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From Dorkdom to cool-ville Part 14 Page 9 (Page 9)

MrMonster Senior Member

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Posted: 06 September 2009 at 9:24pm | IP Logged

Part 14:

Michael finally putted me down in the front meadow, after i struggled so much.. Honey was so happy that i was here..

"You know i do have legs" i mumbled to honey..
"until your with me your not allowed to get tired" honey grinned, then he hopped his way front of us, i remmebered when we were passing Jessica and Emma, Jessica's green eyes were playful, she was laughing at me, practically that's cause her dark skin wasn't gone pale, on the other hand Emma's already snow-white skin went paler paler paler, for a minuet i thought there wasn't any blood in her vein, her crystal blue eyes were widned and she was scolding at Jessica for laughing, john grinned my way, john was a bit tan he was similar to Mike, but he wasn't a mile tall.. coming back to the presant i gazed on the beautiful black and white gate front of me, it had the Yin Yang sign on it, Honey grabbed me by my arm and pulled me, for someone four feet tall, he had a good grip, he pushed the door open, and 'dragged' me upstairs, i don't how many stories did his manison had, seriously i think it was 12 stories or something, he dragged me up, up, upper, Michael wasn't making any effort to catch up with us, but when honey finally stopped michael came in front of us, for a minuet i though he had superpowers, but i heard the elevator close behind him, i was getting dizzy, i think i was dangling in mid-air, honey was laughing..

"Umm honey why didn't we took the elevator?" i said dizzily, it seems like whenever i am with him i get dizzy..
"cause that was more fun!!" honry exclaimed "Rose you don't look so good?" he said with a puppy dog face..
"that because i am not used to being carried around and then being gripped and dragged up many stories.." i said shaking my head to stop the dizziness "on what floor are we?"
"6th.. my cake room is here" he said as he walkied pass me, why didn't that surprise me?.. just as i was walking someone else passed us, he didn't look like a servant he was wearing a kerate-costume..
"have a guest?" he said mockingly..
"if you did anything to make rose feel uncomfortable marke,  i'll flate you llike a pancake and feed you to the birds!" Honey warned, he didn't look quite honey at that point..
"Honey?" i said with curiousity..
"i am tired of you bossing me around shrimp" Mark shouted..
"i am older then you by years.."
"but still i am much more taller then you aliean!"
"then why don't you go bump your head somewhere stretch"
"that's it" With that Mark shrply moved to Honey, he swinged his leg to hit honey in his calf but honey surprisingly reversed the whole action, and left Mark flying through the air and then crash into the wall..
"Aghh i can't even stand to look at you" Honey said with depression, i just froze there i had no idea honey could send him flying and crash into the wall
"Rose are you well?" Honey said turning to me..
"i am fine.. but i don;' now about him"
"he's bruised just like his ego.." Honey said unmercifuly, he then put on the cheerful smile and said "let's have some cake" Honey said, i nodded my head, that made him fly off dragging me along with him, in the whole fiasco i forgot to see Mike's expression. i turned around, mike's hands were in his uniform pockets, his eyes were closed and he was shaking his head.. as if what happened wasn't something new..
I sat on the comfy armchair in front of the fireplace, and took a fork full of cake, chocolate cake, i didn't like sweets much but i had to shake of the feeling of bitterness after watching honey like that, who knew honey could send a guy flying through the air and then crash into the wall, he's only four feet tall!,  i glanced at mike he was standing next to honey's armchair.. his face was pleasant, he was happy to see honey happy i guess, i sunk in the armchair, honey smirked, i just let a plesant smile touch my face..
"Rose! you know the other night i was eating cake and it was yummy......" Honey blabbed on.. i listened to what he was saying.. he was talking about cakes, honey was so cute, i can't believe it..
"and there was the chocolate one which was left from dinner and that's why it didn't feel so fresh but i still ate it.. " he excliamed. Honey was so innocnet i couldn't believe what i saw a few moments ago, Honey sent the man flying in air, but i thought i shouldn't bring it up.. he looked quite angry when he was talking to that person.. i glanced to the fire flames sizzling in the firplace, god this place is soo cozy i wish i could stay here forever but oh well.. it's 5:40.. i didn't notice the time pass by...

