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Part 2

~~Muskaan and Padma both take over in the kitchen and prepare the best Indian Cuisine for dinner. Padma tells Muskaan about the arrival of Omar bahi and Muskaan remembers him as she recalls a fond memory of her childhood with her beloved Omar Chachu. Working in the kitchen and tidying up the house Muskaan and Padma's day goes by really fast and as they finish off all their work they realize it's 6:00 o clock in the evening and that means there is only an hour left till Shashank gets back home with Omar bahi.~~

Padma: Muskaan abb tum bhi jaakey tayaar hojao main yeh sub dekh loongi..(padma said coming back to the kitchen after she got ready.)
Muskaan: Jee Maa bus yeh cake aur halva banalo phir chali jaati hoon…
Padma: Arey beta halva main banalo gee tum bus cake ko oven mein rakh kar tayaar hojao…Pata nahi yeh Chutki kub aayege…? Kya phone aaya tha uska?
Muskaan: Jee maa Nikki nay phone kar kay bol diya tha kay voh dinner se pehlay ajaye gee…bus aati he hogi…
Padma: Haye Rabba…iss kudi nay toh mujhay bahut preshaan kiya hua hain… kub aati hain kub jaati hain kuch kahbar nahi rehti…
Muskaan: Maa abb preshaan na huye…voh ajaye gee… (she puts the cake in the oven and looks up at Padma who was looking after the halva on the stove.)
Padma: Acha abb tum jaakay tayaar hojao…kam kar kar kay kya haal karliya hain…
Muskaan: (takes off her kitchen apron and smiles) Jee maa jarahi hoon…

~~Muskaan leaves to get ready as Padma continues to garnish the Carrot Halva to perfection. In 20 minutes she manages to set up the table and tells Ramu Kaka to have the food warmed up once Shashank and Omar bahi gets home. She is going to Muskaan's room to see if she is ready when the door bell rings and so she goes to the door instead of Muski's room.~~

Padma: (opens the door and sees Shashank, Omar Bahi, and Nikki smiling at her.)
Shashank: Dekho Padma kuan aaya hain humaray saath…
Padma: (Smiles and invites all of them inside) Please ander Aye na Omar Bahi…kaisay hain app…? aur Nikki app logon kay saath…?
Nikki: Maa hum raastey mein mille…Main ghar arahi thi kay papa aur Omar chachu mujhay mill gaye toh saath mein agaye…
Padma: Acha voh toh theek per abb ja aur jakay kapray badal le…phir kahnay kay liye aja...(She instructs Nikki who smiles and goes to her room to get changed.)
Omar Bahi: Saach Bahbiji Chutki toh bilqual app per gaye hain…Bahut pyaari baachi hain…
Padma: Jee bus yeh Chutki aise he hain…Apnay bauji ki laadli hain na issi liye…
Shashank: Haan bahi meri dono betiyaan meri laadli hain…dono he jaan hain meri…
Omar Bahi: hmmm beytiyaan hoti he asi hain… Acha app nay joh sehar se jewelery order ki thi voh main apnay saath he lay aaya hoon…Babhi ji Shashank toh app ko bata na bhool he gaya ho ga kay ussnay mujhsay yeh kaam kaha tha….
Shashank: Arey bahi inn he kay kehnay per toh hum nay yeh zevar banwaya hain…
Omar Bahi: (taking out the jewelry boxes) Chalo yeh bhi theek hain kay tumnay babhiji kay kehnay per yeh kaam kiya toh sahi (they all laugh)…yeh lay jeyay…(he gives the boxes to Padma who is looking closely at the delicate kangans and sets that she had ordered for her daughters.)
Shashank: Abhi si aik aik kar kay zevar banwana shuru karay gay tabhi aik din jaakay beytiyoon ki vivaah ki taiyaariyan puri hongi…
Omar Bahi: Arey Vah…Beyti ka kaniyadaan toh subse bara armaan hota hain…aur phir jub beyti zevar aur gehnay pehn kar dulhan kay libaas mein saamnay ajati hain tub jo sukoon aik baap ko milta hain voh sirf aik baap ka dil he jaanta hain…(as he is saying this Muskaan comes with the tray of refreshments for everyone and Shashank looks at her with a proud smile. Padma too takes the necklace that she was holding and lifts it up so Muski's face is framed by it, she smiles as well knowing that the necklace would be a perfect fit for her daughter.)
Muskaan: Paani legeyay… (she says softly while handing the glass of water to Omar bahi while he observes the soft spoken nature of Muskaan and smiles.)
Omar Bahi: Jeeti raho betiya…(he turns to Shashank and asks) Arey Shashank yeh tumhari bari betiya hain na? Muski…
Shashank: Arey Vah…! Tumne khoob pehchana…tumne toh isse bahut chota sa dekha tha?
Omar Bahi: Bus pehchaan liya…vaisey bhi meri yadaash teri tarah kamzoor nahi hain…
Padma: Theek keh rahay hain Bahi sahib inn ki yaadash toh saach mein kamzoor hain…(she says as Muskaan takes a seat next to her looking at the jewelry that she was looking at.)
Shashank: Bahi jub meri Muski hain meri har baat yaad rakhnay kay liye toh khud yaad rakhnay ki kya zaroorat… Abb dekho na Omar Journalism aur Masters karnay kay baad meray puray clinic ka sara Finance yahi sambhalti hain…
Omar Bahi: Vaisey yeh toh hain…jin kay pass itni samajhdaar beytiyaan hoon unki zindagi saach mein bahut sukoon se ghuzarti hain….Bahbhi ji app ka ghar kissi jannat se kam nahi hain…
Padma: Humari dono beytiyaan he iss jannat ki zimedaar hain Bahi Sahib…
Muskaan: Chacha ji jis ghar mein maa aur bauji ki soorat mein bhagwan ka roop hoon voh ghar jannat jaisa he hota hain… ya shayad ussay bhi bhar kar…(Shashank and Padma both are overwhelmed by her compliment and they exchanges glances at eachother once again taking pride in their parenthood.)
Shashank: Acha chlo bhi Padma…kahnay ka kya intezaam hain?
Omar Bahi: Arey nahi bahbhiji main bus chalo ga…
Padma: Nahi Bahi sahib aisey kaisey…app kahna kahye bagair kahein nahi ja rahay hain…Muskaan aur maine bahut mehnaat se sub kuch khass app kay liye banaya hain…
Omar Bahi: Acha toh phir theek hain aggar Muskaan betiya nay apnay haathoon se banaya hain toh main rukh jata hoon…
Padma: Chalay issi bahnay he sahi app rukay toh sahi…
Shashank: Chalo bahi chaley bahut bhook lagi hain…Chutki ko bhi bula loon…
Muskaan: Bauji voh kamray mein hain app chaley main lay kay aaye…
Shashank: Theek hain beta…(Padma, Omar Bahi, and Shashank head towards the dining room and Muskaan goes and gets Nikki.)

