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Posted: 10 August 2009 at 8:46am | IP Logged
nyc ud.
cont soon.

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Posted: 10 August 2009 at 7:42pm | IP Logged
nice update
Raj wants to take as much care of naina as he can.
please continue soon
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Posted: 13 August 2009 at 2:27am | IP Logged
agle din
 
n-dadi aap ke chai aur medicines
 
dadi-n beta bahu ka koi phone aaya
 
n-nahin dadi
 
dadi-hmm
 
udhay/karthik neeche aate ha
 
udhay-bhabhi bohot bhook laage ha jaldi se nasta dijiye
 
karthik-udhay tujhe kya har waqt bhook laagte ha
 
udha-woh kya ha na bhaiya main bohot parai jo karta hu
 
karthik-tu aur parai ha ha isliye toh har saal bas pass marks leeke aata ha
 
udhay-dekheye bhabhi
 
n-off tum dono bhi na
 
n nasta laate ha
 
n-udhay yeh lo tumhara fav allu ke parathe
 
udhay-wow kya smell
 
karthik-ha ha smell se pet bhar le
 
n-karthikkkkkkk
 
karthik-sorry bhabhi
 
n-good yeh le tera nasta
 
karthik-thank u bhabhi
 
raj-n
 
n-ha aaye
 
n room main jaate ha
 
n-kya hua raj
 
raj-n mere file
 
n-le lo
 
raj-mera watch
 
n-yeh lo tumhara watch ,wallet,mobile
 
raj-things
 
n goes to wake up adi
 
n-adi beta uttho
 
raj-n abhie toh sirf 9 baaje ha adi ko sone do na
 
n-raj aaj adi ko leeke mujhe dr ke pass jaana ha
 
raj -kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa adi ke tabiyat kharab ha
 
n-are nahin raj woh toh bas aaj adi ko vaccination ka injection dene le jaana ha
 
raj-n main bhi tumhare sath chalunga
 
n-par tumhara office
 
raj-main abhie rosa ko phone kar ke bol deta hu ke main aaj office nahin aayunga
 
raj calls rosa and told her that raj will not go to the office today
 
raj n adi ko leeke dr ke pass jaate ha
 
raj-dr mere bete ko vaccination dena ha
 
dr-hmm
 
dr-nurse injection lee aao
 
nurse brings the injection
 
raj-dr itna baara injection
 
dr-dijiye
 
raj-suniye zara samaalke
 
dr -jee ha
 
dr gives adi the injection
 
adi toh injection laagte he zor zor se rone laagta ha
 
raj adi ko leeke bahar chala jaata ha cabin se
 
n-raj raj kya hua
 
raj-woh dr humare adi ko toh maar he dalta
 
n hasne laagte ha
 
raj-ha aur haso tum yahaan humara adi ro raha ha aur tmhe haase aa rahe ha
 
n-raj tum bhi na
 
raj n adi ko leeke ghar wapis aata ha
 
dadi-raj adi kaisa ha
 
raj-yeh aap n se he puccheye na
 
raj gusse main adi ko leeke aapne room main chala jaata ha
 
dadi-kya hua n
 
n-kya baatau aapko dadi raj aase behave kar raha ha jaise pura dosh mera he ha
 
dadi-off yeh raj hi na hamesha gusse main raheta ha
 
n-dadi mama dad ke koi phone aaya
 
dadi-nahin beta abhie tak toh nahin
 
n the evening
 
n kitchen main dinner bana rahe ha
 
door rings
 
som opens the door
 
som-aaye karan bhaiya
 
dadi-are karan itne dino bad kaisa ha tu
 
karan- thik hu dadi
 
karan-dadi raj kaha ha
 
dadi-aapne room main
 
karan goes raj's room
 
karan-hey raj
 
raj-are karan kab aaya tu
 
karan-bas abhie tu aaj office kun nahin aaya
 
raj-woh adi ko vaccination dene le gaya tha aur dekh adi abhie tak
 
karan-are toh kya hua baccha ha thik ho jaayega t fikar mat kar
 
n-ha aap he samajhe inhe jab se aae ha mujh par he gussa ho rahe ha jaise sab dosh mera ha
 
