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zainab.A

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Posted: 08 August 2009 at 10:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by AttractiveAdya

OMG! another FF.....sounds fun......I luved gunji, mayu nd benjy's charcters more here.......I'm a pure sajanian in fact a biased 1.........I'm bad at patience nd I lose my temper at times but neva show so dis was kind of a warning ok agar jaldi update nahi kiya toh PM blast hajayyga....


hey!! thanx for liking it!
we will try our best to update soon! Smile

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Posted: 08 August 2009 at 10:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sanjana25

it is really good concept plz contd soon and pm me


thanx for liking it! we will surely update soon! Smile

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Posted: 08 August 2009 at 10:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by disco_diva

its awsome yaar pls countinue soon cant wait to read your first up date add me you ur pm list

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thanx for liking it!
we wil surely continue soon and PM u! Smile

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Posted: 08 August 2009 at 11:24am | IP Logged
woww...didnt know we wud get this response  overnight..lol...........
 
thanks everyone, zainab has already replied to all of you, and you'll be added ion the PM list soon.
thanks!

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Posted: 08 August 2009 at 10:05pm | IP Logged
Part 1
 
It's a cloudy day and people are rushing around in the city of Mumbai. The most popular and best university of Mumbai. The Excel University of Mumbai

*Camera switches to Excel University*

 

All the students are talking to each other' laughing' eating' learning and enjoying!

 

"Tuck Tuck Tuck"   walking slowly with attitude, gelled hair, charming smile showing the perfect teeth. Sleeves moved up to elbows hands in pockets wearing a black sweatshirt with hot blue jeans appears leaving a cheering crowd behind.

"Samrat! Samrat! Samrat!" a crowd of students cheering sitting in the right in the Cafeteria.

 

 

All the girls go crazy! Because it's none other than the 'hot'n'top' student of the college.

Yes! They handsome hunk is Samrat Seghal! :D

 

He enters the crowd with a smashing smile and spark in his dark brown eyes.

 

The crowd calms down to look another entry on the left.

A charming guy appears from the crowd, wearing a double T-Shirt orange and white, wearing a silver charm bracelet and a naughty smile on the face.

Once again the  cheering starts "Mayank!! Mayank!! Mayank!!!"

 

Both the popular students of the university stand opposite to each other and look into each others eyes with anger and hatred but also with naughtiness.

 

 

Mayank: hey dude! Ready for the challenge?

Samrat: ha! Sure! Samrat har match ke liye ready hota hai! (Looking around) kyun girls??

All the girls shout: Yes!!!!!!!! (Laughing and blushing)

M: haha! Dekhte hai!

 

Both challengers take their seats with the crowd around them, cheering for both. Mayank is looking into Samrat eyes and smiling mischievously! The crowd is crazily shouting!! All of a sudden Samrat puts in more force and Mayank passes another mischievous smile. Suddenly he interrupts!

M: are Nupur tum kaise giri? (worried look on his face)

Samrat looks back tensely but no one was there and he loses force and Mayank wins!

Samrat: that was cheating! (Angrily)

Mayank: Everything is fair in love and war! (Smiles)

Samrat: ha! Well... agar aisa hai'to phir mein tumhain dekh loon ga!

And both walk to opposite directions.

 

Scene Shifts- bedroom in a big beautiful house.

In excel University everyone was having fun and masti but on the other side someone was smiling in their dreams.

 

"Tring!!! Tring!!!Tring!!!"

: Hello' (In a sleepy tone)

: Kahan ho?? Don't tell me u r still sleeping??! (Angrily)Kab se phone try kar rahi hoon, aaj college ka pehla din hai aur tum late hoagie ho!!

 

: Oh gosh! Chill yaar! Relax! Aaraha hoon!

: Jaldi! In 10 min!!

 

Scene shift- outside the house

 

"creeeeeeeeeekhhhhhhhh"  a black Mercedes stops infront of the double story Mansion.

"trk" Car door opens, *camera moving from heels to hair* A gorgeous girl wearing blue jeans, average sized heels, an orange full sleeved shirt; a silver charm bracelet brownish black hair curled from bottom and a fresh smile on face with a dimple.

 

Walking towards the door, "ding dong"

 

Inside the house

A 19 year old wearing an orange and white stripy shirt, wet hair picking up his bag putting it on diagonally on the shoulder, fixes his hair  also wearing a silver charm bracelet opens the door.

"Finally!!" Gunjan says, she looks at him" oh ho..someone's looking handsome"

"Thanks" benji replies "ab chalein"

Benji and Gunjan sit in the car and arrive at Excel.

 

 

Excel University

 

"crreeeeekhhh" The car stops infront of Excel and Benji and Gunjan step out.

 

"Hmm impressive" gunjan, looking at the Excel university.

"Im so excited" benji expresses.

The duo enters the university with searching eyes.

"kahan gaya, he was supposed to be here" Gunjan says.