"Um honey i am sad intruppt but i have to go.."
"no don't leave i didn't even get to the good part!!"
"Honey i'll let you talk at lunchtime tomorrow.."
"honey i am really sorry but i've got to get home, i am having dinner with a guest.."
"yeah fine but there's no school tomorrow sily"
"Oh? then maybe we could talk on monday.."
"i promise.."
"YAY!!" Honey jumped into the air, and made me jump too.. then honey stopped and yawned..
"Henry get some sleep.. "
"but michael"
"Henry it's nap time, and i think you should let Ms. Martain go now.."
"Aaa Michael your so cold.. "
"no Honey it's.." I said butting in..
"I'll go but promise you'll drop rose"
"fine.." Michael sighed.. he held Honey up by the collar of his shirt. and went out the door.. after sometime he came back alone, but with a jacket..
"it's cold outside you should wear this.." he handed me the black leather jacket, i seriously didn't want to hesitate with a six foot senior.. so i slipped my arms in it, it was made of real leather, that i can tell..
he was walking in front of me, and i was following like a sheep, he silently took his steps and didn't bother to look behind, as we were walking we passed by some sort of room, i glanced at the yin and yan circle that was drawn on the doir, there were slippers outside, it was a Dojo, i gazed at the white walls, and the master that was in there.. i stood there for sometime, breaking my train of thought was mike.. he sighed heavily..
"michael why is there a Dojo in front of honey's house?" I asked him, i was seriously scared to ask him.. he was scaring the hel out of me with the silent treatment, unexpectedly mike took some steps to come near me, and held my hand he told me:
"i'll tell you in the car.." he sighed.. i waited, finally i'll be able to hear his deep beautiful voice...

 i know this is so a cliffhanger, but you know next part will be very interestng, finally you'll read about michael's magical voice... of course you won't hear it, but it's an edward cullen voice alright and i'll explain  Rose's looks in the next update.

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Robsessed. IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 07 September 2009 at 11:25am | IP Logged
Oo, great update.
I'm wondering ... is he a vampire or werewolf or magician or wizard or something magical? He's always in his own world, and why does Honey have to have a nap at 5:30 PM ? Haha, I love your story Hala. Better then mine too. Record Michaels voice and email it to me. Lol, update soon.
MrMonster Senior Member

