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shabo24

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Posted: 07 August 2009 at 5:37pm | IP Logged
I have to go run do something for my mom but SCREW THAT!

*edit*

OK, I think the word is melodic. I don't know why, but that's what this fanfic and especially this part gave me a sense off melodiousness. It had this calming literal strength that was just overwhelming.

I want to say it was the kiss that hit me but that would be lying. I think it would have to be that last paragraph that literally took my breath away. His happiness for his friends but his sorrow for losing his love.

AND I DID NOT HEAVE A SIGH OF RELIEF! LOL

Congratulations on finishing a ff! It's awesome that it was about me! Big smile Really, you are such a good writer, this fanfic was out of this world (no bias - I swear!) and I totally love you to bits!

--shabz


Edited by shabo24 - 07 August 2009 at 5:41pm

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Posted: 07 August 2009 at 5:41pm | IP Logged
editted. :)

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Posted: 07 August 2009 at 5:59pm | IP Logged
edited! Tongue

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Posted: 09 August 2009 at 6:22am | IP Logged
hey thanks for the pm first it was a really nice ff..plz do write something else n i will be waiting for ur pm plz do remember to pm me whenever u update something

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Posted: 09 August 2009 at 10:01am | IP Logged
Thank God it was a dream. *lets out a breath* And this part was utterly perfect, that reconciliation was utterly perfect. Those two are so meant to be. I love the way you've written Zee and Preet.

Love,
Radz

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