"Let me give him a call" benji assures.

"heyy Guys" Mayank comes smiling.

Benji puts the phone back.

"heyyy" benji and gunjan at the same time.

 

They exchange high fives with Mayank.

"tum log bohat jaldi agaye?"Mayank throws his sarcasm.

"yeh sab inki wajah se"gunjan, pointing at benji.

 

 

"guys guys' relax! It's ok! Larna band karo! Aur waise mujhe tum logon ko kuch interesting batana hai" Mayank says(Smiling naughtily)

 

Scene shift ' Seghal Mansion

A huge room, with shinig marble floor and round bed in the centre and a silk cover sheet lying on it. A younger girl, in front of the mirror wearing white tides, violet colored dress up to her knees, straight hair down reaching her back.

She applies mascara on her long eyelashes, and then puts a peach shine (gloss) on her light pinkish lips. She turns around and looks at the clock.

"Shoot! Kitna kum time hai" Nupur worries.

 

She runs to her car parked out side the Mansion and drives as fast as possible..

 

Scene shift ' Excel University

 

Nupur enters the corridor and all the boys are looking at her and some of them are blushing!

"Idiots" she thinks.

 

"Who dekh nupur.. yaar' I wish I could ask her out ' per" (looks down)a boy wishes.

"Abbey! Sochna bhi maat!! Tu janta nahi yeh kon hai! Samrat ki behen yaar, ab chal yahan se"his friend reminds

 

Nupur moves towards the basketball court and sees Samrat.

"Ab to mein  gayi!" stops in the midway and turns around  (Smiles naughtily)

 

She goes towards samrat.

"Heeyy Samrat!" (Smiling)

 (he turns around and sees nupur) "ohh.. to aa gayi madam!" (folding his arms) "kahan thi?? Itni der kyun ho gayi??"

 "woh' umm'. Oh haan' raat ko late soyi thi.. so isi liye late ho gayi'" (takes a deep breathe)

"kyun? Der se kyun soyi???" Samrat becomes suspicious

 "woh'. Mein bahar gayi thi na... So late aayi thi'"nupur says (tensed)

"Huh?  Tum bahar thi? Mere bina?? Kab?? Kahan? Aur kiske sath??" Samrat asks   (susspiciously)

 

Nupur bursts out laughing!!!!

 (Samrat confused) after a pause he speaks. "Ooh!! Nupur ki bachi! Tum nahi sudro gi!!"

"Haha! Sorry!!! I can't help it" nupur (naughty face)

"Its ok' lets go... We are getting late" Samrat reminds

 

(Nupur to herself) "yeh gunjan kahan hai" (Looking around)

"kya? Did u say something??"asks Samrat

"Huh! Nahi' nahi' kuch nahi' let's go" replies Nupur.

 

Samrat and Nupur go to their respecting classes.

 

Scene shifts ' Corridor

 

Gunjan and Benji look at eachother

"accha? Kia?"Gunjan asks.

"SHOOT..class shuru hone wali hai chalo class ke baad bataon ga"Mayank says.

 

All three run to the class. They take their seats.

"No way!!" Mayank says when he encounter's Sheena's in his class.

"khair, is ka bhi rasta hi mere paas"

 

"Gunjan Sani"

"Here" she speaks out.

Sheena's keep staring at Mayank imagining him in his dreams.

Mayank sees her in this state, and smiles for his own plans.

 

Gunjan's noticing the scene, and knows what Mayank will do.

"Sheena Sherawat"

Mayank winks at Sheena; she is blushing, and confused, surprised mixed emotions.

She's lost in her own world.

"Sheena Sherawat!!" shouts professor

She stands up in fear "yes sir"

"aap ka dehaan kahan hai!!!" he shouts on the top of his voice, it seemed like the voice box would fall out.

"s..ss..sorry sir" she apologizes.

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So this was our first part,
I have highlighted different things in different colours, e.g expressions/camera movements in orange, actual dialogues in pink, SFX in violet, and happening in aqua.
 
hope you like it=)
Thanks!
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Edited by blushpink13 - 08 August 2009 at 10:07pm

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Posted: 08 August 2009 at 10:27pm | IP Logged
Hey Zainab and Iqra!
Interesting FF! Hahah I didn't think I would read it this way but you both did a great job with the first part and I hope to read some more!
So that means you DO NEED to continue Tongue!
And PM when you update next! :)
(don't be lazy with the update sweetsWink)

Love,
Jia


Edited by mohitkideewani - 08 August 2009 at 10:28pm

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Posted: 08 August 2009 at 10:37pm | IP Logged
superb start.......ClapClapClap.............lovd it....plzzzzzz continueeee soooooooooon....Big smile

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Posted: 08 August 2009 at 10:43pm | IP Logged
hey
that was awesome first part. i really like the concept...hope sheena gets out of the picture soon...sorry i just hate her even in the show. thanks for the PM and continue soon. Smile

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