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Posted: 27 July 2009 at 1:00pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sumaiya wahid

Wow...gud dat u r finally continuing this fic. But pls jaldi first part post kardo. Maine bhi socha tha topic dekh kar ki tumne part post kar diya. I'm sure all RN fans r wid u. Waise bhi achhi chhezein agar repeat bhi ho jaye to usme koi problem nahi hoti. So just relax dear n go ahead.
thanks a ton dear...bass ab jaldi post kar dungi...Smile

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Posted: 27 July 2009 at 1:02pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by yyyy

sounds very interesting plz continue soon
will b posting prologue soon dear...Smile

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Posted: 28 July 2009 at 4:56am | IP Logged
CHARACTER SKETCH :            
 
 
 
 
 
Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat
 
 
 
 
Cadet Naina Singh Ahluwalia      
 
 
 
Cadet Alekh Sharma                  
 
 
 
 
Cadet Amardeep Huda               
 
 
 
Cadet Pooja Ghai                      
 
 
Cadet Ali Baigh                         
 
 
Cadet Yaduvansh Sahani          
 
 
Dr.Cptn Shalini  Singhal         
 
Sameera Shroff                         --- Sanaya  Irani
 
 
Cptn Gunaraj Randhawa(gunny)
 
 
 
Cptn Abhimanyu Rai Chauhan  
 
 
 
Brigadier Chandokh
 
 
 
 Major Nair
 
 
Subhedar Suri
 
Subhedar maj.Lolita Sen
 
plus few additions will be there....which i will uncover as there time comes...... I may make slight changes in the behaviour of characters...
 


Edited by Revolutionbreez - 02 May 2010 at 2:08am

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Posted: 28 July 2009 at 5:00am | IP Logged
Wow character sketch is up. Nice twist abt damaged face of the dead body. W8ing 4 the part eagerly.

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Posted: 28 July 2009 at 5:08am | IP Logged
IMPORTANT NOTE:
 

In my fic, Naveen's face( when his dead body is received by his family) is

completely damaged. It was damaged to such an extent that if his body wudn't
 
have carried that "Taveez" which he used to wear and if there had not been
 
the bangle ( KADAA) which Naina had gotten him from Golden
 
temple,Amritsar; they would not have recognised his body. Naina cried at the
 
site of the 'Kadaa'. She wondered how her brother treasured even simplest of
 
her gifts.... as 'Even while embracing death', Naina thought and she cried a
 
lot. But she won't allow Navin to take these things with him all the way to
 
heaven as it were the most precious things to her now.....
 
  Navin's dead body with damaged face used to haunt Naina......Cry
 


Edited by Revolutionbreez - 02 May 2010 at 1:30am

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Posted: 28 July 2009 at 5:23am | IP Logged

Nice character sketch!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap

Navin's body was completely damaged and they had recognised it only because it had Navin's taveez and kada!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

Naina had cried a lot seeing these things!!!!!Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry

She now treasured these things as they were most precious to her!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

Poor Naina!!!!!!Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry CryNavin's dead body with damaged face used to haunt her!!!!!!Ouch Ouch Ouch Ouch Ouch

I am sure Navin is alive and that wasn't his body at all!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile


 



Edited by Shaina_b - 28 July 2009 at 6:32am

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Posted: 28 July 2009 at 5:29am | IP Logged
Thanks mam if i encouraged u to write the fic.Wink Wink Wink
But dear now u must start it na, ab Priya ne aarti bhi utaar li hai to kis baat ka wait hai.LOL LOL LOL
U have already posted the character sketch na so pls start updating it too.



Edited by Mahak Sinha - 28 July 2009 at 5:34am

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Posted: 28 July 2009 at 5:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sumaiya wahid

Wow character sketch is up. Nice twist abt damaged face of the dead body. W8ing 4 the part eagerly.
sumaiya...putting up the prologue....Smile

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