MY FF~ ATUT BANDHAN~note on pg 11 - Page 2

Posted: 14 years ago
hello sinnie...wonderful update....gr8888 job....
Posted: 14 years ago
oye hoye..........................
hi sinnie..................
mee nitali..............
oye hoye yaar...................
thanks for updating it here.......................
ur ff is too good..........................

Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by SwatiAgrawal


hello sinnie...wonderful update....gr8888 job....


thanx........😊
Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by nitali


oye hoye..........................
hi sinnie..................
mee nitali..............
oye hoye yaar...................
thanks for updating it here.......................
ur ff is too good..........................



hi
thanx.......😊
Posted: 14 years ago
part 2

Everyone rushes to the hospital Mr Roy's brother was in ICU whereas his sister in law was in the ward and was now out of danger.

Mr Roy along with all the family members first went to see his sister in law but

she was still unconscious so they all came back and stood in coridor
then the door of the Icu opens and a doctor comes out

Mr roy:doctor..........my brother

doc:(silent).................he wants to meet u all.............

they all goes inside the room rajat was with Mrs Roy while vikrant was with Mr Roy
Mr Roy:bhaiya..........

he slowly opens his eyes and gives a smile then he looks at both the babies. He was not at all in condition to speak so he slowly raised his finger and pointed towards rajat and vikrant.Mr Roy and Mrs Roy brought both the babies near him he looked at both of them they were sleeping.then he placed his hands on their heads to bless them

Mrs roy:bhaiya ye rajat hai aur ye vikrant......

he was still looking at both of them then he slowly closed his eyes for forever................


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after three months at Mr Roy's house

every one was sitting in the living room

Mrs sangeeta(Mr roy's bhabhi):rajendra mujhe tumse ku6 baat karni hai

Mr Roy:haan bhabhi boliye na .........

Mrs sangeeta:meri aaj hi Mr Chopra se baat hui vo keh rahe the humari company kaafi loss me chal rahi hai...

Mr. Roy:ji bhabhi vo bhaiya ke baad ab company sambhalne wala koi nahi hai wahaan to....

Mrs sangeeta:isiliye me chahti hu tum Australia chale jaao aur vese bhi kisi na kisi ko to bussiness sambhalana hi hoga

Mr roy:par bhabhi Australia ka bussiness to aap aur bhaiya sambhalte the .......

Mrs sangeeta:haan par ab me Australia wapas nahi jaana chahti me yahin rehna chahti hu sabke saath.

Mr roy:par bhabhi agar me Aystralia chala jaonga to yahaan ka bussiness

Mrs sangeeta:vo me sambhal lungi aur vese bhi humara head office to Australia me hi hai to tum chaho to wahaan se bhi India ka saara bussiness control kar sakte ho

Mr Roy:theek hai bhabhi me aur nandni Australia chale jaaenge

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At Nandni Mansion in Australia

A car stops in front of the gate and Mr Roy nd Mrs Roy steps out of the car with rajat and vikrant in their hands

they enters the house and a servant brings there lugage inside and takes it to their room

Mrs Roy:hume yu is tarah sabse dur bilkul acha nahi lag raha

Mr Roy:acha to hume bhi nahi laga raha par kya kare ......

Mrs Roy:aur rajat aur vikrant bhi to abhi to abhi bache hai aur unhe humne unke pariwar se alag kar diya

Mr Roy:(silent)


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After four months

Mr Roy:are nandni humare rajkumaar kahaan hai

Mrs Roy:honge yahin kahin shaitaniyaan kar rahe honge aur vese bhi dono ne jabse ghutno par chalna shuru kiya hai mere pass to tikte hai nahi idhar se udhar bhaagte rehte hai aur mujhe bhi daudate rehte hai

Mr Roy:are aap is tarah gussa kyon ho rahi hai

Mrs Roy:acha gussa nahi ho to kya kare aap to chale jaate ho office mujhe in do shaitaano ke hawale karke koi mujhse pu6e mujh par kya bitati hai

Mr Roy holds her

Mr roy:vese ek baat to bolni padegi aap yu t khubsurat lagti hi hai par jab gusse me hoti hai to aur bhi jyada khubsurat lagti hai

Mrs Roy:kya kar rahe hai chodiye hume koi dekh lega

Mr roy :kaun dekhega .........koi hai hi nahi ghar me

tabhi aawaaz aati hai

hooooooooooooooooo

hey turns in the direction from the voice was coming .......rajat and vikrant both were sitting in front of the door with their legs crossed and one hand on their open mouth.both of them were making this noise

hoooooooooooo(aajkal ke bache bhi na....)

