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Part 1


Samarpur

You see a small 10yrs old girl with two piggytails, wearing a school uniform running behind a car and the boy in the car waving at her from the car… she looks sad with tears in her eyes…"GUNJAN…" you hear someone calling the scene fades and you see a girl getting up from her sleep…

She looks innocent and sad…

she gulps then tells herself "phirse wahi sapna?" she nodds  her head and moves her hand on the table, she gets her glasses from there and puts them on… she looks at the time it was 12:30am, she gets out from the small shacky bed and moves towards the kitchen… she gets a glass of water… in the process she sees a plate filled with all types of sweets… she just looks at it with a dead expression and moves towards her room when she hears a slow noise of movement from the room on the left corner of the huge bungalow… she goes to the room and looks at the man on the be… he was asleep but moving and panting like he was running or something… she looks at him with tears in her eyes and goes towards him, she sits on the chair next to his bed and holds his hand and a tear falls on his hand…

"baba… aap jaldi theekh hojaao… phir hum bohot maza karenge, pehle ki tarhan, Pari naam sunne ke liye taras gayi hoon main… jaldi theekh hoke phirse mujhe pari bulaao…" she says with tears falling out of her eyes and her voice cracking…

"arre tum yahan?" the nurse wakes up and tells nupur who gets worried..

"wo humne kuch awaaz sunni isliye… hum to bas dekhne" she starts to explain but the nurse wasn't interested…

"tumhaari bakwas nahi sunni mujhe… chalo jaao yahan se warna kamla ma'am ko bulaoon?" she says and gunjan just leaves the room upset…

she goes back to the small room… it was tiny store room kind of room with a small shacky bed more like a khatia on one corner and some stuff stored on the other side… there was a small shelf straight ahead with a ganpati idol… she pays her respects to it and sits back on her bed… leans her head on the wall "mamma… aaj mera janamdin hai… lekin phirse kissi ko yaad nahi hoga… aap yahan hote to zaroor mere liye tofa lete, mujhe aashirwad dete, lekin aap to nahi ho... kehte hain, bhagwan har jaga nahi ho sakhta isliye usne maa banayi… lekin phir unhone meri maa mujhse kyun chini? Kyun?" she has tears in her eyes.

Gunjan sits with her head leaning on the wall with tears flowing out:

 "kal phirse wahi zindagi… ghar ka kaam karo… call centre jaao, aur phir raat ko parayi karo… yeh kaisi zindagi hai? Isse to…" she stops half way and thinks about her only friend;

A ten year old gunjan  was sitting on a bench crying… just then a small chubby boy of 11yrs comes and sits next to her, she looks the other side and cries while he tries to see her "kya hua?" he asks and she makes a face.

"gungi ho kya?? Bol nahi sakhti?" still no answer "accha behri ho? Likh ke doon kya?" he asks and she looks at him annoyed "kya hai?? Hun?" she asks annoyed…

"arre tum to ro rahi ho" he says

"tumhe isse kya?" she says annoyed.

"well, mujhe to koi problem nahi lekin tumhe future mein ho sakhta hai… I mean hasna is good for health you know"

"aur agar hassi na aaye?? Agar zindagi mein sirf dhuk ho to kya?? Hun" she asks annoyed and he smiles "arre tum to dhukhi ho bacha…" he giggles "sabki zindagi mein dhuk hote hain, but the main thing is how you handle your pain… you know agar dhukhi hone se ya rone se problems solve hojaate to 90% Indians sukhi hote… but nopes that's not the solution you know… rone se tum apne aap ko aur doosron ko bhi dhukh de rahi ho… " he says and she looks at him thoughtfully "dekho jab bhi tum dukhi ho to bas ek lambiii saans lo aur apni aankhen band karke wo khushi ke pal yaad karo… dekhna saara dhukh ghum hojayega aur tum muskuraane lago gi" he tells her with a smile and she immediately heeds to hiss instruction… she takes a deep breath and closes her eyes… she remembers the times she spent with her mom-dad… she starts laughing as she remembers her dad tickling her then being a horse for her… the small boy smiles seeing this…"dekha kitna aasan hai?" he says and she smiles at him

"thanks" she says and sticks her hand out "mera naam Gun… I mean Pari hai" she says she wanted someone to call her that from a long time... he smiles "nice name... mera naam rajkumar hai" he says and they shake hand…

***Flashback ends***

she was still sitting in the same position with a sad expression… "kahan ho tum rajkumar?" she thinks holding up a photo of there childhood…

***********

Ludhiana;

"oye khotiya, tera problem shroblem ki hai?? Maine kaha na meri goti lagi thi to lagi thi" a 20-21 yr old girl is holding a ten year old boys ear…

"maaf karo didi… main to bas"

"bas kya hun??? Mainu cheater weater bulaya tune??"

