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Na Jaane Mere Dil Ko Kya Ho Gaya: A Rahul and Muskaan Fan Fiction
This fanfic is dedicated to Anu and Vikshu, who helped and pushed me to write this story on rahul and muskaan,
guys, I'm here starting a new fanfic on my favorite jodi, Rahul and
Muskaan. This is something different then what we see on Dill Mill
Gayye, and I hope you guys like it! Well, this story takes place in a
normal high school in America. They are all in 11th grade. This is from
Muskaan's point of view.
Rahul- popular, a ladies
man, always looking for fun, cares about school, but not as much as
others, he can be sensitive and caring but rarely because his friend's
influence. The girls always fall for his charm, yet he could care less
because they are just his "past-time."
Muskaan-a sweet girl, yet
is very outspoken, doesn't let anyone tell her what to do, independent,
smart, always like to succeed in everything. Wants a guy she can count
on, but just hasn't found the right one.
best friend, understands her very well, she is also very smart,
sincere, lovable. She stands up foor hr friends and is very dedicated.
Rahul's best friend, he understands Rahul's feeling. He is popular but
his popularity doesn't really go to his head. He is caring, and very
handsome and knows what right or wrong.
Atul- Muskaan's friend.
He is very sweet and caring. He is not like most of the guys ins
school. He is different. He is very nice and smart and his friends are
always there to support him as he is there to support them.
Anjali- Popular, pretty, very snotty, feels like she is superior to everyone. Rahul's friend.
won't believe what happened in school today. Today, was my first day of
school. Everything was going fine. I mean, Ridzie is in my history and
computer class while Atul is in my spanish and Math class. But, the
good part is that we all are together in lunch. Lunch wasn't bad, we
mostly talked about the classes we had and made fun of the teachers. The day went by so fast that i was already going to my last class
of the day: Computers. At first, i didn't think i would have trouble in
computers. It seemed fairly easy. But, who knew that as soon as i
entered the classroom, i would be faced with a problem. Rahul. He's so
stupid, selfish and a jerk. Okay, before i start rambling on about how
much i hate him let me just tell you what happened.
to Computer Class with Ms. Rose because i didn't want to be late and
make a bad impression of myself. Scurrying quickly into the classroom,
I saw students gathered around the bulletin board where the seating
chart was posted. I tried making my way through all the students and i
"Ridzie, Hi, i hope we sit next to each other."
I was so worried. I didn't want to sit next to anyone besides Ridz. I
prayed at the very moment that god would listen to me and place me next
"Yeah, i hope so(smiling) But, I'm sure everything will be okay even if we can't sit next to each other ." Ridz smiled, putting her hand on my shoulder.
"I don't think i can sit next to any of these kids.(i said making a
face that showed disgust) They think so much of themselves. They are so
unappealing to sit next to each other." ( I said pointing to the other
students talking and being rowdy. They all were so different then me
and Ridz. There opinions and they way they talked and just everything
was so different that it felt like we wouldn't be able to fit in this
"Damn, i have to sit next to a girl name Muskaan," Rahul said loudly as he walked away from the board.
I was so shocked that he said that. I didn't even know him. I mean, yes
i saw him around in school but we never talked, we never saw each
other. So without even knowing me, how could he say that ?
"What's his problem," i said making a face at Rahul. "I don't even know him."
worry Muskaan, you know that Rahul is like that. Too cool for people
like us. You just ignore him. Okay?" Ridzie said reassuringly, smiling.
I smiled back at Ridzie. She always knew what to say to make me feel better. She is truly my best friend, my sister.
I walked over to the seating chart and saw that yes, Rahul was right, I did have to sit next to him.
who do you have to sit next to? Because if i have to sit next to Rahul
then that means we aren't sitting together." Ridz shrugged her shoulders
and went to the bulletin board. Her smile soon vanished and became a
"What happenned Ridz?" i asked wondering why she seemed upset.
"I have to sit next to Armaan," Ridz said sadly looking at the floor.
Its okay. Atleast you don't have to sit next to Rahul, you know that
Armaan is much nicer." i smiled trying to comfort Ridz..Ridz nodded and
smiled and walked to her seat.
I turned around and saw Rahul
looking at me. I remembered what he said to me and i felt anger again.
I didn't want him to feel good about what he said. So, i glanced at the
bulletin board and to my best attempt said "shit" and walked away, not
even looking at him. I know. Pathetic. But, i couldn't think of
anything besides that. I was so angry yet i didn't want him to know.
I sat down in my seat mad. I really didn't
want to sit next to Rahul. I felt like a little baby, whining like
this, but really it was frustrating to sit next to somebody so arrogant
as him. Thinking of the devil, he came and plumped himself onto his
seat. He looked around and then started talking to Armaan, who sat just
a few seats down. Rahul, was so annoying, he started talking really
loud to Armaan and he kept laughing on god knows what? I found it completely useless to pay attention. I turned around to Ridz and
mouthed pouting, "Riddhi,," pointing to Rahul to show her the amount of
disgust i felt towards him.
"I know," she mouthed pointing to
Armaan who was doing the same. But then she looked back at me, blinked
and smiled. "It will be okay."
"Argh! " I said twisting myself in my chair looking up to the ceiling..
"Rabbaji, what did you do, instead of placing me next to Riddhima, you
put me next to this bandar. How will i survive this computer class
sitting next to Rahul?" I kept whining until, Rahul turned around and
looked at me. I stopped talking and just tried to ignore him.
He looked at me from head to toe and then said, "Hi, I'm Rahul. (extending his hand forward for me to shake)
i said angrily, not even looking at his face. I even ignored shaking
his hand. I didn't feel it was necessary for me to shake a person's
hand who insults me. I just looked away and started looking around at
Rahul took away his hand. He waited a few
seconds, before he started talking to me "Uh, I'm gonna get to know you
just because you don't want me to." Rahul just looked at me while i sat
there speechless. Why is he saying this? Is he trying to act nice or
what? This was very confusing.
I just looked toward Rahul trying
to get my face together and asked," Um..why do want to know me?"
At this point, i really didn't know what to say. I was just curious as
to why he said that to me. What could he want by knowing me?
leaned towards me. I found this very uncomfortable. I even made it
obvious by leaning away from him. But, he just kept coming closer until
i couldn't leaned back anymore. He then just looked at me and
spoke,"Because you said shit when you saw that you had to sit next to
me." That why he wants to know me? Because i said shit?
I was unable
to say anything. I tried to find words to say to him but nothing i
said made sense. I guess i was still shocked and surprised because i
kept rambling words like," Um...i didn't..i mean..uh..i.."
Rahul then cut me off and coldly told me," Yeah Okay, whatever." Then, he turned around and started talking to Armaan again.
rest of the class, I didn't look at him nor did he look at me. I sat
there quiet just waiting to get out. I couldn't stand Rahul before and
now there is no way i can stand Rahul sitting next to me for the next
couple of months. Oh Diary, what will i do?
Well, guys that the
beginning of my story. This is my first story so please do comment. Criticism and suggestions are welcomed. I hope you guys like it. =]
Part 1/ Intro- Page 1
Part 2- Page 4
Part 3- Page 7
Part 4- Page 10
Part 5- Page 15
Part 6- Page 17
Part 7- Page 22
Edited by MuskaanGarewal1 - 05 November 2009 at 6:09pm
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