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~But It Rained~ (AR/KaSh FF)(Updated Pg 19 Part 7)

Wrackspurt IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 08 July 2009 at 2:50am | IP Logged
Hi Paromita/Paro LOLLOL........i have thought of starting a FF on AR .......please imagine AR as Karan and Shilpa Embarrassed.......its not going to be an usual romantic story.....but a thriller LOL......i dont know how much long this FF is going to be Embarrassed........without much ado i am now starting with the first part LOL


Its probably 1:00 in the night..........its been raining since  morning and it has now reduced to a drizzle.....breaking through the silence of the dark night  a car  came and stopped inside a lane beside some bushes........2 men came out of the car...they were carrying something between them and went inside the bushes.....after 10-15 mins the of them lighted a cigarette the faint light of his lighter his big topaz ring glittered.....then he joined his mate in the car and they left the lane in its suffocating darkness.


Riddhima woke up with a jerk.....she was sweating profusely.......her breath came in ragged gasps.....she managed to get up from the bed and grab a glass of water......then she sat down trying to calm herself......its always been the same.......she again dreamed the same thing......she is running through a dark lane and some people are after her......she keeps on running and then finds herself in a dead end .......the people who were after her keeps closing on her and she wakes up.....she was having this dream from past few months.

Riddhima slowly glances at the wall clock in her room.....its 5:00 am but its still dark outside.....because its cloudy though it has stopped  raining....she decides its no use going to sleep again becasue she wont be able to sleep ......and she will also have to leave for work at 8:00 am........she got up and went to the kitchen to make some tea.......thats one addiction she has......she cant live without  a cup of tea in the morning.....and she needed the tea even more today....suddenly the door bell rings.....she opens the door and sees that the newspaper boy has dlivered the newspaper....Riddhima settles in her balcony
chair and begins to read the paper while drinking the tea.....she skims through the headlines......and thinks. "same news everyday.....murders, dacoity, or same political leaders blaming each other about the poor condition of the country.....disgusting".....suddenly a news caught her was not in the headlines......but was written in the corner of the paper abadoned body of a young boy of abt 18 or 19 has been found in a lake at 2:00 am in the morning.......looks like the boy had been strangled with a chain ......investigation is still on .....the boy has not been identified yet.....most probably he was not a local boy.....Riddhima dont know why that particular news caught her was just another murder.....may be the age of the boy caught her eyes......or may be the news reminded her of any case she gets interested whenever any weird murder case happens......being a criminal lawyer that interest was probably natural for her.....but this particular murder was not at all was very common place ......loads of murders happens by strangualtion with chain....Riddhima pondered over the news for sometime then thought of getting ready to go for important meeting with one of her clients is due today.

It was 10:00 am......Riddhima had just finished the meeting with her client.....when her phone in the cabin rang.....she picked it up and heard her assistant Neha is calling.

"Ridz ....someone is wanting to meet u.......he seems pretty desperate.....i told him that u dont meet anyone without an appointment but he is not listening to me"

"where is he... Neha??

"He is waiting in the reception"

"Send him in Neha "

Neha kept down the reciever and looking surprised............she new Ridz never met anyone without appointment come what may.......this is the first time in 4 years since Neha has started working with Ridz, that she agreed to meet someone without appointment.......Neha went to the man waiting in the reception and showed him the way to Ridz cabin.

Neha came back to her desk and started thinking.....though she had been working with Riddhima for 4 years now she hardly knew the real Riddhima......if anyone ask her abt Ridz she would say ...."Riddhima is a very nice person....all her employees love her.....she dont allow anyone to call her Ma'am its "Ridz" for everyone".......Neha knew one thing Riddhima single handedly saved her father's law firm......Gupta and Associates by winning the case of a fraud done by a multinational company.......Riddhima is  a criminal lawyer by profession and the Multinational company case was actually a case for corporate lawyers....but it was found that murder and extortion was also involved in that case ......Riddhima then fresh out of law school, all of 22 years, took up the case in an attempt to save her father's company....which was in deep trouble after they lost 2 big cases .....she flabbergasted everyone when she won the case and thus saved the comapny......her father died just 1 year after that and Riddhima took charge of the firm......Ridz dont have any mother....Neha heard some gossip that Riddhima's mother left her when she was very small.....she is not dead .......but no one knows where she is. Neha assisted Ridz from her first case 4 years ago......all these years Neha knew Ridz had only one bosom friend thats Muskaan......she is also a lawyer but deals with corporate laws .

