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MJHT FF (SG_MN): Tere Liye- 18/05/10- pg81 PMs L (Page 85)

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Posted: 29 May 2010 at 6:05am | IP Logged
Ohhh awesome part---
Loved the SaJan part....And Gunjan looking different....
Want too read more.....
Cont soon....
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Posted: 29 May 2010 at 6:55am | IP Logged
thanks 4 the beatiful update
loved the awesome scences with mayur and sajan
cant believe dia fell
con soon
thanks the pm
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Posted: 29 May 2010 at 7:50am | IP Logged
Awesome update Nadz
loved the sajan part
continue soon
thanks for the pm



Edited by -Natasha- - 30 May 2010 at 7:50am
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Posted: 29 May 2010 at 11:47am | IP Logged

Hey Nadz,

I am not ur PM list but want to be this is an amazing FF,i loved CS it is very nice

Each char is in himself only poor gunji i am really worried for her

Sorry i won't be able to reply individually but will comment all together in this reply

 

Part 1 :

I loved this entire epi,Gunjan is too sad and i just hope soon she ll find a way to smile

Mayank wow champ as always and he loves his mom

Nupur bachhe ke sath ladti hai so bad

Samrat's dai is too good she knows his in and out

 

Part 2

This kamla is so bad but thank god gunji is not gungi like the MJHT type,she believes in kismet thats nice.

Nupur OMG wo hamesha hoshiyar bakara search karti hai not hardworker

Samart paper chor and Mayank multi talented wow [I love mayu and Sammy too]

OMG gunjan ki halat kitni kharab hai yaar her mom is so bad and dia i feel like slapping her tightly

Mayu is scared of going ludhiyana

He he he

Wow gunjan ka ye avatar ws too good she did tit for tat

And i loved it ,i just wanna see that kamala's face

Sammy benji ki ko apne stah ghasit raha hai

 

Part 3

What is this Sammy and shhhhhheeeeeeeeeeeennnnnnnnnnaaaaaaaaaaa nahi

MAYUR met wow and song is too good

SAJAN in airport aur Gunjan" Airport aapke baap ka" hey bhagwan she is too rude

Misunderstanding is too good he he he

Gol gappe me MAYANK ke kan se dhua was good ,

Part 4

Wow mayor are talking about love shove and Nupur does not believe in love

I loved Mayank dreaming

Gunjan – teekhi mirchi that was nice and still she thinks him driver

Nupur kaise khan eke piche padi rahti hai he he he

And mayu obeying her like the kid or ideal Bf

Part 5

Mayank ke dreams bhi kafi wild types hai

SAJAN's eye lock

Muskan and Rahul cool

Kya name the Mayank aur nupur ke he he he

Part 6

Nupur ki lisy to kafi badi hai aur wo bhi roommate ke liye but i liked her decision staying in hostel

Nupur Mayank ko golu kah rahi hai

Aur samrat is not clear about uday gunjan relation

Part 7

Gunur meeting was good

SAJAN proj partner

MAYUR hug

GNUR roommate

This update was too good

Part 8

All are realizing about the love

Good one

Part 9

Mayank playing for nupur wow and he won also

Gunjan hugging Sammy and crying but why is it so?

Great update

Part 10 and 11

Both the parts are awesome

Gunjan realising some thing for samrat he is telling same thing to her

Mayank and nupur wow ,nupur is feeling some strange feelings I am just loving it

Looking for confession

Part 12

Mayank confessed and nupur confused

SAJAN atleast are together and i loved his worries for gunjan

Loved the update

Part 13

Wow till now this was the best SAJAN had cute moments ,Sammy calling her PARI

Mayank how many times confession bechara and confused nupur

Song and emotions were going very well

Loved it

Part 14

Wow rain dance was amazing

Thank god at last girls are feeling something for poor guys

I am dying for their date now

Part 15

Gunur became sister

Best thing mayu getting ready and that to 2 hours in bathroom

Kisi aur ko itna ready hote nahi dekha aajkal

Too good

Part 16

At last nupur confessed wow

And gunjan said that hurt samrat but thank god all cleared soon

I loved this part to the core

Part 17

Wow this part was too good

Gunjan feel J because Sammy learnt the dance with his GF

And nupsi is all expert in the dance

Last was too good both declared as Winner

Song was perfect

Now i am looking fwd for some romantic scenes so please update soon

 

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Posted: 29 May 2010 at 1:06pm | IP Logged
Gr8 part Nadz
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Posted: 29 May 2010 at 2:20pm | IP Logged
cont soon great part
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Posted: 30 May 2010 at 3:17am | IP Logged
heyyy dear,
nice part
thanks for PM.
continue soon

love
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Posted: 30 May 2010 at 5:58am | IP Logged

Hey Nadia! Hugi finally came around to reading ur FF...and believe me when i say this...ur FF is MAGICAL! I had lots of fun reading the character sketches and the intros of all the characters...but yeh kya? it takes me like 20 mins just to read one update and i got school in the middle too so i've decided that i'll read one part every day to get my daily does of another AWESOME version of MJHT

LOL i luvv luvv luvv the gang bonding! they're all so sweet and i'm really enjoying the POVs of all the characters! ESPECIALLY Gunjan!!!! I'm so in luvv with this Gunjan...i've always felt that the Gunjan in the show required a lil bit of confidence and self-esteem and i can finally see some of that growth in her character happening now! BUT in ur FF..i'm in LUVV with this Gunjan..you've presented her POV sensitively...she's a strong independant individual, she's nice and obedient but she won't take any cr** from her evil step-mother and Dia...luvv this Gunjan
 
Not to mention the beautiful bond of Nupur-Muskaan-Bebe, Rahul-Mayank-Samrat and Pari-Rajkumar
 
LOL i noticed a few filmy shilmy lines in ur fic..."meri to death hi hogayi" (from a serial>?) and 'by god ki kasam' and so much more filmy shilmy baatein...loving the bollywood tadka..just makes it so much funn to read
 
also gotta mention the brilliant use of Punjabi in ur characters profusely Rahul, Nupur and Muskaan- they're a riot!
 
i know there's lots more fun, comedy and laughter in store for me as a reader and i shall get back to you by the time i catch up to where you are currently
 
I've only read parts one and two and i'll get around to reading the rest of it by the end of the week- cheers till then! keep writing and CONCENTRATE on ur studies babe..go make us proud!
 
Can't wait for the first mulaqat of Pari-Rajkumar and my fav couple Mayur (who may be coming to an end in the show Cry)

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