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Cranky 4 presents
(NAINA-PIYA-MADHVI-RABBIA)


Dil Ki Baat


"yeh mayank bhi na.... pata nahi kaha reh gaya hai..." Nupur looks at the entrance door of the class. "Shukla sir bhi aane wale hoge aur is ka koi naam-o-nishan hi nahi hai"
meanwhile someone taps on her shoulder from behind. She looks back to c who iz disturbing her and in ful anger she yells...
"kia hai" and sees uday who has connfuse expression on her face.
"woh actually mein pochna chahta tha tum kis ka intezar kar rahi ho..."
"woh mein uday bhaiya maya..."
Nupur looks back at the door and sees mayank n CJ enetring the class she again faces uday n says
"woh shukla sir ka aur kis ka... abhi tak aye ho nahi hai..."

"bad nes nupur" CJ spokes up with smile on his face.
Nupur stand up frm her seat
"haye kia hua CJ sub teekh to hai na"
"nahi na wohi tou nupur... woh tum yahan shukla sir ka wait kar rahi ho n woh ajj aye hi nahi... aur class bhi cancel hogaye.." CJ still smiling...!!
Nupur sits back again
"CJ tum bhi na jaan hi nikla di... yeh tou acha baat hia BY GOD"
"buh nupur yum tou shukla sir ka wait kar rahi thi na" uday spoke up...
nupur shoots a ugly look at uday... n stands up to leave the class..
mayank proceeds toward nupur
"nupur bahir chale"

----------- + -------- + ------- + ---------- + --------- + ---------- + -------- + --------- + -------- + ----

Nupur and mayank are sitting on bench in excel college lawn.

M:"Nupur apni ankein band karo"   
N:"kyu??"
M:"Nupur kabhi tou meri baat maan lia karo"
N:"par batao to sahi"
M:"Nupur plz.."
N:"Acha baba"
Nupur closes her eyes... mayank puts hands in his pocket to take out sumthin buh den caughts nupur peeking..
M:"Nupur yeh cheating hai"
Nupur on being caught fully opens her eyes.
N:"Par mayank tum you khete ho k everything is fair in luv n war"
Mayank takes a sigh n den puts her hand on eyes such dat he civers her eyes fully and takes a bracelet out ov his pocket n tries to put it on nupur hand with his other hand but fail to do so.
N:"Ouch... Mayank"
Puts her hand down from her face n starts rubbing nupur hand.
"Oh..!! Soory Nupur.. Dard hua kia"
Nupur stares at mayank with affection... so sweet.. muah..!! den she notices a bracelet.
N:"Mayank yeh tum laye ho??"
M:"Haan..."
N:"kis k liye??"
Mayank looks at her with as you dont know expression.
M:"woh Gunjun k liye..!!"
N:"Gunjun k liye..."
Mayank shakes hi head in disbelief
N:"hmm... mere liye..." Nupur says shyly.
M:"yeh tumhe khud pata chal lia... very intelligent..."
N:"Mayank tum bhi na sadho k sadho raho ge..."
mayank takes braclet frm her hand and again tries to put it on nupur hand.
Nupur let her try for sum tyme n starts laughin n says...
N:"BY GOD... yeh tou devdas wala scene ho gaya hai..."
M:"kia..?"
N:"haan... devdas mein bhi shahrukh khan ash ko issi tarah braclet phenane ki khoshsish karta hai but bechara...." nupur start laughin...
M:"Achaa... tou phir Ash bracelet kese phenti hai..!!"
Nupur den helps mayank open the hook ov the bracelet and finally mayank suceeds in putting the locket on nupur hand.
Nupur excitdly starts to examine the bracelet closely...