~~Nikki's Room~~

Muskaan enters and finds her dancing to some loud song on the Radio….
Nikki: Hey Jiji…kitna acha gana aao na meray saath dance karo….(she spins her around and Muski doe couple of steps with her smiling and dancing, then she switches off the radio bringing Nikki back to reality.)
Muskaan: Hmm toh kaprey change karnay kay bahanay yeh ho raha hain ander…Nikki maa ko paata chal gaya na toh bahut daat paray gee…
Nikki: (hugs her) Nope…aisa kabhi nahi hoga kyunki meri Jiji mujhay hameesha save kar leyti hain…
Muskaan: Hogaya tera….abb chal neechay dinner per Omar chachu aur sub intezaar kar rahay hain…  
Nikki: Acha Jiji main theek lag rahi hoon na…(She puts on the dupatta and asks.)
Muskaan: Bahut pyaari lag rahi hain meri Chutki…(she fixes it for her and pinches her cheek lightly)
Nikki: Thank you…Chalo chalay mujhay bahut bhook lagi hain…

~~Muskaan and Nikki Join the rest of the family for the dinner and they all sit together and eat while remembering various incidents of Muskaan and Nikki's childhood days. Omar Bahi and Shashank also share their college adventures with the family and everyone enjoys the light conversation over delicious Dinner. Before anyone realized, it was time for Omar Bahi to head back to town as it was getting late and so he got up and bid Muski, Padma, and Nikki goodbye with a promise of coming back soon as Nikki wanted to know more stories about Shashank's college days. ~~

