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Mayur FF-Nupur ka Swaymvar -updated part 9-page 23 (Page 5)

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continue soon.....and plzz pm me when u update...
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Posted: 12 August 2009 at 2:26am | IP Logged
Hey yar! nice update! but next a bit long one plz! waitng for the next update! nd thanx for the pm!


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awesome job!
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nic epart
so mayu is going to meet nups
cant wait to see what happen
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OMG i can't wait for nupz plan.....awesome part yaar......update soon.......plzzzzz pm meEmbarrassed




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oooh looks like nupur's planned some things for mayank!! I'm really looking forward to the first meeting of theirs..!
do continue soon....thanks for the PM!




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Hey nice update, looking forward for your next update.Smile
Thanx for the pm.

Edited by Kitsin - 13 August 2009 at 11:26am


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Part 3


The next morning Mayank, Samrat, Sanjham, and Uday leave to Ranchghani.


Meanwhile they are preperations being made for their welcome.


G- Raj Kumari woh aate hi hoga. Aap abhi tak yahan kyun bathi ho.


N- Kyun meri kya mu dikhaye hai jo mera wahan jaana zaroori hai. Main yahin rahoon gi. Apne kaksh mein.


Meanwhile MS welcomes Mayank and his friends to his palace.


MS thinks- Nupur to ayi hi nahin. Usse yeh shoba nahin deta.


MS- Raj Kumar hum tumhe apni beti se bhi milwana chahte hai. Kahan hai woh Gunjan.


G- ji woh to..


MS- samajh gaye'acha tum jao aur Raj Kumar Mayank aur Raj Kumari Nupur ko milao.


G- ji Chaliye.


Gunjan takes him to Nupur's room.


Nupur is busy combing her hair in front of the mirror, when she hears Gunjan approaching.

Mayank can only see her back and Nupur can't see him at all.


N- Agayi tum Gunjan. Woh Raj Kumar ka swagat kar ke. Pata nahin yeh log kya samajh te hai usko. Aise swagat kar rahe hai jaise koi jang jeet ke aye hai.


G- Raj Kumari'woh Raj Kumar-


N- Ab bas Gunjan. Mera kan pak gaye uska naam sun sun ke. Raj Kumar yeh, Raj Kumar woh'


M- Kya main itna bura hoon? (Mayank finally says something after listening to Nupur babble on and on he was pretty amused.)


N- Oh Gunjan. Teri awaaz ko kya hogaye?


G- Meri awaaz ko kuch nahin hua hai. Aap peeche mur ke to dekhie.


Nupur stops brushing her hair and finally turns around. She sees Gunjan and beside her' who was this handsome young man standing in her room? She looked at him from head to toe, he was dressed full like a'


Mayank was taken aback when he saw her with her cute face and pretty chocolate brown eyes and long silky hair. She looked almost delicate but there was something strong about her too. She was so'so beautiful he thought. And now he couldn't stop smiling as her cheeks slowly started to turn pink.


Samrat who heard everything also comes into the room.


S- Chalo mai hi aap sab ka parichay (introduction) kara deta hoon.


To yeh hain Raj Kumar Mayank. Humari Delhi ki shaan. Log marte hain inse milne ke liye.


Nupur just looks annoyed.


S- Aur haan. Aap ke pita ji ne aapko kaha hain ke aap inhe raj mahal dikhayengi.


N- kya?


M- To chalein?

 Mayank puts his hand out for Nupur mischievously, but Nupur ignores him and storms out of her room.


N- Ab bateiyan bhi. Kahan jaana chahte hain aap?


M- Jahan aap le challenge. Hum to bas hamesha apke peeche peeche ayenge.


Nupur shot him a look and says- acha teek hain. Hum apko apni man pasand jage pe le chalte hain.


She starts walking and Mayank follows her.


After a few turns they enter a beautiful courtyard which was actually outside but connected to the palace.


It was like the palace garden. There were rows and rows of flowers of many types and scented-roses that sent their perfume out. The trees were alive with animals and many different types of fruits. Surrounded by flower bushes there was a very pretty porch swing.


Nupur went and sat on it waiting for some reaction from Mayank who thought that it really was a very beautiful spot. They also had a royal garden but it wasn't this big.


M- Bohat khoobsurat hain.


N- Woh to hoga hi. Humari liye jo bana hai.  




Hi! I hope u like the update and it was a bit longer than my other ones.

plz comment..

Edited by ranjana_c - 13 August 2009 at 3:13pm

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