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Posted: 01 August 2009 at 4:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Mahak Sinha

Ab jaa k maine first part padha aap ki fic ka madam. It was excellent sab k character acche hain n i like the most relation b/w Gunjan n Sammy.
continue soon darls.


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Posted: 01 August 2009 at 4:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by komal793

heyyy
gr8 part.
continue soon.
thnx for the pm.
 
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Posted: 01 August 2009 at 4:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by farrda01

its great plz do pm me and update soon thanksss


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Posted: 01 August 2009 at 4:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Radhika Shah

Great part!!!
great promo!!
Thanks for the PM...


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Posted: 01 August 2009 at 4:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ananya_s

AWESOME!!!!!!!....i loved d prt soooo much yaar.....tnx alot fr d pm........do continue .....

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Originally posted by sosweetsumi

lovely one
do continue dear
bye sumi


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Originally posted by Arjun_mayank

heyyyyy,
 
nice promo, please update soon...
pl PM mi... cann't wait...
 


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Posted: 01 August 2009 at 4:32am | IP Logged
Hey everyone...

I'm soo sorry for the delay but i had this Network problem which just got solved yesterday so finally i can Update and since IF has sorted out the multiple PM system it's gonna be so much easier to PM everyone, I hope you like the next part:


PART 2


Samarpur:

30th November 2008;

Next morning gunjan wakes up… has a shower gets dressed and leaves her room with her hand bag…

"uth gayi maharani??" kamla taunts her, she gives her a stern look "yaad hai aaj taarik kya hai??" she asks her and gunjan gets shocked, she looks up at her… surprised.

"yun to zabaan kenchi ki tarhan chalati hai aura b mun band ho gaya? Jaanti hoon jaanti hoon… aakhri taarik ko to teri bolti band hi ho jaati hai" she taunts and gunjan realizes what she was talking about, she gives her a angry look..

"bhuli nahi hoon… aur bhool bhi jaati to aap thori na bhulti… paise ki itni bhuk jo hai" she tells her with a smirk… kamla looks at her angrily and was about to open her mouth but gunjan interrupts "aaj aapke taane sunne ka mann nahi hai… aur waise bhi mujhe late ho rahi hai… " she says and walks out…

she enters the call center and greets everyone with a fake smile, she enters her section which has two joined desks, her neighbour was Bubbly… she was looking in the small mirror and putting lipstick… gunjan nodds her head "yahan log sirf humaari awaaz sunte hain… koi tumhe dekhne nahi waala" she says and bubbly looks at her and smiles "gunjan tu na… patanahi kiss mithi se bani hai… na koi shok… na pasand, na boyfriend, aur na pyar… you need to get a life yaar" she says and gunjan gives her a false smile.

"pyar… bubbly tu jaanti bhi hai ke pyar kya hai?" she asks and bubbly looks confused…

"accha chadh… mainu nahi sunna tera pyar ka encyclopedia… kaam kartein hain… hun" she says and gunjan smiles… they get back to work.

Few minutes later "haaye gunjan, aaj to tera pehla exam hai na?" bubbly asks and gunjan smiles.

"haan…" still looking at her computer.

"to tujhe koi tension nahi hai?" bubbly asks surprised.

"bubbly… maine parahi ki hai, bohot acche se ki hai aur agar meri kismet mein pass hona likha hai to ho jaoongi…" she tells her!

**********

Ludhiana…

Nupur is sitting with 7-8 girls in the college canteen.

"mainu to bohot tension ho rahi hai, by god ki kasam  exam ka waqt aata hai to mere to haath paon dhile ho jaate hain… iss baar agar main fail hui to meri to death hi ho jayegi… tu to jaanti hai na, mera sapna adhoora reh jaayega, aur iss baar to lucky bhi nahi hai" she moans.

"nupur tu tension kyun le rahi hai?? Ab bhi iss collage mein tere bohot chahne waale hain" radica links and tells her, she blushes.

"so to hai… lekin phir bhi yaar, koi hushiyar bakra dhoondna hoga! Socho na" she tells the rest of them. She looks around tensed and sees happy singh, her smile comes on her face.

