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the story picks up after armaan and jassi shake hands at the party and jassi leaves with raghav for their house.

(in the car)

raghav- jassi, tum armaan ko pehele se jaaanti thi, bohoth pehele se.. if u dont mind me asking...

jassi- tum kya pooch na chahate ho raghav?

raghav is tense now, he doesnt know how to ask jassi...

raghav- tumara aur armaan ka rishta sirf employee aur employer ka tha ya kuch aur...

jassi- raghav, aagar tum mujpar vishvaas karte ho tho ye sawal tum khabhi bhi wapas mujhe nahin poochna.

raghav- mein tumpar pura vishvas karta hu jassi par ye mere sawal ka jawab nahin hai.. mein sach jaana chahata hu.

Jassi sits there silently, the painful memories come flooding back to her, armaan and her spending time with each other few days before she left to go see purab, her confrontation with him before the wedding (yes the infamous slap), armaan and jassi back in gulmoher before the sexual harrassment case, and then finally in nanital when armaan tells jassi that "mein tumse nafrat karta hu jassi"

She looks down at her sari, tears flood to her eyes as her heart aches for armaan like never before. She wants to forgive him for all that he has done to her, forget that past in which armaan and jassi became enimies, run back to armaan and confront him and become his forever. Jassi lets out a deep sigh.

Jassi- sach ye hai ke armaan mera sirf boss nahin tha, mera ek aacha dost tha, jo mujhe saabse zaada samajtha tha, par sirf mein aisa soch thi thi... aur....

Raghav fears the inevitable coming at him, does he dare ask her? He looks out the window as he's driving and stares at the sky. He then parks the car and turns to face jassi.

Raghav- aur kya?

Jassi's voice starts breaking up, she loses her voice, she cant talk or breathe...

Jassi (very emotional right now)- aur mera pyaar.. jise mein bhagwan se bhi zyaada vishwas karti thi, aur.. pyar karti thi...

BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM!!!!!!!

The words hit raghav like a rock, "aur mera pyaar.. jise mein bhagwan se bhi zyaada vishwas karti thi, aur.. pyar karti thi..."

He doesnt say a word. The engine starts and they both remain silent, each grieving in their own way. Raghav with silence, and jassi with tears. They reach home and go inside. Jassi stares at Raghav as he pretends if nothing happened, he plays with kaarishma and jassi heads towards their room. She takes off all her jewelery when raghav comes in... jassi is scared, if she's hurt him deeply or not...

Jassi- raghav, mujhe itni baadi saaza mat do, ye tumari khamoshi mujhe mardalegi! armaan mera atheeth tha, aur aab tum mere aache dost ho, tum tho mujhe samaj sakte ho na?

Raghav turns towards jassi and walks up to her.

Raghav- jassi tumne jo bhi kaha, wo to mein bhool nahin sakta, magar mein is bare mein tumse aur nahin poochoonga. tumne mujpar itna to vishwas kiya ke tum mujko bol paayi ke saach kya hai.. aur jab tumhe lagega ke tum tayaar ho mujhe saab kuch batane ke liye, to mein hamesha ya hoonga tumari baat sune ke liye, tumhe saamajne ke liye, tumara dhook batne ke liye... par sirf taab jub tumhe laage ke sahi waqt aagaya hai.

With that he leaves, and jassi is left speechless...

 

ARMAAN'S HOUSE

Mallika- armaan tumne sun liya na, ke tumari pyaari jassi tumse nafrat karti hai?

armaan looks at her painfully

Armaan- tumhe jaale pe namak chidakne ke alawa aur kuch nahin aata na mallika?

He turns to leave, mallika goes up to him and grabs his arm

Mallika- tum shayad bhul rahe ho ke tum mere pati ho, aur TUMNE MUJSE shaadi ki hai!

Armaan is seriously mad now, he flings her arm off of his and faces her

Armaan- to mein kya karun haan??!!! tumhari aarti utarun??!!! tum mujse chaahati kya ho mallika? yehin na ke mein tumara ho jaaon? to mein yaha hu! tumara pati! jo wo sab farz nibhaye ga jo ek pati ko karna chaahiye!! what else do you want from me goddammit!!!

Mallika is now crying, she falls onto the ground.. she says something that armaan didnt hear

Armaan- kya kaha tumne? bolo mallika, mein bhi soona chahata hu!

Mallika- PYAAR ARMAAN! PYAAR!! MEIN TUMHARA PYAR CHAHATI HU!!! WO PYAAR JO TUM JASSI SE KARTE HO!! WO PYAAR JO MERA HAAK HAI!!!

Armaan kneels down to where mallika is, she turns her face from him.

Armaan- mallika, wo pyaar tum deserve nahin karti..

with that hi gets up and is about to leave.

Mallika- KYUN ARMAAN!! KYUN MUJHE WO PYAAR NAHIN MILSAKTA??!!!