N:"Mayank... thanx... for the bracelet"
Mayank smiles ack at her...
N:"Mayank actually thanks for everything.... i mean frm the first day i met you... frm helping me to get out men room..."
mayank start smiling on recalling the day
N:"thanx or being ma partner for project n in talent prade... would not have been suceessful in both without u on my side..."
Mayank keep on staring at her n let her speak as she never have been that expressive about his feeling and was liking all the memories she was recalling...
"mayank thanx... for staying back n missing the bus for me... pata nahi agar tum na hote tou mein kai karti wahan.... thanx for all saving me frm all mishra stuff..."
both strt laughin as they recall dere stay rest house, mishra house n den night at village...
"mayank thanx for saving me from the goons... just lyke a perfect u came to rescue me...!"
"thanx... for takin part in drama just for me... mayank thanx for cumin for to rescue me at college ven i got ma self locked up in staff room... thanx for siding ma sis ven sheena was blaming her....
Mayank thankx for luving me... n giving me mine sapno ka raj kumar..."
mayank was speechless now he never saw nupur so much expressive abt his feelings... he cups her face...
M:"Nupur tumhe thanx kehene k koi zarorat nahi hia... kyu k mein ne tum pe koi ehsan nahi kia... mein ne jo bhi kia apne liye kia hai... kyu k tum meri zindagi ka ekk hissa hho... tou mein jo bhi karta aya ho apni zindagi k liye karta aya ho!!"
Mayank looks at her lady luv with affection n gives a kiss on her forehead...
dey look into eah other eyes... understanding eachother feelings... depth ov deir luv...

"Mayank.."
"Haan Nupur"
"Mayank"
"haan Nupur,.." still looking at each other!!
"Mayank I love u"

dere is silence b/w dem for a a while... as dey continue looking into eachother eyes...!!

To be Continued....!!!

Edited by Bewafa_Behan - 14 October 2009 at 7:05am

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WELCOME TO CRANKY LOUNGE



thanx a ton muneefa..!!

Piya - the shreef bachi
Naina - the chasmish ov our group
Madhvi - the sweet hrt ov our group
Rabbia - the twisted one

INDEX


1st one shot - Dil ki baat (part 1 pg1)(part 2 pg6)
2nd one shot - Sapno ki Duniya (pg 9)
3rd one shot - Millap (pg 14)
4th one shot - Chup Chupke (pg 18)
5th one shot - Gadbad hui (pg23)
6th one shot - A birthday to remember (pg 29)
7th one shot - An emotional Day (pg 34)
8th one shot - The Night (pg 39)
9th one shot - WATCH - the lame excuse (pg 45)
10th one shot - unnamed (pg 51)
Musical OS - Chue Chue Chue (pg 58)
11th one shot - The fist of destiny (pg 59)
12th One shot -  An evening to remember (Pg 65) PART1
13th One shot - The Night (pg 71)



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good going rabbia,,,

waise my own cranky 4..the sisterhood..all those hrs we mopped around while u were dialog writing shud be put to good use LOL LOL

cheers-carry on girls..loving it.. Big smile

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Beautiful! loved it!

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wonderful rabia.... enjoyed it... tat bracelet scene.. wah wah.. and haddi bhaiya too here... add me to ur PM list dear...
 
and looking for more from u..

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Posted: 07 August 2009 at 5:45pm | IP Logged
cranky 4? LOL
seriously? u guys aren't that cranky
n dekho aur one shot ban gaya nupur ke ilu ke chakar mein!
loved it!
bracelet ka idea aaj ki disc se aaya tha kya?
anyways i think im already on the pm list if not add me
n write again soon!!

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cranky 4...?? hehe LOL
 
Wonderful one-shot..!! And i loved the way she said ILU....!
awww...and really sweet of mayank ko buy her that bracelet....that devdas reference was too good..!! LOL...total nupurl!!
 
great job!

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awesomeeeeeeeee yaar.........toooo tooo beautiful....the bracelet scene.....d way she recald evry moments n finally when she said...'mayank i love u'.......haaaye........vryyyyyy vryyyyyy sweeeet n beautiful.......plzzzz continueeeeee sooooooon.........n add me to pm list........Big smile

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