Neha sighs and thinks again. "in all these years i still dont know who the real Riddhima is ......she calls me her best freind next to Muskaan but still never told me her deepest secrets that she has in her heart......may be she did not share them with Muskaan too".......Neha glanced at the closed door of Riddhima's cabin and wondered abt the new client that came just has been 1 hr now and the meeting is still on......the case must have interested Riddhima a lot .

Thats all for now LOLLOL......feel free to criticize and comment....and press the "Like" button if u like it Wink

Note: i dont know much abt laws or lawyers please forgive me if i made any mistake Wink

I know there was no Armaan in this part.....he will come later on Wink


Part1- pg 1

Part2- Pg 4

Part3- Pg 7

Part 4 & 5- Pg 10

Part 6 - Pg 14

Edited by mysticwater24 - 31 October 2010 at 9:42am

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gujunpyo IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 08 July 2009 at 2:56am | IP Logged
paro di...LOL..all lawyers reminded me of jefrey archer..LOL...
ridhima having night mares...scare nightmare that too....Ouch....
really liked the intro.....all the things about ridhima's profession..Embarrassed....
m waitin for he the man inside the cabin...Wink..??
m waiting also to see how the "thriller.." progresses..Wink....
keep writing.nd updating punctually now...LOL.....

Edited by aneeshadgr8 - 08 July 2009 at 3:15am

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lupin_roza IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 July 2009 at 3:00am | IP Logged

Hey my chocojannu Paro Hearttremendous concept !!!!Clap
complete suspense thriller story  ...i loved the part ,nicely written Thumbs Up
eagerly waiting 4 the next part ,continue soon Embarrassed
n don't forget to pm meWinkHug
Best of luck for your  FFThumbs Up

For energy :LOLLOLLOL

Your FF reminds me one song:LOLWink

SillyIts close to midnight and something evils lurking in the dark...
Under the moonlight you see a sight that almost stops your heart..
You try to scream but terror Silly...takes the sound before you make it
SillyYou start to freeze as horror looks you right between the eyes,
You re paralyzed.........cause this is thriller, thriller nightSilly
And no ones gonna save you........ from the beast about strike
You know its thriller, thriller night
SillyYou re fighting for your life inside a killer, thriller tonightSilly

Evil SmileShhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...Evil Smile

Edited by lupin_roza - 08 July 2009 at 4:07am

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princess52 IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 8239

Posted: 08 July 2009 at 3:02am | IP Logged
its really nice ....good concept....i think the mane inside is armaan or the murder  has to do sumthing with armaaan...
cant wait to know...
plzz continuee soon
n pm me as well
take care
luv habs

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nisha80 IF-Stunnerz

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Posts: 30599

Posted: 08 July 2009 at 3:06am | IP Logged
congo Paro Party
grt thriller...Thumbs Up
I always imagine Ar as kash whnever I read LOL
its interesting  wid all suspense..
cotinue soon Embarrassed

Edited by nisha80 - 08 July 2009 at 4:15am

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mar- IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 2597

Posted: 08 July 2009 at 3:14am | IP Logged
wooooow grt part really good plsss continue sooon
plsss pm me also

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ammy_furor Goldie

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Posts: 1738

Posted: 08 July 2009 at 3:21am | IP Logged
Paro....hugs... Ok now dis is something new... Thrillers ve a special effect on me wanna know how da story progresses...ridz is a strong independent woman...babes i know its not an out and out romantic flick but pls add some romance... Cant do without it.. lolz...add me to ur list hun and update soon....i really liked it..

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Prasanthi IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 July 2009 at 3:30am | IP Logged
Hey Paro!!!
Ahaan.. that was quite an interesting and intriguing start.. the intro itself has got me hooked.. would love to read more.. continue soon and pleas add me to the PM list if any.

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