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it was mindblowing part......sab ki entry superb thi khas karke kashish aur sujal ki aur in ki pheli mulaqat bhi hogai aur sujal ke hosh bhi urd gaye hmm  very nicee waitng fr agla part plzz update soon....luv aarti

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Originally posted by crystal fantasy

HI! Sheela tumhari yeh nayi story bohot acchi lagi.Aur tum ne bohot acha kiya jo characters ke naam sujal aur kashish rakhe. Kyunke mujhe indono ki hi stories acchi lagti hai main story se connect kar pati hoon. Waise 1st part kaafi accha tha dear sk ki mulaqat bohot acchi lagi aur lagta hai sujal ko to kashish se pehli nazar mein pyar hogaya hai. Thanks for PM. Please cont.soon. BYE AND LOVE YOUSmile 
thnx dear mujhe khushi hui k u liked the story conceptSmileaur muhe bhi sirf sk pe likhna he acha lagta hai kyunki main bhi un he se connect hopati hoon lolzWinkhmm sabko aisa lag raha hai well pyaar......haan per kuch EHSAAS sa zarror hua hai let's see agay kya hota haiSmileSmileaur haan that's so sweet of u 4 loving meSmile


Edited by No1Aamnafan - 14 July 2009 at 12:38pm

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Originally posted by -Aarti-

it was mindblowing part......sab ki entry superb thi khas karke kashish aur sujal ki aur in ki pheli mulaqat bhi hogai aur sujal ke hosh bhi urd gaye hmm  very nicee waitng fr agla part plzz update soon....luv aarti
thnx dear 4 liking the intro and 1st part so much iam glad u liked all th charactersEmbarrassedEmbarrassedand sk bhiSmilekeep reading Smile

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great part

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Originally posted by Iqbal Neha1

great part

wlecome 2 ff and thnxSmile

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                      EHSAAS (a feeling of love)
    
