Mayur ONE SHOTS GALLERY-Pg-22 MAdly in luv - Page 7

Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by shinella


muni
mera comment nahi dekha kya


jaani dekha hai
will comment back

long answer hoga
lol
dunt worry my sweets
Posted: 14 years ago
muneefah muneefah muneefah!! thats me cheering cos yu wrote such an swesome one shot!!!
loved it completely!!! 😳 wow yur so good at this stuf muni!! πŸ‘ well done!! πŸ€—
coming to the one shot.......
hehe i love how mayu's mommy is always in tha teasy tone πŸ˜‰ love her soo much!! πŸ˜ƒ
and the comedy and sarcasm yu put in is too good yaar!! πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘
haha loved that scene when mayank comes up from behind 😳 and nupz gets scared and then the whole cockroach thing πŸ˜†....so funny lol i can imagine that happening!! πŸ˜›
Awww what a ending!! πŸ‘ So cute and romantic!! 😳 πŸ˜›
Keep up the fab work sweety!! πŸ‘πŸΌ
Eager to read more!!
 
 
Hinna xx
Posted: 14 years ago

Awesome....πŸ‘..MAYUR rox...

Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by AMMY LUVS RIDZ


wow u r back!!!!......ye!!!!!!!......
😳
awesome one shot yaar............mayur are sooo romantic.......
Thanku!!!
please update soon......pm me😳

sure
Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by preethis


oyeeeeeeeeeeeeeee meri muni jaan.............. it was wonderful.. mujhe toh aisa wala mayank pasand hai.. naughty mayank...


LOL
Mujhe bhe aisa he pasand haiπŸ˜‰

Originally posted by sannila


Hy Muneefah dear
Amazing yaarrrrrrrrr amazingggg....^^


Thanku so much sannila
Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by shinella


loved it yaar
😳
sooooo cute and well cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
😳
finally u r back\and with a bang
AWW*HUGS*
kinna miss kia tumhe aur tumhari ff ko
same here..i miss u man


btw c-i replied to ur postπŸ˜›
Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by Mahak Sinha


awesome start yaar,
😳
Loved the way Noops faced Shilpa n she was teasing both.
πŸ˜†
Shilpa knew that she doesn't terrifies with cockroach. I really like Mayu's roamnce.
😳
continue soon n add me too in buddy list for pm.
sure
Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by zummi03


awesome and cute part...

THNX

Originally posted by Bollywood_chic


naww really cute
: )
will wait for more
x


AWW
will update soon
n let u know
😊

Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by cuppycake990


awww..
that was soo realistic and romantic..i cud seriously imagine every scene actually happening..
hats off yar...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

😳
hayee aisha
ur comment get me rockin n reeling
*hugs*


i especially luvved the DUM ALOO wala scene..πŸ˜‰
u remembered it..haha..
seee...πŸ˜†

cant forget itπŸ˜‰

uff...im missing u all soo much..
sameπŸ˜‰
i was busy but i cudnt stop myself from reading ur first attempt on a oneshot...
dats jus damn sweet of u

and like all other things u do...this was PERFECT...
great job..πŸ‘πŸΌ
aww!!dat was a huge compliment
thnx huney


luvv.aisha..





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