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LoVe StOrY(AK, SK)A Very Important Note on pg 19 (Page 9)

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Posted: 16 July 2009 at 3:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Angad-Kripa#1

Nice part Anamika! Sujal and Kripa going in seperate cars yet they are husband wife and they had a meeting together was funny and stupid, LOL
Mixed couples...LOL.
Continue soon and PM me. That was a wonderful part by the way.
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~JotHeart
PS. Good choice of couples. My fav are AK! DUHHHLOL



hey harji thnnkx for the comments dear Smile. i knwo the meeting was funny and stupid but i just wanted to show how much they hate each other LOLLOL.
i mixed them up for a change LOL. i'm glad u liked it Wink.hey mine fav couples r also AK LOLLOL.

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nice part...
cont soon...

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Originally posted by nehasfan

nice part...
cont soon...


thnkx for the comment Smile.

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wow nice fic do add me to ur pm list

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Originally posted by jyothi_cool

wow nice fic do add me to ur pm list


hey dear thnkx for ur comments and sure ll add u in PM in list Smile.

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Part 2 –

 

In evening - 

 

Sujal – kripa what the hell is wrong with you. Why weren't you picking my call?Angry

Kripa – you're not so special to me Mr. Garewal.Angry

Sujal – when're you coming back?

Kripa – wow because some one is coming so you want me to be at home, I won't come now. You know me very well Mr. Garewal what I can do.

Sujal – do what you want it's my fault, of getting married to you.Angry

Kripa – finally you realized it's your fault.

 

Angad – I'm going some where so please don't call me or SMS me.

Kashish – I'm also going out, and why should I'm going to call you Mr. Khanna.

Angad – great, then have a good time.

Kashish – you too.

 

Both rolled their eyes and Kashish was going out of the room.

 

Angad – Kashish where're you going? Actually I was thinking why not I drop you to your destination.

Kashish – oh yeh sure we've to pretend we're the happy coulpe, right.

Angad – very smart, now tell me the address.

 

At sujal's house –

 

Sujal – (while getting ready thinking) where's she? What'll I do when every one will ask me about my so called wife?Angry

Kripa – (talking to some one on phone) yes sure at what time you'll reach? Oh that's great. Fine, if you have any problem call me. Big smile

Sujal – (thinking) finally arrived, the President of India.Angry

Kripa – Mr. Garewal stop thinking some rubbish about me, and if you're ready then get out of the room, I need to get readyAngry.

Sujal – again I need to suffer because I agreed to share room with you Angry. (Thinking – is she a mind reader how come she know I was thinking about her)

Kripa – get out now.Angry

Sujal goes downstairs and meet his colleagues, but all the time he was looking at the door.

Sujal – finally you came, you know what you should be the 1st one to be here. You know what you mean to me Angad.Big smile

Angad – I know Sujal but I reached today and because of that I got late, sorry dude. Big smile

Sujal – angad you won't change this habit of yours. You always come late.

Angad – yes I won't Wink oh by the way meet Kashish my fiance and where is bhabhi?

Sujal and Kashish were shocked to see each other.

Sujal/Kashish – hi!! Cry

Angad – hey shocked naa, I know you'll be shocked to see her.

Sujal – yes shocked, there she is.

Kashish – kripa? You're her husband? Shocked

Sujal – yes she's my wife.

Angad – (thinking) kripa… kripa sharma my friend in school she looks so different. Shocked

Kripa – hey kashish. Big smile

Kashish – hey, so you're Sujal's wife? ShockedCry

Kripa – yes, so you guys met each other.

Sujal – yes we have, oh he's Angad my friend and Kashish's fiance.

Kripa – hi Angad. Shocked

Angad – hi bhabhi

Kripa – (thinking) bhabhi, angad you could have said just Kripa, why bhabhi?Cry

Kashish – kripa, where're you lost?

Kripa – no where, congratulations, so when're you going to get married?CrySmile

Kashish/Angad – thanks and we don't know.

 

Sujal – (thinking) kashish and kripa are friends, it means that kripa knows about kashish's past, it means she knows me before getting married, and that's the reason she hates me and didn't wanted to get married to me?

Angad – where're you lost?

Sujal – no where.

 

After some time Sujal and Kashish were alone

Sujal – so finally you achieved what you wanted?

Kashish – you know what Sujal I can get every thing I want.

Sujal – I know that.

Kashish – by the way why did you leave and went away? Without letting anyone know especially me?

Sujal – you still remember that I left the school without letting you know.

Kashish – how could I forget that day when I came to know you left school?

Sujal – then you must have guessed why I left.

Kashish – well Sujal I want the answer why you left?

Sujal – some other day Kashish.

Kashish – fine then meet me tomorrow at lunch and tell me the reason.

Sujal – fine I'll.

 

kripa bumped into Angad.

Angad – what can't you see?

Kripa – I can Mr. Angad Khanna.

Angad – ohh so why did you bumped into me?Angry

Kripa – look you're my husband's friend so I'm not saying you anything.Angry

Angad – else what would have you said Kripa?Angry

Kripa – you've to see that?Angry

Angad – kripa don't forget what happened 10 years back.Evil Smile

Kripa – how could I forget the day I vowed not to meet you again in my life and the day which changed me into a new Kripa, a arrogant Kripa.AngryAngry

Angad – don't say this, I know you very well, you can't change.

Sujal – Angad if you don't mind can I talk to Kripa…..

Kripa – (thinking) now what? Yes sujal what happened? ConfusedConfusedShocked

Sujal – may I've the pleasure to dance with my beautiful wife?

Kripa, was shocked at sujal's behavior.

Kripa – (thinking) it's a good idea to show angad that I'm happy even without him, I'm  happily married, I've to show him I've moved in life. Yes sure Sujal. Smile

Sujal – thanks.

Angad – hey Kashish may I've the pleasure of dancing with my hot, s****, and most beautiful fiance? WinkWink

Kashish – (shocked) yes sure ShockedShockedShocked. (Thinking) now what happened to him, I guess both of them are jerks as they're friends?

 

Background music, BEETE LAMHE from THE TRAIN movie. While dancing Kripa and Sujal was thinking about their time with Angad and kashish. While dancing Kripa hugged Sujal and Sujal hugged her back which made Angad and Kashish feel jealous.

 

Kashish – hey it was a nice party, I had a lot of fun, and it was nice meeting you after a long time. Smile

Kripa – thanks for coming and same here Kashish.Smile

Kashish – I guess I should go now. Where is Sujal I should meet him once before going.Smile

Kripa – yes sure, here he's.

Kashish – I was going so thought to meet you once, it was nice meeting you Sujal.

Sujal – same here kashish.

Angad – Sujal meet you tomorrow in office.

Sujal – okay see you tomorrow, bye.

Kripa – bye Kashish and Angad.

Angad/Kashish – bye Bhabhi/Kripa.

 

As soon as every one left Kripa ran into her room and cried a lot. Sujal was downstairs drinking adn both of them thinking about Angad and Kashish. Angad and Kashish on way were thinking about Kripa and Sujal.

Angad/Kashish – (thinking) why I felt jealous seeing both of them together? Whatever, why I'm bothered? I hate her/him.

 

Promo – flashback about their past

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Interesting part !!

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Originally posted by togepe30

Interesting part !!


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