"nahi did… maaf karo na" he pleads and she leaves him, he moves a little far and then takes out his tongue and teases her then the whole gang of small boys and girls run away "thero… abhi batati hun… tum sab ko nani yaad na diladi to mera naam 'NUPUR' nahi, yeh nupur bhushan da waada hai… oye ruk" she turns and starts to run behind them like a child … she's a pretty girl with big and beautiful eyes… her hair tied in a plait and left in front…

as she runs behind them everyone that sees her nodds there head or tries to stop her… they reach a place and stop… it's a small house… a old lady comes out of It and nodds her head in annoyance "oye ab ki hoya?" she asks and the kids complain.

"bebe didi phirse cheating kar rahi hain…" the kid that she was hitting says and she gives him a murderous glance, he gulps and hides behind her bebe…

"bebe aaj tu beech mein mat bol… aaj to main iss billu ki class lekar rahoongi… mere saath panga shanga… iss baar to teri kher nahi billure…" she says and runs to hit him but bebe stops her and pulls her ear… "saara din masti karti rehti hai, chal tu andar…" she takes her in and nupur looks at billu angrily and he runs away along with the other kids… she leaves her ear and nupur holds her ear making faces, she twitches her nose "gotiyan khelti hai bachon ke saath, kab bari hogi tu?" her bebe says and she smiles.

"kabhi nahi" she hugs her from behind "bebe… tu to jaanti hai na, iss samarpur mein kuch karne ko hai hi nahin…" she makes a face "to bachon ke saath timepass karleti hoon…" she says and bebe turns "ab teri shaadi ki umar hogayi hai bitiya… thodi bari hoja" she says and nupur makes a childish face "main shaadi nahi karoongi… aur waise bhi bebe tu to jaanti hai ke nupur  ki jagah samarpur mein nahi… Mumbai me hai, Nupur zameen par nahi aasman mein chalna chahti hai…" she says dreamily "red carpet… photographs… media… fashion… aur mera dreamboy… sab to wahan hai…" she says dreamily and bebe looks said "aur hum?" bebe asks and nupur smiles "bebe… tu to meri number one dost hain kyun??? Tujhe chorke thodi na jaaoongi! I love you na bebe" she says and hugs her, bebe smiles with a tear in her eye.

Nupur is sitting nadhiya kinare throwing small rocks in it…

"Oye kuriye…" her comes running and panting.

She turns around "kya hua??" she asks and runs towards her "Muskaan inna chila kyun rahi hai? bhuchaal aagaya kya?" she asks annoyed at her friend who spoilt her silent moment.

"oye kuriye yehi samajh… tere Mumbai ka application letter aagaya aur babuji ne dekh liya" she tells her and nupurs eyes widen in worry

"haaye rubba ab ki hoga…"

they both run back to the house… nupur enters quietly an sees her father pacing around the room with a envelope in his hand… nupur bites her lip in worry… he is tough and wears a pagri… he turns as he hears her whispering to muskaan…

he looks at her angrily and goes towards her "eh ki hai?" he asks and she gulps and just looks at him "oye ki hoya?? Sanp sung gaya kya??? Yun to bak bak chalu hoti hai aj ki hoya??" he asks and she looks up at him innocently…

"wo… mera application letter hai… Mumbai ki excel college join karne ka" she says and he looks at her annoyed…

"haaye main yeh sunne se pehle mar kyun nahi gaya… meri beti humein chod ke Mumbai jaana chahti hai haaye yeh ki hoya rabba?? Mainu uthale tu" he starts his nautanki and she nodds her head…

"le… ab inki bhi nautanki shuru…" she nodds her head and her bebe comes who also starts her nautanki… then after nupur starts her nautanki about her dreams and her fathers dream, how she wants to do something in life etc… they have to agree…

"oye meri PIC kal mela hai… to hum phirse…" she winks at her bebe and her bebe winks back and says "shhhh"

"oye PIC ki Honda hai?" muskaan asks confused.