kashish reaches at the stage  aur woh sujal k saamne khari hai sujal usko dekhta hai and remebers k yeh tou wohi hai a smil appears on his face he hand over her all her degree and the shield
and 1 thing jo usne ab tak kisi se nahi kaha yes he congratulates her
sujal:emm congratz(smiles)
kashish:thnx(feeling uncomforatble and she quickly rushes)
while sujal whin khara use dekhta rehta hai aur jatay huye uske par ki payal ki awaz sunta hai aur uski nazar uske pare ki payal pe parti hai
ceremony khatam hoti  hai  sujal bhi jane k liye  nikalta hai  he was going when  uski nazar kashish pe parti hai jo akeli khari thi she was opeing her hair  aur apna gown utarti hai and turns with a smile on face (she is unaware of sujal's presence)sujal usko dekhta hai aur dekhta he reh jata hai and a smile appears on his face  usko aise dekhte huye
sujaL:kyun lagta hai mujhe jaise yeh chehra kayi baar dekha hai maine, jaise kuch tou hai is larki mein jo.....(he stops in b/w and again smiles aur wahan se chala jata hai)
now kashish meets kripa
kripa:kahan thi tu?
kashish:woh bas main zara fresh ho rahi thi chalien?
kripa:sure mam pehle hi kafi w8 kia hai aapka aur madam fresh ho rahin thien(teasing her)
kashish:kripaaa
kripa:kashishhhh
and they both as usual laughs
kashish:ab chalen?
kripa:haan chal
now they were in car aur signal off hojata hai andtheir car stops tabhi saath mein aik black car  akay rukti hai car ka mirror neeche hota hai and that's sujal
kripa is at driving seat  and is at front seat so sujal can see her clearly as his car is at their left hand he is staring her but she is lost some where in her own world don't know that some is watching her  she is just lost in her thoughts tabhi signal on hota hai and   peeche wale log horn pe horn dekaya sujal ko reality mein wapis latay hain he  excuses them and then ghar ki taraf chala jata hai kripa and kashish also goes to the home
both kripa and kashish reaches home its afternoon
they enters home happily
kripa:mama hum  gradute ho gaye(hugs tulsi)
tulsi:arre wah  jeetay rahii mere bacho tum dono hamesha kamyanb ho
kashish:mama main bhi hoon waise yahan(smiling)
tulsi:aja tu bhi (and she hugs kashish)
tulsiLshukar hai ab chalo breakfast karlo aaj se shaadi ki rasmein bhi shuru hone hain  kitna kaam hai aaj mehndi jo hai karan ki
kashish:yah mom iam so excited hamari bhabhi ajayegi hum dono milke usse khub stayenge wow(both kripa and kashish shares a laugh)
tulsi:haan jaise tum dono tou saari umar yahin rehne wali hona aik na aik din tou tumhein apne ghar jana hai palgi kahin ki(smiles)ab chalo bohat kaam hai shaam k function ki tayari karwao mere saath
kripa:yes mom
now here sujal reaches home and its some thing diffrent 2day  
he goes to his room  fresh hoke comes out from washroom  and remembers  her
sujal:kon thi woh?kya woh wohi hai?nahi nahi woh kaise ho sakti hai main bhi na per jo bhi thi bohat pyaari thi(again smiles)
when  he was saying all this veena was listening  him
veena:kiski baat kar raha hai?(smiling)
sujal:mama aap andar wahan kyun khari hain andar ayen na
veena comes in
veena:kaisa raha tera function ?
sujal:theek tha mama
veena:bas theek tha?aisa lagta tou  nahi?
sujal:mama!!!
veena:kya hua?
sujal:aaj maine kisi ko dekha woh bohat pyaari thi(admiring her beauty )
veena:acha?kya woh waise he thi jaise tere sapnon mein ati hai?
sujal:bilkul ya shayad uss se bhi haseen Maa
veena:kya naam hai?
sujal:kashishh
veena:naam tou boha pyaara hai
sujal:hmm kashishhh(says with lots of feel)OMG mom iam getting mad how can she look so beautiful?(holds veena by shoulders and asks while smiling)
veena:kya baat hai,pehli mulaqat mein he jadu kar dia hai usne tou tujh pe(hits him playfully on forehead)
sujal:per  ab pata nahi woh kub dikhegi main kabi us se mil paunga ya nahi?