"haaye… chado tum sabse kuch nahi hoga… mainu to solution milgaya" she winks at them and they all smile and nodd there heads.

She goes to the geekish guy… "haaye main marjaawan" she starts acting like shes drowning with tension "ab mera kya hoga babaji??? Babaji kuch karo na… meri madad karo na" she kinda shouts to get his attention… he sees her and gets tensed.

"arre nupurji kya baat hai?? Aap theekh to hai na?" he asks her worried and she smirks then lie lie starts sobbing…

"Happy ji…." She holds his hands and he gets stunned "happyji, aapto jaante hi hai na ke meri tabiyat kitni kharab thi?" she lies and he looks confused.

"nahi to… hume to nahi pata… kya hua?? Aap theekh to hai na… a…" he starts blabbering and she gets annoyed.

"Happyji" she says gritting her teeth "chalo main point pe hi aa jaati hoon… kal exam hain aur hum parayi nahi kar paye, itne bhukhar mein insaan pare to kaise?" she lies and he looks concerned.

"nupurji aap tension matlo, hum aapko parayenge, humare notes ke saath" he says and she gets irritated and gets up.

"hum aapko apni pareshaani bata reahen hain aur aapko mazaak sujh raha hai?" she says annoyed and he gets worried and confused.

"lekin humne to koi mazaak nahi kiya" he says and she holds her head.

She goes to him and holds his shoulder and makes him sit, he gets lost in her beuty "happyji, aap na bohot bhole ho, bhala ek din mein koi parayi kar sakhta hai??? Nahi na? agar aap humaari madad sachme karna chahte hain to sirf ek hi raasta hai" she says in a filmi manner and he looks at her "cheating" she completes and he looks shocked.

"NAHIIIII" he says and she makes a face.

"ab kya hua?" she asks getting back to herself.

"nupurji aap cheating kaise kar sakhti hain??" he says.

"bas ab yehi raasta bacha hai, aap ek abla naari ki madad karna chahte hai to karsakhte hain, aur agar nahi to" she starts getting filmi…

"nahi…." He says and she twitches her nose.

"ab kya hua?" she asks.

"nahi, Hum aapki madad karenge… aapko kuch nahi hoga" he says and she smirks.

"good… to kal mere aage bhetna, aur acche se answers likhna, mujhe gandi handwriting parne ki aadat nahi" she orders and he nodds in a yes… "thank you happyji" she moves her hand on his face and he gets excited.

"by god… kya banda hai…" she thinks annoyed.

***********

Mumbai

"sammy iss baar bhi exam papers chori kiye?" mayank asks him nodding his head…

"Oh Mr. genius, Kaise ho?" he gets up and they hug…

"kya karein hum aapki tarhan multi talented nahi ho sakhte na… parayi basketball, girls… partying, sab saath nahi hote" sammy winks at him.

"good good… I hope iss baar paper hi badal jaaye" mayank tells him and sammy smirks.

"har saal ki tarhan aaj bhi teri wish puri nahi hogi bacha" sammy laughs and mayank again nodds his head and laughs.

"tu kabhi nahi sudhrega" he says and both leave for class.

************

Two weeks later exams are over and its vacation time, everyone is excited and leaving for holidays.

"hey mayank… watsup dude??" samrat calls mayank.

"hey dude… tujhe meri yaad kabse aane lagi??' mayank asks surprised.

"you know na… you are my true friend and jab ladkiyon se fursat milti hai so I call you" he laughs.

"waise kuch khaas wajah phone karne ki??"

"yups, Hum sab goa jaa rahe hain, wanna come along?? You know what goa means, hot babes and partying" he asks and mayank smiles.

"dude, tu to jaanta hai na, ke holiday ke waqt dad ko waqt milta hai humaare liye and every year hum saath jaate hain so this year we're going to Switzerland, tu goa aur birds enjoy kar hun" mayank says and sammy laughs.

