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guyz i am starting my first ff here hope u all will like it...........




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part 1

Kahte hai jodiyaan swarg me ban kar aati hai hum au aap to bas ek zariya bante hai kisiko uske saathi se milwane me aur ek baar jo jodi ban gayi use to swayam bhagwan bhi nahi tod sakte to insaan kya cheez hai

ye kahaani bhi swarg me bani aisi hi do jodiyon ki hai Rajat - sunaina aur Vikrant- sanaya. Are hum aapko ye to batana hi bhul gaye ki akhir ye sabhi hai kaun ...............

chaliye chodiye nahi batate .........................


aap khud hi dekh lijiye ki sabhi kaun hai to chaliye humare saath hum aapko liye chalte hai.............


are par ye kya ye to hospital hai......
yahi soch rahe haina acha ab sochna band kijiye vo humara kaam hai aapka nahi aur ab andar chaliye akhir pata to chale aakhir majara kya hai


Inside one man was standing with his hands folded in front of a statue of god.So come with me and see who is he????

o my god ye to Mr.Rajendra Roy hai are aap log inhe nahi jaante.............are yahi to hai Nandani group of industries ke owner aur world ke top bussinessmen me se ek.Par ye yahaan kya kar rahe hai?

tabhi peeche se kisiki aawaz aati hai

doctor:Mr. Roy

vo jaldi se turn karte hai aur dekhte hai ki wahaan ek lady doc ek baby ko haatho me udhaye khadi hoti hai

doctor:congratulations Mr. Roy your son

and then she hands over that baby to him then only one more nurse comes out from the operation theatre holding one more baby as he saw that baby he got a bit confused

nurse :sir your son

Mr.Roy:my son then .....this........(totally confused)

Doctor:don't get confused Mr. Roy Your wife has given birth to twins

Mr. Roy:(very excited and happy) Really...................Thank you doctor thank you so much can i meet my wife

Doctor:yaa sure

Mr Roy along with that baby and another baby in sisters arms enters the ward and places that baby near his wife and sister too places another baby there and leaves from there

Mrs Nandani Roy Mr roy ki wife agar unhe hum Mr. Roy ki jaan kahe to mere khayal se galat nahi hoga Mrs Nandani ek typical house wife hai jo apne pariwaar ko ek saath baandh kar rakhti hai par kai baar ve Mr. Roy ko unke bussiness me bhi help karti hai

Mr Roy:aap nahi jaanti aapne aaj hume kitni badi khushi di hai ................................... aaj hum itna khush hai ki bas aapko bata nahi sakte

Mrs Roy:hum jaante hai hum ye khushi aapki aankho me saaf -2 dekh sakte hai

Mr. Roy:humare paas apke liye ek aur khushkhabri bhi hai.........

Mrs. Roy :to jaldi bataiyer na der kyon kar rahe hai

Mr. Roy:chaliye chodiye rehne dijiye............. kya karengi jaan kar

Mrs. Roy:theek hai mat bataiye hum bhi aap se baat nahi karenge jaaiye aap yahaan se aur humare beto se bhi baat karne ki koi jarurat nahi hai

Mr Roy:are agar aap humse naraz ho jaengi to hum jiyenge kaise hum to mar hi jaenge

Mrs. Roy:fir kabhi aisi baat apne muh se mat nikalana............(tears gets filled in her eyes)

Mr.Roy:are aap to rone lagi...........humne to aisi hi bol diya tha............acha suniye .............................

Mrs Roy:jaldi boliye

Mr Roy:aaj bhaiya aur bhabhi India aa rahe hai

Mrs. Roy:kya sach me.................aur vickey aur namita hai kya unke saath

Mr. Roy:haan vo dono bhi aa rahe hai par..........

Mrs. Roy:par kya??????????

