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MY FF~ ATUT BANDHAN~note on pg 11 - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
I read all the parts,it's superb.Pls continue it soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing update dear.....
awesum...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by: abira

its awsome.....



thanx......๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by: ektay11

gr88 update dear



thanx so much.........๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

I read all the parts,it's superb.Pls continue it soon.



thanx but the ud will be given by shruja di so ask her for uds hehehehe๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by: SwatiAgrawal

amazing update dear.....
awesum...



thanx...........๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 14 years ago

Here r the pics of the new character

 
Rajat Roy

Vikrant Roy
 
Sanaya Malhotra
 

Sunaina Malhotra

Edited by shruja - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

part 5

vikrant keeps his cell on the table near his bed and rushes to the washroom to  get ready....

vikrant gets completely ready in 15 min but rajat who went inside the wasgroom before him was still inside

sanaya and sunanina reaches nandini mansion

sanaya and sunaina:namste aunty...

Mr R:namste beta .......aur kaise ho tum dono

sanaya:hum log theek hai aunty....

sunaina:aunty rajat aur vikrant kahaa hai

Mr R:dono upar apne rooms me hai ........tayar ho rahe honge

then vikrant come downstairs

Mr R :lo ek to aa gaya...

with that she leaves the room


Vikrant:hi gurls.....

both says hi to him

sunaina:rajat kahaa hai

vikrant:he is getting ready

sunaina:ok to tum  dono yahin ruko me use bula kar lati hu nahi to vo to 1/2 ghante me bhi nahi aane wala

she goes upstairs and enters rajat's room rajat was still inside so she just goes and sits on the bed then her eyes falls over a wahite suit which probably rajat was going to wear

sunaina:he bhagwan ye ladka bhi na........

and she just picks up that suit and moves towards rajat's wardrobe and then she places that suit in it and then she starts looking for another one but couldn't find any better suit there then she opens another wardrobe although it had rajat's party wears but there also she din't liked any suit and then she opened his 3rd wardrobe which was inside his 2nd wardrobe and it  was the biggest one and was almost equal to his both wardrobe in size .she looked into it and then she got a black suite she picked it and came outside and closed his all the wardrobe nad placed that suit on his bed while she was placing the suit rajat came outside wearing a towel and one around his neck which was almost covering his body and then he looked at his room saw sunaina there he screamed

rajat:tum......tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho

she turns towards rajat but then when she saw him she also screamed and turns her back towards him..

rajat immediately rushed back to the bathroom and closed the door vikrant and sanaya also heared them screaming so they comes to rajat's room running

sanaya:kya hua tum chilayi kyon

sunaina starts laughing and tell them every thing all three of them were laughing like hell

rajat:tum teeno yahaan se jao

vikrant:jaa rahe hai jaa rahe..... :P

rajat:jaldi.....

all three of them leaves the room rajat slowly opens the door and peeps out when he was confirmed that no one is there he came out of the washroom and looked the door of his room and then after sometime he was finally ready and then he came downstair where all three of them were still laughing.........

rajat:tum teeno has kyon rahe ho.....

sanaya:ye soch 2 kar ki agar maan lo .............

rajat cuts her and says

rajat:we r getting late i think we shud leave

vikrant:don't worry rajat we r not getting late its only 12:30pm and we hav to reach there at 6:30

rajat:but vikrant vahaan pahuchne me bhi to tym lagega

vikrant:are sirf 3 ghante lagte hai pahuchne me........kher vo sab chodo tum bolo sanaya tum ku6 bol rahi thi ki maan lo ... sumthing

sanaya:yaa...... to me ye keh rahi thi maan lo aaj  rajat ko aise uski.....

rajat:sunaina kya ye suit tumne nikala tha.....

sunaina:haan meine hi nikala tha ......kyon pasand nahi aaya

rajat:nahi bahut acha hai thanx

sunaina:ur welcome acha sanaya tum bolo

sanaya:haan to....

rajat:vikrant tumhe bhuk nahi lagi mujhe to bahut lagi hai chalo chal kar lunch karte hai

vikrant:haan bhuk to mujhe bhi lagi hai aur tum dono ko bhi lagi hogi haina

sanaya:nahi hum log khakar aaye the tum jao jaakar luch kar lo

rajat:haan vikrant jaldi chal

both of them goes and hav their lunch and then all 4 of them sat and started talking by this tym sanaya forgot wat she wanted to say at that tym


at 3:00 all four said bye to Mrs R and left

vikrant and sanaya were in the same car while sunaina and rajat in other

rajat:to vikrant ho jaye ......

vikrant:ho jaye...........aur aaj pehli baar meri haatho se harne ko tayaar rehna

rajat:kaun harega kaun jeetega ye to finish line par hi pata chalega

sunaina:tum dono humesha race lagate ho par tum dono me se kabhi koi jitata kyon nahi

rajat:kyon hum dono twins hai aur har cheez me hum dono hi best hai.......theek kahaa na bhai

vikrant:bilkul theek and i am sure sanaya tumhe bhi tumhara ans mil gaya

sanaya:tumhe kaise pata me tumse kya puchne wali thi

vikrant:mujhe pata tha .......

both of them accelerated their cars and within a sec the cars were no where to be seen on the road they were moving almost with the speed of light

rajat:tumhe dar nahi lagta mere saath

sunaina:nahi

rajat:kyon

sunaina:kyonki mujhe tum par pura bharosa hai......

both the cars were moving with a very high speed sumtimes it seemed to be that rajat will win but then the next moment it used to be that vikrant will win the race was unpredictable

Finally they reached their destination

rajat:no not again........

vikrant:fir se.......o god......

sunaina:jab tum dono jante ho ki tum dono hi best ho to aur dono hi humesha 1st aate ho to race lagate hi kyon ho

rajat:kyonki best me bhi best hota hai aur hume dekhna hai ki hum dono me se vo kaun hai

vikrant looks at his watch

vikrant:o no rajat 6:30 baj gaye........

rajat:kya.....sunaina:plz tum meri car park dena and yaa i will be waiting their for u all so be fast......

vikrant:hum bas car park karke wahin aa jaenge don't worry filhal tum jao and....................... yaa be careful :P

rajat gets out of his car and hides his face and runs from their

It was a stadium which was almost full with public and rajat finally reached at the room and after 5 min all three of them also reached their

vikrant:rajat tu ready hai

rajat: ek problem ho gayi hai

sunaina:don't tell me ki tum tumhara mask lana bhul gaye

rajat giving a sorry look nods his head in affirmation

sunaina:rajat how can u do this ....

rajat:sorry......but yaar yaad hi nahi raha....

vikrant:guyz chill aur rajat tension kyon lena jab me hu to ye le pakad tera mask mujhe pata tha tu bhul jaega isliye me le aaya

rajat:o thank u aaj to sach me tune mujhe bacha liya....

sanaya:well rajat abhi to 1/2 ghanta baaki hai and look at the stadium its completely filled yaar

rajat:ye to har baar hota hai.... ;D

sunaina:acha hum log bahar jaa rahe hai.....

all three of them hugs him and then leaves the room

after 1/2 hour

all lights of the stadium went off and it was complete silence their and then a sound came and everyone started shouting like mad

 

BANG BANG BANG

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Posted: 14 years ago
Wonderfu part.I loved this part.continue soon dear.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

Wonderfu part.I loved this part.continue soon dear.



thanx for liking it..........๐Ÿ˜Š