"partner in crime" she winks and they both laugh and leave.

***********

Mumbai;

You see a motor bike race going on…

Commentary: and once again Mumbai express leads the race, par yeh kya lightning bolt bhi bohot peeche nahi hai… yeh race dekhne men to bohot mazaa aa raha hai… and lightning bolt leads… no its mumbai express… neck to neck competition chal raha hai yahan… and they we go Mumbai Express apna champion hone ka proof ek baar phir dedeta hai…

The winner gets off his black sports bike with a number 1. he was wearing a black helmet… "and The Winner of the January Rally is "mumbai express aka Mayank sharma" the commentator announces while the winner "mayank" takes off his black helmet and shakes his head to release the sweat… you see a handsome young man… smirking and showing off his win, he looks at the audience and blows a kiss in true class… all the girls go crazy…

"Teen back to back victories ke baad aapko kaisa lag raha hai?" a reporter asks…

"Champ ek hi hota hai… and that is me, Mayank Sharma… and remember this name will shine for a very long time… love you everybody" he blows another kiss to the camera and leaves…

"wow attitude huh?" the news reporter says and the other replies "hoga hi na… Mr. Nishant sharma ka beta jo hai…"

mayank goes to the changing room and washes his face… drinks water then smirks at the image in the mirror "You are the Champ" he smirks and sees Rahul aka Lightning bolt…

"yo rahul… dude don't get disheartened… kabhi na kabhi to jeeto ge" he tells him… "but I must say you were good dude" and rahul smiles.

Mayank smiles and leaves the changing room… he was looking hot and all the girls were drooling over him… he receives his trophy and leaves from there.

*********

Mayank gets home on his mo' bike… "mum… mummy…"

"haan haan jaanti hoon, phirse jeet gaya na??" she smiles "jaanti thi…" she feeds him a piece of mithai then says "chota kahan hai?" she looks outside and they both see a bike coming and laugh…

"you were good dude…" rahul mimicks him he runs behind him and mayank hides behind he's mother "Bhai aap hamesha kaise jeet jaate hain?" he says and mayank smiles.

"because I'm the champ" he winks and they hug…

"ab tum dono, apni shaytaani band karo an lets go in" she pulls them with there ears.

"dad kahan hai?" mayank asks and she remins him that today is Thursday…

"oh ya… mandir" rahul and mayank say together and there mother hits both of there heads… "kabhi kabhi tum dono bhi mandir ho aaya karo" she tells them, they both look at eachother and smile "never" they say and she nodds her head…

"mom jeet ken a.. mujhe bohot bhook lagi hai, khaane mein kya hai??" mayank asks.

"tera favourite raajma chawal aur gajar ka halwa" she says and his smile widens "wow… to jaldi do na" he says.

"haar ke mujhe bhi bohot bhook lagi hai" rahul says seeing that his mother wasn't serving him, mayank and ragini laugh… "pagal" she says and serves him…

************

Excel college

you see some people surrounding a motor bike… there was a guy sitting on it with a cap covering his face holding a guitar…

"sammy… aaj na reema ne mujhe thapar maara"

"kyunki usne mujhe chune ki  jurat ki aur tum to jaante ho na sammy ke tumhaare ilava koi mujhe chuye, mujhe pasand nahi" reema says.

"aur maths exam ka paper, Rambo ne churaliya lekin humein de nahi raha" benji tells him.