Armaan turns

Armaan- KYUNKI TUM EK GHATIYA AUR NEECHI AURAT HO JO AURAT NAAM PAR EK DHABA HAI!!! TUM KISISE BHI SAACHA PYAAR NAHIN KARSAKTI!!...  SAACHA PYAAR HI SAACHE PYAAR KO JEETHA HAI... AUR TUM SIRF AAPNE FIYDE AUR ZID KE BARE MEIN SOCH THI HO... (armaan cools down a little bit) kya tumhe ye laga tha ke mein nahin jaanta ke tum pregnant nahin ho? kitna jhoot tumne moojse bola hai mallika, fir bhi tum ye dhong raachati ho ke "mein tumse kitna pyaar karti hu".. meine sirf isiliye ye jhoot ka saat diya takir mein jaan saku ke tum kithni neeche girsakti ho..  tum ye high class ka dhong raachati ho, par high class sirf paise se nahin aata hai, tumtho ek khute se bhi neeche ja chuki ho. Mein sirf tumara  naam ka pati hu, tumhe kabhi wo pyaar nahin milega jo mein jassi se karta hu.... tum tho uski pao ki dhool tak nahin ho..

and with that he leaves... mallika is once again shattered by armaan's words, she lays on the ground, wailing like a baby.. and crying "ARMAAAN!!!!!!!"""

SCROLL DOWN TO SEE ENDING #1... armaan and jassi reunite

 

A drunk armaan reaches raghav's house, he gets out of the car and comes barging into their house. The family has left for a trip so its only raghav and jassi.

Armaan- Raghav bahaarao!

Raghav emerges from a room...surprised that armaan is there...

Raghav- kya hua armaan??.... he comes down the steps and up to armaan

Armaan- how dare u.... dosti mujse karte ho aur pyaar bhi mera hi cheente ho? meri jassi ko kyun cheena tumne mujse raghav??? kyun???

Armaan grabs his collar..

Armaan- agar jassi meri nahin hui to tumari bhi nahin hosakti.. mein jaanta hu ke jassi tumare saath kabhi kush nahin ho sakti!!!

with that they both get into a fight, jassi hears all the comotion and runs down the stairs to find raghav and armaan in a fist fight. Raghav tries to push armaan off but armaan keeps hitting him, Jassi runs to them and tries to get armaan off of raghav.. he pushes her off and runs to a room in the house to find something to hit raghav with, he gets a gun, and thinks to himself that he must end this once and for all... he runs towards raghav with the gun in his hand, but before he could fire raghav grabs his hand and they wrestle again... the gun disappears from jassi's view, and a shot fired between the two....

 

 

and the silent night is peirced with jassi's horrifiying shreeek

"AAAAARRMMMAAAAAN!!!!!!!!"

 

 

 

 

 

both armaan and raghav are shocked, both of them are alright, then their sigh of content turns to horror when they realise that the bullet could have hit jassi, they both turn to see jassi kneeling down on the ground and race towards her, both regreting what they did.

Armaan- jassi i'm so sorry... i'm so...

he looks at jassi, who has blood all over her hands,  she looks up at him and says "ye tumne kya kar liya armaan!" and starts sobbing. Armaan's eyes start moving away from jassi and towards the limp body on the ground, as he moves around her he sees his entire life flashing before his eyes, because the person he shot is none other than mallika. Armaan kneels down beside her, tears streaming down his face...

Armaan- mallikaa.... nahin tum teek hojaogi, mein doctor ko bulata hu..

Mallika grabs his hand, she can barely speak.

Mallika- armaan mere bachne se zaayda zaruri ye hai jo baat mein tumhe baatane wali hu. Tumne saach kahata armaan, mein kabhi jassi nahin bansakti, mein jassi ke jitna tumse pyar bhi nahin karsakti (jassi looks away, mallika takes her hand up to jassi's face and turns it to face her), tum hamesha armaan se saacha pyar karti thi jassi, meine hi tumhe galat samja, aur shayad yehi meri saaza hai do pyar karne wale ko alag karne ka.. mein tum dono se kuch kehna chahati hu.Cry

Mallika tells armaan jassi and raghav what actually happened between them, why armaan married mallika in the first place, how she tricked jassi into believeing that armaan was the one responsible for her ending up in jail. She tells them how she was responsible for everything...

BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMMMMM!!!!

next scene is with mallika at the hospital, dying. The police come in and ask her for a statement, and she replies that she shot herself trying to suicide. Aryan comes in and asks her why she did that and that she could have inprisoned jassi for the final time and for life. He leaves. Armaan stands over Mallika's bed crying...

Mallika- kyun rorahe ho armaan? tum hamesha kush raho,  jassi ke saath

 

next part will be posted soon!!!

 

 

 

 

 

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wow usachick821 tht was soooo cool! I love ur fic!! please continue soooon!!!
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That was awesome awesome awesome Roshni!!! Wah! Kya ending likhi tumne yaar!! Great!! Please continue hon! Clap

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wow!! very nice! please cont soon!! Big smileClap 

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Very well entertained I am impressed.

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woww how did i miss reading this
i think this is the way it shud be. the real ending
tumbo dumbo katyal u shud read this
this is honestly too good

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