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PART ' 3

 

(Mayank Gunjan k room me jaata hai jahaan nupur hoti hai )

M :- Mujhe nupur tum se baat karni hai

(Nupur koi jawab nhi deti aur room se bahar chali jaati hai aur wo gunjan se baat karne lagti hai. Mayank bhi uske piche piche jaata hai)

M :- Nupur main tum se baat kar rha hu. Mujhe tum se baat karni hai

N to G :- Gunjan apne bhai se keh do k mujhe uss se koi baat na hi karni hai, aur na hi uski koi baat sun ni hai.

M :- Per tum mujhe kuch kehne ka mauka to do.

(Nupur fir kuch bina kahe uth kar terries per chali jati hai)

G :- mayank aise kabhi koi ladki ko manata hai kya. Arre aise wo aur naraz ho jayegi.

M :- to fir kaise manate hai. Maine aaj tak kabhi kisi ladki ko nhi manaya.

G :- haan yeh bhi sahi hai. Main bhi aaj tak kabhi tum se naraz nhi huyi hu. Jo thoda bahut bhi tumhe pta hota.

M :- Haan. Ab batao main kya karu. Kal nupur ka b'day bhi hai. fir to aise wo kisi se baat nhi karegi.

G :- kya kal nupur ka b'day hai. tumhe kaise pta

M :- kyun bhul gyi main usse college leke gaya tha to uska form fill kar raha tha to pta chala kal uska b'day hai

G :- mayank fir to tumhare pass aaj ka din hai usse mana lo. Warna pta chale usne kisi ko btaya bhi nhi hai k uska b'day hai. Hum uske liye surprise party rakhe.

M :- aur agar wo nhi mani . aur usse pta chala k yeh party maine arrange ki hai. to wo cake bhi nhi kategi. Dekha nhi kitni gusse me hai.

G:- tum samrat ki help kyun nhi lete. Usse to har whqt ladkiya ghere rehti hai.

M :- Waise idea bura nhi hai. uss se hi baat karta hu.

(Mayank samrat se phone per baat karta hai aur usse sari situation batata hai. Samrat usse kuch ideas deta hai. Mayank ek ek karke sare ideas try  marta hai. sorry card, flowers, chocolates, etc sab kuch per nupur nhi manti. Wo mayank se baat tak nhi karti jo cheez mayank ne jaahaan chodi thi wahi padi rehti hai)

 

NEXT MORNING

(Nupur subah jaldi uth jaati hai. bcoz aaj uska b'day hai. )

G to N :- Wish u a very happy b'day.

N :- tumhe kisne bataya. Main samjh gyi kisne bataya hoga. gunjan kya tum mere sath mandir chalogi.

G :- haan chalungi. Per tum puch kyun rhi ho. Maine kabhi tumhe mana kiya hai kya.

N :- nhi aise hi. Pta chale tum bhi mujhe wahaan chod kar aa gyi.

G :- Abhi tak mayank se naraz ho. Aaj to tumhara b'day hai. Usse maaf bhi kar do.

N :- oh to tum mujh se mandir sath me chalne ki rishwat mang rhi ho.

G :- nhi. Aisi baat nhi hai. Chalo thik hai main kuch nhi kahungi. Mandir chale. Aur apna mood thik kar lo. Kam se kam aaj to udas mat raho.

(Nupur aur gunjan mandir chale jaate hai, Piche se mayank k ghar me band k sare members aa jate hai diya ko chod kar )

B :- hi mayank. Maine kuch socha hai.

M :- achcha to tumne kuch socha hai. waise yeh department tumhara nhi hai. Fir bhi bta do kya socha hai.

B :- Actual me dia mujhe se bahut naraz hai. aur aaj f'ship day bhi hai. to soch rha hu k

S to B :- Kya soch rhe ho. K usse friend bana loge. Wo teri gf hai.

B :- wahi to keh rha hu. Wo meri gf hai yeh sab jante hai. per maine abhi tak usse officially purpose nhi kiya hai. to soch rha hu yahi karta hu.

S :- idea bura nhi hai. Per aise purpose karega. To wo tujhe jaan se maar degi. Usko pricess wali feeling kara then uske baad usse purpose karna wo kabhi mana nhi karegi.

B :- wo aise. K tum log yahi kuch arrangement karte hai. aur tum kisi bhi tarah dia ko evening se pehle yahaan aane se roko.

M :- Hmm. Plan to achcha hai. Aur dia ko yahaan aane se rokhne ka kaam uday ka.

