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omg, thats quite a shocker!! pretty interesting..!

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read 2 parts 2day.........both vr superb....bt 2nd part ws really really awsome n vry emotional...plzzzzzzz update sooooon plzzzzzzzz,.........n add me to ur pm list yaar.....

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wow they have a daughter n shez sick
n they r seprated
emotional updt
continue soon

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PART-3

In the morning we see a woman running all over the house,chasing a girl …….

Woman:dia,stop running and finish your milk….

Now we see that the little girl is dia,nupur's daughter……

Dia:mamma,plz no milk……
nupur then catches dia,and makes her sit on her lap,she almost kept the glass on her lips when the doorbell rang,nupur took dia in her arms,and kept the glass on table and made her way towards the door

nupur with dia in her arms opened the door,and was shocked to see the person before her,nupur said

nupur:maynk………
Now we see the person is none other than maynk,

maynk:I just came here for my daughter,remember ……doctor……

both of them stare into each others eyes,dia was confused,she time to time was looking at both of them turning her head left to right and vice-versa,their staring session was disturbed when dia said
Dia:mamma,who is this uncle???????

Uncle???it hurted maynk very much,even nupur saw his disheartened face,maynk extended his hand towards dia but she got herself hidden  into nupur's neck

maynk(made a puppy face and said):you'll not talk to me
Dia:mamma said not to talk to strangers….

maynk give nupur an angry look and said:great my daughter,not even recognizes me,all thanx to you,Mrs.nupurshrma……..

nupur left the door for maynk to come in and said to dia

nupur:beta,who said he's stranger,he's your papa you always said na you want your papa,like others see he's there

Dia:then where was he till now?????????
nupur was at loss of words,then said

nupur:why don't you first finish your milk,then for sometime you can play with daddy and then we'll leave you at your aunt's house

Dia:why????????i thought we are spending whole day together……..
nupur:we are,but see your mamma and papa have some stuff to take care off,nupur saw her daughters sad face and said

nupur:ok……..only 1hour promise,then whole day we can watch movies,roam around,have chocolates but not more than 2 understood……

Dia gave her the sweetest hug,maynk was watching all this and thought of a perfect family then again he remembered how nupur chose her job over maynk and he still hate her for that….

nupur:dia till then why don't you play with papa and I go and make some breakfast
Dia:since when are you getting good idea mamma……..

maynk and dia laughed their heart out,while nupur gave them an angry look and said:
nupur:both father and daughter are same urrgh……..

While dia replied her………..
Dia:then bring a baby brother,he'll take your side………..
At this nupur blushed,while angad was amused that his little daughter sounds like an adult

Dia:mamma,plz sit for a while……..plzzzzzzzzz
nupur saw her daughter's sweet pleading face,she knew she cant resist it so sat beside dia, all three of them were sitting on floor…..when suddenly dia jumped onto maynk's lap making maynk  giggle,she kissed his cheeks and asked

Dia:u wont leave us,right??????

maynk took his little angel in embrace and said:no I wont……….
Dia kissed maynk's lips lightly making maynk feel proud…….

After seeing them nupur felt guilty for separating both daughter and father for five years,but then she thought maynknever gave her second option………

nupursuddenly said:dia first finish milk……….
Dia:mamma,it tastes like a squashed cabbage leaf,at which maynk giggled and nupur rolled her eyes………

Dia looked towards maynk with pleading eyes,which melted his heart,nupur saw this and before maynk can object she said:
nupur:no maynk,u wont take her side in this,she's a baby its good for her health……..
maynk (firmly):no,today my angel will not have milk and its final
nupur:fine,do whatever you both wish to do,i am out of it
nupur got angry at both of them and her way towards kitchen……

After an hou nupur  came with breakfast,still annoyed,both dia and maynk saw this nupur was setting table when dia whispered in maynk's ear:

Dia:papa mamma is angry??
maynk:I can see……..
Dia have him a you-are-a-hopeless look and said:
Dia:papa,what do I do to make her happy?????

maynk  remembered his old times with nupur whenever she gets angry,he was use to say:
SMILE IN SORROW SMILE IN PAIN
SMILE WN TROUBLES POUR LIKE RAINS
SMILE WN SM1 HURTS UR FEELING
SMILE COZ U KNO ITS ALWAYS HEALING......

He asked dia also to do so……when nupur was putting food in their plates without even glancing at them ,dia said:

SMILE IN SORROW SMILE IN PAIN
SMILE WN TROUBLES POUR LIKE RAINS
SMILE WN SM1 HURTS UR FEELING
SMILE COZ U KNO ITS ALWAYS HEALING

nupur was stunned she repeated maynk 's words,while dia hugged nupur,nupur was staring at maynk and even he was also.nupur remembered their times and tears automatically welled up in her eyes,dia pulled herself apart and said:
Dia:mamma,why are you crying,plz I am sorry don't cry..
nupur:I will not
Not maynk and nupur knew why she cried…………

After breakfast maynk,nupur and tia left the house,after dropping tia at her aunt place they made their way towards hospital……..

It has been an hour nupur was waiting for maynk and doctor,when she saw them,she asked
nupur:doctor,what did the test report say,his bone-marrow is matching,

Doctor:Mrs.shrma,actually…………………

 

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Posted: 13 August 2009 at 8:21am | IP Logged
well here is the third part
hope u like
it
well im working on it forth part
may be some romantic

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Posted: 13 August 2009 at 8:45am | IP Logged
wow dear i am loving it.....

please update fast waiting for the upadte...

Edited by preethis - 13 August 2009 at 8:55am

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Posted: 13 August 2009 at 8:47am | IP Logged
amazing part.....loved it.....loved the father-daughter cute conv..
amazing 1.....thnxx 4 the pm....

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yar hope it matches!!

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