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Posted: 15 July 2009 at 1:19pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by strawberrychip

fabulously written part!
i could feel the whole thing in frony of me.
 
keep up the good work!
Thnx a lot dearSmile

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Posted: 15 July 2009 at 1:20pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by fanatic 21

fabulous.....

I caught up wid the fic its awesome.......truely gr8 part......

loved it...
Thnx a lot dear...Smile

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Posted: 15 July 2009 at 11:20pm | IP Logged
Awwwww Naina is so Shattered, but I know she's strong and she'll show this Corrupt system what she's made out of .. and Hopefully Rajveer will be back to support her!!

Great Update

Take Care

Yasmin

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Hey i finished reading the first part of ur fic and it was really beautiful. Vaise bhi RN par jitna bhi likha jaaye kam hai. Accha hi hai ki aaj kal aur jyada logon ne start kar diya hai RN pe likhna.
Hope u continue soon.

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Posted: 18 July 2009 at 6:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by iqbal-pallavi

Awwwww Naina is so Shattered, but I know she's strong and she'll show this Corrupt system what she's made out of .. and Hopefully Rajveer will be back to support her!!

Great Update

Take Care

Yasmin
yeah....she has to b strong...
plus she has got such nice friends who will support her through thick and thin...
thnx a lot 4 liking da update...


Edited by manatated - 18 July 2009 at 6:22am

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Posted: 18 July 2009 at 6:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by arpita25

Hey i finished reading the first part of ur fic and it was really beautiful. Vaise bhi RN par jitna bhi likha jaaye kam hai. Accha hi hai ki aaj kal aur jyada logon ne start kar diya hai RN pe likhna.
Hope u continue soon.
Thanx....
yeah.... u r  right....
RN par jitna likha jaaye kam hai....

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Part Three:

Next day she left for Ambala.A determination shone through her eyes.Naina very well knew that the path ahead is not easy,but then what was easy in her life?

 
And as of now,she wasn't afraid of anything.Because what was there to lose? Cruel destiny had ripped her of the most important person.Matters can't be worse for her now.
 
 
She reached Ambala in afternoon. Alekh had come to receive her.He also was posted at KMA as assisstant drill commanding officer.Alekh being there was the only best thing.
 
 
"Kaisi hai tu?"
 
 
"Ekdam achchi."
 
 

"Tu apun se jhoot bolegi?"

 
And naina couldnt control anymore.She hugged him tightly and started crying. He also got teary eyed.He stroked her hairs gently,soothing her.Then spoke softly,
 

"Dekh Naina, apun janta hai. Yeh bahot mushkil hai tere liye.Firse ussi KMA jaana...apun ke liye bhi asaan nahi tha.Parr tereko ye karna padega.Tere bhaai ke waaste.."

 
"Parr..parr Aa..Alekh....Alekh main..."
 
 
"Sshhhh...chup hoja.Tu himmat nahi haregi Naina. Tujhe unn sabhi kameeno ko saza dilwaani hai.Tujhe tera mission poora karna hai Naina.Apne har ek dard,har ek aansu ka badla lena hai.Tujhe ye karna hoga naina, Rajveer sir ke liye.....'
 
 
she looked up.He simply patted her head affectionately.
 
 
"Tu mera saath dega na Alekh? Tu bhi mujhe chodke nahi jaayega na?"
 
 
"Bole toh.. bolne ki jaroorat hai? Apun tere saath hai...hamesha.Apun tera peecha itni aasani se nahi chodnewaala.Tereko kabhie akela nahi chodega......"
 
 
"Oye qaidi, agar tera milna milana,family drama hogaya ho toh baaju hatt. Yeh jaatt kabse katar me prateeksha karte karte thak gaya hai..."
 
 
"Saala nautanki...!!!", Alekh snapped as Naina looked in surprise at the person.
 
 
"Oye ke? Iss Huda ko bhi toh apni Phoolan se mil lene de yaar..",he rushed forward and hugged Naina.
 
 
"Huda tu?? tu yahaa?"
 