Mr. Roy: bhaiya ko delhi me ku6 kaam hai to vo yahaan 4 din baad hi aayenge aur aapko to pata hai jahaan bhaiya wahin bhabhi

Mrs. Roy:(gets a bit sad)

Mr. Roy:par bhaiya ne kahaa hai ki vo vickey aur namita ko bhej denge aaj hi

Mrs.Roy(gives a smile)

jahaan ek aur India me yahaan Mr. Roy ke yahaan do beto ne janam liya to vahin dusri aur yahaan se milon dur Australia me Mr Aditya Malhotra ke yahaan janam hua do betiyon ka

Mr Malhotra bhi ek bussinessman hai aur Mr Roy ke partner bhi par is waqt dono ek dusre ke ghar me aayi khushiyon se bekhabar hai
Jab Mr Malhotra ke pitaji ka dehant hua tab Mr Malhotra apni wife Sheetal Malhotra ke saath India se chale aaye aur Australia me hi settle ho gaye aur aaj unke ghar do nanhi pariyon ne janam liya hai

Mr malhotra:sheetal aaj hum bahut khush hai.................aaj hamare ghar me do pariyon ne janam liya hai

Mrs malhotra:kash pitaji apni potiyon ko dekh paate .............

Mr malhotra:to kya hua agar aaj pitaji hamare saath nahi hai to............. unka ashirwad humesha humari betiyon ke saath rahega
...

Next day Mr Roy aur Mr malhotra apni 2 wife's ko hospital se discharge karwa kar ghar le aate hai

In Mr Roy's house every one was waiting for them anxiously .............especially vickey and namita

Mrs Roy finally reaches the house she was holding one baby and other one was with Mr Roy aur unhe dekh kar namita aur vickey to bas unki jaise pagal hi ho jaate hai aur unki aur daud kar jaate hai

namita:chachi hume do ............hume do...........

vickey:nahi hume dijiye ye choti hai gira degi aap hume dijiye

namita:nahi hume........plzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Mr Roy:are dono jhagdo mat ek ko tum le lo aur dusre ko namita le legi

vickey:theek hai

Mr Roy:par abhi nahi .........abhi dono so rahe hai jab jaag jaenge hum aap dono ko bula lenge

namita aur vickey thode sad ho jaate aakhir suvah se jinka intzaar kar rahe the unhe dekh bhi nahi paye

Mr Roy thodi der baad apne office chale jaate hai aur Mrs Roy ko bhi kaafi weakness feel ho rahi hoti hai to she also goes to sleep then vickey and namita enters the room and sits beside the craddle in which both the babies were sleeping.

namita:bhaiya kitne pyaare hai na ye dono

vickey:haan aur vese bhi bache to saare pyaare hote hai

namita:hume inke saath khelna hai

vickey:nahi abhi nahi abhi ye dono so rahe haina

namita:theek hai .......par jab ye udh jaenge me inke saath khub khelungi

vickey:theek hai ........................ab chalo is se pehle chachi jaag jaye hume yahaan se chalna chahiye

vickey stands up but when namita was about stand up one of them holds her figer tightly

namita:bhaiya........

vickey:kya hua chalo

namita:bhaiya isne humari ungli pagad li

vickey:ruko me aata hu

vickey namita ki ugli chudwane ki koshihs karta hai par itne me dono jaag jaate hai aur vickey ki ugli bhi pakad lete hai

namita:bhaiya dekho na ab to dono jaag gaye hume inke saath khelna hai

vickey:par chachi.............

Mrs Roy hears the voice of whishpering she wakes up namita and vickey were sitting there and both the babies were in a very happy mood were smiling

Mrs Roy:namita ..........vickey .....aap dono yahaan

both of them gets a bit scared

vickey:vo chachi hum.........hum to......

Mrs Roy:are aap dono dar kyon rahe hai hum aapko ku6 bhi nahi kahenge dariye mat

namita:vo chachi hume na humare dono bhaiyon ko milne ka bada man kar raha tha to unhe dekhne ke liye aaye the aur itne vo dono jaag gaye

Mrs Roy:acha theek hai aap dono inke saath kheliye hum jaakar aap ke liye ku6 khane ko laate hai theek hai

vickey:theek hai

namita:par chachi:.....inka naam to bataiye hum inhe kya keh kar bulaye

Mrs Roy:abhi to inka koi naam hi nahi hai ...............

namita:naam hi nahi hai(surprised)