U :- mayank main yeh kaam nhi karunga. Tumhe pta hai na di jaise hi chilayegi main sab kuch apne aap bta dunga. Fir sab surprise khatam ho jayega.

S :- Hmm. Yeh kaam hum gunjan aur nupur ko bhi de sakte hai.

M :- Gunjan to syad kar bhi le. Per nupur ka nhi pta.

S :- kyun abhi tak nhi maani kya.

M :- nhi. Even aaj uska b'day bhi hai usne mujh se b'day wishes tak nhi li. Koi jawab nhi diya usne meri wishes ka.

S :- hmm. To yahaan ek aur problem. Pehle Benji ki problem solve karte hai. Per I promise aaj hi tumhari problem bhi solve ho jayegi.

(Samrat k plan k hisab se sab dia k welcome ki taiyari mayank k ghar me karne lagte hai. Itne me nupur aur gunjan bhi ghar aa jate hai. Gunjan ghar me pehle enter karti hai mayank usse dekh kar jaise hi uss se baat karne ko aage badhta hai nupur bhi enter karti hai mayank aur nupur aamne samne hote hai tabhi beni aur dia k scence k liye samrat jo flower door k upper rakhwaye the aur uday ko bola tha k jaise hi dia enter kare wo flower gira dena. Uday nupur aur mayank k upper gira deta hai)

B with anger :- yeh kya kiya tune. Samrat ne yeh scene mere aur dia k liye socha tha

U :- dekh benji main to bas check kar rha tha. K yeh na ho di aati aur yeh flowers girte hi nhi. To kya hota.

B :- oh h. fir thik hai.

S :- uday gud work hume har cheez ek baar chk kar leni chahiye. Waise scence yeh bhi bura nhi tha. Pura hindi film ka scence laga. Waise aaj nupur ka b'day bhi hai. to thode flowers ki haqdar to wo bhi hai.

(Nupur bina kuch kahe ander jaane lagti hai)

S to N :- Nupur tum mayank se naraz ho ya hum sab se.

N to S :- Main kisi se naraz nhi hu samrat.

S to N :- to thik hai. Ham sab ki help karo. Aaj f'ship day hai aur dia benji se naraz hai. aur benji aaj usse purpose karne wala hai officially.

N to S :- officially matlab?? Mujhe laga tha k benji aur dia dono sath me hai.

S to N :- sath me to hai. Per abhi tak commitment nhi kiya hai. to tum aaj hamari help karogi na.

N :- By god samrat yeh bhi koi puchne ki baat hai. pakka main help karungi. Tabhi yeh sari taiyari ho rhi hai.

B :- haan. Pls god se prayer karna dia ka gussa shant ho jaye.

N to B :- arre dia ka gussa shant bhi hoga. Aur wo manegi bhi. Tum itni taiyari kar rhe ho. Usse maan na to padega hi.

S to N :- to matlab mayank ki taiyari me kuch kami reh gyi jo tum uss se abhi tak baat nhi kar rhi ho.

N to S :- samrat mujhe iss bare me koi baat nhi karni hai. Haan per tumara kaam zarur kar dungi. Yeh batao mujhe karna kya hai.

S to N :- bas mayank se baat'''

N to S :- Angry

S to N :- main bas mazak kar rha tha tumhe dia ko evening se pehle yahaan aane se rokna hai gunjan k sath mil kar.

N to S :- tumhara kaam ho jayega yeh nupur bhushan ka promise hai.

(sab dia aur benji ka din special banane ki taiyari karte hai aur aise karte karte sham bhi ho jati hai. Nupur aur gunjan dia ko call karke bulate hai.aur dia k enter karte hi flowers ka scene aur music aur uske baad benji apne knee per baith kar sirf ek flower dete huye )

B to D :- Main mayank ki tarah intelligent nhi hu. Samrat ki tarah sweet aur cute nhi hu. Aur aaj hai f'ship day aur log dosto ko manate hai. per main iss pal ka intzaar valentines day tak nhi kar sakta. Music aur tum mere liye dono hi meri saanse ho. Main chahta hu k tum hamesha mere sath raho chahe hum uss competition me part le ya na le. Hum competition jeete ya hare. Mere sath tum hamesha raho. I really loves u.

D to B :- Oh benji. Hum to already ek dusre k sath hai. Yeh bhi kehne ki baat hai kya. Chahe kuch bhi ho tum mayank se zyada intelligent nhi ho. Samrat ki tarah sweet aur cute nhi ho. Per tum mujhe in dono se zyada psnd ho. Aur mujhe inn dono se zyada tumhara sath achcha lagta hai. Loves u 2 dear.