veena:shayd bohat jaldi,chal ab neeche sab h pe w8 kar rahay hain
and they join angad and lalit at lunch table  they starts their lunch
veena:aaj shaam ko tum sab tayra rehna,yaad hainaaaj nandini ki mehndi hai pichli baar bhi tum dono nahi gaye the uski sagai pe aaj main koi bahana nahi sunne wali suna
lalit:aree haan beta waise bhi nandini k would be father in law MR virani hamare bussiness partner bhi banne wale hain unhone bhi hum sabko personally invite kia hai tum dono chalo toua cha lagega
angad:ok dad main tayar rahunga
sujal:main bhi
veena:aur maine suna hai MR virani ki 2 betain hain kashish aur kripa jinhone abhi MBA kia hai gayatri bata rahi thi
sujal kashish ka naam sunte hi veena ko dekhta reh jata hai
veena bhi usse dekhti hai aur smile pass karti hai
veena:tayar  rehna tum dono
anagd:mom phirse shaadi ka daftarrrr(lolz)
veena:kya tujhe shaadi nahi karni?
angad:na karun tou bhi kya hojayega?
veena:ufff yeh larka main kuch nahi jaanti ab main teri aik nahi sungi tujhe shaadi karni hogi ab
angad:ik mom jaisa aap chahein waise bhi aapke agay aaj tak kabhi koi bola hai not even Dad(loz)
all laughs
now its evening time let's check virani family
tulsi:arre bhai kitna kaam hai 7 baje venue pe puhanchna hai aur yahan 5 baj gaye kashish karan tayar horaha haina?
kashish;(laughing)na
hi mama bhai tou aise betha hai jaise nandini bhabhi ki nahi iski bidaai hone wali hai
tulsi:chal hutt
let's check our karan
karan was in his room on the phone
kaarn:kaisi ho?
nandini:theek hoon
karan:kya kar rahi ho?
nandini:bas parlour jarahi hoon ab phone rako plz mujhe parlour jane k liye tayar hona hai
karan:kya yaar (sad face)ok rakhta hoon bye shaam mein milte hain
nandini:bye MR virani(smiles)
kaarn:bye MRS virani(also smiles)
nandini:abhi time hai(shrama k)
karan:haan sirf 2 din phir sirf main aur tum
tabhi gaytri calls nandini
nandini:ohh no mom bula rahi hain ok bye luv u
karan:luv u
tabhi peeche se zor se hasne ki awazein ati hain and yah yeh hamari kashish aur kripa he hain
karan:tu...tum dono yahan kya kar rahi ho?
kripa:hum yahan nahi asakti hain?waise agar aapka hogaya ho tou mom saying k tayar ho jao humein thri der mein nikalna hai
kashish:haan per agar aap busy ho tou its ok main mom ko bata deti hoon jaon(was abt to go )
karan:ruk ja kashishh
kashish:kyun kya hua bhai?(asks so sweetly)
karan:bohat maza ata haina tum dono ko meri taang kheenchne mein aik baar tum dono ki shaadi teh hone do phir dekhna kaise badle lunga
kashish kluch nahi kehti per krip says
kripa;wph tab dekhen ge abhi to tayar ho jao aur hum bhi chale chal kashish
dono wahan se chali jati hain while karan smiles at their nauthiness
wahan garewal house mein bhi sab tayar ho rahay hain per sujal tou apne room meiin betha kuch soch raha hai
sujal:kya yeh wohi kashish hai?nahi aisa kaise ho sakta hai is shahar mein is naam ki aik he larki ho ais azrori tou nahi per ho bhi sakti hai huhhhh(holds his head by his hands)jo bhi hai paat chal jayega mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai jaise mom mujhse kuch chupa rahi hain
after some time sujal also gets ready and garewals reaches at sinha's place
where both mr and mrs sinha wlecomes them
lalit:mubarak ho bhai  bohat(shakes)
rakesh:bohat shukriya janab andar aye bas ab nikalne wale hai venue k liye
sujal:hi uncle
angad:hi uncle
rakesh:hi beta how r u both?and where is rishi?
sujal:uncle he''ll be ther  n hall
rakesh:namste bhabhi ji aye na
gayatri:Ao n veena
veena:haan bhai zaroor humne bhi tou dekhna hai nandini ko
aise he thori der mein sinha's and garewal family reaches at the venue where varanies were already arive and was w8ing 4 them  its a grand party all big names of city arer there   
tulsi and mihir welcome all the guests