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Posted: 08 September 2009 at 8:34am | IP Logged
well my story isn't all that better then you, frankly i am inspired by another thing that's why.. Anyway no michael is not a vampire, werewolf, magician, wizard.. or any of those things.. god stop reading supernatural books.. LOLLOL Mike's just.. well i can't tell you..
Part 15:
the thought of being alone with a guy like michael gave me shivers.. he opened the car door and told me to get in.. i was frozen but how could i tell him it's not that cold.. i silently walked i am not sure how i defrosed but oh well.. i sat down.. and he sat next to me in the back seat, the driver started driving and michael sighed..
"The Dojo? Well Henry's ancesters were one of the most powerful fighters of their Era.. the Dojo, the Yin and Yang, they're all Some of the Symbols the represent Sohma clan.." he started, i narrowed my eyes Sohma?
"Henry's Ansecters date back to the 16th century Japan Era, of course after moving to Englan they changed their last name" He finished, he didn't even look at me he just looked out the window watching each tree.. that makes ssense, i wouldn't be surprised if Henry started calling me Ro-chan LOLLOL
"you remember that boy earlier? Mark stevens Henry's younger brother" What? his brother? he looked like a rival to me..
"it's shocking yes.. those two never got along, espcieally since Mark always thought low of Henry, he always took his superiorty on henry because of his legnth, it kinda like the idea of men being Superior to women.. but henry was always better in interacting with other humans, he never had to hide himself to anybody, he's childlike everyone knows and accepts him like that, while Mark always struggled to be accepted into society but never was, people saw through the mask that he put on, no one wanted to be with him because he didn't want to be himself, because of the growing jelousy that aflamed his heart he hated his older brother for no practicle reason, for being more himself, and yes well he does think of him as an alien because the amount of cake he eats everyday is well.. let's face it impossible to be consumed by a human LOLLOLLOL" beside saying a funny comment he still didn't laugh, i tilted my head to see if he was smiling.. but no. ..
"you'll never see mark at public places, he's too scared to reveal himself to anyone.. he's a fool" he finished, wow his voice was beautiful all i can say.. seriously the depth of royality in his voice was just great, he was still looking out the window, So Honey's brother dispised him for sucha  stupid reason? i couldn't believe it..  wow still he was so cheerful no one will believe that at his home his brother treated him like that.. Michael really dos care about him, somebody who knows the history of your clan.. the dead silence was furious i guess, we just sat there doing nothing, he finally closed the window and turned around, i don't think he really did want to talk anymore.. but still i think i was shivering.. he just glanced to me, i wasn't used to being quiet like this, seriously if it was Addie he couldn't stop flirting with me, Dan will politly be talking about some novels, i mean this was soo new to me, i can't believe how much i missed Dan and Addie's company, well i guess you can say Addie, was the princy type for now i guess, Dan was the poet type, Honey was the Lolishota type, the cute and innocent.. and Mike i guess he was the strong silent type.. wow i couldn't believe how many boys i had in my life.. right now i just wished that michael will open up a little.. i want to know more about him.. i am sure he's not phsychic but i think he read my expression..
"I am not really much of a person, i am mostly secretive" he sighed, as if people expected so much of him. i glanced out the window i guess we were coming close i could recognize the street from now.. i felt a little cold.. i don't know.. he streched out his hand and touched my forehead..
"A fever..you should really take better care of yourself" he whispered, i felt like.. furious, i don't know, i saw my house get near.. i opened the door and got out..
"See you on saturday Ms.Martain" i heard him say, wow now that was an experience i couldn't believe what happened. Oh god. i felt like fainting, i guess i could run a fever, i am feeling a bit ill, but Wow i never knew I could encounter such an experience with michael, I didn't know how to feel about it, i just wanted to know a little more about michael, how's that possible?, but Mike he was just so secritive.. i couldn't believe what i just wittnessed, Michael was the only thing on my mind.. michael.. Michael.. I opened the front door and got in. i noticed there was a heavy aroma in the room, oh yeah the dinner.. i didn't notice but i was getting really hungary as if i was fasting.. i hurried in.
"Honey where were you?" mom asked popping her head from the kitchen..
"Well i think you forgot to return the jacket" I glanced at the brown Jacket on my shoulders..
"I'll return it tomorrow.."
"well get ready It's almost seven. i left you clothes on the bed " mom said finally going back in the kitchen.
I didn't notice the time go by it's almost seven.. i was just so lost in michael.. guess what i heard from the TV.. Michael Jackson!, i couldn't believe it, i slammed my hands on my ears and ran to my bedroom, i closed the door, finally i let my hands fall from the gravity, i looked on the bed.. Oh god mom left me a black dress,.. i opened the door and yelled:
"no argeuments Rose your wearing that"
Ugh I hate my life..
I brushed my hair.. i looked up the miror seeing my reflection.. the black dress was sleaveless, it was all shiny Dead, my hair was a little wavy and a lot straight, it was looking black cause of the dress, or usually it was brown, i didn't wear any make-up but mom forced me a red lipstick.. she said it was perfect with my white skin, red lipstick doesn't really look bad with dark skin, i've seen Jessica once wearing redlipstick, but it was only a costume party in which she was dressed up as your everyday girly.. Jessica is a tomboy, a real one it's hard to find rich people tomboys, but Jessica's the youngest one in the family, she doesn't really have much on her shoulders, i tried to distract myself with other thoughts but michael wasn't going out.. i wasnt falling in love.. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO........ I mentally kicked myslef, a robot in love? there isn't even a novel about the dumb thing.. when i stepped out of my room, UD was watching the game, no intrest as if he was turned into Jasper, LOL twilight starting to effect my life.. he glanced at me when mom called me.. i am not sure exactly what was on his mind but he just grnned, i don't know the hell going on here.. News flash the Edwardlike UD grins after 3 years!. the door bell rang, finally the idiot's here... my dad hurried up to the door and opened it he blurted out a Welcome!, Dad moved from the honrable Guest. Oh no.. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
I love cliffhangers! oh god wait for tomorrow everyone!
Robsessed. IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 3608

