hai k uday usse ishare se puchata hai k kya hua then wo naa me sar hila deti hai. Aur wo embrassed feel karti hai k wo ab bhi mayank k bare me soch rhi hai.)

Khayalon Mein Lakhon Batein, Yun Keh Gaya, Bol Kuch Na Tere Samne
Huye Na Begane Bhi Tum, Ho Ke Aur Ke, Dekho Tum Mere Hi Bane
Afsoos Hota, Dil Bhi Yeh Rota Hai, Sapne Sanjota Hai,
Pagla Hua Soche Yeh, Hum The Mil, Tum Se Na Jane Kyun
Milon Ki Hai Fasle, Tumse Hai Jaane Kyun
Anjane Hain Silsile, Tum Se Na Jaane Kyun
Sapne Hai Palkon Tale, Tum Se Na Jaane Kyun

 

(mayank song k through nupur ko batane ki koshish karta hai & mayank ko bhi morena k din yaad aane lagte hai k kaise usne sari planning ki thi k wo nupur ko surprised dega. Aur kaise wo bablu banke morena me nupur k ghar enter hua tha  kaise mayank sharma jo kisi k samne nhi jhukta wo nupur ko manane Mumbai se morena gya tha. Per kismat ko kuch aur hi manjur tha )


Kaise Bataye Kyun Tujhko Chahe, Yaara Bata Na Paaye
Baatein Dilon Ki rahi jo baki Aankhon  Tujhe Samjhayen
Tu Jaane Na Tu Jaane Na Tu Jaane Na, Tu Jaane Na

 

(Nupur mayank ka song sun kar khud ko mayank k pass jaane se rok nhi paa rhi hai per wo aisa nhi karna chahti isliye wo song finish hone se pehle hi music room chod kar chali jaati hai. Mayank dia benji aur uday ko bolta hai k pls wo log nupur k pass jaaye. Nupur sidhe ghar jaati hai aur apna room band karke rone lagti hai. Tabhi Benji, dia, aur uday bhi pahuch jaate hai)

 

D : Nupur pls open the door.

U : Haan Nupur pls door open karo. Mujhe bhuk lagi hai aur gunjan bhi nhi hai ghar me. To mujhe sandwich khane hai

(Dia & uday gives uday an anger look)

B : Nupur tum door open kar rhi ho ya main abhi samrat aur gunjan ko call karke bula leta hu aur hum log sammy aur gunjan ko sab kuch bta denge. K tumhare aur mayank k bich kya hua hai. Nupur koi aur option naa dekh kar darwaja khol deti hai)

D : Tum ro rhi ho nupur?????

N : Nhi to. Wo aankh me kuch gir gya tha to pani aane laga aankh se

B : Nupur hum log sirf sakal se lagte hai per itne bewkuf nhi hai k pani aur aashu me fark naa pata chale.

(nupur dia k gale lag jaati hai )

N : Main kya karu itni koshish karne k baad bhi mera dil abhi tak mayank k liye hi dhadkta hai. Mujhe abhi bhi lagta hai k syad kahi na kahi mujh se hi koi galti huyi hogi. Jo mayank morena se bina kuch kahe wapas aa gya. Abhi bhi mujhe yahi lagta hai k mayank koi galti kar hi nhi sakta. Wo itna bura nhi ho skta. Pta nhi kyun main abhi bhi uske bare me hi sochti rehti hu. Abhi bhi mera dil kehta hai kahi kuch aisa hai jo nhi hona chahiye. Mujhe ab mayank k bare me nhi sochna hai fir bhi main raat din ussi k bare me sochti hu.

D : dear. Pls tum aise rona band karo. Main tumhe aise nhi dekhna chahti

B : Haan nupur. Aur jab tum mayank k bare me itna sochti ho to ek baar ye letter bhi padh lo. Yeh mayank ne tumhare liye morena me choda tha. aur yeh bui k hatho aate aate bacha. Aur jab se hum morena se aaye hai tumhe yeh dene ki koshish kar rhe hai ek baar padh to lo

U : haan nupur. Isse padh kar tumhe achcha lagega.

D : yes dear. Ek baar padh to lo.

(Nupur sabke insist karne per letter padti hai. Aur usse pta chalta hai k mayank to usse apni taraf se bta k hi gya tha per syad unki kismat me hi nhi tha aisa pta chalna.)

N : tum logo ne yeh mujhe pehle kyun nhi dia. Main mayank ko aise hi galt samjhti rhi. Aur wo mere gusse ko jhelta rha bina kuch kahe. Aur maine uss se yeh tak nhi pucha k aunty ko hua kya. Aisi kya problem aa gyi thi. Aur main bas uss per naraaz hoti rhi. Mujhe mayank se abhi milna hoga. Per main uss se milungi kaise. Kaise uss se nazare milaungi. Nhi main uss se nhi mil sakti.