"Haan main...yahaan...Ab phoolan...tujhe main akela kaise chod sakta hoon? Aur tu na ye sad si shakal banana bandh kar aur saari tension pe mitti daal. Oye do not fear when Huda is here...Ab tu dekh,kaise unn kameeno ki band bajaate hai hum sab."
 
 
Naina smiled.
 
 
"Parr tujhe yaha posting mili kaise?"
 
 
"Kya phoolan tu bhi? Kitni mushkil se setting ki hai Head Quarters se pata hai tujhe?"
 
 
Alekh and Naina rolled their eyes....
 
 
" Aur phir on second thoughts KMA ko bhi ek handsome,cool teacher ki zaroorat hai,warna janaaniyon ka kya hoga?",huda said pulling his collar.
 
 
"Tu kabhi nahi sudhrega naa?"
 
 
"Koi shaq?"
 
And all of them laughed.
 
 
"Ab chal. Udhar Tau aur muchchad hamare intezaar mein aankhe beechaye baithe hai.."
 
 
"woh saale muchchad ki toh....saale ne pehle hi din apun ko solitary confinement mein daala tha....iss baar ussne shanpatti ki naa toh....chodega nahi apun usse"
 
 
 
"Oye haan haan Qaidi...Aur phir iss baar toh hum usske cadets bhi nahi hai,officers hai....saale ki aisi band bajayenge..."
 
 
"Guyz...aisi band bajaayenge ki ....humse bachne ke liye woh khud solitary confinement mein jaayega."
 
 
All three laughed and Hi-fived at this and left for the Academy.
 
 
All the memories of their academy days came flashing to them while they were walking through the academy grounds.And all the memories were connected in some way or the other to their Rajveer sir.Their eyes became moist. They saluted in front of Amar jawan jyoti and entered BC's cabin.

BC welcomed them,though dryly and briefed them.As soon they came out,they encountered the devil himself, major Nair.

 
"Ah ....Cadets. oh sorry lieutenants!"
 
"Hello sir."
 
 
"I hope atleast now u abide by the rules and behave as responsible person rather than hopeless bunch of people. or in that matter behave as patriots...and not as trai....especially u Lft.Singh",nair said with a wicked grin.
 
 
Naina shot him a look.
 
 
"Considering your brother being a traitor and your beloved Mentor being  a bloody murderer...."
 
 
"My brother was not a traitor sir and neither my BELOVED Mentor a bloody murderer....SIR." She nearly spat the last word. Nair smirked.
 
 
"Woh sir apun chale? kya hai naa Brigadier (it took him hell of self control to not utter BC) ka letter Suriji ko dekar Rooms ki chabiya leni hai...Bole toh ACADEMY KE RULES ke hisab se...."
 
" DISMISS!! "
 
 
" Saala kameena muchchad ! Mujhe toh kabhi kabhi Tau pe shaq hota hai...! ki bande ke paas dimag naam ki koi cheez hai bhi yaa nahi?"
 
 
Alekh and Naina looked at Huda surprisingly.
 
 
"Arre yaar.....Tau se jyaada intelligent toh mera Rajesh hai. Agar mai usske saath Nair ko tabele mein baandh doon na...toh aadhe ghante mein aawaz karne lag jaayega ki issko yaha se hatao ! Parr yeh TAU ! aaj tak nahi samajh aaya isko !"
 
 
Naina stared at him for few seconds and then said, " Waise teri baat mein point toh hai, parr yeh bata ,tujhe teri bhaison ke alawa koi aur example nahi mila kya."
 
 
"Kaha se aayega? saala dimaag mein Gobar jo bhara hai.", Alekh commented.
 
 
"Kya yaar qaidi..."
 
And they laughed.
 
When she walk passed Wall of fame, she stopped.
 
 
"Alekh,Huda...tum log chalo,main thodi der mein aati hoon."
 
Both of them understood and headed towards mess to meet suriji.
 
 
She stood there....in front of hall of fame....Staring....Crying silently....when suddenly.....
 
 
"FRESHER??????"


Edited by manatated - 18 July 2009 at 6:37am

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that was really good plz continue soon

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