Posted: 08 September 2009 at 9:25am | IP Logged
Haha, funny. Is the bosses kid Addie? Haha, she's falling in love with Michael. Good update. All I can say is Im waiting for the next part so that I can comment on that. Keep up the good work Hala.
*Nishi* IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 13 September 2009 at 7:25pm | IP Logged
man you've updated so much without telling me ROFLAngry
MrMonster Senior Member

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Posted: 15 September 2009 at 2:34pm | IP Logged
"Rose that's ken.. " dad exclaimed..
"I know " i grumbled.. out of all the people in this damned world!
"Hmm?" Dad asked me..
"nothing dad i am developing a habit of talking to myself" i commented, sigh i might as well be in a mental hospital rather then be stuck for the night with Ken. he grinned. yes my father's Boss's psychic son LOL LOL
".. and that's when i realized that we were out of pins" dad laughed at a depressing story, i felt like crying! next to me was ken and dad was telling boring old sad depressing stories.. AGH! Even the food wasn't going to spark me up.. but when i glanced at Ken he was smiling well just playing 'going along' gig.. Man i can't believe he could smile after dad's story, as for mom, she excused herself, she's too experienced with dad whenever he says: "Oh that's reminds me of" but i was just too depressed to go any where, i'd really rather be with honey, Dan, michael or even Addie, Dad + Ken was just too.. and as for UD he stopped smiling awhile ago that's the reason i was so shocked when he grinned at me.. God!!
I slumped to my locker only to find Ken standing there..
"Good morning Ms. Martin" he told me.
"what's so goof about it since i've seen your face.." i said as i opened my locker ignoring him..
"Ahh i wouldn't do that if i were you
"well your not me. and why won't you?"
"I am your father's boss"
"no correction your my father's Boss's Psychic son"
"well yes, but even though i am still at the position to fire your father"
"My dad is a bad dad not a bad doctor.."
"i do have the capacity of firing from the medical profession you know" he paused and grinned, i closed my locker and thought for a moment..
"what do you want?" i asked him with an edge..
"Mm-hm attitude, right in the bad list"
"I can't be your lackey i am girl!"
"you girls keep bickering about equality, so now you're treated equally.."
"huh.. tell me one thing.. why the hell are you so intrested in me?"
"frankly.. you're father broke a vase of 80 million.."
"your joking!"
"not in the least. and i thought you might want to help him pay off the debt.."
"Oh man! so till when do we have to play master-servant!"
"hard question 80 thousand pounds is not a small debt you know"
"but you're a math genius.."
"not a psychic.. well in a way i am. but i am not a future predicting psychic.."
"but quite frankly without you're help your father will pay that debt in two years.."
"i guess.. children always have to be the reponsible people in the house.."
"your house"
"my house is a mad house.."
"I know that.. now hold this" he gave me a bunch of books, day 1 of lackdom..
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------hey guys sorry for not updating i got caught up with things, well right now the next part will be kinda   focused on ken .. then Addie will be back

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Robsessed. IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 15 September 2009 at 2:41pm | IP Logged
Hey this is really good. Ken makes me laugh! He is really stupid and is getting on my nerves! Yaar where is my Addie? I miss him soo much! You didn't PM me Hala? Vat is this? ROFL  

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