 nandini ko karan k paas bithaya jata hai
let's check kripa and kashish
kripa:yeh theek se karo ,aur tum bhi yeh dekho(was checking the arrangements)
kashish:aap se sabko drinks serve karne ko kaha haina abhi larki wale aye hain
aise he she was checking all the thing step by step when  suddenly she bumps with some 1 who was busy on phone
kashish:ohh huh dekh k kyun nahi chalte log(she was saying this with out looking upon the person)
that's sujal who was  just lost in her and was surprise k yeh tou wohi hai and then he comes to know k veena ko pata tha
sujal:(tou mom jaanti thi ya shayd yeh itefaq hai jo bhi hai bohat he haseen itefaq  hai smiles)
kashish:hello mr main kabse aapse baat kar rahi hoon ajeeb ho(angry)
he comes to reality kashsih notices that he is the same person jo aaj uni mein as chief guest aya tha sujal garewal
sujal:iam really sorry  maine aapko dekha nahi iam so sorry
kashish:emm its ok main kuch  zyada bol gai
sujal:nahi tou aap bilkul zyada nahi bolti hain
kashish:jiiii(just don't understand what he said)
sujal:kuch nahi waise iam sujal garewal(apna hath bharata hai)
kashish:good 4 you(and rushes from there)
sujal:attitude(smiles usko jata dekh k and walks  from there)
function start hota hai sab aurten nandini ki mehndi  dekhti hain   saari rasmein hoti hai
mihir:aapka bohat shukria k aap hamare bulane pe yahan aye
lalit:arre  aisi kya baat hai aap ne bulaya tha tou atay kaise nahi waise congratulations,naseeb walon ko milta hai yeh din dekhna
mihir:tahnks janb aapko   bhi aisa din naseeb ho
lalit:ji hum bhi bas intezar mein hain
gayatri:woh hain do betian woh bari kripa hai maine bataya tha na k woh  unki beti nahi per beti se kahin zyada hai
veena:bohat pyari hai angad k sath achi lagegi iski jodi
gayatri:aur yeh hai kashish
veena:kashish yeh tou jaisi suna tha uss se kahin zyada hai bohat he pyari aur dono behon mein kitna pyaar hai aur sankaar bhi hain,bas ab mere beton ko pasand ajayen tou   main inko apni bahu bana lun
gayatri:haan bhai zaroor
jab kripa wahan  pe kuch shararti bachon pe ghussa ho rahi hoti hai
kripa:ohh huh! aik tou aaj kal k bache koi manners nahi hain decipline nahi hai kab se bol rahi hoon sunte nahi
kids:sorry diii
kripa:ok ok ab jao aur ab  main koi masti nahi chahti ok(warns them strickly)
kids:theek hai diii
veena yeh dekh k muskrati hai
veena:shayad yehi  larki angad ko sudhar sakti hai haan  yehi hai woh(smiles)
tabhi angad wahn se guzarta hai aur uske haath pe cold drink ka glass hota hai  jo kripa pe gir jati hai  aur uska dress kharab hojata hai
kripa:ohh huh andhe ho kya dekh k nahi chal sakte?mere sare kapre kharab kar diye illitrate kahin ke(she is so angry)
angad was abt to say some thing but kripa moaqa kahan deti hai  usko bhi ghussa charh gaya
angad:excuse me mam main kabse aapse kehne ki koshish kar raha hoon k iam sorry but aap meri baat sune tabh na
kripa:acha tou ab yeh bhi meri ghalti hai?oh GOD u have so attitude
angad:say some thing i don't know(says  proudly)
kripa:pata nahi samjhta kya hai apne aaop ko (mummerS)
angad:kuch kaha aapne?
kripa:nahi tou
tabhi kashish ati hai
kashish:arre kripa tu yahan hai wahn mama tujhe dhundh rahi hain
kripa:huh! haan main jati hoon
aur angad bhi wahn se chala jata hai kashish wahan se guzar rahi hoti hai jab gaytri usse rokti hai
gayatri:arre kashsih beta  ruko tou zara
kashish:jii aunty kahiye na kuch kaam tha?
gaytri:in se milo  yeh veena garewal hain hamari family friend hain
kashish:hi aunty(takes her greetings)
veena:jeeti raho bohat pyaari ho bilkul apne naam ki tarah(usse pyaar karti hai and smiles)
kashish:thanks aunty(smiles)acha ab main chalti hoon zara bhai aur nandini ko dekhun aap log bhi chaliye na dinner lag raha hai
veena:theek hai beta
and she goes to karan nandini