(Dia k haan karne k baad uday music bajana start karta hai aur sab ek sath mil kar gaana gaate hai )

 

Hai Yeh Dosti Yaaro Zindagi Iska Ek Pal Jaise Ek Sadi

Pyaar Mein Jiyo Itna Jaan Lo Dil Ne Jo Kaha Usko Maan Lo
Le Lo Maza Zindagi Ka Har Pal Suhana
Shaana Na Na Shaana Na Na
Shaana Na Na Shaana Na Na

Apne Yaaro Mein Ek Yaar Hai Aaj Jo Bahut Bekarar Hai
Iska Aaj Dil Chaal Chal Gaya Kya Hua Ise Yeh Badal Gaya
Yeh Ho Gaya Hai Kisi Ka Ise Jaane Do Na
Shaana Na Na Shaana Na Na
Shaana Na Na Shaana Na Na


 Bas Mein Nahin Dil Aaj Raat Aankhon Mein Hai Hoton Ki Baat

Kaise Hua Yeh Kya Hua Sab Kuch Hai Kyon Badla Hua
Shaana Na Na Shaana Na Na
Shaana Na Na Shaana Na Na
Hai Yeh Dosti Yaaro Zindagi Iska Ek Pal Jaise Ek Sadi


Chup Hum Rahe To Kaise Rahe Kuch Hum Kahe To Kaise Kahe

Kabo Nahin Khud Pe Raha Jaano Na Mein Iski Vaja
Jo Bhi Hota Hai Aaj Hone Do Apne Pyaar Mein Dil Ko Khone Do
Bolo Bolo Na Kuch To Bolo Na Raaz Dil Ke Tum Aaj Kholo Na
Kehdo Ki Dil Ho Gaya Hai Tumhara Deewana
Shaana Na Na Shaana Na Na
Shaana Na Na Shaana Na Na
Shaana Na Na Shaana Na Na
Shaana Na Na Shaana Na Na


Aisa Asar Dil Pe Hua Jo Baat Mein Kehna Saka

Kehna Hai Ab Mujhko Wahi Kehna Hai Jo Tum Ko Bhi
Hum Ko Khabar Hona Saki Deewangi Badti Rahi
Karta Raha Jaadoo Asar Aur Hum Rahe Bekhabar

Aankhon Aankhon Mein Baat Ho Gayi

 Baaton Baaton Mein Baat Ban Gayi
Pyaar Mein Jiyo Itna Jaan Lo Dil Ne Jo Kaha Usko Maan Lo
Hum Sab Ne Jo Mil Kar Kaha Tum Bhi Kaho Na
Shaana Na Na Shaana Na Na
Shaana Na Na Shaana Na Na
Shaana Na Na Shaana Na Na
Shaana Na Na Shaana Na Na

Hai Yeh Dosti Yaaro Zindagi Iska Ek Pal Jaise Ek Sadi
Pyaar Mein Jiyo Itna Jaan Lo Dil Ne Jo Kaha Usko Maan Lo
Le Lo Maza Zindagi Ka Har Pal Suhana
Shaana Na Na Shaana Na Na
Shaana Na Na Shaana Na Na
Shaana Na Na Shaana Na Na
Shaana Na Na Shaana Na Na

 

M to N :- I am really sorry nupur. Mujhe aisa nhi karna chahiye tha. I am really sorry. Dil se sorry, duniya k jitne bhi sorry hai sare sorry. Aage se aisa nhi hoga. Pakka promise.

N to M :- Pakka na. Thik hai iss baar maaf kiya. Aage se mafi nhi milegi. Aur waise tumhara din achcha hai k aaj mera b'day hai. isliye jao tum bhi kya yaad rakhoge tumhe maaf kiya.

M to N :- Shurkiya. aisa mauka nhi aayega dobra k mujhe tum se sorry bolna pade.

S to all :- Purposal bhi ho gya. Gaana bhi ho gya. Puri hindi film ki tarah. Aur jo naraz the who bhi maan gaye Ab kuch khana bhi ho jaye.

G :- Haan main abhi aati hu.

S to G :- tum kahaan chali. Khane se matlab hai k aaj nupur ka b'day hai to cake kahaan hai.

M :- main laata hu.

S :- oh ho. Cake ka intzaam bhi mayank Sharma ne kiya hai.