Mr Roy:aapne theek hi kahaa ye dono ku6 jyada hi shaitan ho gaye hai ..................inaka ku6 to karna padega.........................

as he completed his sentence both of them looked at him and gave a very sweet smile
and went out of the room Mr Roy also followed them while Mrs Roy again got back to work

...

At Mr Malhotra's house

Mr malhotra:sheetal........................................sheetal................................

she came to the living room with a knife in her hand(she was in the kitchen)

Mrs Malhotra:kya hua kyon chilla rahe hai aap

Mr Malhotra:are yaar vo kya hai na hume humari angels nahi mil rahi kahaan hai dono

Mrs Malhotra:aapne unhe kahaan dhunda

Mr Malhotra:room me .........

Mrs malhotra:galat jagah dhunda hai

MrMalhotra(a bit surprised):matlab

MrsMalhotra:matlab ye ki jabse aapki do pyaari si angels se ghutno par chalna shuru kiya vo dono yahaan kam aur garden me jyada milti hai

Mr Malhotra:garden mein??????????

Mrs Malhotra:ji haan garden me jis tarah aap apne office chale jaate ho apna kaam karne ke liye usi tarah ye dono bhi apke jaate hi apne kaam par chali jaati hai

Mr Malhotra:saaf saaf kahiye na kya keh rahi hai

Mrs Malhotra:hum ye keh rahe hai ki un dono ne ek naya kaam join kiya hai gardener ki saari mehnat par pani ferne ka .........................nahi nahi pani ferne ka nahi..............use jad se ukhadne ka............

Mr Malhotra:(confused)

Mrs Malhotra:are subah gardener chote 2 plantlets laga kar jaata hai aur apki dono shahzadiyaan unhe ukhad deti hai aur abhi bhi vahin kahin lag rahi hongi...........
Mrs Malhotra:ab jaakar aap apni pariyon ke saath kheliye aur mujhe mera kaam karne dijiye..........

she leaves for kitchen while Mr Malhotra leaves for garden

but there was no one in the garden so he gets a bit tensed but then he hears a voice coming from a corner he went there and he saw his two little princess their all in mud busy taking out the plantlets.he lift them in his arms and brought them back in the room

Mr Malhotra:aap dono wahaan kya kar rahi thi .........................

both of them were continuously looking at him and them started making funny faces on watching all those faces Mr Malhotra started laughing and forgets about wat he was talking.........................


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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Sinnie
Nice FF dear .. :)
 
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Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by Cardenia


Hi Sinnie
Nice FF dear .. :)
 
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thanx...........😊
Posted: 14 years ago
part3


after 2 years a day before rajat's and vikrant's birthday

Mr Roy was sitting in his office when someone knocks on his door

Mr Roy: yes come inside

Mr Malhotra enter the room

Mr Roy stands up

Mr Roy:o Mr Malhotra  aaj aap galat office me aa gaye lagta hai

Mr Malhotra:kyon ye aapka office nahi hai

Mr Roy:nahi mujhe laga aap galti se apne office ki jagah yahaan aa gaye

both laughs

Mr Roy:aur sunaiye yahaan kaise aana hua

Mr Malhotra:ji hum yahaan aapko invite karne aaye hai

Mr Roy:invite?????

(Mr Roy amd Mr Malhotra never had formal talks)

Mr Malhotra:ji kal humari betiyon ka birthday hai to humne ek party rakhi hai usi ke liye...

Mr Roy:i am so sorry but i won't be able to come as we also hav a party at our home

Mr Malhotra giving a confused look

Mr Roy:actually kal mere bhi dono beto ka birthday hai

Mr Malhotra:ye to bahut achi baat hai ........well me soch raha hu kyon na hum humare bacho ka birthday ek saath celebrate kar le ........ A GRAND PARTY

Mr Roy:thats  a great idea

and the conversation went on like this

next day at the parties venue

Mr Roy and Mr Malhotra were standing with thier wives

Mr Malhotra:aapke bete kahin nazar nahi aa rahe akhir kahaan hai dono

Mrs Roy:vo dono aapko pary me jahaan bhi gadbad nazar aaye samjh lijiyega wahin hai dono....

everyone laughs

Mr Roy:bhai aapne apni pariyon ko kahaan chupa rakha hai hume bhi to milwaiye unse .......

