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hey dear just now read all the parts... can you pm me when you update your ff........

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Wow ....a Prida FF ....luv it ...Clap
Add me too in ur Pm list ....
Continue soon ....

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Damini's eyes twitch as the fresh rays of the sun gently touches her, informing her that a brand new day has started & is waiting for her. She starts remembering some of the events that happened last night in small flashes. A small smile forms on her lips & she inhales his scent trying to capture it into her memory for whenever she'll need it. She stops as she remembers what she's doing. She looks up at the angelic face that is still sleeping & starts questioning herself. Instantly she gets up causing him to wake up as well from the sudden movement. Damini walks over to the bed while he looks at her surprised & confused as he doesn't know what happened last night. He looks down at the blanket that was covering him than at her. He gets up & goes to the bathroom to freshen up without saying anything to Damini. Damini looks at him quite surprised not knowing why. She remembers how sweetly he talked to her yesterday although he only spoke a few words. She goes over to the drawer & sits down & looks at herself take off the jewellery.

"Damini.."

She looks into the mirror & sees herself talking & is shocked.

"Tumhe kya hoga? Tum... Prithvi ke baare mein soch rayi ho. Tum toh Arjun se pyar karti ho na... toh phir.. yeh Prithvi kaha se aa gaya. Maana ke tumne usse shaadi ki hai, par tum iss shaadi ko nahi manti na.. then? Meri baat mano aur talak lelo usse. Kuch bhi karo, koi bhi bahana maro par talak dedo usse. Aur vaise bhi ab Prithvi bhi toh sab kuch janta hai na.. toh phir. There is no way that he can stop you. Agar koi pooche toh phir tum kehe dena ki Prithvi ko pehle se sab kuch maloom tha. Aur vaise bhi agar Prithvi ne apna moon khol hi diya, toh phir woh tumara kuch ni bigad sakte, kyun ki Damini ko Arjun se koi alag nayi kar sakta. Right?"
 
Damini just looks at herself in the mirror disgusted.
 
"Wrong. I mean, mujhe abhi tak yeh nayi maloom ki Prithvi ne meri sari baate suni hai bhi ya nahi. Aur.. aur meine abhi tak Arjun ko dekha bhi nayi. Aditya ko koi galat fami bhi toh ho sakti hai."
"Tum Prithvi ki taraf dari kyun kari ho? Mujhe toh laga tha ki tumhe Arjun ke paas jaana hai."
"Jaana hai. Par sab dil todh kar nayi. Prithvi ke saath kayi zindagi judi huye hai, aur mein nayi chati ki unn mein se kissi ki bhi nazar humare rishte par aiye. Tumhe kya lagta hai, jab unne maloom hoga ke mein Prithvi se nayi, Arjun se pyar karti, tab woh taali mar kar, khushi khushi de denge? Nahi! Woh gali denge. Dakhe mar mar kar, humhe iss ghar se nikalenge aur humare rishte ko nazar bhi laga denge aur mein yeh nayi chati. So please. Bhagwan ke liye chali jao yaha se."
Damini folds her hand facing the mirror & faces her head down with her eyes closed.
 
"Aap kisse baate kari hai?"
 
She looks towards where the voice came from & sees Prithvi standing there with a towel on his shoulders.
 
"Woh mein..."
 
She looks back at the mirror & sees her confused reflection in it. She looks back at Prithvi.

"Woh mein..."
"Agar aap ko mujh se baat karne mein mushkil hori hai, toh phir koi baat nayi. Aap kudh se baate kar sakti hai, par zaara dyan rakiye ga ki koi aur aap ko na dekh le. Varna woh samaje ge aap..."

He opens his closet & starts taking out the clothes that he's going to be wearing for today. He goes into the bathroom & changes while Damini finishes taking off her jewellery & takes out her clothes for the day. Prithvi comes out & starts doing some finishing touches on himself. Damini looks at him perplexed because even she knows that he doesn't have to get that ready for the bagh phere rasam.
 
"Aap kahin jaa rahe hai."
"Ha. Office."
"Par aaj toh bagh phere ki rasam hai."
"Ha, par mein jaa nayi paonga. Shaadi ke chakar mein, office ka kaam adhura par gaya. Usse katam karna hoga."
 
Damini tries to say something but gets interrupted.
 
"Vaise bhi, aap ko meri zaroorat thodi na hai. Aap apne maayke chali hai. Aap waha yaha se kayi khush hongi."
 
Damini feels a little hurt at his words.

"Par waha sab..."
"Unhe meine kal hi baata diya tha. Aap jaldi tyar ho jaye. Jaate waqt chod jaonga phir aate waqt le aaonga."
"Iss hisaab se aap mere paati kam aur driver zyada lago ge."
"Aur mere hisaab se mein aap ka paati kam aur ajnabee zyada lagra hoon."
 
He starts heading for the door while Damini looks at him with hurtful eyes. He stops just before leaving.
 
"Agar aap ko meri kissi bhi baat ka boora laga, toh maafi chata hoon. Par sach toh yehi hai, ki aap ab bhi Arjun se pyaar karti hai. Aur mera yakeen maniye, mein aap dono ke beech nayi aaonga. Balke mein kudh Arjun ko dhoond ne ki aap ki madat karonga."
 
He looks back at her from the corner of his eyes while Damini looks at him appalled to hear that he will actually help his wife get back together with her lover.

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wow....first of all, thanks for making this part longer than the rest. you did an awesome job writing this part but i must admit, though short, the last part was much better...lols...i guess its b/c of the cutely written romantic scene between prida.
 
anwyays, cant wait till you post the next part. i hope its longer...keep up the good work.
 
keep writing!

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Posted: 12 September 2009 at 2:06am | IP Logged
thanks for the pm

wow pri is such a sweetheart. and damini is totally confused about herself, she doesn't what she wants.hope she comes out of her confusions soon and forget all about arjun.

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Posted: 12 September 2009 at 2:28am | IP Logged
Thanx 4 the PM dear...

Just luved it... It waz awesum, very well written... Prithvi sounded so sweet..
Eagerly w8ing 4 the next part...

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Posted: 12 September 2009 at 3:57am | IP Logged
hi
thanks 4 pm good job ClapClap

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