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Mere Saathi(RN)-Pt.25,pg.144(17/01) (Page 7)

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Posted: 30 July 2009 at 6:50am | IP Logged
Hey nice start...!!!
I like the fact that Naveen 's dead face was severely damaged...!!!! I see hope...!!!!
Oh I felt bad for Abhi, having to say those words...!!!!
Cant wait for the next update...!!!
Pls PM me...!!!!
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Posted: 30 July 2009 at 8:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shaina_b

Nice character sketch!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clapthanx....

Navin's body was completely damaged and they had recognised it only because it had Navin's taveez and kada!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

Naina had cried a lot seeing these things!!!!!Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry

She now treasured these things as they were most precious to her!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

Poor Naina!!!!!!Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry CryNavin's dead body with damaged face used to haunt her!!!!!!Ouch Ouch Ouch Ouch Ouch

I am sure Navin is alive and that wasn't his body at all!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smilewell how can u be so sure dear????Tongue


 

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Posted: 30 July 2009 at 8:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rituka7

damn cool
]awesome
superb
update soon
Thanks a ton rituka...Smile
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Posted: 30 July 2009 at 8:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sumaiya wahid

Prologue was nice. Cud feel the pain of Raj's death again (it may hurt but u did a gr8 job). And u portrayed Naina's agony really well. Pls continue soon n Thnx 4 the PM.
Thanx sumaiyaSmile
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Posted: 30 July 2009 at 8:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by hinal60

that was a wonderful prolouge
i hope we get to see both rajveer and naveen soon
Rajveer ok...i hav bring him any how or u ppl will stop readin ficTongue but naveen????Confused

Edited by manatated - 30 July 2009 at 8:48am
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Posted: 30 July 2009 at 8:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by veersherafan1

Very nice character sketch and prologueClap.Very very wonderful start.
Keep it up dear.
thankuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuSmile
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Posted: 30 July 2009 at 8:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by prerna1

that was too good
loved it completely especially vo Navin ki dead body vali baat in this fic he will be alive na so sweet
plz continue soon
arrey...why r u ppl considern Naveen alive??? Thanks 4 likin da updateSmile
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Posted: 30 July 2009 at 8:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by srojaleen

veri nyc charachter sketch...Clap Clap Clap Clap
 
chalo kuch doubts toh tumne clear kar hi diya hai ki...Naveen zinda hai...Big smile!!! mera matlab hai ki face agar damaged hai toh 150% chances hain naveen k zinda hone ki...Big smile!!! yeh achha hua...Clap!!! kisi fic me toh naveen zinda hai...Big smile!!! varna hum toh sabhi use maarne k chakkar me hi rahte hain. Cry
Arrey yaar...sabko kyun lag raha hai ki naveen zinda hai??? zinda rakhke kaunse jhande gaadne hai usse?LOL Ab ritu toh hai nahi usske saath pair karne....Main yamraj se Raj ke praan wapas laau wohi kaafi nahi hai kya tum logo ke liye???LOL Maine woh face damage  and haunt waali baat issliye likhi thi kyunki mujhe Naina ko koi psychiatric problm batana tha...TongueLOLLOL

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