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Posted: 06 August 2009 at 10:50am | IP Logged
Hi Ria
How r u??/I'm back after a long time after my marriage..I read all the parts..They were just too gud..Itna kuch ho gaya..Pehle laga story kuch kuch kaahin to hoga jaisi hai par Yaar yeh story to ek dum different thi..Tusshar ki death n den Raj ka Naina ka sath dena..All was explained in a nice way..Naina did a nice thing by adopting Adi..Raj neNaina ka sath khoob diya...
Unke rishte ne kaafi kuch saha par end mein sab theek ho gaya..Naina is pregnant with Raj's child..
Finally after so much problems Raj n Naina finally got married..Raj treat Adi as his own child..That is so cute..
Congrats for completion of 1 thread..Your story was really nice..Dia too got engaged to Kartik..
I hope everything is fne now...
Bye..
Take care
Sorry bahut din baad reply diya but main bhi bahut busy thi ..Tum samajh sakti ho..Par ab maine saare parts pad kar reply diya hai....
 
Bye take care

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Posted: 06 August 2009 at 11:57am | IP Logged
that was so good
finally Raj aur Naina ki shaadi ho hi gayi
plz continue soon

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Posted: 06 August 2009 at 7:49pm | IP Logged
Nice part
Finally naina are raj are married. Raj adi ko hug karke so jata hai...soo sweet.
 
please continue soon

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Posted: 07 August 2009 at 12:48am | IP Logged
Ye to sahi hai ki Naina duniya ki sab se lucky gal hai kyounki us ko Raj jaisa ladka mila hai. Raj to vaise bhi handsome hai itna ki kya kaha jaaye aur jahan tak Naina ki baat rahi she is the prettiest. Par sach me mujhe Uday se jara bhi umeed nahi thi ki vo ye kaam kar lega par dekho us ne kar liya.
Sonia to kabhi seedhe muh baat kar hi nahi sakti na kisi se.Ab shaadi ho jaaye bus.

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Posted: 07 August 2009 at 12:53am | IP Logged
Salliyon ka kaam hi joote churana aur neg lena ye Kartik bekaar me koshish kar raha tha na. Jahan Uday ho vahan vaise bhi kuch karne ki jaroorat nahi hai, apne aap sab ho jaata hai.
I am happy that now Raj n Naina got married.

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agle din

subhe

n utthte ha freash up hoke aate ha
 
raj aur adi tab bhi so raha tha n unhe distrub na kiye taiyar hone laagte ha n ke choriye ke awaz se raj ke need tut jaate ha
 
raj-are tum itne jaldi tth gaae
 
n-ha mama ke kaha tha aaj mandir jaana ha hume toh
 
raj-n mujhe mere gift do na
 
n-gift kaise gift
 
raj-are wedding gift
 
n-kya chahee tumhe
 
raj-mmm filhaal ek kiss
 
n -kya
 
raj-ha do jaldi se
 
n-raj bad main
 
raj-nahin abhie matlab abhie
 
idher neeche
 
madhuri-maa jee aap ke chai
 
dadi-bahu n aur raj utth gaaye
 
madhuri-nahin maa jee
 
dadi-bahu unhe bula lo hume mandir bhi toh jaana hoga
 
madhuri-jee maa jee main ahie tia ko unhe bulane ke liye bejte hu
 
madhuri goes to tia's room
 
madhuri-tia beta
 
tia-are masi kya hua
 
madhuri-beta jaake zara raj aur n ko bulaa la hume mandir jaana ha
 
tia-jee masi
 
raj's room
 
raj and n was about to kiss tabhie tia door par knock karte ha
 
tia-bhaiya bhabhi aap logo ko masi neeche bulaa rahe ha
 
n-ha aate hu tia
 
tia -jaldi aa jaana
 
n-raj choro mujhe
 
raj-n humare kiss
 
n-raj pagal ho gaaye ho kya mama neeche bulaa rahe ha hume aur tumhe kiss ke paare ha
 
raj-off tum bhi na bohot he unromantic ho
 
n-ha hu ab jaao jaake taiyar ho jaao
 
raj -ok fine
 
raj bathroom main jake zor se door bad kar deta ha
 
n neeche aate ha
 
madhuri-are n tu aa gaaye
 
n jaake dadi madhri amar ka ahirbad leete ha
 
amar-jeete raho beta
 
dadi-n raj utth gaaya ha ya abhie bhi so raha ha
 
n-nahin dadi raj taiyar ho raha ha
 
dadi-chalo aacha ha tere aane ke bad raj jaldi utth toh gaaya warna toh roz 9 baaje uske aakhen khulte ha
 
everyone laughs
 
raj -are kis baat pe has rahe ha aap log
 
tia-aap ke burai pe
 
raj-mere burai pe
 
dadi-ha main n ko bol rahe the ke tere need toh roz 9 baaje tute ha toh aaj sukar ha n ke anne se tu jaldi utthta toh sahi
 
raj-kya dadi aap bhi
 
amar-maa chale warna dar ho jaayege
 
dadi-ha ha chal
 
amar-karthik beta jaake car nikalo
 
karthik-jee dad
 
dadi-raj tu n tia aur udhay ek car main jaana aur hum sab karthik ke car main jaaenge
 
raj-jee dadi
 
raj ke car main n tia udhay jaata ha aur karthik ke car main amar dadi madhuri  jaate ha
 