"wo to main karoonga hi aur tu videshi babes enjoy kar… hmmm take care" he puts the phone down.

**************

Samarpur;

Dia and uday (dodo) had also come… Gunjan's life was becoming more miserable with Dia around.

"eh, main thak gayi hoon, mere liye paani lao" she says sitting on the sofa with her shopping bags… gunjan was busy setting the table for dinner, she looks at her angrily just then uday gets up "main le aata hoon dids" he says and gets up, dia looks at him angrily "maine kaha tum lao" she tells gunjan and uday sits back…

"sorry… maine sunna nahi…" gunjan says and walks away, dia looks at her angrily.

"kya kaha? Bloody …. Samajh ti kya ho apne aap ko?? Itne waqt se yahan nahi hoon to ash karne lagi? How dare you speak to me like that??" she says angrily shouting and kamla comes out.

"arre mera bacha kya hua?" she asks and dia makes a crying face.

"mom… maine to sirf isse paani maanga aur isne to mujhe kya kya sunadiya" she lies and her mother looks at gunjan angrily.

"kitne waqt se sazaa nahi mili na, isliye nakhre bargaye hain iss chori ke… chal aaj to teri kher nahi" she starts pulling gunjan by her hair, and the bowl of soup falls on her leg… burning her whole leg… she cries with pain while kamla pulls her with her hair and throws her…

"ab yeh soup kaun saaf karega??? Tera baap ya teri maa??? Chal jaldi saaf kar" she says burning her hand with the spoon… and gunjan cries with pain… she cleans up and sleeps hungry.

***********

After two weeks the sharmas are back… but they are planning to go somewhere else for the last few days.

Sharma Mansion;

"Mom maine kaha na, mujhe nahi jaana ludhiane…" mayank says annoyed.

"mayu ab zyaada nakhre mat kar, koi tujhe tractor pe bhitha ke kheti nahi karaane waala ke itna darr raha hai…" he's mother says annoyed packing his bag.

"koi bharosa nahi, wahan kuch bhi ho sakhta hai! Mamaji kuch bhi karsakhte hain, aur unki do betiyan to aur bhi do kadam aage hain" he says annoyed "yaad hai pichli baar kya kiya tha unhone?" he says and he's mother tries to block her laughter thinking of the incident, he shoots an angry glare at his mom.

"accha baba nahi hasti, lekin mayu tu uss waqt sirf dus saal ka tha, ab to mushtanda hogaya hai, ab thodi na koi teri pant utaar ke ghadhe pe bhitha ke saare ludhiane ki ser karayega" he's mother says and starts laughing again and Rahul joins in this time… Mayank gives both of them angry glares.

"aur nahi to kya, ab thodi na koi tere kapron ko gobar mein doboyega" Rahul adds and mayu looks at him angrily.

"haan aur wo waala yaad hai jab teri shirt mein chipkali dal di thi unki beti ne" Rahul says.

"ab to tu gaya beta" mayank starts running behind him while Rahul keeps turning and teasing him.

"aur wo bhes waala kissa… yaad hai red shirt" his mother and Rahul laugh… "aur jab tujhe bhes pe bhitha ke bhes ko laal mirch daldi thi… haaye by god ki kasam tab to mazaa hi kuch aur tha" Rahul laughs and runs around, mayu is so angry that he could kill him now… those girls had troubled him so much when they were little. Finally he catches Rahul and beats him up.

**********

Ludhiana

"By god tu na bara kaam ka banda hai…" nupur tells happy and he smiles.

"haaye kya marks laaya hai… wah!" she says laughing at her results.

"aap khush ho nupurji??" he asks and she smiles.

"bohot khush hoon, ab main Mumbai jaa sagoongi… Oye mainu to bhangra karne ka mann kar raha hai," he smiles at her then gets worried.

"aap Mumbai jaa rahe ho??" he asks disappointed.

"hornahi to ki?? Mainu to bas Mumbai hi jaana hai, haaye wahan pohonch ke kya karoongi maaloom nahi lekin… mast life hogi wahan…" she gets all dreamy.