M :- haan koi problem hai kya

S :- nhi. Tum cake lene jaa rhe the. Jao aur lekar aao. Mujhe bhuk lagi hai

(mayank cake lekar aata hai. gunjan sab set karti hai.)

N to All :- yeh cake main nhi benji aur dia katenge.

D to N :- per dear b;day tumhara hai.

N to D :- per aaj ka din special tum dono ka hai. aur b'day har saal aata hai. Per yeh din sabki life me ek baar hi aata hai to yeh din tum dono k liye special hai

B to N :- special isliye hai k hum dono sath me hai. per aaj tumhara b'day hai to cake to tumhe hi katana padega.

U :- tum log cake kaat rhe ho ya main khud kaat k kha lu.

N :- hmm. To aaj mera b'day hai. to tum me se koi bhi mere liye gift nhi laaya hai. ab main jo kahungi wo tum sabko manana padega. Isliye yeh cake dia aur benji hi katenge. Aur koi behas nhi karega.

(sabko nupur ki baat man ni padti hai)

M to himself :- yeh sach me itni achchi hai. ya ban ne ki koshish kar rhi hai. Pta nhi isse samjhna to muskil hai)

(Benji aur dia cake cut karte hai aur nupur sabko deti hai)

N to M :- yeh lo cake khao. Waise laye tum ho. To tumhe to psnd hoga hi

M to N :- mujhe nhi pta tha tumhe kaun sa flavour psnd hai isliye apni psnd ka le aaya. Kyun tumhe achcha nhi laga

N to M :- achcha hai. Waise tumhari psnd itni buri bhi nhi hai.

B to all :- sab kuch ho gya. Agar aap sab ki aagya ho to main dia k sath bahar jaana chahta hu akele

U to B :- benji tum di ko leke jaa rhe ho fir akele kaise ho gye

S to U :- wo dia k sath jaana chahta hai tumhare sath nhi. Isliye wo dono sath sath aur akele honge.

S to B :- hamara aadesh hai k tum dia ko lekar jahan chahe jaa sakte ho. Tumhe kisi se puchne ki zarurat nhi hai.

( benji aur dia chale jaate hai)

S to G:- mujhe bhi ghar chalna chahiye. Tum aa rhi ho na. Maa ne tumhe bulaya hai

G to S :- haan. Aunty bulaye aur main naa aau aisa ho sakta hai kya. Main aa rhi hu

S to M :- ab tum nupur ko bahar lekar jaa rhe ho. Bcoz gunjan mere sath jaa rhi hai aur uday ko main uske ghar drop kar dunga. Aur haan ghar ki chabhi gunjan k pass rahegi to jaldi ghar aane ki sochna bhi mat

N to S :- hum log bahar jaake kya karenge. Hum ghar me hi thik hai

S to N :- haan. Taki tum dono ka ghar me fir se jhagda ho. Aur ghar ki halat badal jaaye. Jo main bilkul nhi chahta. Bahar rahoge to jhagda kam karoge.

G to N :- haan nupur. Waise bhi aaj tumhara b'day hai aur tumne cake bhi nhi cut kiya. Aur mayank se tum naraz bhi thi. To mayank to thodi derr manane do. Dekhe mayank tumhe kahaan le jaata hai.

S to M & N :- hum log jaa rhe hai aur tum bhi . ghar ki key gunjan k pass hai to jaldi aane ki sochna bhi mat

(samrat mayank aur nupur ko bahar bhejta hai uske baad dono samrat gunjan aur uday k sath uday ko drop karte huye samrat k ghar pahuch jaate hai )

 

 

TO BE CONTINUED'.

 

 PART 4 - PG 7

 

 

 

 

 

 

 



Edited by Annudsweetgirl - 19 December 2009 at 1:26pm

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Really liked it, am waiting for the next update..lekin pls title mein part no. & page number update karo
taki patha chale ki update hua hai..
pls pm .. Big smile

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very cery cute update... pl PM mi when u update...

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sorry me late in commenting!
But awesome updates!! Nupur ek baar naaraz ho gayi toh manane ka nam hi nahi le rahi!! LOL
Mayank ne kya kya nahi kar liya..!! Finally chalo man toh gayi...hehe...
Benji and Dia are together!! omg..!!
I'm really looking forward to the next part!! Mayur are going on a date...LOL...well it does look like a date and that too on Nupur's B'day...!
update soon...thanks for the pm!!

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Loved it

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hi
so cute update.
waiting for cute Mayur scene on the next part.
thnax 4 ur PM
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