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MJMM-MAYUR FFF(Fully Faltoo Fiction)-updated pge13 (Page 6)

Badtameez_Dil IF-Addictz

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Posted: 02 August 2009 at 2:18am | IP Logged
mayank aur magar machROFL
mast ff

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tehzeeb25 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 02 August 2009 at 10:14am | IP Logged
do comtinue sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
update next part soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon

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-Rinky- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 02 August 2009 at 11:00am | IP Logged
Hey everyone am updating the second and third episode......

due to my mistake i made a separate topic for the second episode.....

i will stick to this thread.....

Edited by abs_insane - 08 August 2009 at 12:57am
Eloquent IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 04 August 2009 at 7:54am | IP Logged
Hey its quite nice rinky!!! Keep up the good work!!!

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ananya_s Goldie

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Posted: 05 August 2009 at 5:31am | IP Logged
awesome!!!!!!!!!haha was soooo funny!!!!!!!! loved....plz pm me wen u continue ok?

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-Rinky- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 08 August 2009 at 12:58am | IP Logged
Hey Guys and Girls,
             am back...If the previous episode was not faltoo enuff I have some more stuffs
             lined up for you...

Episode 2-

M wakes up the next morning with an aching body....he feels baffled and a strange tingling feeling in his head.
He wonders what he is doing near the pool, looks around and sees no one...

M-yahan is waqt ... mein kya kar raha hoon??
Then he remembers the happenings of the previous night...and eventually about magarmachhii..

M-kya meine sapna dekh raha tha? kya sachmuch woh sab mere saath hua jo mujhe yaad hai?

At that time Dodo comes from behind and taps mayank on the shoulder.

D-mayank, tum yaha akele baithey fishing kar rahe they kya? by the way mein tumhe keh doon
yahan fishing allowed nahi hai, samrat is an animal lover...

M gives D an ugly stare

D-mein toh bass puchh raha tha.... okk then mein chalta hoon..(to himself)- ye
  Mayank mujhey aise dekhta jaise ki mein koi bakra hoon aur woh shere...par nupur
  ke saamney toh woh kuchh aur hi ban jata hai...makes a foolish expression, goes away..

M is left all alone sitting by himself...he starts talking to himself,

Tum kaun thi? itnee khoobsoorat...itnee komal..itnee masoom...itnee nazook.
tumse milke mujhe kuchh hone laga hai, jaise ki koi chemical reaction jo irreversible ho...

then he cups some water in his hand and says....

Is paani se tumhaari khooshboo aati hai (smells the water) kya tum sachh ho?
par yeh mujhey kya ho raha hai?
woh mujhey pyaar kartii hai yeh sunke mujhe itnee khushi kyun ho rahi hai???

COMMERCIAL BREAK for 15 minutes-kabz haar ki add, soap ka add,floor cleaner, bathroom cleaner add etc...

Viwers all wondering why is M falling in love so fast??usey lagi hai kya??

Episode resumes

Scene shifts to Nupur and Gunjan

Gunjan is shown crying.. she has already cried 30 buckets,
they all are getting donated to a free hospital(as saline) but the cause for her sadness
is not shown cos the director herself has no track of it....

N-gunjan mat ro... mein sheena se kal baat karungi aur usey pata chal jayega ki
 nupur bhushan ke behen ko rulana usey kitna bhari padne wala hai....

G- di pls yeh meri galtii thi, mein hi uske aur samrat ke beech aa gayi

N- nahi gunjan tuu bahoot bholee hai, sade ladke ek jaise hotey hai..

G- Par Sheena toh ladki hai !!!!

N- JO BHI HO... tu bata is baar usne kya kiya??

G trying to change the subject says-Di tumhare aur mayank ke beech sab theek ho gaya na??

N-tu toh uska naam hi mat le.. woh mujhey 1000000 times sorry bolne se mana kar raha hai.
  par main bhi nupur bhushan hun usey Insaan se Superman na banaya toh Morena ka
  naam badal de na..

G-di U are the best...

N and G have a warm hug and go to sleep...

Episode finised.

MN fans-wondering
sajan fans-yawning
Magarmachhi fans- crying,cos there was no magarmachhi scene today...

The title track plays and the Title becomes clear-Miley Jab MAYANK ur MAGARMACHHII.....

Written,directed,created by- Rinky(inspired from Mtv,Animal Planet,Hindi movies,serials etc...)

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-Rinky- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 08 August 2009 at 1:00am | IP Logged

Since all you Magarmachhi fans have been complaining lately,
 I have put many MMM scenes today...hope you all like it and your feedback is always welcome..


The scene is set on the pool side.... its late afternoon, the sun is looking bleak,its almost sunset..

MM(looking at the sun)-yeh suraj hai aur tum chaand they, cute and mysterious.....(she giggles)-
   tumse milkeyy aisa laga tumse milkeyy armaan hue poorey dilkeyy,aai mere jaane wafa...while singing she makes rotating movements in the pool water and makes a whirl pool...then suddenly she makes a dash and goes into the deeper end of the pool..she says-kya pyaar mein Bay Of Bengal sey bhi zyada gehraai hai?? giggles and blushes again.... meine yeh kya kar diya? pyar bhi kiya aur ikraar bhi???
pehele jab mein chhotee thi tab machhi o key saath khelti thi.. sab hastey they ki Magarmachhi hoke Vegeterian?
par aaj mujhey apne aap par hasee aa rahi hai.....Insaan se pyaar? dilme karaoke ka jhankar...
then she emerges out of the pool and lazily lies down on the a toothy grin and says..
banda toh bndaas thaa....raat ke andhere mein woh white shirt, woh dazzling smile aur woh cute dimples..
mere dil ko paagal kar diya... hayye....mujhey kahan pata tha ki pyaar ek heavenly cheese hai.. khane k liye nahi,mehsoos karne k liye...usne sab samjha diya..
she turns around and lies on her back....Mayank tum mere paas zaroor aaogey...tumhe aan hi hoga..kyunki mujhe pata hai ki tumhe bhi kuchh hua hai,na zyada na kum......

Episode break-10 minutes
everyone wondering and falling in love with magarmachhi......aah she is so cute.. thay all are saying...

scene shifts to college where extras are walking around aimlessly, samrat standing behind a pillar and
looking serious.... gunjan makes an entry, looks at him from a distance and makes a sad face nobody knows why.
she walks slowwwwwlyyy towards samrat,finally reaches behind the pillar and opens her mouth to speak.....
Episode ends....

Sajan fans-biting nails
Mayur fans-kya hua yeh???
MM fans-rejoicing...................

The title track plays
and the Title becomes clear-Miley Jab MAYANK ur MAGARMACHHII.....

Written,directed,created by- Rinky(inspired from Mtv,Animal Planet,Hindi movies etc...)

Edited by abs_insane - 08 August 2009 at 11:14am

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Posted: 08 August 2009 at 1:04am | IP Logged
Rinky  awesome  hilarious..... hahahahhahhahahahh

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