"phir aap mujhe bhool jayengi??" he asks and she makes a annoyed face.

"dekho happy singhji, humaare beech… na kuch nahi hai, wo to bas aapne meri help ki uske waste thank you… hogaya ji" she says and he looks at her sadly.

"Yeh aap kya keh rahi hain??? Hum to aapse pyar karne lage the aur aap hain ki" he says sadly and she holds her head.

"wo to ludhiane da har ladka karta hai, ab sabse to rishtey banati nahi phiroongi na??? ab aap mainu pareshaan karna band karo aur jaao" she says annoyed and he cries and leaves.

"nupur… tu aisa kyun karti hai??" muski asks her after happy leaves…

"oye ab maine kya kiya??? Marks sharks dekhen hain… tu behosh hi hojaayegi" she says confidently and muski nodds her head.

"uss bechaarie ke dil mein apne pyar ki ghanti baja ke usse chordegi… Nupur tujhe logon ka dil dukhaana accha lagta hai kya??" she asks annoyed and looks away.

"oye ab usne apne dil mein bell rakhi hai to main ki karan??? Meri galati thodi na hai! Main to bas… apna sapna poora karna chahti hoon, jo main karke rahoongi" she says and leaves, muski just looks at her and nodds her head.

***********

Mayank, Rahul and there parents have arrived ludhiana… Mayank is fuming with anger and rahul keeps putting jale pe namak…

Nupur is chatting with her friends, moving her hands (like she does) and walking on the pathway, she's looking beautiful in a maroon chudidar, her hair plaited and kept in front, a small lat was flying around because of the wind, while she was laughing and talking, Mayank sees her and he's eyes are glued on her… he keeps staring at her till shes out of sight… he smiles at himself… "He's love at first sight philosophy was going to come true here?? Was this the reason he was forced to come??? A sign from god??" he looks up with a smile "my destiny… hmmm ab samjha… Thank you god… iss destiny ko to dhoondh kar rahoonga" he smiles and Rahul looks at him strangely.

He taps his shoulder and mayank turns with a smile, "kya baat hai bhai??? Abhi to bohot gusse mein the" Rahul asks with a raised brow and mayank blushes.

"tu nahi samjhega Rahul, aaj mujhe apni manzil dikhgayi…" he smiles and Rahul looks confused.

*************

"haaye aaj mela shela laga hai to mera to dil baag baag ho gaya… muskaan tujhe pata hai na, mainu mele da kina shok hai…" nupur continues her blabbering while choosing a outfit from her cupboard while muskaan holds her head…

"kuch samajh nahi aa raha… kya pehnun???" she continues while muskaan notices there friends outside the window, indicating her to hurry… muskaan says okay… and gets up…

"nupur… mele ke liye late ho raha hai, chalna jaldi chalte hain.

"haan haan, aayi" nupur says and rushes her choosing, changing and getting dressed with takes one hour. LOL

They finally leave happily for the mela… Nupur was wearing a sky blue patiala Punjabi outfit, her hair was two small plaits pulled behind and one long plait [like kareena's in JWM Nagara song]

*************

"mom hum yahan kyun ruk gaye???" mayank asks getting impatient.

"Mayu, jab ludhiane mein mela laga hota hai to sab mele mein hi hote hain, I'm sure tere mama aur nani yahan honge aur nahi bhi huye to itne saalon baad mela dekhne mein koi harj to nahi" she says with a smile and mayank gets a idea and starts smiling as well.

"wow uss ladki ko dhondne ka aur koi mauka nahi milega… wo yahin hogi! I'm sure! Thank you god" he looks up and says then starts walking, Rahul is still confused.

*************

While MayUr are about to meet in ludhiana in samarpur gunjan is in a different form.

[uday and dia are gone back to mumbai]

In the morning Gunjan gets up with a smirk, she dials a number "hello wakil uncle… kaise ho aap? Haan wo papers ke bare mein poochne keliye call kiya tha… tayar hain, great… haan please aap mujhe yahan ghar pe aadhe ghante mein miliye… Thank you so much uncle" she says and puts the phone down.

