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Posted: 13 July 2009 at 7:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ranbir_lekha

 awwwwwwwww  sweety   looking frwrd 2 ur  new FF  good luck Hug
hey that's so sweet of u keep readingSmileEmbarrassed

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Originally posted by kashishdabest

hey sheela sweetehart!!1 woww back with another rocking one!! ab tho double mazze hain!!! hehehe awesome concept, loved teh intro aur khaas karke SK ke characters....am intrigued 2 kwn ke aisa kya hau Kashish ki life mein ke woh aisi bangayi hai....do cotn soon jaan!! cnt wait 2 read part 1!!!...n than x 4 the pm!! luv summi xxx
yah socha k ab examz khatam hogaye tou kyun naEmbarrassedso here it is i hope tum sabko achi lagay aur yeh douoble mazze kis sense mein bola?kashish k baray mein agay k parts mein jaan jaogi don't be impetientLOLLOLany ways keep readingSmile

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Originally posted by cute_samrah

heyy dear nice intro...................sujal belives in love on other kashish didn't..................post soon
yah sujal believes in luv but kashish some how don'tSmileaur thnx 4 lking and will cont asapSmile

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The sun rises aur aik kamre mein 2 do khbsurat aur  haseen larkian so rahi hain suraj ki roshni se unmein se aik ki aankh khulti hai woh apni aankhein malti hui aik angrai leti hai aur ghari pe nazar dalti hai
girl:oh NO 8 baj gaye mar gaye
this girl is our kripa ,kripa ka intro dena bhul  gayi thi so here it is