sab log mandir pahuchte ha
 
pandit jee-are aap log aa gaaye
 
dadi-pandit jee hume dar toh nahin huye
 
pandit jee-are nahin maa jee
 
dadi-raj tu aur n pooja ke thali leeke aage jaa
 
raj aur n pooja ke thali leeke aage jaate ha
 
pandit jee-dijiye mujhe
 
raj gives the thali to pandit jee
 
pandit jee -lijiye ab aap dono milke aarte kijiye
 
raj aur n dono aarte karte ha
 
pandit jee-bhaagwan ap dono humesha saath rakhe aur aap ke zindage khushi ke koi kami na ho
 
raj-chachi main office jaata hu
 
madhuri-office tu aaj office jaayega
 
raj-kun
 
madhuri-are raj aaj tujhe n ke saath uske ghar jaana hoga
 
raj-n ke ghar par kun
 
madhri-are buddhu pad phere ke liye
 
raj-par chachi aaj office main mere ek bohot imp meeting ha
 
madhuri-beta tu ek kam kar tu n ko uske ghar chor ke office chala jaana
 
raj-jee
 
n-mama adi
 
madhuri-n tu adi ke fikar mat kar hum ha na tu jaa
 
n-jee mama
 
raj aur n n ke ghar jaate ha
 
ma-are n beta tum log aa gaae aao
 
n hugs ma
 
n-ma kaise ha aap
 
ma-aache hu beta
 
raj jaake ma papa ka ahirbad leete ha
 
papa/jete raho beta
 
kripa-n
 
n-are kripa
 
kripa-zara dekhu toh humare jiju ne kahin tjhe pareshan toh nahin kiya
 
n-datt tu bhi na
 
kripa-haiiiiiiiiiiii
 
ma-raj beta baitho
 
raj-nahin ma mujhe office jaana hoga
 
dia-kya jiju aaj bhi office
 
raj-kya karu office main ek bohot imp meeting ha
 
ma-beta tum launch tak aa jaana ha
 
raj-jee zarur
 
raj office chala jaata ha
 
dia-didi chaleye na
 
n-hmm
 
kripa dia n sab milke baate karne laagte ha
 
dekhte dekhte 2 baaj jaata ha
 
dia-ma khana do jaldi se bohot bhook laage ha
 
ma-dia abhie tak raj nahin aaya toh main tjhe kaise khanna de sakte hu usse bra laagega na
 
dia-didi aap jiju ko phone kar ke puccheye na ke woh kab aa rahe ha
 
n-ha
 
n calls raj par raj phone switch off hota ha
 
n-ma raj ka mobile switch off aa raha ha
 
dia-oh no
 
n-ma aap log kha lijiye
 
ma-nahin beta hum kaise kha sakte ha
 
n-kuch nahin hoga main intezar karte hu unka
 
sab log khanna kha leete ha
 
kripa-n tu bhi kha lee
 
n-nahin kripa raj bas aate he honge mainne office main massage de diya ha
 
kareeb 7 baaje raj n ke ghar aata ha
 
dia-are jiju aap ne itne dar kar de
 
raj-ha woh meeting bas abhie abhie khatam huye ha
 
ma-beta tum khanna nahin khaoge
 
raj-ma mainne khanna kha liya ha
 
ma looks at n
 
n-ma hum chalte ha
 
ma-aacha beta
 
raj aur n shekhawat house jaate ha
 
madhuri-are tm log aa gaaye
 
n-mama adi kaha ha
 
madhuri-beta adi room main khel raha ha
 
n room main jaate ha
 
tia-are bhabhi aap kab aaye
 
n-bas abhie aaye hu
 
tia-chalo adi ab tumhare mama aa gaaye ha main chalte hu
 
tia adi ko n ke godh main de kee neeche jaate ha
 
n adi ko pyaar kar rahe ha
 
raj room main aate ha gusse main
 
raj-mere kapre nikal do
 
n-hmm
 
n raj ke cupboard se kapre nikalne jaate ha aur achanaak behosh hoke neeche gir jaate
 
raj-nainaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
 
 
 

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Posted: 07 August 2009 at 2:48am | IP Logged

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Raj ko toh subah subah kiss chahiye!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed EmbarrassedHe is so naughty!!!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Smile Smile Smile Smile

Just as Raj and Naina were about to kiss Tia knocked on the door!!!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove

Raj gussa ho jaata hai jab Naina usse kiss nahi karti hai!!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry

Everyone is making fun of Raj for sleeping till 9 o'clock everyday!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

Raj and Naina went to the temple to get God's blesings!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile

Woh dono milke aarti karte hai!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap

Raj ko aaj bhi office jaana hai!!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove

Raj aur Naina uske ghar pad phere ke liye jaate hai!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile

Kripa is teasing Naina!!!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

Naina Raj ka wait karti rahi aur woh lunch ke liye aaya hi nahi!!!!!!Dead Dead Dead Dead

Bechari Naina bhookhi rahe gayi!!!!!Ouch Ouch Ouch OuchRaj ne toh khana kha liya tha!!!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove

Why was Raj angry when he entered the room??Confused Confused Confused Confused

Naina behosh ho jaati hai!!!!!Ouch Ouch Ouch OuchAb itni der tak bhookhi rahegi toh yehi hoga naa!!!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

I hope she and her baby is fine!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile


 



Edited by Shaina_b - 07 August 2009 at 5:49pm

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