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Originally posted by Cardenia

Hi Sinnie
Nice FF dear .. :)


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after 2 years a day before rajat's and vikrant's birthday

Mr Roy was sitting in his office when someone knocks on his door

Mr Roy: yes come inside

Mr Malhotra enter the room

Mr Roy stands up

Mr Roy:o Mr Malhotra  aaj aap galat office me aa gaye lagta hai

Mr Malhotra:kyon ye aapka office nahi hai

Mr Roy:nahi mujhe laga aap galti se apne office ki jagah yahaan aa gaye

both laughs

Mr Roy:aur sunaiye yahaan kaise aana hua

Mr Malhotra:ji hum yahaan aapko invite karne aaye hai

Mr Roy:invite?????

(Mr Roy amd Mr Malhotra never had formal talks)

Mr Malhotra:ji kal humari betiyon ka birthday hai to humne ek party rakhi hai usi ke liye...

Mr Roy:i am so sorry but i won't be able to come as we also hav a party at our home

Mr Malhotra giving a confused look

Mr Roy:actually kal mere bhi dono beto ka birthday hai

Mr Malhotra:ye to bahut achi baat hai ........well me soch raha hu kyon na hum humare bacho ka birthday ek saath celebrate kar le ........ A GRAND PARTY

Mr Roy:thats  a great idea

and the conversation went on like this

next day at the parties venue

Mr Roy and Mr Malhotra were standing with thier wives

Mr Malhotra:aapke bete kahin nazar nahi aa rahe akhir kahaan hai dono

Mrs Roy:vo dono aapko pary me jahaan bhi gadbad nazar aaye samjh lijiyega wahin hai dono....

everyone laughs

Mr Roy:bhai aapne apni pariyon ko kahaan chupa rakha hai hume bhi to milwaiye unse .......

Mr Malhotra:vo dono bhi yahin kahin party me masti kar rahi hongi....

then suddenly hears the voice of childrens fighting all of them moved in that direction and saw all four of them fighting there

rajat:galti meri nahi tumhari hai samjhi tum

sunaina:ji nahi dekh kar tum nahi chal rahe the

vikrant:ji nahi tum andho ki tarah chal rahi thi

sanaya:meri behen ki koi galti nahi hai saari galti tumhare bhai ki hai samjhe tum

they all tried their best to stop them but failed

sanaya:tum dono bandar na jaane kahaan se aa gaye humari bday party me

rajat:tum dono bandariyan

finally Mr Roy and Mr Malhotra stopped them

Mr Roy:jagada baad me kar lena pehle cake kaat lo

two very big choclate cakes were brought

rajat:ye do cake kyon hai yahaan hum to har baar ek hi kaat te hai

vikrant:pata nahi....

Mrs Roy:beta aaj in dono ka bhi bday hai isliye ye dusra cake inke liye hai

sanaya hears this and says" in dono budhuo ko to ye bhi nahi pata ki ye aakhir kiski bday party me aaye hai .......

sunaina:pagal to aise hi hote hai

rajat as he hears this gets very angry as he was very short tempered

rajat:kya kahaan tumne....


rajat:tumhari itni himmat tumne mujhe pagal kaha tum ruko abhi... he looked here and there and then took a piece of cake and throwed it on sunaina but unfortunately it went directly on sanaya's face she also takes a piece and throws it but this tym it hits vikrant and like this they started fighting and everyone there was laughing badly....

some how Mrs Roy and Mrs Malhotra stopped them and takes them to their houses


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OMG...its amazing....nice one...


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part 4


At Nandini mansion


rajat and vikrant were sitting on the sofa with their heads down and Mrs Roy was standing in front of them with her hands fold and was giving a very angry look to rajat and vikrant while Mr Roy was standing Quite


Mrs Roy:ye kya kiya hai tum dono ne aaj tum dono ko itna bhi nahi pata ki parties me kaise behave karte hai......  >:(


Vikrant:maa humne ku6 nahi kiya vo to un dono ne pehle jhagda shuru kiya tha..........


Rajat:haan maa un dono ne hi shuru kiya tha....


Mrs Roy:mujhe pata hai jhagada kisne shuru kiya hoga aur vese bhi tum dono itne bhi seedhe nahi ho jitna banane ki koshish kar rahe ho........


Mr Roy:ab rehne bhi dijiye na bache hai galti ho gayi ...... jane dijiye


Mrs Roy:aap to chup hi rahiye aaphi ne in dono ko sar par chada rakha hai ........


Mr Roy places a fingure on his lips


Rajat:maa usne pehle mujhe pagal kahaa tha


Mrs Roy:aur tumne cake udha kar fake diya haina........


Rajat:maa vo gussa aa gaya tha


Mrs Roy:(becoming a bit polite)beta apne gusse par control karna sikho.......


