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Happy Birthday Shabzie!/Ever Ever After/Ch 15 P 16 (Page 7)

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Zee is in the house. Cool

Ohh I loved this, the bits of bickering in the beginning you wrote was completely believable and then with the slow change into more friendly bickering and FYI (speaking to Preet) there are so things like happily ever afters. Yes they are. And I can name more people as well. I just won't. *hmph*  But I love how you described them - him being more mature then a thirteen year old and her being more childish then a six year old! Awesome part!

--shabz
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So Shabzie already has a crush? Oh, how awesome. And she knows the truth. And you've included the rest of us, even if only in name! Awesomeness. I do hope Princess Zee does something, despite saying she wouldn't. Well, actually, she said she wouldn't say anything, not do nothing. Hmm. Cannot wait for the next bit!

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Can I just say I love the way you've written the two? It's so realistic, their friendship. And where is Preet's quote from?

Waiting for more!

Love,
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I came in through the library window? ROFL That was the best part of this shot! But awesome - its his birthday, and I loved how she bounded in - gosh their friendship is beyond words N! Honestly - I loved this part - there was no Lalit! :) Keep writing!

--shabz
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my spot!Embarrassed For both! Big smile

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I'm not feeling all commenty right now N, but I'll have you know I love the way you write this! Embarrassed They whole essence of it is really sweet, and Preet's just been through so much but he has S, he just won't see it! Unhappy Embarrassed Continue soon! Big smile

Meera


Edited by indiandoll89 - 24 July 2009 at 1:42pm

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