~Omar and Shashank walking towards the door~
Omar: Saach Shashank ajj teray saath yun Dinner kar kay bara maza aaya…Aur Kahnay ka toh koi jawaab he nahi hain…Meri dua hain kay tumhari dono beytiyoon ki jald he achay say ghar mein shaadi hoon aur unn ko duniya ki saari khusiyaan millay….
Shashank: Haan Omar abb meri aur Padma ki bhi yahi Khawish hain kay Muski ki shaadi kahein achay se ghar mein hojaye…
Omar: Jaantay hoon Shashank tum mujhse pooch rahay thay na kay maine Muskaan ko kaisa pehchaan liya…saach kaho toh tumhari beyti ki baatein loog dur dur tak kartey hain…uski tareefay maine kal tak sirf suni thi per ajj dekh bhi li hain… Jub beyti itni achi hain toh main yeh yakeen se keh sakta hoon kay rishtey toh aatey he hongay…?
Shashank: Haan rishtey toh aatey hain per ajj kal kay badaltey zaamanay mein abb tak koi ais arishta nahi aaya jo saach mein meri Muskaan kay laiq hoon…
Omar: Koi khass khawish hain teri Muskaan kay barey mein…?
Shashank: Nahi Omar... aisa kuch nahi hain main aur Padma toh yahi chahtay hain kay jis ghar mein bhi voh jaaye vaahan kay loog usko dil se qabool karay…ussay vahi pyaar de jo humnay ussay diya…uskay khawboon aur armaanon ki izzat karay…bus aik acha ghar jis mein main apni Muskaan ko khush dekh sako…  
Omar: Agaar aisi baat hain Shashank toh meri nazar mein aik bahut acha rishta hain…larka aik bahut achi aur well known family se hain…aur meray kahyaal se tum jaantay hon unhay….
Shashank: Kuan?
Omar: Delhi kay Malik Group of Industries kay baarey mein toh suna hoga na?
Shashank: Haan… vahi jo Anurag Malik ki hain…?
Omar: Exactly vahi… actually Anurag ji se meri kafi jaan pehchaan hain aur ajj kal voh apnay chotay betay Rahul kay liye aik achay rishtay ki talaash mein hain… Rahul ne MBBS kiya hain…ajj kal Sanjeevani mein Internship kar raha hain…bahut kabil doctor banay ga…
Shashank: Per Omar itnay barey loogoon kay barey mein toh maine sapnay mein bhi nahi…
Omar: uff ho…! Bahi dekho kya baray gharanay kay logoon ko achi bahu nahi chiayay hoti… Vaisay saach baat batao toh Anuraag ji dil kay bahut achay hain…itna sub kuch paanay kay bawajood bahut he saaf dil aur shareef hain…kabhi na ajj tak kissi ka bura chaha na kiya…Bahut he achi family hain…Muskaan kay liye yeh family bilqual perfect rahaygee…
Shashank: (thinks a little) per Omar hum toh Mussorie kay chotay sehar mein rehnay waaley…
Omar: Dekho Shashnak Muskaan meri beyti jaise he hain aur aggar mujhay yeh rishta usskay liye theek nahi lagta toh main kabhi nahi kehta…abb jaldi se uski photo do mujhay aur yeh sub soochna band karo…aik baar Anuraag ji aur Ananya Babhi se millo toh sahi khud dekh lay na kitnay achay loog hain…
Shashank: Theek hain main abhi laaya…(he runs indside to Padma and tells her everything, she is gald to hear the news and tells Nikki to get Muskaan's Photo from her Family Album. Nikki, Padma, and Shashank enclose Muskaan's beautiful picture in an envelope and Shashank rushes outside and hands it to Omar who was now in the car ready to leave.)
Omar: (taking the envelope from him he smiles) Theek hain Shashank hum bahut jald millay gay…Muskaan betiya ka rishta tum pakaa samjho…
Shashank: (Smiles) Apna Kahyaal rakhna Omar aur humein tumhara intezaar rahay ga…(he waves good bye to him as he leaves.)

~Shashank makes his way back inside the house feeling content about the decision he had made. He had full trust in Omar as he was one of his best friends, he knew whatever Omar had in his mind was intended for Muskaan's happiness and so he has nothing to worry about. This was a great start to something great and he could feel that instinct as a proud father. Meanwhile Padma and Nikki were super excited about the fact that Muskaan's photo had been sent down to Delhi to one of the well known families- the Maliks. Their excitement is literally reflecting in their vibrant smiles. Both of them are trying hard to hide it as Muskaan has no clue about any of this since she was busy in the kitchen when the entire Photo thing had happened. Padma told Nikki not to say anything but Nikki being the worst secret keeper especially when the secret is this big brust out with it as she is helping Padma and Muskaan clean up in the kitchen.~

