may be(mayur ff)part last part-page 27 - Page 22

Posted: 14 years ago
extremely wonderful end hope u write another 1 soon
Posted: 14 years ago
omg adi you ended this ff it was so wonderful... i wanted to see mayu taking nupur to hospital labour pain and those things.... but it was wonderful dear i loved your FF..... keep writing more dear......
Posted: 14 years ago
i was soo upset seeing dat its d last part...😭😭😭
but after reading it,i wud say its the perfect ending...nothing wud have been better than dis..loved it ...d way mayu made dia ready ,made breakfast 4 her.and made her eat too..it was sooo touching...and then mayur also realised their destiny..wonderful yaar...and the epilogue was just damn good...waah waah..arush,their baby boy and nupz is pregnant again...oohh laa lala😳😳😳
in all i wud say:this ff was fantastic..i enjoyed reading it..yeah its very close to my heart...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
thanx for making us feel love with a different feeling!!!!
u r right life is not always full of good things..we have to face some bad times too..but wo sikandar hi odsto kehlaat hai,haari baazi ko jeetna jise aata hai...πŸ˜ƒ
so plzz start a new mayur ff for us..plzzzzz..plzzzzzπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 14 years ago
adi i must first appologisc for not readin te ff first.   
Ur ff was totally wonderful. Loved it so much. Jus read all te parts together. U r such a wonderful writter. Enjoyed reading it alot.

This ff has many lessons for te readers. There is no happy time alwaya and sorrow is not life long. Love is a cute feeling where u think of hating but jus get surrendered to te person. In love der is not hate or hatred. U showed us wat life is made up of..... Thank u so much for a ff wit moral,

Please write more. Would love to read such sweet ffs.
Thznks a lot for te pm.Edited by little_dragon - 14 years ago
Posted: 14 years ago
Nice part dear .
 
we mis ur FF a lot.😭
Posted: 14 years ago
very nice concept of ff.. loved it
Posted: 14 years ago
Hey nice part jana
Why u eneded so soon u culd cont dear
But awesum yaar
Posted: 14 years ago
gr8 ending ..!!!
loved it...!!
brilliant ending..!!

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