kripa agarwal:a 24 years old girl jisne apne parents ko 5 saal pehle aik accident mein kho dia kripa ki family aur virani family were very close family friends aur  krip apne parents ki akloti beti thi  so unki death k baad mrs and mrs virani ne usse apne saath rakh lia aur aaj woh is ghar mein bilkul unki apni beti ki tarah hai sab us se bohat pyaar karte hain.
kripa:kashishhh uth ja warna mama agaii tou pata hainaaa uth ja meri Maaa(pleading lolz)
itne mein door khulne ki awaz ati hai
kripa:mari gaye aaj tou
some 1 enmters the room aur atay he
lady:uthi nahi ab tak mahranian?uff kya karun main in larkion ka?itni bari hogai hain per ab tak khud se uth bhi nahi sakti hain,tu kya dekh rahi hai aise utha apni ladli ko ab aur 15 min mein neeche puhanch jao dono  suna(shows finger to kripa and she left)
she was Mrs tulsi virani is ghar ki boss
kripa:uffffff mama ne meri jaan nikal di mujhe laga aaj maar paregi (lolz)ohhh kashishhh teri neend kahan se ati hai behan ab uth jaaaaa.
and we see a girl who's face is not visible b'coz of her hair jo uske chehre pe puray bikhre huye hain
she moves in sleep aur hath se apne baal chahre se hatiti hai  now we can see her face she is kashish subah subah she is looking as pure as an angel
kashish:kya kripa sone de na plz 5 min plzzzz(and she turns to other side)
kripa:oh hello mamdam aap ki wajh se maine mama se kafi daanti kha li hai so ab apa uthne ka kasht karengi?waise agar aapko yaad hai tou aaj hamari MBA ki degree ki ceremony hai UNi mein
kashish:ohh Noooo tunay mujhe uthaya kyun nahi kripa?
kripa:lo ji ab ulta chor kotwal ko dantay?
kashish:kripaaa
kripa:kashishhhh
tulsi:ab agar tum dono ka yeh kripaaa,kashishhhh hogaya tou neeche ajana jaldi(neeche se shouts lolz)
they both starts to laugh aik dusre ko hugs karke
kripa:chal ab jaldi ready  mujhe bhi hona hai
kashish:bas 5 min(smiles)
kripa:kashishh aaj phir teri aankhein laal hai(says when she was going to the washroom)
kashish wahin ruk jati hai and turns
kashish:nahi tou tu pagal hai pata hai ab jaon main?(trying to pass smile)
kripa:hmm
and she left
kripa:pata nahi kab samjhegi yeh larki?GOD plzz iska kuch kardo plzzzz(looking in the sky)
after some time kashish comes out of washroom kripa was standing  by window
kashish:kya hua ab ready nahi hona?
kripa:yah sure abhi ayi bas 5 min(smiles)
and she goes after some time she also comes out kashish bilkul ready thi usne apna gawn pehna hua tha aur aur that  cap(sorry don't know kya kehte hain usko lolz and she was in pony tail)
kripa:wahh lag rai hai graduate(looks at her from top to bottum)
kashish:ab tu bhi ready hoja so that main tere liye bhi aisa kahoon(puts her hand on her shoulder and smiles)
kripa:zaroor per ab tu neeche ja nahi tou mama phirse uppar ajayengi jaaaa(pushes her 2wrd the door)
and kashish smiles at her action aur neeche chali jati hai uski payal ki awaz jaise puray ghar pe gunj rahi hai jab woh seedhoin se neech utar rahi hai
she goes to the loungue where some one is busy in reading newspaper she goes to the person and hugs him from neck
kashish:GOOD MORNING!!!!!!!(with her million dollar smile)
mihir:GOOD moring bacha subah hogai tumhari?
kashish:kya dad aap bhi na(and coemes and sits beside him)
mihir:acha chalo ab breakfast karte hain where is kripa?
kashish:arahi hai
tabhi tuls comes
tulsi:uth gai madam?chal aja breakfast karle aur woh kripa kahan hai?
kripa:main yahan hoon mama
tulsi usko dekhti hai muskrati hai
tulsi:aur yeh karan ko kya hogaya ab tak nahi aya
kashish:lo agay bhai lagta hai raat mein der se soye the phone pe baat karte huye(lolz)
karan gives a tujhe baad mein dekhta hoon look to kashish when both kash and kripa were laughing
mihir:achaaa ab breakfast karlo phir jana hai university tum dono ne
tulsi:aur nahi tou kya bas jab dekho tou mere betay k peeche pari rehti hain dono
kashish:haan haan yeh ma ka ladla jo hai,dekhna mama kahin yeh ladla bigar na jaye(lolz)
karan:kashishhh tujhe der horahi hai brf karle jaldiiii(thore rudely)
kashish:emm haan tou jarahi hoon na,chal kripa hamara yahan bethna logon ko pasand  nahi(making fake faces lolz notanki hai yeh)
tulsi:arree (but they were gone)yeh larkian bhi na(smiling while thinking abt them)
karan:kya mama janati haina nautnaki hain dono 1 number ki(smiling)
mihir:aye tum dono meri betion ki burai mat karna suna main yahin hoon abhi
three of them shares a laugh
now check what's going on in garewal mansion
we see a very   clean aur bohat he roshan aur romatic sa room hai and a guyz is sleeping on a round bed peacefully hugging a pillow and carrying a beautiful smile on face
when his alarm clock disturbs his sleep and he wakes up and sits on the bed yawning
yes he is sujal
sujal:oh GOD kitna sogaya main aaj tou mujhe jana bhi hai(he gets up and goes to the washroom)fresh hoke he comes out holding a towel in his hand aur apne balon ko towel se dry karta hua he stands infront of mirror while whistling some tone
when some one opens the door and he turns its veena
sujal:GOOD morning mama
veena:good morning,hogai teri subah?raat bhar sapnon mein khub dekha usko?
sujal:come on mama aap bhi na(sharma ke)
veena:ja ja sab jaantii hoon main ab aja jaldi neeche
sujal:ji abhi aya
and she goes to another room and opens it yahan jaise bhuchal aya ho (lolz)
veena:hay bahgwan yeh larkaa,pata nahi iski biwi bechari kya karegi?(lolz)
angad:kuch nahi karegi kyunki aapki tarah usko bhi adfat hojayegi
veena:lo matlab tera koi plan he nahi sudherne ka?