kashish:ahem ahem(coughs)maine aapko disturb tou nahii kia?
karan:emm nahi tou aa na yahan
kashish:hmm aise he bol rahy ho ya sach?
nandini shrama jati hai
nanndini:aisi koi bata nahi tum bhi na kashish
kashish:main kya nandini bhabhiiiiii(teasing her)acha chalo ab dinner karlo aur bhai bhabhi ko mehndi lagi hai so aap aaj unko dinner karwao ok
karan:arre nahi nahi main yeh sab nahi karne wala muhjse nahi hoga tu kripa se keh de woh yeh sab ache se karti hai
kripa:haan han abhi se biwi  ke liye itna bhi nahi kar sakte
nandini sharmaye jarai  hai inki baatein sunke
nandini:rehne do i'll manage
kripa:suna yeh hai meri bhabhi
karan:acha acah theek hai khilata hoon tu..tum log jao ab kaam karo apna
kashish:acha tou baat yeh thi chal yaar hum chalte hain
aur hasnte huye dono wahn se chali jati hain
yahan tulsi gyatri aur veena baatein kar rahi hain
veena:aap se milke bohat khushi hui aur aapki family k kareeb ake acha laga aapki betian bohat pyaari hain,kahin baat chal rahi hai  inki?
tulsi:jii(surprise)nahi tou abhi tou nahi per bohat jaldi koi ache se rishtay dekh k in ko bida karna hai bas ab
veena:tou der kis baat ki hai?woh baat yeh hai k mere  beton k liye mujhe aisi he khubion wali larkion ki talash thi aur aaj in ko dekh k laga jaise woh talsh katham hogai agar aapko aitrazz na ho tou  waise mere betay yahin  hai woh saamne dono ,sujal angad yaahn ana zara(calls them)
both comes
sujal:yes mom aapne bulaya
veena:haan beta inse milo yeh tilsi virani hain karan ki Ma aur yeh mere betay hain sujal aur angad
angad:hi aunty(takes her blessings)
suajl:hi aunty(he also does the same)
tulsi:jeete raho bohat ache larke hain aapke
veena smiles
veena:soch k batayega mujhe aapke jawab ka intezaar rahega
angad and sujal looks at eachother
tulsi:ji zaroor abhi mujhe kuch kaam hai plz don't mind  aap log plz  kuch lijiye na main bas abhi ayi
and she goes
angad:mom its too much
veena:maine kya kia?
angad:yeh kay kar rahi thein aap?
veena:main jaanti hoon main kya kar rahi hoon tu woh dekh wahan us larki ko(points kripa)kaisi hai?
angad:woh nak chariiiiiii no way (sujal was smiling at his condition)
veena:arre kya kharabi hai usmein?kitni pyaari hai
angad:pyari my foot mom usko teacher hona chaiye oh GOD kitna lecture deti hai
veena:tabhi tou perfect hai tere liye,kyun sujal?
sujal?:yah mom(was teasing him)bohat achi hain  bhabhiii
angad:bhabhiiii sujal tu pite ga
sujal was laughing  veena k shoulder pe sar rakh k and angad ko samjh nahi arah tha k kya kare
aise he function hota hai sab log apne apne gahr chal jatay hain
sujl was in his room  fresh hoke bed pe betha hota hai aur kashish k baray mein soch raha hota hai jab veena room mein ati hai
veena:kya baat hai?kahan khoye ho?
sujal:mama woh aaj maine usse dekha nandini ki mehndi mein,aap jaanti thi na?
veena:sach kahun tou nahi per mujhe laga tha k shayad yeh wohi kashish ho jsika mujhe gaytri ne bataya tha tou kya yeh  wohi hai'?
sujal:haan mama wohi hai
veena:bohat pyaari hai mujhe bohat pasand hai'
suajl:ohh i luv u mom
veena:jaanti hoon .maine tulsi ji se baat bhi ki hai mujhe kripa aur kashish bohat achi lagi hain,aur hum unke saath bussiness tou karne he wale hain ab rsihta bhi jur jaye tou acha hai unka parivaar bohat acha hai main aaj he tere dad se bata karti hoon ,per kya woh tujhse pyaar karti hai?
sujal:ab tak tou nahi woh tou baat bhi nahi karti hai
veena:haan kafi reserve si hai maine dekha hai per hai bohat  he achi mujhse bohat ache se baat ki usne
sujal:kya?aapse baat ki usne?(surprise)
veena:haan
sujal:kya kaha usne aapse?(very keen to know)
veena:bas aise he ab hum unke guest the tou she was concern k humein kuch chaiye tou nahi per uske andaz se mujhe uski adat achi lagi
sujal:hmm kam se kaam aapse baat tou ki mujhse tou baat bhi nahi karti jab bhi main uske saamne jata  hoon woh aise dur baghti hai jaise main koi bhoot hoon(says with a sad expression)