She gets her bag, she starts putting all her belongings in it… she puts her clothes, her photo with mom-dad… her ganpati idol "meri madad karna, aur papa ka khayal rakhna" she tells it before putting it in the bag… she finally zips it and goes out…

"oye maharani sahiba… kahan chali tu?? hein" kamla asks and gunjan looks at her annoyed.

"meri pyaari sauteli maa…" gunjan says to annoy kamla to the bits, she goes to her and smiles at her "main MUMBAI jaa rahi hoon" she says and kamla is shocked at first then laughs.

"Accha… wo kaise??? Chalke jaa rahi hai kya???" she asks and gunjan again smirks and mocks her.

"main aur chalke??? Bhushan Chaoudhury ki iklauti sagi beti aur chalke???" she mocks and kamla gets annoyed. "itna gussa sehat keliye accha nahi… main Mumbai plane se jaa rahi hoon… aur yeh poochne ki zaroorat nahi ke paise kahan se aaye… aa aa, maine abhi khatam nahi kiya, meri baat poori hojaye phir apna mun khol sakhti hain aap… okay, Mere papa ne jo jayidaat aapko handle karne keliye di thi wo ikkis [21yrs] saal ke baad meri hojaati hai, aur main jaise chaahoon usse istemaal karsakhti hoon…" she tells her with a smile and kamla gives her a evil smile.

"accha… tujhe kya lagta hai?? Hun?? Main itni bewakuf hoon kya??? Tujhe yaad hai tees taarik se char din pehle maine tere dastakat liye the kuch papers par?? Unmein saaf likha tha ke teri ikkiswi saalgira ke baad teri saari jayidaad mere naam hojaayegi" she smirks but is surprised to see gunjan still smiling.

"meri pyaari sauteli maa… aap hi se to sikha hai yeh sab, jab aapne mujhse signature liye usse hi do din pehle maine apna signature badal liya tha, bank jaa ke… aur phir meri birthday ke baad wakil uncle ne mere papers tayar kardiye, jinpe saaf likha hai ke uss 70% jayidaad par sirf aur sirf mera haq hai…" she smiles and kamla is shocked "kyun par gayi na??? tsk tsk… aapko kya laga ek aap hi hoshiyar hain iss duniya mein??? Kabhi kabhi apne aajo baajoo dekhlia kijiye" she tells her and kamla fumes with anger just then a wakil enters and gunjan runs to him, he gives her the papers and tickets… she hugs him and thanks him while kamla fumes not understanding what to do…

Gunjan goes to her dad and hugs him, cries a little and promises to be back… then she goes to the bench where she used to meet her childhood friend.

"patanahi kab phirse milenge hum… lekin mera dil kehta hai bohot jald… bohot jald humaari kismet humein zaroor milaayegi" she says and looks at the snow globe he gave her then leaves with her bag…

************

Mumbai

Samrat is on the phone "benji tu kahan hai yaar??" he asks.

"ab kya hua dude??"

"benji mere dad aa rahein hain italy se, and he wants me to pick him up at the airport… samajh nahi aa raha why but he said strictly I should go… you have to come with me"

"oye sammy tu koi bhi problem mein hota hai to mujhe saath kyun ghaseet ta hai??? You know na tere dad mujhe kitna like karte hain" he says sarcastically [he hates him. LOL]

"tujhe isliye ghaseet ta hoon coz you're my friend dude… and jab main dad se milta hoon I need some help you know na… please dude, aa ja naa, 2:30pm at the Mumbai international airport" he says and benji agrees.

*************

In the flight, gunjan is sitting next to a fat lady who irritated her in the whole flight, she ate and ate and ate and now was sleeping on her shoulder, she was so annoyed… she looks down and realize they were almost landing….

Announcement "Its 2:00Pm and we are landing at Mumbai international airport… please tie your seat belt and remain seated" gunjan smiles.

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Okay guys that's it for now, next part couples will meet so get ready! Hope you liked this one, if you did please hit the LIKE button and do comment!

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