angad turns and now we  can see his face(he was combing his hair)
veena:office jaraha hai ya ghar chor k itna sab kyun bekhair dia?
angad:mom roz wohi baat ab chalo neeche mujhe already late horaha hai
veena:chal(hanste huye)
and now sab breakfast table pe puhanchte hain
where MR lalit garewal is already present on head of dp's chair
suajl:good morning Dad
lalit:good morning beta
angad:good morning Dad
lalit:morning beta
lalit:where is rishi?
veena:uski subah abhi kahan hui hai?raat men itni late ata hai aur subah mei sota hai pata nahi yeh larka karta kya hai
sujal:em kuch nahi mama bas doston k sathh ab yehi tou umar haina masti karne ki
angad:yes mom sujal is right
veena:haan bhai tum log tou bas uski waqalt karna band kardo aur chup chap breakfast karo
lalit laughs at her statement and every 1 have their brf
sujal:ok mama mujhe jana hai
veena:aaj tou tujhe wahn jana hai university mein?
sujal:ji mama main wahn chief guest hoon unke yaahn aaj MBA k students ko degree denay k liye aik function hai so as shimla's young and succuessful bussiness man unhon ne mujhe invite kia hai
veena:wah kya baat hai(feels proud)
lalit:arre bhai beta kiska hai?
angad:aur bhai bhi(smiles)iam very happy 4 u sujal tumne itne kam time mein jo  pehchaan bani hai that's really remarkable sach
sujal:kya aap log bhi subah subah emotional horahay hain  yeh sab meri family ki support aur mom ki duain hain aur kuch nahi,ab main jaon?
lalit:haan beta jao tum late horahay hoge
and he leaves
veena:yeh larka bhi na kabhi credit nahi leta hai apna
angad:mom yehi tou uski quality hai which makes him unique(*smiles)
veena:sahi keh raha hai tu bilkul
anagd:acha mama ab main bhi chala bye
veena:bye jaldi ana ghar kaam mein itna kho jatay hain dono k ghar bhi yaad nahi rehta inko
lalit:bhai betay(she cuts him in b/w)
veena:kiske hain, jaanti hoon aap bhi na(smil karte huye goes to the kitchen)
now kashish and kripa were in university
kashish:aaj humein degree mil jayegi na thanks GOD no university
kripa:haan per agar aisa main kahoon tou samjh ata hai per tu?(surprize)
kashish:kripa tu bhi na tu jaanti haina is jagah se.....(she stops)
kripa:kashishh aaj k din woh sab yaad mat kar plzzz aaj hamar last day hai yahan humein achi yaadein sametni chahiye haina(cups her face in her hand)
kashish:hmm(smiles hulka sa)chal ab  andar chalte hain function start hone wala hoga na
kripa:haan chal
here sujal reaches at the university aur jab woh andar ata hai sari girls starts to talk
1girl:hey look that's suajl garewal kitna hot hai na kitna handsome
girl2:yah he is too hot girls
aise he almost sab girl uspe comments karti hai  jab woh kisi aik girl se hall ka rasta puchta hai and apne sunglasses pehnke full style mein hall ki taraf bhar jata hai when he was reaching the place raste mein  woh kisi se takra jata hai and it was a girl jo almost bhag rahi thi aur uski friends uske peech bhag rahi hoti hai the girl bumps with him aur holds him by his shoulders so that woh gir na jaye he also supports her  woh lakrki jiska chehra suajl ne ab tak nahi dekha tah b'coz of her long and silky hair jo uske face pe the woh apne baal peeche karte huye  looks at him aur jaise aik pal k liye sujal usmein kho jata hai he is just  in shockk a beautiful shock b'coz she is no natural and so pure and at the same time very innocent he is not his senses
when kashish calls him
kashish:excuse me(very softly she says and shakes him hulke se)
sujal:ohh iam so sorry(he realise and leaves her)
kashish bina kuch kahe wahan se chali jati hai
he is very embarrassed smile karte huye he goes to the venue
now after some time sab hallmein hote han ceremony start hoti hai sujal k hath se top position ane walon ko  unki degree and all that stuff(sorry very bad at all these)milta hai now its kashish's called
kashish bohat excited hai aur kripa uske liye bohat khush they share a hug krip says her to go to the stage
kashish reaches at the stage  aur woh suajl k saamne khari hai suajl usko dekhta hai and remebers k yeh tou wohi hai a smil appears on his face he hand over her all her degree and teh shield
and 1 thing jo usne ab tak kisi se nahi kaha yes he congratulates her
sujal:emm congratz(smiles)
kashish:thnx(feeling uncomforatble and she quickly rushes)
while sujal whin khara use dekhta rehta hai aur jatay huye uske par ki payal ki awaz sunta hai aur uski nazar uske pare ki payal pe parti hai(and he smiles kuch soch k)



Edited by No1Aamnafan - 13 July 2009 at 1:16pm

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hey it was such an awesome starting....i just love the meeting between SK.....it was awesome...i love SK charachters...they r so cute....i wish to know ki aisa college me kya hua tha...lagta hai sujal ko pehli nazar me pyaar ho gaya....ple ple ple continue soon...thanks for the pm

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Kashish


Edited by goodkashish - 13 July 2009 at 6:32pm

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oops so sorry guyz i just read the part and find so many mistakes are there in the parts, writting errorsConfused


Edited by No1Aamnafan - 13 July 2009 at 1:16pm

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thanks for the pm dear.................and twas a excellent start...................sujal and kashish met in the beginning itself and sujal is blown away by kashish's beauty...................very nice.........cont soon dear...............

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