Nikki: Maa mujhay bhi aik photo do na meri…mujhay zoo behjni hain…
Padma: Nikki….yeh toh kya keh rahi hain…
Nikki: Yeh kya baat hui…Jiji ki photo Delhi tak jaa sakti hain aur meri zoo tak nahi jas sakti…(she bites her tounge after blurting it out, Padma turns and glares at her, while Muskaan looks up questionably at Nikki and Padma both.)
Muskaan: Nikki? Maa? Yeh kya horaha hain?
Padma: Nahi beta kuch nahi…to iss Nikki ki baatoon pe dehyaan na de…(she says drying the dishes that Muskaan was handing her after washing.)
Nikki: Maa per Jiji se kub tak chupa kay rakhay kay Delhi waalay ki baat…
Padma: Oye Chutki…teray pait mein na koi baat nahi tikti…
Muskaan: Maa kuansi baat…? (still confused)
Padma: Haye Rabba…! (she suddenly remembers something) main toh teray bauji ki dawah aur dhood dena bhool he gaye…chal Chutki abb toh he bata de apni Jiji ko joy eh pooch rahi hain… main chali teray bauji kay pass…(she takes the glass of milk and his medicines from the cabinet and leaves Nikki and Muski alone in the kitchen.)
Muskaan: Toh abb bata kuan hain yeh Delhi waaley? (she asks drying off her hands after finising the dishes.)
Nikki: (comes closer to her as if she was going to whisper something) Kyun Batao! (instead of whispering she yells and runs away from there while Muskaan runs after her.)
Muskaan: Rukh…Rukh toh…
Nikki: (running inside Muskaan's room) Nahi batao ge…haha..haa ha..Nahi batao gee…
Muskaan: Chutki batao na…please…(she pleaded Nikki who was jumping on Muski's bed)
Nikki: (looks at her sister and then lays down on her bed as Muski too lays next to her hitting her with her teddy bare.) Bahut curious ho na?
Muskaan: Haan ho…issi liye toh pooch rahi hoon..abb batao na…
Nikki: Okay baba fine..(she cuddles into the teddy bare still laying next to Muskaan who was waiting for her to tell the entire story behind the "Delhi waaley")
Muskaan: Nikki jaldi bata na…
Nikki: Uff! Itni excitement Jiji abhi sirf tasveer behjee hain koi baat paki nahi ki…
Muskaan: meri tasveer behjee hain…? (She sits up and asks softly as she finally realizes that this is about her marriage.)
Nikki: Jiji Bauji bahut khush lag rahay thay…janti hoon voh keh rahay thay unhay lagta hain kar teray naseeb ussi ghar se juray hain jahaan voh apni pyaari beyti Muskaan ki tasveer behj rahay hain…aur Maa voh toh itni khush thi kay ro rahi thi…Jaanti hoon Jiji…(She sits up on the bed so that she could tell Muski how she was feeling but finds her in tears before she continued.) Arey Jiji app ro rahi hoon?
Muski: (Looks up at Nikki getting emotional)
Nikki: (smiles and wipes her tears away) Oye abhi tohdi koi app jarahi hoon…uss Delhi waaley ko pehlay Nikita ka exam pass karna hoga tabhi baat aagay bhar sakti hain…Kyunki akhir saali bhi toh adhi gahrwaali hoti hain…(she laughs )
Muskaan: (Smiles widely and hugs Nikki)
Nikki: Arey Vah…ajj toh free mein Hugs bhi mill rahi hain…Delhi waaloon ki wajah se meri Jiji mein itna bara change…haye mein marr jawan…!
Muskaan: (laughs and breaks from the hug) Nikki tub hi na…
Nikki: Acha yeh sub chor batao na kaisa lag raha hain…kya sooch rahi hoon?
Muskaan: Sooch rahi hoon kay iss ghar ko chor kar kaisey jao gee…kaisey tujhay, maa, aur bauji ko yahaan chor jao gee…aik ajeeb sa ehsaas hain…
Nikki: Darr lag raha hain? (she lays in her laps asking the question)
Muskaan: pata nahi… (Muskaan caresses her hair gently and smiles looking down at her sister.)

~That night as Muskaan laid in her bed ready to fall asleep she found some strange kind of feeling taking roots inside her. It wasn't fear or hesitation but it was that weirdness that she felt after knowing that her picture has been sent to someone that could possibly be her life partner, the person she is suppose to spend the rest of her life with. At first she didn't feel anything but then some random thoughts came over her mind and she became curious as this was the first time she had been in a situation like this. She had always complied with her parents wishes and she knew that she has nothing to worry about as they would always put her happiness above anything else. She didn't know why her heart was beating faster than usual, she was feeling a little nervous as if she was going to give an exam or something, laying in her bed she was looking out the window from where she could clearly see the moon and feel the light wind filter through the soft curtains, her thoughts were just random and full of genuine curiosity. She didn't know how to feel but, she definitely knew that she had never felt the feeling of such shyness and uncertainty before. Smiling to herself she lightly hits her head and says a goodnight prayer looking at the moon as it was one constant that always seemed to be there whenever she needed to think or just reflect upon her own feelings. The moon was the quiet calm in her life and she was used to of falling asleep staring at it.~~

Precap: Malik's In Delhi....

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Awesome part!!

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amazing part!!

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it was so adorable
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oh cool imane this is with a arranged marriage concept right ...i soo wanted u to write sumthing like this Embarrassed........i m really enjoying reading this FF great jobThumbs Up...xcited for Rahuls entry ..thanks alot for the PM

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really nice ff!!

can't wait for it to continue!

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