"iss bhavesh ne to mera dimagh kharab kardiya hai, yaar please kuch kar uska room change karwa"

"mr. shukla ne next week hindi ka test rakha hai and he said that tujhe aana hoga"

Basically all the students were telling him there problems…

He finally gets up smiling, he sits on his bike and looks at all of them…

"jab sammy hai to tension nahi lene ka… kya?" he says with a grin and they all repeat "tension nahi lene ka" he starts solving all there problems then takes his basket ball and starts bouncing it… "benji chal ek round hojaye?" he says and benji goes with him and they start playing, he keeps making baskets and after a while takes off his pink and blue T-shirt, all the girls were watching… he was now wearing a vest he's sweaty biceps were attracting the crowd…

**Clap**claps**

"Sammy, Sammy, Sammy, Sammy!" they all cheer and some girls come an start dancing on a cheer leading beat…

"aww sammy… You're the best" dia says getting close to him but he was so not interested, he gives her a smiles and moves her away… does his last basket and leaves the pitch… the bell rings and all go to class…

*******

at night… sammy sits in his room listening to music on his walky talky… you can hear  someone shouting and fighting in the next door room… He's parents always at a tiff… he looks out the window, he sees the moon, its full, he smiles at it…

"jab bhi tum akele ho… to bas iss chand ko dekhlena, ussi waqt main bhi chand ko dekhoonga…"

"lekin tumhe kaise pata chalega ke main kis waqt tum chand ko dekh rahe ho??"

"isse telepathy kehte hain duffer, dil se dil ka connection… jab hum me se ek doosre ke bohot dil se yaad karega to doosre ko khud ba khud pata chal jayega"

he smiles at the memory… "kaisi ho pari? Im sure a one hogi na?? aaj bhi mom-dad lar rahe hain, unke paas to mereliye time hi nahi hota… agar tum hoti to atleast tumse baat kar sakhta… yeh sab share kar sakhta, yahan Mumbai mein jo dost hain, kabhi kabhi lagta hai kya wo sachem dost hain?? Yahan dost kaun aur dushman kaun kuch samajh hi nahi aata…" while he is standing and alking to the moon, gunjan is getting uneasy… she also stands out and looks at the moon "rajkumar kyat um mujhe yaad kar rahe ho?" she thinks and asks the moon… "jaante ho aaj meri sabse worst birthday thi… I miss you" she says…

shifts back to samrat "log Samrat Malhotra ki zinagi jeena chahte hain, there jealous of me, can you imagine… anyways unko kya pata meri life kaise hai? Anyway, I think koi aa raha hai, tumse kal baat karoonga okay! Bye" he blows a kiss to the moon and pretends like he's sleeping.

Someone enters the room, it's a lady in her late forties… she sees a cute sleeping samrat, she smiles and goes close to him, she kisses his forhead and starts to leave, samrat opens one eye to see if shes gone but se comes back, she smiles at his figure "ab yeh kheer jo hum baba ke liye laye tha, uska kya karein??" she thinks loudly and samrat opens his one eye and sees a bowl in her hand, he licks his lips and gets up "kheer" he says jumping out of his bed, she smiles… "badmaash… humse jhoot bolte ho?" she pulls his ear and he makes a face "sorry babes, please maaf kardo…" he says and she leaves him.

"babes aapko humesha kaise pata chal jaata hai?" he asks annoyed making a baby face…

she smiles "itna sat ha… jab main iss ghar mein aayi thi… tab se jaanti hoon tujhe" she says and hits his head, he gets embarrassed and scratches his head.

"le ab khale kahin teri maa ne dekhliya to teri kher nahi" she says and he smiles…

"I love you babes" he hugs her and she smiles.

***********


Okay guys that was the first part… all the main characters are introduced the minor characters will be introduced later on… I hope u liked itWink if you did, dont forget to hit the LIKE button and if you can do leave a commentWink


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~~PROMO~~

"Gunjan aapka partner kaun hai?" the teacher asks.

Gunjan gets up and looks at samrat angrily "some RAT sir" she says and everyone laughs, samrat give her a stern look.

"mujhe rat bulaya? plainJane… tumhe to main dekhloonga" he says and both of them point fingers at eachother and stand.

********************

"aap bohot khoobsurat hain… welcome to excel college" mayank says and nupur smiles.

"thanks…"

"mayank sharma" he says sticking his hand out and she smiles "nupur.. nupur singh" she says and they shake hands…

**************


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continue soon................

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awesome start dear.
I too love MJHT but specially Mayur so waiting for next parts.

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Ab jaa k maine first part padha aap ki fic ka madam. It was excellent sab k character acche hain n i like the most relation b/w Gunjan n Sammy.
continue soon darls.

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heyyy
gr8 part.
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