raj-plz tum chup raho
 
karan-aacha acha chal tu mera saath thora ghum ke aate ha
 
raj-nahin tu jaa mera mood nahin ha
 
karan-off chal na
 
karan raj dono bahar jaate ha
 
n adi ko dadi ke pass rakh ke kitchen main jaate ha
 
dekhte dekhte 10 baaj jaata ha
 
n-udhay karthik dadi aap log dinner kar lijiye
 
dadi-par beta raj toh abhie tak nahin aaya
 
n-dadi raj aa jaayenge aap khanna kha lijiye
 
dadi-beta tu bhi humare saath kha le
 
n-nahin dadi raj ke anne ke bad he main khayunge
 
dadi-beta raj pata nahin kab aayega tu kha le
 
n-thik ha
 
n bhi sab ke saath dinner kar leete ha
 
udhay-ok good night
 
udhay/karthik aapne aapne room main sone jate ha
 
dadi-n tu bhi jaa aaram kar aur waise bhi adi bhi toh akela hoga
 
n-jee dadi
 
n aapne room main jaate ha
 
adi chain se so raha ha
 
n-adi ko aapne pass leeke so jaate ha
 
 
 
 
Mahak Sinha IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 13 August 2009 at 3:17am | IP Logged
Raj bhi na, ek bacche ka baap hai aur doosre ka bhi jaldi hi ban ne vaala hai, pata nahi tab kya karega? Ek injection se abhi itna darta hai to aur Adi ko le k kuch jaroorat se jyada hi pareshaan hota hai. Yahan tak ki Naina se bhi naraj ho gaya isi vajah se.
update soon.
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Posted: 13 August 2009 at 3:42am | IP Logged

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!!

Karthik and Udhay started again and had to be stopped by Naina!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile Smile

Adi ko vaccination ke liye le jaana hai yeh sunke Raj office nahi jaata!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

Woh Naina aur Adi ke saath doctor ke paas jaata hai!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile SmileHe is such a responsible dad!!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Smile Smile Smile Smile

Raj is behaving like a kid!!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove DisapproveEk injection se kuch zyada hi pareshan ho gaya!!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

Raj bhi na!!!!!D'oh D'oh D'oh D'ohEk bacche ka baap hai aur dusre ka bhi jaldi hi bannewala hai, pata nahi tab kya karega??Confused Confused Confused Confused

He really loves Adi very much!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile

Raj chhoti chhoti baaton par Naina se gussa ho jaata hai!!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove DisapproveAb injection lagane mein Naina ka kya kasoor hai??Confused Confused Confused Confused

Accha hai Karan aa gaya aur Raj ko apne saath ghumne le gaya!!!!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Smile Smile Smile Smile

I hope Karan drills some sense into Raj!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

Raj wapas nahi aata toh dadi ke kehne par Naina dinner karke soh jaati hai!!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile Smile

Accha hai ish haalat mein Naina ka bhookha rehna bhi theek nahi hai!!!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Smile Smile Smile Smile


 



Edited by Shaina_b - 18 August 2009 at 9:03pm
suhana.dixit IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 13 August 2009 at 3:57am | IP Logged
Hi Dear
Yeh Raj bhi na ..Chhoti chhoti baaton par Naina se gussa ho jata hai..Ab injection lagne mein Naina ka kya kassor hai???Pata nahin dono kab shanti se rehenge???
Bye
Do continue
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Posted: 13 August 2009 at 7:01am | IP Logged
Wat a cute part. I never thought raj cud ehave so childishly. But then thats just bcoz he luvs Adi too much. And I felt nice to c so. But i hope Karan usse samjhade n wo jaldi se ghar aa kar Naina se baat karle.

Pls continue soon.
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Posted: 13 August 2009 at 10:26am | IP Logged
nyc ud.
cont soon.

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