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hey dear i added u in my buddy list so whenever u update the next part plz pm me....n yaar aur kya kahun tumhari first FF tou bas ROcKing thi yaar.....maza aa giya padh kar....it was just too gud....n great work on hindi...it seems like im watching a show while reading it...keep up the gud work yaar,.....

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hey.....it was a nice one.....just update soon.....i ve added u in my buddy list......so just  pm me when u update......  
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it was a different one.....and the theme is very unique....

keep up the gud work.....



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wow nupz ka sawaymvar........unique concept.......awesome yaar..please update soon.......plzz pm meEmbarrassed

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hey ranjana... dis is so kewl.... add me 2 the pm list,,, cannot wait to finish reading it.... i've only just read the characters sketch.... wow very unique and i totally love mayur!!!
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Part 2

 MD- Ruko beta.

 M- Kya hua?

 MD- Tum apni yatra par nahin ja sakte.

 M- Lekin kyun.

 MD- Mujhe apna vaada yaad a gaye. Tumhe pata hain na mera sabse kareebi dost ke bare main? Ranchghani ke Maharaj Suneil.

 M- ji, aap unke bare mein bohat baatein karte hain.

 MD- haan. Aur tumhe kal hi wahan jaana hoga.

 M- Kya? Kal? Par achanak kyun?

 MD- Itne dino baad mere dost ka sandesha aya hai. Usne hum saab ko bulaya tha ta ke hum wahan kuch din rehkar purani yaadon ko taaza kare. Itne saal hogaya hum dono mile nahin par tum to jaante ho ke main iss waqt cha kar bhi nahin ja sakte. Yahan par meri bohat zaroorat hai. Isliye maine Suniel ko kaha ke meri jaga mera beta jayega.

 M- main?

 MD- Haan beta tum. Chinta kyun kar rahe ho? Wahan tumhari bohat achi kathirdari ho gi. Aur kuch hi din ki to baat hai. Tum chahte ho to apne dost bhi apne saath leke jao.

 M- Tikh hai pita ji. Main kal hi chale jaonga.

 Meanwhile in Nupur's palace.

 N- Lekin kyun pitashree abhi to apne kaha tha ke main jaa sakhti hoon. Aur ab koi bigde hue raj kumar ke liye mujhe yahan hi rehna pare ga.

 MS- Haan Nupur. Tumhara hone zaroori hai. Tum janti ho na ke woh mere sabse ache dost ka beta hai. Ab aur koi bahane nahin. Uske swagat ke liye bohat sari tiyarian karni hai.

 N to herself- Swagat to main uska karungi. Aur woh bhi aisa swagat ke woh zindagi bhar yaad rakhega.

 
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Hey guyz. So that was the update. I know its kind of short but im gonna update again very very soon. And of course thanx so much everyone for commenting. I noe its been a while and it was cuz i was on vacation. 



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nice updt
can't wait to c what nupur does
continue soon

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