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Posted: 22 July 2009 at 9:59am | IP Logged

hey nice part. even i end up running every thursday to first hour bcoz of some mam but other days it's k i get attendance even if i'm late.

do continue.
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Posted: 22 July 2009 at 10:13am | IP Logged
Hi how r u.
nice update.loved it v much.wait 4 the next update asap.
dont worry write how u want ok wid the mistakes.
thanks 4 the pm.
luv
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Posted: 22 July 2009 at 10:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by maha_k

Originally posted by eternal.beauty

nyc character sketch but i m confused tht heer is engagaed to her cousin, hwcum, i mn he is her bro.................

anyways good work on character sketches
dear he is not her brother he is son of his mama ji you many time many time in this type of cases parents engaged their childerens in childhood so heer is engaged with him
 
i'm not sure whether it happens in north but in south it does happen often.
 

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Posted: 22 July 2009 at 11:35am | IP Logged

thanks for your repliedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

inshaALLAH i will update soon
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Posted: 22 July 2009 at 1:07pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by maha_k

Originally posted by eternal.beauty

nyc character sketch but i m confused tht heer is engagaed to her cousin, hwcum, i mn he is her bro.................

anyways good work on character sketches
dear he is not her brother he is son of his mama ji you many time many time in this type of cases parents engaged their childerens in childhood so heer is engaged with him
 
but he is cousin naa
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Posted: 22 July 2009 at 11:27pm | IP Logged
really good update can u plz pm me cause i get busy and cant come on then i have to look for ffs

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Posted: 23 July 2009 at 1:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by eternal.beauty

Originally posted by maha_k

Originally posted by eternal.beauty

nyc character sketch but i m confused tht heer is engagaed to her cousin, hwcum, i mn he is her bro.................

anyways good work on character sketches
dear he is not her brother he is son of his mama ji you many time many time in this type of cases parents engaged their childerens in childhood so heer is engaged with him
 
but he is cousin naa
yes he is csn but you will see something interesting in next part


Edited by maha_k - 23 July 2009 at 6:00am
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Posted: 23 July 2009 at 5:19am | IP Logged
part 2

Dekh k nhi chal skty sb books gra din

Sorry Miss rahul apologize and sit down to help her

No mr its not your mistake she stop him.

Prem was completely ignoring him

Ye in ki galti hy

What meri

Mam you were coming with speed of an express Prem reply in angry voice

No you were talking with your friend and bump with me

Listen miss accept your fault

No I am not at fault you are at mistake heer also become angry

Stop it heer leave it meher intrpt and plz mr you also leave this

Chalo yahan sy Heer ,meher say to heer

Main isi lye larkyo ko mon nhi lgata

Heer hear this and try to turn but meher stop her

Someone put his hand on prem shoulder

Leave it prem I know her boht attitude hy is main ye middleclass girls hoti hi aisi hain

Shutup  arjun, Rahul stop him

We are not discussing any class here Rahul replied while prem stand silent.he was still watching the way where she goes.

************

Noise was coming from kitchen

What's happening there she think and asked loudly

Who is in kitchen?

Main hon. dadi someone replies

What are you doing in kitchen?

Making breakfast

What? she enter in kitchen oh my god

What the hell you are doing here.

Sorry dadi I am trying to make prathas   he reply

Choro isy denu kaka kr lain gy tm niklo yahan sy

Dadi say with a smiley face he leave kitchen as dadi start calling denu kaka

At dining table

Ok now tell me who gave you this idea of cooking dadi asked

No one I was just trying to help denu kaka preet replies

Ok but after breakfast plz call prem I know he will never listen anyone except you.

Ok I will preet reply.

************

Ramu was busy in kitchen when he hear phone bell

Hello

Hello ramu where is prem bhaya I want to talk with him

Preet bhaya he never listen anyone today when doctor tell him to take rest he is in collage.

What?

Ok I will call him on his personal cell.

Bye

Preet dial prem's cell number

Hello, prem recive the call

Hello, bhaya  where are you now.

At home prem reply. dont lie bhaya I know you are in collage.

Preet wo prem try to say something but preet stop him,

No bhaya I don't want any explanation doctor said you to take rest atleast on more week but you, you never listen anyone,

Dadi ma was so worry about you and me also but you never care anyone

No preet aisi bat nhi hy prem reply

No bhaya I can understand.prem try to say something but preet cut the line.

**************

What happened Rahul asked

Today is the worst day of my life prem reply

1st Natasha then another stupid girl and now preet oh god whats happening to me today

I know you don't like girls but also You never behave someone like this harsh way then why you did this to her? Rahul asked

She was become angry and looking interesting with hyper face

Prem reply with a smiley face.

What? Rahul was shocked

You are talking about a girl with a smiley face

Prem laugh on his expression

************

main soch rha hon k heer or raj ki shadi kr don
han main bhi yehi soch rhi thi mami ji reply
hmari apni to koi aolad hy nhi aaj bhi sochta hon shayed rb ny hmain isi lye nhi di k hmain in jesy bchy deny thy mujhy aj bhi wo din yad hy jb main ny raj ko sarak k kinary  roty dekha tha or main usy ghr ly aya tha
mama ji say to teji maan
han yad hy mjhy or aj tk us ny kbhi aisa mhsos nhi hony diya k wo hmari apni aulad nhi hy.han hm boht khush naseeb hain.
mean time someone enter in house
Hi mama ji heer return and see mama ji siting in waranda kesy hain aap she asked and hug him

Bhter hon putr he reply

Aa gai beta mon dho ly main khana lgati hon

Ji mami

Beta hum soch rahy hain k ab teri or raj ki shadi kr dain after lunch mami ji tell heer

But mami ji itni jldi meri prhai

Pr putr to prhti rhna hum tjhy prhai sy to nhi rok rhy na

Ji mami jesy aap ki marzi she reply with shy face

***********

Next day

Meher I have a news for you heer tell her with shy face

What meher asked

Mama ji is planning my marriage

What but what about your study meher asked

I will continue this after my marriage but I am so happy she hug meher.

But she didn't know that someone watching her every expression and move?????

Hi all

This is 2nd part of my ff

Plzzz read and comment

thanks



Edited by maha_k - 23 July 2009 at 5:54am

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