Mr Malhotra:vo dono bhi yahin kahin party me masti kar rahi hongi....

then suddenly hears the voice of childrens fighting all of them moved in that direction and saw all four of them fighting there

rajat:galti meri nahi tumhari hai samjhi tum

sunaina:ji nahi dekh kar tum nahi chal rahe the

vikrant:ji nahi tum andho ki tarah chal rahi thi

sanaya:meri behen ki koi galti nahi hai saari galti tumhare bhai ki hai samjhe tum

they all tried their best to stop them but failed

sanaya:tum dono bandar na jaane kahaan se aa gaye humari bday party me

rajat:tum dono bandariyan

finally Mr Roy and Mr Malhotra stopped them

Mr Roy:jagada baad me kar lena pehle cake kaat lo

two very big choclate cakes were brought

rajat:ye do cake kyon hai yahaan hum to har baar ek hi kaat te hai

vikrant:pata nahi....

Mrs Roy:beta aaj in dono ka bhi bday hai isliye ye dusra cake inke liye hai

sanaya hears this and says" in dono budhuo ko to ye bhi nahi pata ki ye aakhir kiski bday party me aaye hai .......

sunaina:pagal to aise hi hote hai

rajat as he hears this gets very angry as he was very short tempered

rajat:kya kahaan tumne....

sunaina:pagal

rajat:tumhari itni himmat tumne mujhe pagal kaha tum ruko abhi... he looked here and there and then took a piece of cake and throwed it on sunaina but unfortunately it went directly on sanaya's face she also takes a piece and throws it but this tym it hits vikrant and like this they started fighting and everyone there was laughing badly....

some how Mrs Roy and Mrs Malhotra stopped them and takes them to their houses

 
Posted: 14 years ago
OMG...its amazing....nice one...
Posted: 14 years ago

part 4

 

At Nandini mansion

 

rajat and vikrant were sitting on the sofa with their heads down and Mrs Roy was standing in front of them with her hands fold and was giving a very angry look to rajat and vikrant while Mr Roy was standing Quite

 

Mrs Roy:ye kya kiya hai tum dono ne aaj tum dono ko itna bhi nahi pata ki parties me kaise behave karte hai......  >:(

 

Vikrant:maa humne ku6 nahi kiya vo to un dono ne pehle jhagda shuru kiya tha..........

 

Rajat:haan maa un dono ne hi shuru kiya tha....

 

Mrs Roy:mujhe pata hai jhagada kisne shuru kiya hoga aur vese bhi tum dono itne bhi seedhe nahi ho jitna banane ki koshish kar rahe ho........

 

Mr Roy:ab rehne bhi dijiye na bache hai galti ho gayi ...... jane dijiye

 

Mrs Roy:aap to chup hi rahiye aaphi ne in dono ko sar par chada rakha hai ........

 

Mr Roy places a fingure on his lips

 

Rajat:maa usne pehle mujhe pagal kahaa tha

 

Mrs Roy:aur tumne cake udha kar fake diya haina........

 

Rajat:maa vo gussa aa gaya tha

 

Mrs Roy:(becoming a bit polite)beta apne gusse par control karna sikho.......

 

Rajat:sorry ma aage se nahi hoga....

 

vikrant:haan ma sorry aur hum sanaya aur sunaina se bhi sorry maang lenge

 

Rajat:hum kyon mangenge galti unki thi vo mangengi

 

Mrs Roy bends down on her knees just too come to rajat's level

 

Mrs Roy:(in a very polite tone)beta agar hum sorry maang lenge to hum chote nahi ho jaenge mana galti unki thi par thodi to aapki bhi thi na

 

Rajat:theek hai me sorry maang loonga

 

same was happening at Mr Malhotra's house

 

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next day

 

Mr Malhotra was sitting in his drawing room then the door bell rings

 

Mr Malhotra:thomas see who's there on the door

 

A servant comes out and opens the door and Mr Roy with his family was standing

 

Mr malhotra:thomas who's there

 

servant:sir its Mr Roy and his Family.............(turns to mr roy)sir plz come inside

 

Mr Malhotra: Mr Roy welcome... welcome......

 

Mr Roy comes inside

 

Mr malhotra:hav a seat..........(turns towards thomas)thomas go and call your mam

 

thomas goes upstairs and call Mrs Malhotra

 

Mrs Malhotra:namaste....

 

Mr malhotra:to aaj yahaan kaise aana hua

 

Mr Roy:kyon kya hum yahaan nahi aa sakte

 

Mr Malhotra:aa sakte hai kyon nahi aa sakte......