Mrs Roy:haan ...............inko inka naam kal milega .........

namita:theek hai to hum kalse inhe inke naam se bula lenge

Mrs Roy smiles and leaves the room

on the other hand in australia at Mr Malhotra's house

aditya:sheetal hume ek bahut important meeting me jaana hai ..........aap apna aur humari pariyon ka khayal rakhiyega

sheetal:ji theek hai.............par aapko yaad haina kal humari rajkumariyon ka namkaran hai to uski saari tayaariyaan bhi karni hai

aditya:vo hum kaise bhul sakte hai humne saari tayariyaan kar li hai aap chinta mat kijiye aur haan kisi bhi cheez ki jarurat ho to hume call kar lena

sheetal:ji.....apna khayal rakhiyega

Mr Malhotra leaves for office

...
Next Day(Namkaran)

In India at Mr roy's house

pandit ji:jajmaan dono hi bache bade hi shubh nakshatro me paida hue hai................................. dono bade hokar aapka naam puri duniyan me roshan karenge ........dono hi dimaag se kaafi tez honge...........aur ................(pause)

Mr Roy:kya hua pandit ji aap ruk kyon gaye

pandit ji:badi hi vichitra baat hai.....

Mrs Roy(gets a bit tensed):kaisi vichitra baat pandit ji

pandit ji:jajamaan dono ki shaadi bhi do judwa behno se hi hogi................

Mrs Roy:kya............(smiling)

pandit ji :inke naam shuru honge R aur V se

Mr Roy:R aur V se(thinking)

Mrs Roy:RAJAT aur VIKRANT kaisa rahega

Mr Roy:bahut acha rahega to aaj se inka naam hua RAJAT aur VIKRANT

At Mr Malhotra's house

pandit ji:jajmaan dono bachiyaan itni sundar hongi ki unke saman dusra koi aur nahi hoga aur jo bhi inhe dekhega bas in par mohit ho jaega

Mr Malhotra:matlab?????(confused)

Mrs Malhotra:matlab ye mujhe meri betiyon ko sabki nazro se bachana padega aur ab se mera ek aur kaam add ho gaya hai inki rakhwali ka

everyone laughs

panditji:dono hi bachiyon ka naam S se shuru hoga

Mr Malhotra(took no tym) SANAYA aur SUNAINA

Mrs Malhotra:aako kya pehle se hi pata tha ki S akshar aayega jo apne itni jaldi naambhi bata diye

Mr Malhotra:aur nahi to kya kal se yahi kaam to kar raha hu naam sochne ka

Mrs Malhotra smiles

Mrs Malhotra gives a kiss on the forehead of both the babies

...

At Mr Roy's house

every one was busy with guests then phone rings one servant was standing rote there picks up the phone

Mr Roy se baat ho sakti hai

he goes to Mr Roy and informs him about the call

Mr Roy:me abhi aata hu

Mr roy:hello.............


reciever falls from his hand he becomes a statue

Mrs Roy:kya hua aap aise kyon khade hai aur kiska phone tha........

Mr roy(standing still):no reply(tear gets filled in his eyes)

Mrs Roy:kya hua bataiye hume kiska phone tha kya kaha usne

Mr roy:bhaiya aur bhabhi ka accident ho gaya aur.....................

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Welcome sinnie Big smile thanks for posting ur ff hereBig smile Hope all will enjoy ur ff

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hello sinnie thank u for posting this ff
and about the first part...it was amazing...lovely part......do contTongue


Edited by ektay11 - 09 July 2009 at 1:31am

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Hey sinnie! wonderful update! likd it soooo much! update soon dear...jyada der mat lagana...

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hey sinnie i read ur update in rtw and i can tel u it superb Clap

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Posted: 09 July 2009 at 8:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shruja

Welcome sinnie Big smile thanks for posting ur ff hereBig smile Hope all will enjoy ur ff


THANK U SHRUJA

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Posted: 09 July 2009 at 8:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ektay11

hello sinnie thank u for posting this ff
and about the first part...it was amazing...lovely part......do contTongue


thanx for liking it..........

will post the nxt part soon..........Smile

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