Rajat:sorry ma aage se nahi hoga....


vikrant:haan ma sorry aur hum sanaya aur sunaina se bhi sorry maang lenge


Rajat:hum kyon mangenge galti unki thi vo mangengi


Mrs Roy bends down on her knees just too come to rajat's level


Mrs Roy:(in a very polite tone)beta agar hum sorry maang lenge to hum chote nahi ho jaenge mana galti unki thi par thodi to aapki bhi thi na


Rajat:theek hai me sorry maang loonga


same was happening at Mr Malhotra's house




next day


Mr Malhotra was sitting in his drawing room then the door bell rings


Mr Malhotra:thomas see who's there on the door


A servant comes out and opens the door and Mr Roy with his family was standing


Mr malhotra:thomas who's there


servant:sir its Mr Roy and his Family.............(turns to mr roy)sir plz come inside


Mr Malhotra: Mr Roy welcome... welcome......


Mr Roy comes inside


Mr malhotra:hav a seat..........(turns towards thomas)thomas go and call your mam


thomas goes upstairs and call Mrs Malhotra


Mrs Malhotra:namaste....


Mr malhotra:to aaj yahaan kaise aana hua


Mr Roy:kyon kya hum yahaan nahi aa sakte


Mr Malhotra:aa sakte hai kyon nahi aa sakte......


Mrs:ji bhai saabvo hum kal ke liye maafi mangne aaye hai kal rajat aur vikrant ki wajah se saari party bigad gayi to.......


Mrs M:are aap kyon maafi maang rahi hai isme in dono ki kya galti hai abhi bache to jhgada kar liya aur vese bhi aap un dono ko jitna seedha samjh rahi hai utni vo dono hai nahi....


Mr R:are par vo dono hai kahaan....


Mr M:ji vo dono apne room me hongi......... me abhi bula deta hu...............


Mr M calls out their name and both of them comes running out from their rooms


Mrs M:sanaya sunaina say hi to rajat and vikrant....


sanaya& sunaina(flately):hi


Rajat and vikrant:hi... :)


rajat:kal ke liye sorry...


sunaina:meri taraf se bhi sorry...


sanaya and vikranr also says sorry to each other


rajat & vikrant:frnds...


sunaina & sanaya:ok............ frnds


and their parents were looking at them and smiling


Mr M:chalo ab aap charo bahar jaakar garden me khelo..


all four of them rushes out from the door as if they were waiting for someone to say this




samay bita aur charo ne apni skuling puri ki aur college ke bhi final year me hai samay ke saath kai cheeze badli par ek cheez jo nahi badli vo thi unki dosti..........inki dosti samay ke saath gahri hoti gayi aur kaun jaane agle pal ye dosti kya ban jaye.................




At nandini mansion


it was 11:00 in the morning


Mr R  enters rajat's room where rajat was still sleeping his was covered with a blanket......Mrs R directly goes to window and opens the curtains and a direct sunlight falls on rajat but he turns his face to other side


Mrs R:Good morning beta......


Rajat:good morning mom


Mrs R:rajat teri tabiyat to theek hai beta aaj tu meri ek hi awaz me udh ......


Rajat:gud night maa... ;D


Mrs R: :o ye kya ho raha hai.........gud night.......... rajat beta tym dekho 12 baj gaye hai


Rajat:nahi ma 11 baje hai.....


Mrs R:jo bhi hai jaldi se udho aur ready ho jao


Rajat:maa plz aaj to sone do yesterday only we got free from our exams...


Mrs R:i know beta ....... but tum bhul rahe ho aaj kya date hai


rajat:kya hai maa 27 april hai aur kya


Mrs R:27 april  hai aaj.......


Rajat:27 april hai to kya........(then with a shock)o no 27 april mar gaya........ maa aap bhi na mujhe jaldi nahi udha sakti thi......... (and immediately runs to the washroom)


Mrs r:ye ladka kabhi nahi sudhrega... ;D


then she gets up and moves to vikrant's room which was just adjacent to rajat's room there vikrant was also sleeping


Mrs R:vikrant udho beta.....dekho aaj to rajat bhi tumse pehle udh gaya


Vikrant:to isme kya hai udh gaya to udh gaya mujhe to abhi sona hai.......


Mrs R:(thinking)ye aise nahi udhega Ku6 aur sochna padega.................


Mrs R:beta dekho sanaya ka phone aa raha hai......


vikrant gets up quikly and takes his cell from Mrs R but there was no call.....


vikrant:kya maa aapne fir mujhe budhu bana diya .....


then only his cell starts ringing and it was sanaya .......


Mrs R:meine koi budhu nahi banaya....... ab jaldi kar phone udha....


Vikrant:maa aap jaakar breakfast banao na .....


Mrs R:acha beta apni ma ko bahar bhejna chahta hai....


vikrant:mom.... plz.


Mrs R:acha theek hai jaldi se baat kar le aur fir ready hokar neeche aa jana.......


she exits the room...


Vikrant:hello sanaya....howz u dear


sanaya:i am f9.......acha ye batao tum dono ready huye yaa nahi....


vikrant:ready.....for wat


sanaya:are budhu aaj 27 april hai.....


Vikrant:o no me kaise bhul gaya.... tum dono kahaa ho aur itna disturbance kyon ho raha hai......


sanaya:hum tumhare ghar hi aa rahe hai......tum dono jaldi se tayaar ho jao aur rajat ko bhi bolo tayaar ho jaye....... abhi jata hu tayaar hone...... bye...







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its awsome.....




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I read all the parts,it's superb.Pls continue it soon.




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amazing update dear.....

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