veena yeh sunke hasne lagti hai
sujal:kya mom aap hans rahi hain?very bad
veena:arre pagal woh tujhe jaanti bhi nahi aise he kyun tujhse baat kare woh?ab yeh suko thori na pata hai k woh tere sampnon mein ati hai
sujal:very funny ma
veena:acha chal ab tu so ja kal  nandini ka sangeet hai waise ab mujhe kehne ki zaroorat nahi k yaad rahna  kyun?
sujal:Maaa(smiles)
veena:good night
sujal:good night ma
aur veena chali jati hai
aur sujal kashish  ke baray meiin sochte huye apni diary mein uske baray mein likhta hai
kuch jo hum nahi jante(bad manner kisi k diary nahi parhte lolz)
aur ab dekhte hain kashish ko
kripa and kashsih were changing in their night suits
jab woh change krti hain tabhi tulsi comes
tulsi:kya ho raha tha?
kashish:kuch nahi mama
tulsi comes and sits with  both of them
kripa:kya baat hai maa?kuch kaam tha?
tulsi:haan kuch bata karni hai tum dono se
kashish:bolien
tulsi:woh tum dono k liye rishta aya hai
kashish:what?(she says immediatly when kripa holds her hand )
kripa:kiska maa?
tulsi:woh garewals haina?unke betay suajl aur angad garewal mujhe tou bohat ache lagay dono  aur unke satah hum bussiness bhi kar rahay hain veena ji bohat achi hain woh tum dono k liye aik achi saas sabit hongi aisa main feel kia hai,tum dono kya kehti ho?aik na aik din tou har larki ko apne ghar jana hota hai aur rishta bohat acha hai
b4 kashish could say some thing kripa  says
kripa:jaisi aapki aur dad ki marzi maa
tulsi:kashish tu kya kehti hai?
kashish:haan,ji mama jaisa jaisa aap log chahen(says while looking at kripa)
tulsi:mujhe tum dono se aisi he umeed thi(dono ko pyaar kartti hai)main aaj he tumhare dad se baat karti hoon ab tum dono so jao aaj bohat thuk gayi na good night
kripa:good night maa
and she goes
tou kripa door lock karti hai and kashsioh k pass ati hai
kripa:"kashish kya baat hai?
kashish:kripa tu tou janati haina main in sab mein wishvas nahi karti yeh pyaar ,shaadi rishte sab baqwas hai
kripa:kashsih tu pane alfaz  ghalat bol gai tu ab in mein wishvaas nahi karti hai
kashsih looks at her with pain in her eyes
kripa:tu kub tak kisi aur ki ghalati ki saza khud ko degi kab tak?aik na aik din tou tujhe rishte mein bandhna hoga na kya keh k mana karegi tu?tu mo dad ka dil kya keh k toregi?
kashish:pata nahi mujhe(she turns around)
kripa:mun pehr lenay se sachai nahi badalti hai kashish kya pata yeh naya rishat teri zindagi mein kistni khushian laye?
kashish:khushian(says sarcastically)tujhe pata haina mera ab wishvas uth chuka hai is baat se k kabhi aise rishte mein aapko khushi milti hai
kripa:bohat hogaya kashish ab aur nahi main tujhe apni zindagi ab aur barbaad nahi karne dungi,tujhe shaadi karni hogi aur mera wishvaas kar har larka aik sa nahi hota hai kya pata sujal he woh ho jo tere liye bana hai
kashish:kriap i think humein sona chaiye
kripa:ok fi9 good night and they both lays on bed
kripa:main jaanti hoon k meri baat nahi sunegi pata nahi kyun tu kcuh samjhna he nahi chahti hai meri dua hai tu hamesha khush rahe (and she sleeps)
kashish:main jaanti hoon tujhe meri khushi ki chinta  ahi per man kya karoon mera wishvaas in sab se uth gaya hai kabhi kabhi aik dhoka zindagi  bhar  k liye kafi hota hai
aise he she also sleeps








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hey
Just read it!!
It's great.........
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very sweet part.................sk scenes were nice and ak scene was too good.............both like fire spitting..................and their rishta too gonna take place soon................wonder what happened in kashish's past...............cont soon dear..................

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