 

Mrs:ji bhai saabvo hum kal ke liye maafi mangne aaye hai kal rajat aur vikrant ki wajah se saari party bigad gayi to.......

 

Mrs M:are aap kyon maafi maang rahi hai isme in dono ki kya galti hai abhi bache to jhgada kar liya aur vese bhi aap un dono ko jitna seedha samjh rahi hai utni vo dono hai nahi....

 

Mr R:are par vo dono hai kahaan....

 

Mr M:ji vo dono apne room me hongi......... me abhi bula deta hu...............

 

Mr M calls out their name and both of them comes running out from their rooms

 

Mrs M:sanaya sunaina say hi to rajat and vikrant....

 

sanaya& sunaina(flately):hi

 

Rajat and vikrant:hi... :)

 

rajat:kal ke liye sorry...

 

sunaina:meri taraf se bhi sorry...

 

sanaya and vikranr also says sorry to each other

 

rajat & vikrant:frnds...

 

sunaina & sanaya:ok............ frnds

 

and their parents were looking at them and smiling

 

Mr M:chalo ab aap charo bahar jaakar garden me khelo..

 

all four of them rushes out from the door as if they were waiting for someone to say this

 

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samay bita aur charo ne apni skuling puri ki aur college ke bhi final year me hai samay ke saath kai cheeze badli par ek cheez jo nahi badli vo thi unki dosti..........inki dosti samay ke saath gahri hoti gayi aur kaun jaane agle pal ye dosti kya ban jaye.................

 

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At nandini mansion

 

it was 11:00 in the morning

 

Mr R  enters rajat's room where rajat was still sleeping his was covered with a blanket......Mrs R directly goes to window and opens the curtains and a direct sunlight falls on rajat but he turns his face to other side

 

Mrs R:Good morning beta......

 

Rajat:good morning mom

 

Mrs R:rajat teri tabiyat to theek hai beta aaj tu meri ek hi awaz me udh ......

 

Rajat:gud night maa... ;D

 

Mrs R: :o ye kya ho raha hai.........gud night.......... rajat beta tym dekho 12 baj gaye hai

 

Rajat:nahi ma 11 baje hai.....

 

Mrs R:jo bhi hai jaldi se udho aur ready ho jao

 

Rajat:maa plz aaj to sone do yesterday only we got free from our exams...

 

Mrs R:i know beta ....... but tum bhul rahe ho aaj kya date hai

 

rajat:kya hai maa 27 april hai aur kya

 

Mrs R:27 april  hai aaj.......

 

Rajat:27 april hai to kya........(then with a shock)o no 27 april mar gaya........ maa aap bhi na mujhe jaldi nahi udha sakti thi......... (and immediately runs to the washroom)

 

Mrs r:ye ladka kabhi nahi sudhrega... ;D

 

then she gets up and moves to vikrant's room which was just adjacent to rajat's room there vikrant was also sleeping

 

Mrs R:vikrant udho beta.....dekho aaj to rajat bhi tumse pehle udh gaya

 

Vikrant:to isme kya hai udh gaya to udh gaya mujhe to abhi sona hai.......

 

Mrs R:(thinking)ye aise nahi udhega Ku6 aur sochna padega.................

 

Mrs R:beta dekho sanaya ka phone aa raha hai......

 

vikrant gets up quikly and takes his cell from Mrs R but there was no call.....

 

vikrant:kya maa aapne fir mujhe budhu bana diya .....

 

then only his cell starts ringing and it was sanaya .......

 

Mrs R:meine koi budhu nahi banaya....... ab jaldi kar phone udha....

 

Vikrant:maa aap jaakar breakfast banao na .....

 

Mrs R:acha beta apni ma ko bahar bhejna chahta hai....

 

vikrant:mom.... plz.

 

Mrs R:acha theek hai jaldi se baat kar le aur fir ready hokar neeche aa jana.......

 

she exits the room...

 

Vikrant:hello sanaya....howz u dear

 

sanaya:i am f9.......acha ye batao tum dono ready huye yaa nahi....

 

vikrant:ready.....for wat

 

sanaya:are budhu aaj 27 april hai.....

 

Vikrant:o no me kaise bhul gaya.... tum dono kahaa ho aur itna disturbance kyon ho raha hai......

 

sanaya:hum tumhare ghar hi aa rahe hai......tum dono jaldi se tayaar ho jao aur rajat ko bhi bolo tayaar ho jaye.......

 

vikrant:ok....me abhi jata hu tayaar hone...... bye...

 

sanaya:byeeeeeeee

 

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