B : Mil nhi sakti to baat to kar sakti ho. Usse phone karo.

N : phone?????? Agar kuch gadbad ho gyi to

D : ab kuch nhi hoga. Jitni gadbad honi thi ho chuki.

U : haan nupur. Ab jaldi se mayank ko call karo aur usse bolo mujh se darne ki zarurat nhi hai. Wo tumnse milne ghar aa sakta hai.

(Dia nupur ko mayank k ghar ka number laga kar deti hai bell jaati hai per koi phone pick nhi karta)

N : koi phone nhi utha rha hai. Kahi koi zyada badi problem to nhi huyi mayank  k sath

B : tum negative sochne ki jagah dobra number kyun nhi dial karti.

(Nupur  dobra number dial karti hai iss bar mayank phone pick karta hai.)

M : hello…….

(nupur kuch nhi bolti. To dia benji aur uday usse bolne ko force karte hai)

M : Hello…… Kaun bol rha hai.

N : wo oh mayaaankkkkk main??????? (Nupur phone per hi rona start kar deti hai.)

M (pareshan hote huye) : nupurrrrr ????? Kya hua tumhe? Tum ro kyun rhi ho.?????sab thik to ho na ??? Tum thik to ho ??????

(dia, benji aur uday nupur ko mayank se baat karne k liye ishara karte hai )

N : mayank wo oh mainnnnnnnnn

M : pehle tum mujhe yeh btao sab thik to ho na. aur kahaan per ho

N : mayank main ghar per hu. Aur kuch bhi thik nhi hai. Mayank maine tumhara letter nhi padha tha maine abhi wo letter padha. Aur main tumhe galt samjhti rhi k tumne mujhe use kiya hai.. tumhe khone k darr se maine tumhe kho hi dia tha…….main bahut buri hu mayank

M : Nupur naa tum buri thin a hi main. Bas hamare halat bure the. JIski wajah se hum dur huye. Aur ab halat achche hai to dekho tumne wo letter padh bhi lia. Hum me se koi bura nhi hai

(tabhi dia nupur se phone le leti hai. )

D : mayank tumhe nhi lagta k tumhe yeh sari baatein ghar aa kar karni chahiye. Tum dono phone per hi lage huye ho. Ab tum thodi derr me ghar aa rhe ho. Aur main phone cut kar rhi hu

N to  D : dia pls mujhe mayank se baat to kar lene do na.

(Dia phone cut kar deti hai )

D : mayank ghar aa rha hai tab hi baat kar lena. Tab tak thoda aur intzaar karo. Aur haan hum log tumhe akele bhi chod denge. Don't worry

(Nupur mayank ka wait karti hai to dia usse suggest karti hai k wo mayank ka wait teriss per kare. Aur jaise hi mayank aayega wo mayank ko terries per bhej degi. Nupur mayank ka teris  per intzar kar rhi hoti hai aur wo khud se baatein karte huye yeh prepration kar rhi hoti hai k wo mayank ko kya bolegi. Mayank aata hai to Dia usse teris per bhej deti hai. Nupur ko pta nhi hota k mayank aa gya hai aur mayank uski prepration dekh rha hota hai. Tabhi nupur mayank ko dekhti hai. Then sab kuch bhul kar wo mayank k gale lag jati hai. Aur Mayank feels k usse sab kuch mil gya tabhi nupur realise k wo mayank ki bahon me hai)

N : mayank chodo mujhe?????

M : nhi. Kuch derr aur aise hi rehne do. Mujhe yakin to hone do yeh sapna nhi sach hai. Bas tum aise hi meri baahon me raho.

N(blushing) : mayank koi aa jayega.

M : aane do. Per ab main tumhe kabhi bhi apne se dur nhi jaane dunga. Hamesha apne kareeb rakhunga. Apne dil k kareeb……..

N : I am sorry mayank wo maine…..(interrupted by mayank)

M : don't be sorry nupur. Bas meri bahon me aise hi raho. Mujhe aur kuch nhi chahiye……… tumhare bina maine whqt kaise kata hai mujhe hi pta hai………ab hum kabhi juda nhi honge.

N : haan mayank kabhi nhi. Per abhi to mujhe chodo

(mayank nupur ko chod deta hai. Wo dekhta hai k nupur ro rhi hai)

M : itne motiyo jaise aashuo ko mat bahao. Inhe sambhal kar rakho apni bidai k liye.

(nupur surprised hai k mayank shadi ki baat kar rha hai. Then mayank kiss nupur k cheeks per jaahan uske aashu rote huye pahuch gye the……….)

 

 

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Hi Annu
Mind blowing update dear.
its really very nice.
Great job.
u should continue it.
update asap.

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